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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hey guys: here is my next part...there is a video link in the middle of the update! make sure you guys play the song first to get the feel of the update!...I want to apologize beforehand if I didn't live up to your guys expectations about their SR...I couldn't go into too much details..but I hope you guys got the picture😆😆....ohh and another sorry if there are mistakes...i just write the update...and if am too lazy I don't go back and proofread and make corrections lol...

So enough of my talking...here is the update!😃

Chapter 10

Maan and Geet arrived at the Khurana's Mansion...Dadi told them to wait outside so that she can get pooja ki thali...she placed rice pot on the door steps...Geet kicked the pot with her right leg....Maan and Geet entered the house together...they both made their way to the mandir and prayed together...
Geet: Babaji i hope I do everything in my power to be the best bahu and wife...
Maan who was done praying looked at Geet lovingly while she was still praying..Geet felt maan's gaze..she opened her eyes...and looked at Maan...Maan took her hand and both made their way out of the mandir....
Dadima came up to Geet and Maan..and saw them holding hands...Geet noticed this..and quickly removed her hand from Maan and looked down blushing...
Dadima: ahem...Geet come with me...
Before Maan could say anything...Dadima dragged Geet with her to her room...
Dadima: Geet this is our family jewelry and it is given to new daughter-in-laws...so I hope one day when you guys have kids..you can pass it down as well to your daughter-in-law
Hearing this Geet looked down...and took the jewelery box from Dadima..
Geet: Dadima if it's alright...can you keep it with you...its a family heirloom and I don't want to loose it...
Dadima: Alright beta..I will keep it with me as your aamanat...now come on am sure Maan is waiting (winked at Geet)

Dadima took Geet to Maan's room..which was decorated with flowers everywhere...there were rose petal trail on the floor...when she walked on the bed..she saw M&G initials on the bed with a big heart...she was dumbstruck...she didn't know what to say...the whole room was so beautifully decorated...

After few minutes Maan came in the room...he looked around the room...walked up to the bed and saw his and Geet's initials on the bed...he then saw Geet standing by the window...looking at the full moon...Maan went up to Geet and stood by her...
Maan: Geet what are you looking at?
Geet without taking her eyes off the moon: I am looking at the moon...I am just remembering this moon was the witness when you first proposed me at my house and today the moon was also witness to our wedding...
Maan turned Geet to face him: This moon Geet is witness of our love...whenever we are together the moon is there to remind us how much we mean to each other..Moon in a way connects us even if we are far away from each other...all we have to do is look at the moon and see each other's faces...
Geet hugged Maan and pinched him on the arm...
Maan: ouch what was that for?
Geet: just checking to see if you are really here or not
Maan: There are other ways to check that you know (whispered in her ears)
Geet buried her head in his chest while blushing..
Maan: Geet don't you owe me something...
Geet looked at him and backed up a little...What
Maan: My two kisses...I didn't forget (smiled at him)
Geet looked down..as Maan was getting closer to Geet...Geet ran to the bed...and stood by the bed post...Maan came up from behind...and stood behind her...he turned her around and saw her crying..
Maan: Geet what's wrong...
Geet: Maan promise me that you will never leave me...
Maan: Geet I didn't take your hands to leave you..at least not that easily (smiled at her)..and wiped her tears...

Listen to this song :D
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=REfscMMGxNc

Maan held Geet's both hands and kissed it...I will never let you go Geet that is my promise...He picked her up both lost in each other eyes...
mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere saath ho
tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan tere pyar mein ho jaaun fanaa
mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere saath ho
tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan tere pyar mein ho jaaun fanaa
He gently placed her on the bed...he stared at her and gently started taking her jewelries off one by one...Geet looked down...Maan slowly brought her closer to him by pulling her with her hands...Geet hugged him while Maan took off her dupatta and caresses her back...
mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere saath ho
tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan tere pyar mein ho jaaun fanaa
mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere saath ho
Geet kissed Maan's lips gently and hugging him around his neck...without breaking away from their kiss Maan with his free hands loosened the doris of her blouse and gently made her lie down..."one kiss down Geet one more to go" ...and brushes his lips against hers...and starts nibbling on her neck....
tere dil mein meri saanson ko panaa mil jaaye
tere ishq mein meri jaan fanaa ho jaaye
Maan came on top to Geet's lips again and both kissed again this time more passionately and aggressively...capturing each other's souls and breaths...
jitne paas hain khushbu saans ke
jitne paas hothon ke sargam
jaise saath hain karvat yaad ke
jaise saath baahon ke sangam
Maan picks Geet towards him and takes off her top..."I want to feel everything about you Geet"...Geet starts to unbutton his shirt and starts kissing his chest...neck...eyes...lips...she turns around...Maan starts kissing her back and turns her around...while his hands move down to feel her body...her every curve...and her every desire
jitne paas paas khwaabon ke nazar
utni paas tu rehna hamsafar
tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan
tere pyar mein ho jaaun fanaa
mere haath mein tera haath ho saari jannatein mere saath ho
Tonight they were one body...one soul...one mind...no one can separate them...Maan held Geet's hands as he started to feel her soul...she held him closer to her heart...they could feel each other's heartbeats as it increased...the moon was witness to their love..which was pure and deeper then the ocean....

I would like to end this night with a poem called forever love:

You are my description of love
You are my description of friend
You are my description of everything
You are my description of beginning to end.

You have put me on a pedestal
You make me feel ten feet tall
You've always been there for me
You've loved me through it all.

You've stood by me through thick and thin
You've always been patient and kind
Just thought I'd let you know
You're the owner of this heart of mine.

So you ask how long I'll love you
Well this is what I have to say
Past, present, future, always
Forever and a day!

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Amna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#275

jaanu me eagerly waitin for an update take ur time i can wait???

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mrs.msk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: cutiepie9512345
jaanu me eagerly waitin for an update take ur time i can wait???

Cutie...its up...hope u like it!! 😆

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#277

Awesome update
loved it
maaneet were so cute
loved the SR
yay they became one soul
can't wait for da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Shreya

@..shreyaa..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#278

OMG that was AWESOME😛 AND HOT😳...Loved it....And love the song It was Perfect..Thanks for the Update...Loved it..Continue soon..Cant wait till the next one!👍🏼
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