FF- PYAAR KE LIE (8june) part 23, pg 99 - Page 10

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PART-6

Rahul comes to CAF and asks if he can join them… girls agree…
Rahul introduces himself with ol Yash, adi and maan,, but maan seems not interested in him at ol…

R: geet, u want something to drink? M goin to get one for me,, should I bring something for u….

G: no thanx…

R: common don b formal… tel me plz…

G; ok,, plz get a mango juice for me… n thanx…

R: any tym dear…
The word "DEAR" is enough for maan to come back into his senses….
And ol others are shocked, y he asks only to geet??? Even maan is looking concerned this tym "Y only geet"???

But geet has no idea about what are they thinking…

Y: Geet, kya baat hai,, first day hi,,, haaannnnn….hmmmmm????

GEET didn't get him, what is just said, nor even meera and pinky…

Trio looked confused… but Adi n Maan got him very well…

Trio: matlb?

G: muje kuch samj nahi aa rha tum kya keh rahe ho?

He was abt to explain when Rahul comes with drinks and gave mango juice to geet…

G:thanx…

R: anything for u….

Maan gets angry on this…but controls his anger and asks rahul" so rahul, tum geet ke classmate ho rite?? From which school and where do u live????

Maan just wants to gather ol information abt him…

Before anyone or Rahul could say anything,, bell rings n they headed towards their classes sayin BYE to each other…
In TRIO's class:
Mr: Geet, did u saw???

G: saw wat?

Mr: maan?

G: maan?kya maan, roz to dekhti hu us Bandar
ko…

Mr: Geet, u idiot… didn't u saw his concern for u?

G: concern???? N looked at meera completely confused…

Mr.: oh god, is larki ka me kya karu,,, Geet, when Rahul calls u "Dear", I saw maan's eyes… n its like" how dare he calls u dear???"

G: what?Meera what are you thinking, abi tak subh ka incident tere mind se gaya nahi hai kya????

Mr: nahi yaar,, seriously… he looked worried for u…

G: hey babaji!! Is meera ko kya hua hai,, n geet checks her forhead,,, meera teri tabiyat to thik hai na???

Mr: oho geet… tera kuch nahi ho sakta… budhuuuu….
Even pinky got the meaning of meera and giggle…
Both meera and pinky laugh at geet's innocence…

G: pta nahi, lagta hai dono ka dimag kharab ho gaya hai, kuch jada hi pad lia hai aaj in dono ne… BABAJI,, inki rakhsha karna….
Scene shifted to MAAN's class:

Y: Yaar maan, tu to us rahul ko aise dekh raha tha jese use kha hi jaega…
Yash and adi starts laughing…

M: yash…. Adii….

A: maan, what's wrong wid u???? tu kabse, kisike ghar ka address puchne laga,, wo bhi ek ladke ka (n give high-five to yash at maan's back,,),,, ????

M: yelled ADDIII… n gave him his famous looks…
Look guys,, geet is very innocent,…. She don't know who is good and who is bad,, n he is my responsibility here.. I promised dad that I'll take care of her atleast in university,, dats y I was concerned, aur kuch nahi hai… samjhe tu dono…

Yash and adi: YES BOSS!!!

Maan smiled…

Finally first day lectures are over…

Meera drops pinky home… she also asked geet, bjut she has to go to library to issue some books, so she said… she'll go by herself…it's 5pm already…there are no much students still there…

Geet issued books and when going out of the university,,she caught by few senior boys…
Geet got scared but cant do anything,, because no one is there to help her…

Boys wants geet to dance for them… but geet refused… then they ol started hooting and give each other devilish smile… geet got more scared…she started crying…

One of the trying to come close to her and she is just moving backwards…he was abt to touch her,, but stopped by someone's hand on his shoulder… he looked back n saw maan… maan is his senior also… these boys are 3rd year students of BBA… maan looks at them angrily… n ol of them got scared,,,, because they know maan very well that he won't leave them…
They ran from there… geet is still crying and scared…

Maan comes near her and she hugged him….

Maan is surprised by this sudden hug,, but realized the situation and hugged her back n pat her head to make her calm down…
After sometime, she stopped crying, but still hugging maan because of fear…

M: geet, don't worry, wo chale gaye… m here wid u…

Geet realizes she is actually hugging maan, she moves back… n tears drops down on her cheaks…

M: geet, darne ki koi jarurat nahi hai,, me hu na tumhare pass…cuped her face with his both hands and wiped off her tears…
she looked up into maan's eyes n saw so much concern in his eyes for her first time in her life.. she saw his deep blue-black eyes and lost in them.. Maneet short eyelock which breaked by maan….

M: chalo, ghar chalein wid little smile…

G: smiles back n nodded....
They reached home… during way to home, both of them don't utter a single word…
But geet is relaxed now,, she is not at all terrified….

AT GEET's home:
RANO, CHOTI MAA, PAPA and DADI are waiting for her to ask her about her day,,, what she did in college and all… all are looking very excited… seeing their excitement, GEET completely forgets about what happened just an hour before…
She hugged them… n RANO says:"GEET go n get fresh , den tell us abt ur day.."

G: ok maa, just coming within 10 min, love u ol…
ALL: love u to beta…

Maan is still standing at her door,, he came to dropped her in the house… after seeing everything is normal,, he goes to his house…

After 15 min:

Geet comes to the dinning table, ol are present there… maan also joins them…

Choti maa: geet beta…. Tumhara first day kesa rha clg me??? Tumhe clg pasand to aya na???

Papa:" beta teachers to acha padate hai na?"

Rano: tune lunch to kia tha na???

DADI: clg canteen me khana acha n hygienic to milta hai na????

GEET:::: bas bas bas,,, itne sare questions, wo
bhi ek sath… lagta hai aap logon ne phle se hi decide kar lia the questions, kaun kya puchega…??? N everyone laughs…

GEET: choti maa- clg bhut hai, mera day b acha gya… papa- sabhi teachers acha padte hai..
Maa- mene lunch kar lia tha… n dadi maa—luch b acha n hygienic tha…

Geet: let me think koi question ka ans dena reh to nahi gya and starts laughing… ol joins her n laughs…

Maan smiled when he saw geet happy…but he never wants to leaves the chance of teasing her… so he starts…

MAAN: maa, papa, dadi n rano maa,,, aap logon ne mujse to ye sab nahi pucha tha , jab me first tym clg gya tha… itni partiality…????

GEET: lo is Bandar ko bhi abhi shuru hona tha(thinks)… kyu tuje jealousy ho rahi hai(to maan)?????

MAAN: maan singh khurana kabi kisi se jealous nahi hota,, n wo b tuj jesi chuhiya se…. tera dimag kharab to nahi ho gya…

Before she could say anything, maan added.." oh me to bhul hi gya tha, dimag karab hone ke lie dimag hona bhi to jaruri hota hai"n starts laughing… ol joins him… it take few seconds to geet to understand what did he just said….
Then….

GEET: tere kehne ka matlb hai mere pass dimag nahi hai???

MAAN: han.. koi shaq hai???
Geet cant bear this aymore,, she got up and ran towards maan to hit him… n maan also starts running to save himself…

Rano, dadi, papa n choti maa laughs at their childish behavior…
PRECAP:
Fight between maneet….
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Nice update.. gud to c a jealous maan.. do continue soon
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nice update
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I am so touched by his concern
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