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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome terrific update............cant wait to read more...........plzzzzzzz update soon
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wow thats an Amazing Concept......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey

wow
just loved it
btw great concept
awesome
plz continue soon
and can u plz pm me whenever u update
eagerly waiting for the next part

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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting start.

plz do pm me when u update

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add me pls to pm...love the different maan...awsome
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Amazing!!!
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PART 5

Slapping her Maan threw Geet on the bed and walked away. Geet looked at him in shock and fear. Upset unsure and scared about her life. Who was she? It wasn't like she had any family who would look for her. Pinky probably would move on with her life.

'kyun babaji kyun? Har mushkil aap mujhe kyun dete ho. Mujhe kabi bi apse shikayat nahi ti. Meh anarth ti tab bi nahi. Jab wo Dev mujhe pareshan kar ra ha ta tab bi nahi aur aaj apne mujhe yaha kaara kardiya jaha par mujhe apne agi ki zindagi nazar bi nahi ati' Geet prayed to God. After a while Geet stopped crying. Seeing there was no one in the room she thought it would be a good time to escape. She stuggled to undo the ropes at the back of her hand. The ropes loosened easily as Geet hooked it onto the corner of the bed post. Geet smiled in happiness and freedom.

'Thank you babaji'. Geet said. She got up and slowly walked towards the exit door. She turned the handle but to her dismay it was locked. Geet tried to pull the door open but it was no use. As she was trying from the other end of the room Maan walked towards her. He looked at her struggling and smirked.

'kaha jaanee ki koshish kar rahi ho, mujhe chor keh'. Maan added that extra line to tease her. Geet let go of the door and jumped back in fear. Maan looked at those fearful eyes and across her cheek and lip. There was a small wound from where he slapped her hard at the bottom of her lip. There was still some blood there. Maan wanted to lick the blood of her lips. He started having dirty desires in her mind. He looked at her from head to toe checking her out. Meanwhile Geet looked down and started walking backwards. She was too scared to look him in the eye in case he would hurt her again. She didn't even see his eyes checking her out. Geet turned to run back when Maan grabbed her from the back. He held her tight. Her back on his chest his arms around waist resting on her stomach. He moved her hair from the right side of shoulder forward. He released one hand from her stomach whlist gripping her tightly with the other hand. He untied the dori of her kameez with his teeth. Geet gasped and tried to stuggle to get out of his grip. But he held on tighter. He pulled her kameez down of her right shoulder. Her shoulder and neck visibly bare to him. He looked at her soft white skin hungrily. He kissed her on her nape and the right side of the neck. He moved closer to her right shoulder and kissed her hard. He bit her there. Geet gasped. Maan then moved his lips to her back where he had untied her dori. He kissed her there. He started going wild kissing her back shoulder and nape. He removed her kameez further down from the other shoulder. Geet tried her bestest to get away but Maan wouldn't let her. Tears started falling from her eyes. Maan didn't care. He felt like he owned her. He owned every part of her.

'Please choro mujhe' Geet wimpered. But Maan did not pay heed to her. He bit her left shoulder. And starting kissing her wildly. Geet tears didn't stop. She wanted Maan to let go of her. But he didn't. finally after he had stop abusing her back he let her go.

He smirked at her. Geet was in tears. She ran to the bathroom and started crying. A man who was dangerous had been intimate with her. Kissed her. She was angry upset and scared. She felt like she should have tried harder. Geet stood under the shower with her clothes on. She wanted to get that man's feelings off her. She looked at the mirror in disgust. She saw marks on her body.

Maan agitated walked into the bathroom without knocking he saw Geet standing under the shower with her clothes on senseless. He dragged her out of the shower and gave her some towels and a new set of clothes which he had brought from her house. He ordered her to change.

Geet scared listened to what he said and got changed in the bathroom. She quietly sat on the bed where she saw food laid out for her on the table next for it.

'Eat' Maan said. Geet looked at him in disgust. She wanted to kill him for touching her but she was scared. He was a killer and had killed people. Upset at everything she ignored the food. Maan seeing how tempermental this girl is went up to her and forcefed her. Geet started to choke after the last bite. Maan forcefully made her drink water.

Geet stared at him and saw concern in his eyes. But why would he be concerned if I eat or not. He just a killer, a womaniser. He touched me. Geet was angry at him and didn't say a word.

Maan left her smirked at her.

He then had a phone call.

'Yes Sir, jee wo mere saat hi hai. Jee tik hai agar aap chahe to main wo kadam utalu jee jee tik hai'

Maan turned around to look at Geet and smiled sweetly. Seeing Maan like this she got scared. He had a package in his hand and threw it at her.

'jaldi yeh penlo' He barked. Geet looked inside the package and was shocked to see a wedding dress.

PRECAP: The secret behind Maan and Geet revealed.

Edited by sweetysumaiya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
Ooh this story is getting interesting liking the plot and qawwali poor geet she forgot about the incident and misunderstandings were created but hope he finds out why she went for dev and feel ashamed about his actions anyways great updates and continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
hey, can u please please add page numbers, or add a link to each updated part?

the story is great.. and i'm definitely going to be missing parts especially when the page numbers start increasing.

thanks!

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