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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetysumaiya


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yeah i watch eastenders..if u dnt knw then peggy gone for gud.. ronnie and jack are married.. urm.. Vanessa is going out with Max.. and Jodie dad ain't her real dad.. and Lauren found out that Stacey killed archie and told max to get stacey out of there lives.. Ryan is staceys kids dad.. and Stacey has ran off nw... LOL! oh and Kat aand Alfie are back and they own the queen vic LOL.. little update for u so u can start watching it nw and then we can make fun out of all of them... LOL x x oh yeah and Billie (carol son) died of alchohol posioning and Carol is sleepin with Billie mate.. WEIRD I TELL U These English program.. anywyas about Indian


<div>I only watch Geet and Kitni mohabbat hai.. English.. well has 2 be Desperate housewives and Eastenders LOL!!!



Haha Omd well Thankyou and I can see a lotnofthings have happened and the only thing I knew was Kat and Alfie together again lool but Woah yeh I'll try and when I do we can make fun out of them and Erm Indian well some of star plus ones and geet and odhani I really haven't got around to watching KMH season 2 but will do when I have time and haha desperate housewives is so funny I watch it time to time but my fav is friends I love it lool 😃
Ps: the promo is great can't wait to read I and see the love blossoming 😊
Edited by -shamima- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
plssssssss update........u said yersterday that u will be updating in 20 hr and no update yet........hey where r u and wen r u updating :-)

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Posted: 14 years ago

Maan and Geet had arrived in Shimla. They were walking out the airport. Maan was walking ahead of Geet.

'Sir tora deree chaliye na'. Maan turned around to see Geet lagging behind. She was wearing heels and finding it difficult to walk.

'Tume yeh heels pehne ki kya zarorat ti' Maan asked annoyed waiting for Geet to catch up.

'woh kya haina sir, mere outfit ke saat sirf yeh shoes match kar rahey teh'

'Kash tumhara dimaq bi match hota' Maan murmered.

'Sir apne kuch kaha'

'jee nahi ab chalne ki kasht utayengi Miss Shergill'

'Dusht danav' Geet mumerred.

'AAAHHH'. Maan turned around to see Geet had slipped and fallen due to walking fast in her heels. Maan looked at her and started laughing. He tried his hardest not to but looking at Geet's annoyed face made him want to laugh more.

'Aapko mazaq soch raha hai, aap ko bohot hassi aarahi nahi na'. Geet was annoyed.

'main kaha hasraha ta, main bilkul nahi hasraha ta' Maan said trying to supress a giggle whlist Geet tried getting up. Maan lent her his hand to him her up which Geet ignored.

'mujhe aapke help ki koi zarrorat nahi hai'. Geet tried getting up again but couldn't as the ground was slippery. Maan laughed and said 'tik hai mat lo mere help, zindagi bhar yahi bte rehna'. Maan started walking forward towards the car.

Geet mummered to herself 'kitna zaalim insaan hai, yaha mere maadat karne ki wajai wo mujhe yaha akele chorkar chaligai'. Geet started shivering. She closed her eyes and wrapped her hands around herself when she felt herself being lifted off the ground. She opened her eyes to see Maan carrying her to the car.

'main itna bi zaalim nahi ho, ke main tumhe yaha musibat main chorke chala jao'. Maan said. Geet looked at him and he looked at her. 'EYELOCK.

Maan sat Geet in the car and turned the heating on as he knew Geet was feeling cold. Maan started driving and Geet was quiet, praying that Maan didn't read her eyes.

'tumhe kuch kehna nahi hai'. Geet who was looking out her windows turned to Maan and said

'huh mujhe kuch nahi kehna'. Geet quickly turned back towards the window before she says or does anything stupid.

'yeh itni chup'. Maan mummered to himself. Geet thought, to herself that she has to act normal. So she turned the radio on and the song bahara bahara was playing. Geet looked at Maan and Maan looked at her as the song was playing there feelings. Geet got irritated and switched it to another station where it was playing kuch kuch hota hai. Geet was getting more irritated. Maan looked at her and wondered why was she keep changing the songs. Geet irritated turned the radio off.

'yeh gane na ek jaise hotey hai kisi ka bi dil ka haal lafzo main kehsakta hai'. Geet said irritated.

'Geet tumhe gani se kya hua hai'. Geet turned to look at Maan and decided to keep mum. They arrived in the hotel. Maan took her hand and made her walk fast into the hotel as it started snowing.

'Sorry Mr Khurana sirf ek room baki hai'

'Kya maine to doh rooms book karvai ti' Maan barked at the attendant

'ha liken Sir aap late hogai teh isliye'

'dosri hotel main try karta ho'

'Sir sari hotel full hai, koi theatre production wali ayi hai isliye'

Maan looked at Geet who was shivering and said

'tik hai chavi de'

Geet and Maan walked to the room.

'Sir apka kamra kaha hai'

'woh urm Geet main kehna chata ho keh' Maan didn't know what to say as Geet didn't know about having only one room.

'Geet hume kamra share karna parega'

Geet looked at him in shock and said 'WHAT'

Babaji agar main har waqt Maan sir ke pass raho to mere dil mera saat nahi denga

'Geet I'm sorry aur koi choice nahi hai, tum bed pe sojana aur main sofa per tik hai, aur ha tum fresh hojao aur change karlo main dinner order karta hu.' Geet sighed and took her clothes and went to the bathroom to change.

Maan ordered the food and then heard Geet scream from the bathroom. He ran to the bathroom.

Geet managed to get soap in her eyes and screamed. Maan walked in 'kya hua'

'sir wo mere aakon main soap chalagaya'.

'Geet mere taraf dekho'. Maan held her by the shoulders and made Geet turn towards him. Geet could feel her heart beating faster.

'aakhein kholo'.

'nahi bohot dukega'

'Geet tumhe muj par yakeen hai na'

'aap par to khud se zyada yakeen hai'. Maan looked at Geet and stared at her.

'Sirrrrrr'.

'ha Geet'. Maan took some water and washed Geet eyes he then blew into her eyes. Geet opened her eyes and looked at Maan. Maan read something in her eyes. He then went to get ready.

Geet quickly exited the bathroom and went to the window whlist Maan went to get changed.

He got changed and walked behind Geet and heard her pray to babaji

'babaji, aap kyun mere saat aisa kar rahi ho, jise main door jani ki koshish kar rahi ho, aap bar bar mujhe aun ke saat jordete ho kya hoga babaji bolo'

The dinner arrived and Maan and Geet sat down for dinner when Maan touched the warm dish and burnt his finger. Geet without thinking and took his finger and blew on it. Maan saw concern and love for him in Geet's eyes. Geet looked at him

'Sir aisa koi karta hai kya, apko garam dish ko haat kyun lagaya lag gai na apko chot. Apko apni fikar nahi hai.' Geet started telling Maan off. Maan just stared at Geet as Geet caressed his finger and blew on it.

'bohot dard to nahi horaha na'. Maan didn't hear Geet as he was too busy staring at her.

'nahi jab tum ho mere pass to phir dard kaisa'. Geet didn't hear him as she was so worried about him.

'Sir main davai lekar ati ho ek minute'. Geet got up and Maan came out of his trance and realised what he just said. Maine Geet ke aakon main wohi ehsaas dekha jo main har pal Geet ke liye mehsoos karta ho. iska matlab Geet bi mere liye kuch mehsoos karti hai, shayad isliye wo kuch dino se badle badle se hai aur mujhe avoid karne ki koshish karti hai taki main auske aakhein na parlo. Geet main jaan kar hi rahoga tumhari dil main kya hai'.

Later on in the evening, Geet was standing in the middle of the room walking towards her suitcase when 'GEET'. Geet turned around and saw Maan staring at her. Geet got worried wondering why was Maan looking at her in a angry way. He walked towards her Geet moved back but since she was near the wall she couldn't move anywhere. Maan was right in front of her. He put both hands on either side.

'Sir aap mujhe aise mat dekhiye'. Geet looked down nervously.

To nazar churarahi hai Miss Shergill

Maan came closer to her, his faces was mere inches away from her. Geet closed her eyes and her breathing increased as did her heartbeats. Maan loved the effect he was having on Geet.

'Geet aakhein kholo'. Geet opened her eyes to see Maan standing a good distance away from her.

Geet looked at Maan and wondered what happened, was he really close to her. Geet ran into the bathroom.

'babaji yeh kya horaha hai mere saat'

Maan sat on the sofa and thought

'yeh to shuruwaat hai Miss Shergill, apne dil ke baat tum khud kahogi'

PRECAP: Car broken down, Geet in trouble, Maan to the rescue then ONE COTTAGE!!! And off course SNOW!!! (NOT ALL NECCESARILY IN ONE UPDATE BUT FORECAST FOR THE NEW FEW!!) NEXT UPDATE FRIDAY!!

Edited by sweetysumaiya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwwwwwwwww superb luved itttttt soooooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhh😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
excellent part
do continue soon
waitng for friday
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: wajiha-1

excellent part
do continue soon
waitng for friday

only friday because 2mz im at uni 9am till 3pm.. (meaning gta wake up at 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 6 cos it takes me a hour and half to get into uni)
andddd im going dinner with my friend.. so prob get home in evening n dads cumin home 2mz!!!! yaay
anywyas please contiue to comment...xx also please hav a

look at this one... i know here where the story is heading and this one is going to have lotssss of issues and turns..

xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update dear,plz do continue btw can we have a maaneet night together plz mauka bi hai dastur bi,such a romantic place simla and they have had their honemoon in tat same place apnay pichly janam men i think they shud experiencee tat again,maybe infact definately theu\y'll be reminded bout all of it😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part.......................
Geet feeling something for Maan and Maan too feeling something for Geet.........................dono ek kamre mein...............cant wait to read further.....................cont soon....................
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWESOME Update..Loved it..
Continue sooon pls
Thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: untaimedtigress

nice update dear,plz do continue btw can we have a maaneet night together plz mauka bi hai dastur bi,such a romantic place simla and they have had their honemoon in tat same place apnay pichly janam men i think they shud experiencee tat again,maybe infact definately theu\y'll be reminded bout all of it😊

im planning sumfin along those lines but it will be after a few updates :D

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