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Antares

@Antares

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Posted: 14 years ago

#921

Freaking awesome! I LOVED it! Super-fabulous! Lolz.....I wanted Brij to be beaten up......but loved the turn of the events......got something really amazing! Geet almost confessed what importance Maan holds in her life......Lolz at Daadi.....she is one amazing woman! Wonder what would have happened had that dinner call not interrupted them.....hehe. Loved the way Maan was taking care of all the details and all.....all in all both the updates were great! Do continue soon.

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roopali

@rsroopali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#922

its superb update luved itttttttttt

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maaneet_pisces

@maaneet_pisces

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Posted: 14 years ago

#923

hey...it is awesome :)

and he steamy portion, it was so well written, cud easily visualise the entire thing..u are an amazing writer so nethng and everythng u write is so goooddd :) bi it romance, philosophy, mystery etc!!!!

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Gollums Precious

@OfTheHeart

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Posted: 14 years ago

#924

i loved it!!!!

awesome........... will commnt more latr... gtg... gn...........

edited: 😆😆

u know wat i read once.. n didn't got anything coz i of late nyt.. bt today i read it again........

marvelous!!!!!!!!!!

do u hav some magic .. i mean the way u write... the way u xpress... i hav become big big fan of urs..😊... i love ur quotes.. i keep on writing in my dairy..😉

i just loved ur writing style...👏

anyways... coming to the part 45.. i loved it!!

loved the way Geet opened her heart infront of Maan..

and i really liked Dadi maa's self talk!!😉

by the way Hasini i wanna ask u some thing... pls tell me is Dev related to Maan????

i mean both r khurana's.. and till now u hav not shown Maan-Dev confrontation so.. i ws just thinking......... pls tell me...

Edited by MaanEET_FAN - 14 years ago

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Shamima

@-shamima-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#925

I really enjoyed this part even though geet did leave it open ended but it as enough for maan it was enough for me and I'm quoting it " that first breath of air that actually gets your desire back to live...that is you...." I just love this partial confession cause it does say a lot and it does explain geets thought I mean she has bottom out of a marriage of 5 years so she is bound to think it's a rebound but slowly she will understand and I now you will picture it beautifully for us and I just love dadi on mission to get them together but naughty looking in at their conversion and stepping in when they were going to kiss lol but yeh great update and waiting to see how the story unfolds from here 😊

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maaneetfan123

@maaneetfan123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#926

loved the update it was amazing

thanks 4 the quick update

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preciuspearl

@preciuspearl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#927

the update is just awesomeeeeeeeee
i loved every bittttt of it.........
you are just amazing...........😊

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

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Posted: 14 years ago

#928

Geet's perspective is totally clear now. Her inner turmoil, her decision to move to SF finally becomes clear.

Maan's anger on seeing marks on Geet's face was quite obvious but he reacted very sharply. When I read Geet's foot being run over by his car, i was like really scared both of them, specially Maan since I didn't want him to hurt himself, accusing himself for hurting Geet as the Maan in the serial does.

Really liked the way he was taking care of her. Paper-pen part reminded me of the similar scene in the show. Their discussion which followed was really good. It seemed as if they both have authority over each other. The comfort level was visible.

And then the most important part of this part, in your words, Geet's indirect confession!

Her words were really very deep and the statement- that first breath of air that actually gets your desire back to live...that is you.... was the limelight of her confession.She shared her thoughts, her feelings. And I actually liked that you made this confession impulsve rather than making it cliched. Maan's monologue during this part was perfect.

I couldn't understand these lines😒

''Geet:"Upar se toh teek hi thi...what not right? Hot chocolate and all...and you for sure didnt know that I had not felt hot chocolate myself..."

What? Toh phir vus din why was she convincing me so much. There was still so much that I didn't know about her. She was now crying. I got closer to her.''

Anyhow, she actually let her heart out in front of Maan. Yes, she directly hasn't said anything but Maan is mature and smart enough to decipher the true meaning of her words.

I loved it when he said

Maan:"Tum jaana chahti ho ki geet ki tum, kya ho…"

She opened her eyes to look at me.

Maan:"Sirf meri Geet…samji…sirf meri"

It was so dreamyyy (Pari style).

And the passionate moment that followed was too good. Beautifully described!👏

It was like a special moment not only for Maan and Geet but also for the readers, atleast it was indeed special for me😳

I felt Daadi made the dinner call at the right time. This moment would help Geet in a way to better gauge her feelings.

Besides the confession part, some of the dialogues and the monologues were too good in this update-conveying the depth of their relation; showing their innermost feelings and desires as well as lending a light-hearted environment. I was actually smiling while reading some dialogues and the monologues.

Geet's birthday coming. Interesting😊 So lets see how Maan makes her birthday special admist of the Hoshiarpur fiasco and Geet's inner turmoil.

I loved these lines a lot

I had never anticipated that things would change so much in my life. Moonlight night, at my place, she was in my room, my bed and the whole night I could watch her without taking my eyes off her.

This was again dreamy dreamy😍

To be honest, If I start quoting the lines I loved in this update, I'l end up quoting almost the entire update!

Ah, how can I forget the lovely Daadi in my comments? She was too good!!! I love her monologues a lot. So she's all set for her Project-Maan ki Geet and look, she's involved Shrivastav too😆 ( I miss Nakul here😛 but I imagine Shrivastav as Nakul)

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#929

great update

loved their intimate scene.. uhh dadi, what timing lol

i wonder what he'll do for her bday.. show up in HP?

con't soon

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#930

Originally posted by: shivangi783

I couldn't understand these lines😒
''Geet:"Upar se toh teek hi thi...what not right? Hot chocolate and all...and you for sure didnt know that I had not felt hot chocolate myself..."
What? Toh phir vus din why was she convincing me so much. There was still so much that I didn't know about her. She was now crying. I got closer to her.''
Geet's birthday coming. Interesting😊 So lets see how Maan makes her birthday special admist of the Hoshiarpur fiasco and Geet's inner turmoil.

Thank you Shivangi for the long comment. As always I light up too when I read it.

Coming back to your question

Remember the first time Hot Chocolate comes up in the series. She only sees Yash and Meera and feels Hot Chocolate not for something that happened in her life, not until she meets Maan.

It was never said explicitly but she never had moments in her life where she felt it for something that was done for/to her. This is actually part of a confrontation scene but it comes much later anyways I didnt mind giving it out as I'm not sure if this diaogue is needed.

Maan was questioning it because, to him he felt she believed in it strongly only because she knew what it truly meant.

Actually good catch and this will push him to do many things for her to feel the same, but I cant talk to how Geet will take it. We will see.

Birthday...sorry people. As of the current track, there is nothing special...or...actually I don't want to commit.

I cant even guarantee more Maneet which I have been screaming since like the India trip. This close moment in today's part was written for....

I will leave it at that and when that part gets published, I will point it back.

Dont I love open ended statements?

But it did take a long time to write this one, in fact written twice.

I will definitely make Part 50 special in its no way, but it doesn't have to be a passionate one. what say?

Thanks Shivangi. Get back to bed. and loved the long comment once again.