New FF: New York times with Maan and Geet - Page 70

loved the update it was wonderful😃

Nice part MEer &Yash get patch up..Geet find her emotion about how she feel about Maan..I am think she should let Maan knows what she think about him & relation..

Omd this update was amazing (sorry could comment on the previous chapter but that's because you already updated this one but wat to say the previous chapter was beautifully written and the emotions that were placed with the dance steps was so real that I could feel them myself 😊) anyways I've noticed that things mirrored in this update like how yash brought pari to probably make meera jealous but she ended up with maan to make geet jealous and the yashmeera confession it mirrored maan and geet and what is in their hear I really loved how maan looked at geet when maan said a line and geet gr scared because I know shes not ready yet but geets reaction was funny especially when maan wet down on his knee only to tie his shoe lace I wonder if he did to it purposely to tease geet but that was funny sorry I wasn't beige analytical in this chapter but that's because what you have written is what it is I mean yash and meeras confession scene was an insight to maan and geets feelings but their time isn't now as geet is still scared and needed time to fully understand and Ooh pari I wonder what her role will be anyways great update and continue soon 😃

Originally posted by: Hasini67

What can I say? I have no words... I should probably just hand over the FF from here and walk off. Such beautiful analysis of Geet.

Thank you. This is a honor.

Hey,

Originally posted by: tanya_vi

Loved it! loved it! loved it! Atleast one love story took off..Ab Geet -Maan ka kya hoga Hasiniji??

Wahi hoga jo manzoore Hasiniji hoga!!!!

Originally posted by: shivangi783

@ armaanshilpa

Beautiful analysis of Geet's state of mind, her feelings, her thoughts.

The way you gave words, meanings to every line of the song is really nice! 👏👏

Loved it😊

Hey,

Originally posted by: aarmanshilpa

Hey,

Nahin yaar....nothing like that....I should say....I am thankful to you.....cus I did not know I had this side in me.....I mean I kinda knew.....thought process wise...but not when it comes down to writing in paper.....

Love

Rachana

Originally posted by: aarmanshilpa

Wahi hoga jo manzoore Hasiniji hoga!!!!

😉😉😉

Manzoor-e Hasiniji :-D

Hasini!AM egarly waiting for your next update!!😉