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Posted: 14 years ago

#681

hiiii hasini...

i am goin to ask u a favor.......lend ur brain for a day....its a powerhouse of ideas

how and from where do u come up with such adorable ideas..........

i am completely dumbstruck...............this update was simply cute, beautiful, humorous and endearing......

i loved so many moments.... starting from the caption....my frozen dinner wali......ahhhh so chweet

yash and meer proposal was cute....

maan kneeling down .........i had stopped breathing for a moment thinking that the proposal is gonna happen now.........without any warning to the readers..........and. then he kneeled down to tie his laces....geet shocked..........and him giving her a wide smile........had me grinning like a fool...

loved this sequence..............

the convo between meer and yash before the proposal ..........and the way maan and geet looking at each other silently seeking answers...............the sequence bowled me over ..........

and then the concluding part of the update....where u summed up what it is to have someone special...someone to love and care for u .............those special special moments to share.........thats what makes life beautiful and worth living..............

u captured them well.............with geet wondering mera number kab aayega.............

u have awakened a hopeless romantic side of not only geet but all ur readers................

i loved it..........hats off to u...........

this update deserves 100/100.............

u r a terrific writer........keep writing

love u and ur ff..................

plz cont soon

melody

Edited by melody_quest - 14 years ago

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

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Posted: 14 years ago

#682

Double update today😊

Yay!!!

Wonderful update!👏

So Geet has been avoiding Maan since the past two days. Hmmm, interesting. She's realized that she loves him but is now apprehensive of coming face to face with him lest she ends up doing something stupid or her face might display her emotions!😳

For the last 2-3 updates, I was wondering whats up with Yash, why is he avoiding Meera and Maaneet. This update gave the answer-he too loves Meera and was taking time for his realization!

Seems like Love is in the air😊😳

Loved Maan's concern, he wants to know why has she been behaving this way lately but more than that he wanted to make sure if Geet is fine, is she behaving normally with Meera.

Pari's entry was good. Finally Maan-Meera dancing sessions helped and yash proposed Meera. I found the scene(cute verbal fight followed by proposal) sweet. I loved it😊

Geet seems to be jealous of Pari😆 She said to Meera na that Pari seems to be more interested in Maan. And then her monologue-that is she should be worried!

I liked the way you showed Geets thoughts while Meera-Yash were talking/fighting(cute one) and when he bend down to tie his shoe-laces, it was too good!!!👏👏 I wonder if Maan was doing that intentionally😉😆

And I loved these lines a lot, sorry but I could not resist myself from quoting this

''I wondered what it felt like to know that you have the one in your life

to love

And to share and care'

And have a laugh at each others jokes

And to give you a hanky when you cry at silly soaps

And to pamper you

And to complain about you

And to fight your opinions and ideas

And to do have nonsensical arguments with you,

And to kiss and make up

And to sit next to you and understand everything without a word being uttered.

And to share that chai on a rainy afternoon'

Mera number kab ayega Babaji?''

Loved it a lot😊 A big thank you for the wonderful update😊🤗

Edited by shivangi783 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#683

Originally posted by: melody_quest

hiiii hasini...😛

i am goin to ask u a favor.......lend ur brain for a day....its a powerhouse of ideas

how and from where do u come up with such adorable ideas..........👏👏👏👏

i am completely dumbstruck...............this update was simply cute, beautiful, humorous and endearing......😊😊😊😊

i loved so many moments.... starting from the caption....my frozen dinner wali......ahhhh so chweet😃😃

yash and meer proposal was cute....😃

maan kneeling down .........i had stopped breathing for a moment thinking that the proposal is gonna happen now.........without any warning to the readers..........and. then he kneeled down to tie his laces....geet shocked..........and him giving her a wide smile........had me grinning like a fool...😆😆😆

loved this sequence..............😊😊😊

the convo between meer and yash before the proposal ..........and the way maan and geet looking at each other silently seeking answers...............the sequence bowled me over ..........😊😊😊😊

and then the concluding part of the update....where u summed up what it is to have someone special...someone to love and care for u .............those special special moments to share.........thats what makes life beautiful and worth living..............👏👏👏👏

u captured them well.............with geet wondering mera number kab aayega.............⭐️⭐️👏👏

u have awakened a hopeless romantic side of not only geet but all ur readers................👏👏

i loved it..........hats off to u...........👏👏

this update deserves 100/100.............⭐️⭐️

u r a terrific writer........keep writing👏👏

love u and ur ff..................😛😛

plz cont soon

melody😃

sorry wanted add smileys,,,,,,,,😆😆😆😆😆

Edited by melody_quest - 14 years ago

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blessednim

@blessednim

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Posted: 14 years ago

#684

wow luv the last line "MERA NUMBER KAB AYEGA BABAJI"
awesome update👍🏼

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Preethi

@Preethi-Premi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#685

I really LOL on the Maan tying his lace part!!! You are too good!!! Please update next part soon....

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smiliey

@smiliey

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Posted: 14 years ago

#686

very nice Hasini....thank u so much double update...ur update become ma morning coffee now days....😆

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Manpreet

@Maneetkraze

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Posted: 14 years ago

#687

Awesome Update!!!!! I loved how you included Meera and Yash's love story into this. It was brilliant!!! You have made my monday exciting already:)

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Navpreet

@dimpzz

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#688

HASINI!
tat wz BEAUTIFUL!
juz read all d 3 updates!
n they were beautiful!
n FINALLY meera n yash together!
WOW!m soooooooooooooooooooooooooo happy
n geet's dance on o re piya...............it wz kinda breathtaking
i cud like actually feel her emotions...LOL i noe it sounds wierd but yes i cud! 😃😆 hehehhehe
n when yash proposed to meera n maan went on his knees!hahahahahahaha......
at first i wz frozen thinking tat he wz gnna propose to her...BUT he wz tying his shoe lace!
hahahahhahahahhahaha
n d shocked look on her face n then maan smiled!
LOL i still can't get over it!hehehehhehe
tat wz tooo gud
n i really agree wid wt u had written tat dance music n lyrics bring out people's emotions...
m not really into dancing......but MUSIC....it is sumthing i can't live widout.....it wz really an amazing n beautiful way to make geet realise her feelings........
n geet getting jealous............it wz awesome!
n m glad tat atleast geet told everyhting to her family.....n as usal they wnna sort out everyhting in "their" way! hehehehehe
n when she met pinky n felt hurt when she told her tat she wanted to b independent n do everything on her own.........awwwwwww..........she realised wt maan wud hav gone theough n wud hav been more hurt as he wz more attached to her...as compared to her n pinky....it wz beautiful!
juz can't wait for d moment when maneet will confess their love for each other!
n feel sooooooo ahppy for yash n meera!
ur a great writer hasini!
keep up d great work!
n update soon!
LOL even though u've given 3 updates.......v still want more........v're hungry readers! 😆

luv
Navpreet