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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pushpi

Super Sweet :-D

Thanks for updating girl! Keep up the great work cause you're doing very well. We all really like this FF :-D
Update soon



Thank you, i am glad my efforts are not going to waste and you all are enjoying my ff... I hope I can keep you all interested in this ff till the end...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: avem

the update is just too too gud that now i already started waiting for the next update NT being so sweet is kind hard but the way u r writing the story is just too gud and addicting that reader's like me jsut want to know what will happen next omg u should become a writer i will b the first to watch all the movies and dramas written by u 😃 u r absolutely a greater writer can't wait to read the next update u r ⭐️





😳 😳 😳..... gosh you all just know how to flatter me.... thank you for such lovely comments, avem. I am sorry for not updating sooner, I had planned to update on Friday as I had stated earlier to you but something came up and i never got down to editing the part and then tried to update yesterday but my friend wanted to hang out with me so again didn't had the chance to update... I am really sorry for keeping you waiting, I know how eager you were to read the updates.... hope you will enjoy reading part 9 which i will be posting soon.... 😛


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Posted: 14 years ago
yay finally part 9 OMG khushi k aansoo 😭 lol
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cute-aly





waiting for next plzzz conti soon



Aww... that is so cute.... did you create that? if yes, can I request you to create one for my ff? not this ff but I am planning on posting one Short-Story for Christmas...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: avem

yay finally part 9 OMG khushi k aansoo 😭 lol



Avem.... *shaking my head in amusement* 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SuJaTa790

great story.

plz make an index. it is really time consuming to sift through every page for updates.



I am working on it... sorry for the trouble....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kellz

i love how geet calls him "pati"'loved the line
"I am where I should be! At my house, in my room, on my bed with my wife!"



🤗 at least someone loved that line.... it's my favorite, I thought everyone would love it but so far only you have expressed it... 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelskiss



🤗 at least someone loved that line.... it's my favorite, I thought everyone would love it but so far only you have expressed it... 😆

i luv that line two favourite dialogue i m so tired but i m just waiting for the so that i could sleep in peace
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: avem

i luv that line two favourite dialogue i m so tired but i m just waiting for the so that i could sleep in peace

sorry 4got to write update i m definately tired lol i m waiting 4 the update
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ayeshaaa.

Helloo (;

I LOVEED that scene! how maan asked her for the morning kiss & how he yelled at Sasha! AH! loving it.
Okk! I would love to have a tiny maaneet scene once a while..but not too much..I want to see geet getting used the environment and the new family..and their values..
I know will geet Fulfill all the Wifey duties...getting up in the morning..shower..go down and make breakfast for the whole family..helping the servants..then coming back to her room and pick out a tie and shirt..and wallet for her "pati"...
I want to see the scene where when dulhan makes something sweet? for the whole family..
I know Geet's cooking will be awesome. everyone will go crazy for sure especially vicky/dev/NT ;P and later maan.. ;P and vicky will be like..Bhabhi..Can I kiss your hands? haha! ;P
Honestly, I m not waiting for maaneet scenes..I want to see a change in Geet..slowly by slowly...not too fast..don't rush it...
I want NT and Geet to be friends first..I want NT to understand geet and the environment Geet was brought up in..Slowly..I want Geet to call her "pati" by his name..MAAN..not too fast..
I want her to open up soon and get used to the ppl..because now its her family too..
I want NT to help with that..She wears shalwar suit now right?
Maybe..slowly..she can start wearing sari..and all through that..NT can help..thats why I want them to be friends first...I want to see them both cooking in the kitchen and their husbands are waiting..
Maybe Geet can teach NT how to cook..
:D these are my suggestions.
I WOULD LOVE to see one or two maaneet scenes..in your updates..but don't put too much emphasis on that..
I want to see a change in Geet soon..
Amazing Update as always! I wanna see how maan falls for her ;P he is already for her...and then Geet is gonna be next..I know it will take a long time for Geet to fall in love with Maan..BUT I could wait..if you update twice a week..that would be awesome! =))



Ayeshaa, thank you for sharing your views.... I am glad you liked the maneet scene and i knew you would enjoy Maan yelling at Sasha.... Thank you for understanding Geet's character and how awkward it would be to have too much of Maneet romance... there will be maneet scenes but they won't be romantic all the time... rest assured I have already written nearly 20 parts so most of the scenes that you want to see are already written.... Part 9 will have Geet cooking something sweet... and well Geet has already cooked Breakfast in Part 8, she will serve it in Part 9 so you will get to see every ones reaction.... NT and Geet will make a bond, part 9 will definitely make you happy because it will give you the glimpse of how NT will be with Geet.... I am really surprised to read about what you want to see because those are the things that I had already planned on except Geet calling Maan by his name not Pati and Geet trying to teach NT how to cook... I actually planned on Geet teaching Myra how to cook but well I will work on this 😉

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