FF: Out Of Darkness *Thread - 1* - Page 29

Originally posted by: Paloma_D

Loved it, can't wait for more! Your romantic writing skills are brilliant- it was a lovely scene:)
Keep writing
Paloma x

Thank you, i am glad you liked the romantic scene... was really apprehensive about how you all will take that...

Originally posted by: shining_moon

u know wat it was very very beautifully written

geet in ur ff is too naive........so her imagination of a romantic moment to b a death threat is quite acceptable n very genuine

loved it.......maan was so nice with geet

hope she soon start to trust maan😊

update soon

Thank you, I am so glad you liked part 8 and understood Geet's character.... I think if Maan keeps being nice then Geet might just begin to not fear her pati.... 😉

Originally posted by: Sofna

Angel this was Beautifully written......👏.....I'm glad u included this it was needed..😳😳...!!! Hw they progress after this is diff......but it's nice to knw if they hav interest in each othr (esp Geet) w/out othrs input.....I loved the waY u wrote..PAti this Pati THAT 😆😆..........

This is YOUR story Plzzz tell it to us as u hav ENVISIONED....I believe that will bring the best output n flow 👍🏼....

Jst wanted to ask...is Geet planning to wear suits after marriagge too....no Sari's??...I wud Love to read Maan putting sindoor on her on her 1st day.......😳

Thank you for such lovely comments.... Maaneet progression is going to be very slow, step by step.... happy to know that you like Geet calling Maan "Pati" because that's what she will always call him... And rest assured I am not going to change my story mainly because I have already written nearly 20 parts of this story so there is no question of changing the story... the most i will do is just add few scenes if an idea pops up in my mind or if i like an idea suggested by you all but still the story is going to be the same... if you all are expecting this ff to be all romantic with just maneet romance than I will warn you there more to this ff then just maneet romance... This is Geet's story, every character is important, every single person in Geet's life plays an important role be it her dead mother or Little Abhishek (Myra's son).... so don't expect every part to have Maneet in them... some parts might not have maneet... some parts maybe focused on Geet and NT's relation.... some might have Geet and Myra and some might just be flashbacks of Geet's life back home, her childhood... her interaction with her brothers and such....

Maan putting sindoor on Geet... well what if I tell you I already have that particular scene written... it won't be until part 11 or part 12... but rest assured Maan will fill Geet's mang..... Geet will wear suits for a long while, no saris for her right now...

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Wow that was awesum yaar

Jus loved Geet

Nakul looks lik sadu here

I really wish NT takes Geet's fear otu of her

Maan loosed his control

His desires were buliding up n Geet dosent knws anythg abt it

She is too scared yaar

Kitne negative thoughts she hav in her mind yaar

Loved Maan's care for her

He is jus physically attracted to her i thk

Lets c how u take the stry ahead

Update soon

More longer parts plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

You calling Nakul Sadu? 😆 don't worry he is not sadu... he is just a little possesive about his territory i.e. Kitchen 😆 and well not taking well to Geet changing everything in his kitchen and doing his job... the poor guy is just scared he might lose his job....😆 I can't say any one person will take away Geet's fears because if you haven't noticed Geet is scared of almost everything so i guess everyone will play their part in helping Geet come out of her fears.... Maan... i feel sorry for the guy, he is going to loose his control too often which will lead to him getting frustrated all the time since he has Geet; his naive and innocent wife who doesn't know the effect she has on him.... You are very right on your assumption... for now Maan is just attracted to her, he is not in love with her....

Originally posted by: liv2laugh

Hi Angel

Awesome update 👏 👏 👏

You have a gift. You managed to capture Geet's wonder at exploring this mansion as well as her thoughts on the way things are done.😆 😆 😆

I can just see her whipping the mansion into shape once she becomes a little more confident. 😃

A request could Maan be the one to discover her broken arm and take her to a doctor please 😳. I think it would really help cement the relationship in her eyes.

Loved the Maaneet moments......it did not seem forced at all and flowed very well with the pace of the story. I would never have known you added it later. 😃

Thanks for the PM
Jhan

Jhan, you are such jaan... thank you for such lovely comments... I enjoy reading your comments because you often write your thoughts on things that many don't take it as important.... and you are right, if Geet got the chance then she will completely change the whole Khurana Mansion.... and about your request would it make you happy if I tell you I have already written the scene where Maan is going to discover her broken arm and tries to take her to a doctor... 😉 I am glad i have kept the flow of the story so far.... because i added that scene at the last hour and was really apprehensive of it.....

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

wow angel.......😊

u make us wait n wait n wait........and deliver magic.........😳

the way u put it was amazing.....simply sensous without being OTT.....😳

loved it....👏👏👏 u really have a gift gal....👏👏👏

i kno u brought up the broken arm part here...but when will maan realize????

and what about the priview???? not that i'm complaining mind u....😆

i wud love it if u continued where u left off...and maan seees no sindoor in geets maang n fills it himself...😳😳😳

P.S. --- what do v do to make u update more often?????😭😭😭

😳 awww... you guys just flatter me too much with your lovely comments... happy to know that I didn't go OTT with the whole Maneet scene... I guess I will give you a hint on the broken arm... it will come up again in part 10....😉 and preview scene will be in part 9 which I am going to update in few minutes... as for making me update more often, i guess you all just have to keep posting such lovely comments... 😳 it might just prompt me to update early...

Originally posted by: Starry_night

That was awesome! Maan and NT are so tender and soft towards Geet......feel for Geet....her fears are so deep-rooted....it will take her a long time to leave her torturous past behind.....Maan has been understanding so far.....hope he remains that way.....it's really interesting to see how will they fall in love. Loved that little romance.....it was cute...lolz. Do continue soon.

I love reading your insights and your interpretation on the parts.... I am glad at least some of my readers understand why I can't make Geet free of her fears... Geet has lived her whole like with her cruel family, she didn't know their were people out there in the world that are nicer and not mean like her family.... she doesn't know that the way her father and brothers treated her was wrong.... so yes, it will take a long time for her to shed all her fears and live a normal life... as for Maan, he will TRY to be understanding.... 😛

hi Angel,

Originally posted by: shivangi783

Lovely update.

The way you descibed the part where Geet was exploring the mansion was really good.

Geet is so scared of everyone because of the life she had been living since her mother passed away. The bedroom scene was really good. More scenes like this please where Maan is taking the initiative and geet also realizes that her pati is not gonna treat her like her brothers or dad did.

Her arm still paining? How iabout a scene where Maan comes to know and helps her with it-may be by applying an ointment or taking her to the doctor.

Thank you for your wonderful comments.... I am glad you enjoyed reading about Geet's exploration of her new home... There are going to be more maneet scenes, I have to satisfy all my readers... 😆 her broken arm will be taken care of in Part 10.... her arm broke for a reason... can't let such an opportunity go to waste....😆

Originally posted by: deadly-kiss

Yay! You updated. I love your writing. its good to know that geet doesnt have to clean anymore. "Pati"? hehehehe sooo cute. lol. How will she call him in front of others?

"Pati, I have to talk to you" ahahahah! i cant wait.

sooo cute the morning kiss part.


continue soon. I'll be waiting.

I am glad you liked Geet calling Maan "Pati"... don't you think it's better than "Sir"? 😆 lolz....