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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: shivangi783

Just read the last three parts!

Maan-geet marriage ho gayi!😊
You scared a lot by giving the precap of Anu-Geet marriage.

But its too painful to see Geet crying all the time and Maan worried😭
Don't what have you planned for the future....

Hate Dev-Meera😡😡
Send them to hell!!!

Congrats for the new thread😊
Your threads are increasing at the speed of your updates😆😉


hahah well what can i do…. first page problems :(
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
great!!!

congratz for new thread....

eagerly waiting for nexT!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
awsome hmmm dev and meera😡 hmmm continue soon want to knoe what happens next....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG.... Just read all the parts. Amazing. So different. Loved it. So sad for maan and geet. Pls make them happy. Kill that anu!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
And owo
3rd three in 7days amazing. This FF must be different
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I will comment for each hehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67

Tremble of love....



part 1


Maan: not very punctual! Are they!
Sammera: no... Not at all...
Maan: 5 minutes late!
Sam: are you sure... I mean..... you want to do there project...
Maan: I don't know!
Sam: let's say no...

Geet and Rahul walks in...
Rahul: we are Extremely sorry...
Maan: you are late...
Geet: sorry sir... We...
Maan: can we proceed with the project...
Geet: sure...
Geet present the presentation... It was outstanding... Maan was very impress... Every aspect was thought carefully.... Nothing was ignored...
Rahul gave her a very proud happy face...
Maan: impressive... I like the idea...
Sam: me to... You have Thought about every aspect... extremely well...
Geet: thank you sir.... Thank you mam...

Maan: well congratulation mr Rahul megera.... Project is your....

Geet jumps up in excitement.... Couldn't control her happiness....
Maan gives her a shocking look... And walks out... Flowed by Sammera....

Rahul picks geet up... Spines her round... Hugging her tight.....
Rahul: I am so happy....
Geet: you have no idea... How happy I am....
Rahul: all because of you....
Geet: no you....
Rahul: I love you.... I love you..... I love you.......
Rahul spines her round..... Bothe happy.... Smiling.....

Sam: that was surprising!
Maan: what do you mean!
Sam: it's impossible to impress you!
Maan: MSK looks for talent... And any talent... That deserves to be impressed... i will be impressed...
Sam: why you talk in a Sooooo long.... Weird language!
Maan ignores... Sits in the car....
Sam next to him.... Kisses his cheek... "where would you like to take your peonse!"
Maan: anywhere you want!
Sam: I am hungry....


Geet back at home...

Geet: can you believe it.... MSK... Impressed by my project... She was boasting... Non stop....
Mum: ok! Ok! We hard it... You have repeated that... Millions of time!
Geet: so... It deserves to be repeated... Do you know how hard is to impress that kharus... People usually shakes seeing him... My thought was drying... My leg was shaking... Shivering.... OMG tell me about it...
Heer: ok ok... Di please... Chup!
Virji: enough!
Geet: whatever....
Virji: where is Rahul?
Geet: idk!
Heer: your BF! You suppose to know...
Geet: he is not my BF! He loves me... I don't!
Virji: Chup! Your engagement is planned with him...
Geet: umm... Per... I don't want to marry him.... My dream guy.... Have to be angry... At the same time super hot.... Sweet.... Loving.... Loves me blindly.... believe me madly.... Trusts me....... Egoistic.... Who could control me easily... and the world..... And most of all... I love him... Where my one smile will make all his stress disappears... My one smile will make his day..... You know... And Rahul... Does everything I say.... I mean before I could even think... It will be there... virji.... Can't you choose someone els???
Virji: shut up... That only happens in a film.... Have you even seen your face.... Bari aya perfect man donhne!

Geet: what's wrong with my face? Heer am I ugly?
Heer: OMG! Di have you just realized??
Geet: mummmm..... They all teasing me.... Calling me ugly!
Mam: perfect.... Atlas they have said something that suets you!
Geet walks off in strop...


Sam: maan.... I don't understand you at all.... Why do I love you?
Maan smiles holding her close.... "BCs you do!"
Sam smiles.... Enjoying there passionate kiss....
Maan hugs her tight.... "I love you.... I have to leave for banglore 2moro!"
Sam: what?
Maan: yes... For a week! Dadi specially invited me... It's her best friends Something!
Sam: your Dadi bhi na.... Always spoils are mood!
Maan gets angry at those word... She is my dadi... You know... That I hate any words against her....
Maan pushes her way...
Sam: sorry darling.... Huggs him tight again...


Rahul: we have to go to banglore...
Geet: what? Why?
Rahul: another site... + it's my grandmas birthday...
Geet: Awww so sweet...
Rahul: I know... She is my favorite... + she wants to see you...
Geet: you know... I don't want to marry you!
Rahul: I know... But you are!
Geet: you are confusing... I don't understand you at all....
Rahul: I know...
Geet: I have gave up saying no now! My no doesn't have any effect on you.
Rahul: of course...
Geet roles her eyes...



next trip to banglore'.


part 2


Trip to banglore....

Rahul and geet were in plane....
Geet: this is just perfect...
Rahul: what happen?
Geet: no... Look... So packed! Couldn't you get a better seat!
Rahul: sorry! I promise... Next time...
Geet smiles: sorry I was joking... You were not talking!
Rahul: geeetttt.... I really don't understand you!
Geeet: what! Talk babe... Talk....
Rahul laughs....

It was a busy day... Rahul and geet... Arrives at mansion.... Two dadi welcomes them... Geet was wearing Indian salwars... Which Bothe Dadi prefer... Loving her simplicity and funny joke...
Rahul: dadi... That's just unfair.... Bhu milgya... And you already have forgotten the grandson..,
Maans dadi: Bhu.... Are you two married?
Geet: no we are not... No where near engagement... But Rahul have this habits of joke!
Rahuls dadi: not yet... But will be....
M dadi: Awww kisiki nazar na lage...
R dadi: go and take a rest.... We will get plenty of time 2nd to talk!
Geet: ji Dadima....

Bothe walks to two different direction.... Towards there room...

Next morning Rahul comes down early.... Bothe dadi waiting for them... Breakfast table....

Rahul: Dadi.... Why is my room not next to geet... I thought you at my dadi... Help me.... You already know...

Geet walks in... Twists Rahuls ear.... "Dadi.... You still want me to marry him!"
Bothe Dadi laughs....
M dadi: marry my pota...
Geet: yea I should... We can't expect anything from him...
R dadi laughs... "savetri... Stay way from my Bhu.... Find your own!"
M Dadi: I have... Maan ki geet....
R dadi: what?
Geet: hmm...
Rahul: only Rahul ki geet...
Geet: only geet ki geet... Now stop...
M Dadi: maan ki geet sounds so nice...
Rahul: Dadi... No! Only my geet....
Geet: ahem! Ahem! I choose... Whose geet I will be... My dream boys geet....
All laughs....

Geet: dadi... Can I decorate the whole house... You know how much I love decorating....
Dadi: ok beta... Planner is coming this afternoon.... All yours...

Later on the day Bothe dadi starts to talk...
M Dadi: you Extremely lucky.... Geet is defiantly such a sweet girl...
R dadi: I know I am... She is just bit childish... But very sensible... Perfect in every way... Her heart is nice and fresh.... No twists....
M Dadi: hop I find someone like her for maan....
R dadi: what's wrong with Sammera? She is so sweet... Maan also loves her....
M dadi: I know... But her love is selfish... You can see clearly in her eyes...
R dadi: no good girl... I am sorry savetri... But... I think it's too late... Bothe already share a very personal relationship... And even if you do bring a new girl in... I don't think... She will accept maan at all....

M dadi: you are right.... We can't hide anything form her.... That girls deserves to know everything...

R Dadi: that's true....

M dadi: she already have aborted one child... Without telling maan... I mean it was an accident that I found that out... But maan... I don't know how will he react.
R Dadi: it's best to leave some truth hidden... They are dark... Just let maan understand the truth... It's .... I don't know what to advice...
M dadi: no one knows what to advice...
R Dadi: now stope thinking about bringing a new girl... BCs we don't want to ruin her life...
M dadi: I think you are right...

Geet walks in...: Dadi... I am sorry... I hard your conversation... Don't worry I wont say anything...
Dadi: don't worry... Beta... We know... Tum hamire Pari beti ho....

Geet: can I suggest anything?
M dadi: bolo...
Geet: why don't you make him fall in love with another girl...
R dadi laughs... "your idea is like you....
Geet: what's wrong with that... You know... Love always changes you....
M dadi: he is in madly love with her...
Geet: then leave it Dadi... BCs he is happy with her...
M Dadi: there love is selfish beta....
Geet: dadi.... Ap Ae kase khe sakta hi....
M dadi: I know her... Sammera is Devs x....
Geet: who is Dev?
M dadi: maans younger brother...
Geet: oh oh.... You mean she didn't leave either bro... Geet was about to laugh.... But stopped... She dosnt sound that nice...
M dadi: she is not nice... That's why....
Geet: hmm... Sounds Extreamly .... ... ....
Rahul walks in....

Geet: Rahul... Do you have any pretty... Sweet... Beautifully.... Inoccent... Like soon as you see her... You will be like owo.....

Bothe dadi looked at her I.n confuse....

Rahul: ha... You....
Geet: no silly... Not me... It's for dadi mas pota...
Rahul: are you crazy... Do you even know... Who is dadi mas pota...
Geet: ha... Maan.... That's not the thing.... Ok... Do you know any girl?
Rahul: can you believe dadi... My future peonse asking me... That if I know a girl?

Bothe dadi laugh....
Geet: Rahul.... Name....
Rahul: after you... Hena.... But you are like 100 she is 10....
Geet: do my face look angry!
Rahul: no...
Geet: then... Why are you explaining.... Dadi.... Your pota..... Seriously.... Mad....
Rahul: your future husband....


part 3


Hena Arrives next day... Day before maan....

Hena: Rahul... You have called me for this!
Rahul: ask geet.....
Geet: sorry hena... But it's a trial....
Hena: only doing it for you geet... Don't know what have you found in this dumb...
Rahul: Hena!
Geet: exactly... I don't know what.... Kept telling him that.... But his ear seems to block my every no....
Hena and geet laughs....

Maan Arrives day before party.... Every few minutes he was reading Sammera... Who was loving MSKs attention.....
Maan: I miss you!
Sam: I love you...
Maan: want you here...
Sam: I want you here...
Maan: Nahi.... MSK wants you here.... It's probably going to be a boring party....

Maan walks in.... Didn't realize where he was walking..... Lost in Sammeras tex.... Without knowing he bumps in to a ladder... A girl screams from the top... Maan drops the phone.... Maan had to choose save the girl.... Or sav his phone from breaking...... He decides to save the girl....

She lands on his arm.... Bothe eyes closed.... Holding maan by his neck... Hiding her face on his chest.... Rahul and Bothe dadi runs in....

Rahul: geet! Geet.... Geet.....

Geets leg ankle was split open.... Blood was oozing out.... Geet didn't look at his face.... Looked at her feet....
Geet: it hurts....
Maan felt guilty....
Rahul: give her to me... Hena call the doctor quick....
M dadi: what happen???
R dadi: OMG.... Cover the blood..... She is Loosing too much!

Maan was still holding geet....
Rahul: give her to me.... He didn't like the way maan was holding geet....
Rahul: give her to me....
Maan: what's wrong with me holding her? He asked angrily!
Geet looks up.... : maan sing Khurana! Her mouth was half open....
Geet: I... I ... Ae.... I want to be in Rahuls arm!
Everyone looked at her in sock....
Maan.... A girl trying to go way from him!
Rahul: shocked... First time ever she wanted to be close to Rahul....
Hena: why would you want to go way from MSK!!!!!
M dadi: loving it seeing maans surprised face.....
R dadi: iske nazar utaro.... She wants to be close to Rahul.....


Geet: Rahul.... What are you looking at..... Hold me.... Rahul takes her.... Maan just looks at geet.... Surprised.... Just broke his beloved Sammera on the phone.... To save her.... And not even a thanks in return!!!!!!
Rahul looks at her lovingly.... And walks off.....

Doctor Arrives..... Both dadi.... Sat next her.... Geet relaxing on m dadis lap.... While holding r dadis hand.....

Doctor touches the wound.... Geet hides her face in M dadis lap....

M dadi: it won't hurt....
Geet: it stings....

Maan looked all four of them from the door.... Rahul and hena next.....

Rahul: you managed to find her laser to bump in to!
Maan: It was an accident!
Rahul: whatever... Look she is in pain!
Maan: it's just a pain....

Geet screams.... Rahul runs in....
Geet: all your fault!
Rahul: how is it my fault?
Geet: I have told you... Millions of time.... Stay near the ladder... And you!
Rahul: sorry.... I promise I will listen to everything next time....

Maan completely.... Forgot about his phone.... Looking at geet and Rahul innocent arguments.... No physical contac.... But Rahul was still in love and so is geet.....
Maan thought about him and Sammera.... Bothe were in love.... But why there wasn't anything like them???... Maan and sam couldn't stay a second way from one another.... They have to be together everynight.... But why there wasn't thy happiness that was between them.... Maan dint like that.... He walked way as Rahul geet and both Dadi starts to have pillow fight.....

Next day.... Rahul helps geet to walk.... Her cut was already heeling.... Just a small pain....

Geet: thanks Rahul....
Rahul: anything for you....
Hena: you brought me here for MSK!
Geet: sorry yar... Even I didn't know... It was him!
Hena: I am not in!
Geet: don't worry... Nor me! Maan and sam looked pretty nice... When I done my interview... But why dadi not accepting!
Hena: idk….



part 4


All three were outside...
Geet: I want some drink....
Hena: I will get it..,
Geet: Rahul help her....
Rahul: yea....
Bothe walks off.... Leaving geet alone in the garden....
She was in love with White flower.... She looked at them lovingly.... Lost what was going around her....
Maan was jogging.... His eyes catches geet... Who sat there with her White slower..... He looked for Rahul.... No one was there.....
He walks towards her.....
Maan: hi....
Geet: oh.... Um.... H....I ..... She was shocked to see him.... Almost jumped.... The great MSK is saying hi!!!!!!!!
Maan: oh... Emm..... I.... I ..... Oh.... Emmm.....
Geet just looked at him blankly....
Maan: I am sorry!
Then walks off again....
Geet just sat there bit shocked.... Umm..... "It's ok!" she said to her self blankly....

Rahul and hena comes back.... After the drink.... Rahul picks geet up and walks in....

M dadi: how are you felling beta?
Geet: fine dadi....
All sits down in the living room....
Maan walks in....

Maan: good morning dadi.... He eats his breakfast and walks off....
Geet: how grumpy!
M dadi: ha.... Sammera... Have a great hand... Anyway... What's your plan?
Geet: we are out!
M dadi: what?
Geet: it's the great MSK and Great Sammera.... And it's MSK... So we won't be susses-full....
M dadi: you lot gave up before trying....
Geet: no... We gave up... BCs we know we will fail...


Later in the evening... It was the birthday party...

Geet and hena finally were ready.... Dadi convinced them to at least try....
Geet: ok... When you enter the party... The spotlight will be on you.... Everyone will be looking at you.... Ok.... There for of course MSK will be also looking at you.... That's the dirt step....
Hena: I am scared...
Geet: shhh.... Then I want you to walk round him.... You know.... Walk round... But ignore.... Ok....
Hena: then!
Geet: then.... I will tell you later.... Just walk pass him.... And just come to me.....


Maan talking to Sammera on the phone....
maan: what are you doing?
Sam: in bed... Missing you...
Maan smiles: I want you here...
Sam: what are you doing?
Maan: getting ready...
Sam: well... I let you change... Call me back tonight.... I love you...
Maan: I love you 2.....


All were in the party... Maan no where to be seen.... Geet standing behind the piller.... Seing hena walking down......

Geet: dust danav! Seriously... Does it take this long to get ready??

Maan: who is dust danav?
Geet jumps... Nearly falling from the stair case... Maan catches her by hand and pulls her close.......
Geet hides her face again on his cheat.... While maan holding her tight by her bare waist.... They stay in that position for while... Then geet pushes him back....

Geet: oh.... I... I am sorry.... Thanks!!!...

She runs down the stair.... And weird enough the spot light comes down to her.... Leving hena in dark..... All the Rose pattel started rain on her.... Increasing her beauty with every step..... Geet looked back..... She couldn't see anything.... Her eyes looked for Rahul..... In all direction....
But maan was surprised.... With the sudden attention she was getting from him..... He was lost in her..... Something was different..... Something not right..... Not at all..... The way she looked back.... Even in the dark he felt like she could see him....... He closed his eyes..... Remembering Sammera......

Geet managed to find Rahul.... Smacks his shoulder....
Geet: those Rose were for dadi!
Rahul: ouch!
Geet smacks his shoulder again... That spotlight was for hena!
M dadi: what happen?
Geet: he spoiled everything...
Rahul: you looked so beautiful.... With every step....
M dadi laughed... Along with hena...
Geet roles her eyes....
Maan on the other side kept looking at geet... His eyes had a mind of it's own...

Maan couldn't sleep that night... He completely forgot to call Sammera... That was the first time in 2 years....
When ever he closed her eyes... He only found geet... The way she pushed him way.... The way she ran down the stair.... The way the Rose rained on her.... A weird felling started to come up....
Maan didn't like that... He defiantly didn't want any of this to happen to him.... He left the same night for deli....


Next: geet faces geets love'.


part 5


Next morning....

M dadi was sitting in the breakfast table... All upset and gloomy....

Geet: dadi what happen?
Dadi: maan left last night...
Geet: oh... I am sorry... We did try... And I can't believe MSK is your grandson.... I am sorry dadi... But sam doesn't look all that bad!
M dadi: you don't know her... That's why...
Geet: yea I guss... But with Bothe bro.... Is Dev comfortable with it? And maan.... How could he date his younger bros x!
Dadi: it's not like that.... Sam had An eye for maan for long time... But maan was Extremely hard hearted.... So she Basically used Dev...
Geet: owo... She sounds clever....
Dadi: she is!


Sam: maan.....
She runs up to him... Hugs him tight...
Maan: I have missed you so much....
Sam: you didn't call me!
Maan: I am here!
Sam: that's like a good boy.... How was the party?
Maan remembers geet instenly....
Maan: it was good!...
Sam helps maan to take off his shirt....
Sam: I thought you didn't like it.... Found it boring!
Maan: umm... Oh....
Sam huggs his bare back.... Kissing them....
Maan smiles... Spines him self round.... " not now!"
Sam pulls him closer....: when? She smiles naughtily.... I have been waiting 3 whole days....
Maan smiles: hmm.... I guss... Few more days....
Maan was about to walk off... Sam pushes him in the bed....
Sam: are you sure... Kisses his lips gently....... Maan pines her to the bed..............................


Everyone was back home... Rahul drops geet home....

Geet: home sweet home...
Rahul: I will see you in office twomoro....
Geet: by...

Geet walks In.... Everyone hugs her tight....
Mum: how was it?
Geet: really good party...
Virji; now you will say yes for the engagement!
Geet: umm.... What's wrong with you people??????? I haven't even enters the house yet.... You already asking me about the engagement.... Move....
She walks in the room and locks the door...
Mum: what will I do with her??
Geet shouts back: nothing!

Next day.... In office.....

Rahul: we might have to go to the Khurana industry!
Geet: umm... Why? We already have saluted everything out!
Rahul: we need mr Khuranas sign...
Geet: oh alright... Up to you... Do I have to come!
Rahul nodes.... Your idea!
Geet: alright...

Sam and maan was in there office... Sam: i have forgot to tell you... Rahul is coming... You have forgotten to sign his paper!
Maan: umm.... Alright... What time?
Sam: 3:00pm.... We have a meeting with them as well.... Mr Armaan khans will be there as well... They really like geet handas project... And would like to talk to her further...
Maan looked up.... : geet Handa?
Sam: yea.... The girl was with Rahul!
Maan: yea right!

Geet and Rahul walks in.... Early this time.... Receptionists... Pinky.... Indicates to walk in to the conference room....

In conference room....

Geet: well what's the surprise?
Rahul: fuss who is coming?
Geet: who?
Rahul: mr Armaan khanna.....
Geet started to mumble..... What? Who.... How?
Rahul: he loves your project....
Geet: owo.... She started to jump....
Rahul: culm down....

Everyone started to walk in....
Armaan was a young Gentle man.... Extremely good looking.... Most important single.... Geet was in love with his manly style.... He had style of his own.... Unbelievably .... Just owo.....
Geet couldn't say a single word..... She was lost in him...... He puts his hand out for a handshake.....
Armaan: hello... Miss geet Handa.... Atlas we met....
Geet: OMG.... I... Oh... Hello sir.... She was over the moon today.... Two of her favorite business man.... MSK and AK Bothe there.... Her idol.....
Geet whispers to Rahul: you are the best....

Maan and sam walks in.... Maan looks at geet straight way.... While geet lost in Armaan.....

Maan: good afternoon everyone... This meeting specially is called for Mr khannas.... All yours....

The meeting went extremely well.... Everyone was impressed with this new elegant.... Beautifully.... Inspired miss geet Handa.....

Maan who was Loosing him self.... Something about geet that attracted him.... Something that was unexplained.... Unknown.... Unwelcome..... He tried to fight... But no use.... His eyes will stop on geet..... He completely forgot about that sam was sitting next to him.... His love.... His future wife.... Maan didn't like that.... Not at all......


next: geet dinner………… and surprize



part 6


After the meeting.... Armaan asked geet and Rahul out for a dinner.... Bothe was Extreamly pleased.... As there business was growing in a great speed....
Weeks have passed... Mr khanna have brought Rahuls business... He wanted geet to work for her... But she refused... For Rahul.... And rahul didn't like her to achieve her dreams.... So he joined with khanna.... Which made more profit for Rahul industry....

Geet worked as a architect at the same time armaans secretary....

Geet: sir....
Armaan: bolo geet....
Geet: don't you think we should change the outline of this project....
Armaan: I think you are right... But it's mr Khuranas decision.... I mean if you can convince him to change mind... And also show him the problem he could face in the future....
Geet: I think you are right... I will book an appointment with him....
Armaan: just becarefull.... He is Extremely high tempered guy....
Geet laughs: how does his peonses control him?
Armaan: I fell sorry for her... Bothe laughs....

Geet makes an appointment with maan.....

Maan made him self busy with work... He doesn't even take any time out for sam.... Which really irritated her... Maan seems to be less interest in her now days....
Sam: maan... What's wrong with you?
Maan: hmm.... I am busy.... I have few meeting to attend!
Sam: we haven't spend a quality time for two weeks... Do you have any clue how I am living my life at the moment????
Maan: I am busy... Maybe later....
Sam: what later...
Maan: sam! He shouts... Just leave don't disturb me....
Sam leaves in a strop....
Maan closes his eyes... Then calls her..." we will go out for dinner tonight..."
Sam: fine... You better make it specially....


It's 6.... Maans meeting with geet...

Geet: may I come in sir!
Maan looked up straight way... Knew that voice very well... But surprised... He didn't realise... He had a meeting with her.... Thought it was Rahul.... A sudden excitement came in his heart.... Glad to see geet.... Haven't seen her for month....
Maan: come in....
Geet: thanks sir....
Maan: what brings you here?
Geet: actually it's about the Shimla project.... There is some changes that I would like to make in your designee....
Maan bit surprise... No one ever changed MSKs design before.... And her.... No fear.....
Geet: unless if you don't want me to sir....
Maan: let's see!
Geet explained the whole concept.... Which sounded right.... He was wrong after all... But how could he miss out such a big chunk????
Geet: sir! Sir!
Maan: yea... I think you are right....
Geet shocked... MSK and agreeing with her....
Maan: but one problem... It's starting 2mx.... We might have to go to shimla tonight....
Geet: what? I mean no sir.... Maybe Rahul can come with you...
Maan didn't like the no.... And now he is more share to take her....
Maan: he won't be able to explain this... That well... Like you did it to me....
Geet thought for a moment....
It's 8pm already.... Maan completely forgot to take sam out for dinner....
Geet: if you give me one hour.... I will go home and pack my cloths then met you at airport... I am sure we probably have to stay round about 2-3 days...
Maan: yes... I will met you at the airport....

Geet rang Armaan to tell him about everything.... He didn't like her going with maan....

Armaan: why don't you tell Rahul to go... Instead of you!
Geet: I already have... But he was suggesting me to go... As I will be able to explain everything....
Armaan: right.... Umm.... How long you two will be staying there for?
Geet: I don't know... 2-3 days...
Armaan: alright... I have my own hotel there... I will book two room and send the car to the airport...
Geet: thanks sir... Good night...
Armaan: good night...

Sam kept calling maan... She was waiting in the restraint....
Sam: where are you?
Maan: airport!
sam: what?
Maan: why?
Sam: we are planning to have dinner together!
Maan: oh! Ok.... I... Actually... It's urgent.... I am on my way to Shimla!
Sam: what? What is this? You promise...
Maan: sorry...

sam: thats it maan..... you have to work hard... really hard...

maan: anything for you...

sam: by!



NEXT: silent….



his is a new ff… not the old one i suggested xxxx


part 7


Geet and maan sat next to one another... Not talking...

Maan: umm... Ehh....
Geet: are you sure we will be able to reach the place on time!
Maan: I see why not!
Geet: alright...

The whole journey was miserably silent... Nun said a word.... Geet was scared of maan.... Just didn't want to be on his unhappy side... While maan feeling awkward... Why did he brought her with him... It could have been done by him self... Or actually with anyone... A phone call could have solved the problem... But what was it that was bringing him close to her.....

As they Arrives there was two cars waiting... Maan also booked hotel...

Geet was about to enter... Maan stopped...
Maan: we have to go to the sight first!
Geet: umm... Ok... Alright... Geet looks at the driver... Then back at maan.... "I will met you there!"
Maan didn't like that... He wanted her to come with him... "we can go together...."
Geet: no it's alright... Armaan sir booked this car for me... He will feel bad!
Maan: oh... Umm... Alright... I will see you at the sight....

Bothe goes with different car....

Sammera calls maan.....

Sam: where are you?
Maan: Simla!
Sam: when will you be back?
Maan: I don't know 2-3days!
Sam: alright!

She hangs up.... She didn't like this maan... Not all over her like he used to......... No call... Nothing... "I hop he is not changing again.... Took me enough time to make him like that.... Ok sam.... You won't call him.... Let him call you..."

Maan and geet arrives at the sight.... Managed to stop it... But the paper work will take about a week...
Geet: umm... Shall we have dinner... Then go to the hotel.... I mean it's up to you....
Maan: no it's alright!

Bothe had a silent dinner...
Geet: umm... Sir.... Umm... If you finished... Can we go...
Maan: umm... Yea.... Sure...
Maan was chewing on his spoon for past 30 minutes... He finished his dinner way before...
Bothe walks to the lift.... Silent.... Geet couldn't really understand.... She thought.... He might be like this....
6th floor.... Bothe walked to two different direction.... Maan kept looking. Back... Geet rushed in to her room...

Geet: OMG! What a boring person.... Pappaji why???? Gos.... Armaan and Rahul calls... Miscall.... One 8 and another 10....
Geet: ok... Rahul first....
Rahul: at last you called... How was the sight???
Geet: pretty good.... But seriously.... Maan sir.... Sooooo boring....

She explains there whole day... Which was finished within a second...
Rahul killed him self laughing....
Rahul: I fell sorry for you....
Geet: do... And this paper work will take about a week... Idk what will I do....
Rahul: want me to come!
Geet: no it's all right... I hop I can cheer this boring maan sing Khurana!
Rahul: I don't think you can... Common even Sammera couldn't!
Geet: lol... Sam... I have dough on her... And very impressive... How could a girl like her fall for this kharus! Hahah....
Rahul: like you did for me...
Geet: no... I haven't yet..., anyway I need to call armaan sir now... To give him all the details....
Rahul: oh! Ok.... By... Love you!
Geet: by!

Geet: now... Umm... Armaan....

Armaan: hay... At last...
Geet: sorry... Your kharus friend is so boring...
Armaan laughs....: I will be there twomoro... Do don't worry....
Geet: ahhh thank god!
Armaan: yes... The construction agency need my sign... I have to be there...
Geet: that's great... I will see you 2mx... So tirade....
Armaan: good by...


Maan laid on his bed... Looking at the ceiling... What's happening to him... Whats going on????
He looked at his cell phone... No miscall from Sammera.... He rang her...

Sam: at last you remembered me...
Maan: hmm... I will be here for a week... You can join me... We will have some time to spend...
Sam: are you sure... You won't be that busy!
Maan: no... It's basically paper work...
Sam: alright... I will be there 2mx...
Maan: I love you...
Sam: I love you 2!


part 8


Next day maan and geet signed some paper work... And were free for whole day...

Geet: sir... I should leave now.... There are no more important work! I will see you in 1day!
Maan: umm... Yea.... Where are you going?
Geet: umm... My cousin lives in Shimla... Coincidentally... It's her engagement party... So... Umm... I would have asked you... But you don't look like a party type of man... Specially wedding one... I mean I don't mind if you want to come....
Maan: no... Umm... It's alright.... I might pop in... For few minutes... I will see you Wednesday....

Geet checked out of the hotel as Armaan enters...
Maan wanted to go with her... It was like something was moving way from him... He felt helpless.... He knew.... There was nothing between them.... But he felt shame.... Guilt! Something slowly started to eat within....

Armaan: where is geet?
Maan: umm... She just checked out...
Armaan: what? Why didn't you stop her!
Maan: she is coming back in 1day!
Armaan: so... I came all the way... Just for her!
Maan: what?
Armaan: I meant to talk about the project!
Maan: umm oh! Ok...

Sam walks in.... "hay darling..." huggs maan tight... "at last we can spend some quality time....
Maan gives her a faint smile... Extremely glad to see her..., but not happy...
Armaan: I can see you all settled.... He teases Bothe... Maan gets annoyed and leaves the place....

Later on the evening Armaan and maan walks in to the bar.... Sam was in her room....

Armaan forces maan to drink... Made him completely drunk...
Armaan: dude.... You need to have an aggressive sohag rat tonight....
Maan: long as it's not sam!
Bothe laughs....
Maan went wild... All the girls went mental over him in the disco.... And all maan could see was geet.... Every face.... It was geet.... He had no control over him.... Nothing....

Full drunk.... He walks in the room....
Sam: maan! What happen....
Maan: au... Me.... D....
He falls on her......
Sam: I always like it... When you drink.... You are soo aggressive...
Maan smiles.... Seeing geet.....
He forcefully kisses her.... His illusion was taking over his mind..... Sam takes his cloths of... In matter of second.... Working like she was expert....
Maan strokes his hand over her body.... Feeling every curve... Enjoying the kiss.... A forcefully....blood was oozing out... Bothe was loving the taste of the blood from there lips....
There whole night... Went like making aggressive love.... And eventually falling sleep....

Next morning... Maan woke up with an heavy head.... Between his leg was sore.... No clue... How many time they Have done it last night.... There was black bruses all round his body.... He looked at Sammera.... Her back.... Scratch Mark.... Not a nice view at all.... Bite Mark..... He looked way at disgust.... A guilty conscious started to take over his mind... No clue why....

Sam woke covers her self.... Then wore maans shirt.... He sat there... Bit shocked.... Silent....
Sam: last night was amazing.... She bites his ear lop....
Maan looks way in disgust...
Maan: have you looked at your body... What have I done to you..... How could you say that was amazing.... I have no memory.....
Sam: we don't need any.... She sits on him.... Making him relax on the bed.... "we can do it again now... To make it a memory...."

Maan just couldn't stand her talk.... Something was bothering him.... As her body started move on him.... He thought about... How this isn't love.... He never loved her.....
After hour they broke part again.... Maan didn't feel anything.... Just sams body satisfaction.... Not even his....

After shower... Maan walked out of the room... Found geet with armaan and Rahul....
He felt like crying... Like he done something wrong.... Biggest mistake of his life...

Geet was siting next to Rahul.... Sweet... Elegant.... Pure.... He looked way and walked out of the hotel....

He drove somewhere... He had no clue where... He wanted to control his anger....

After few minutes... Sam walks in....
Geet and Rahul surprised to see her state.... Her lips was cut.... Bruses all over her neck.... Geet felt sick... Even her makeup didn't work with her....
Rahul: umm.... Mam... Are you alright?
Armaan: someone had a aggressive night!!
Sam smiles...
Geet: umm.... Ok!
Armaan: don't worry... It's normal between them!
Geet: ok! I think I am going to be sick...
Geet runs off... Flowed by Rahul....

Sam: is she alright?
Armaan: not used to this type of thing!

Geet comes out of the washroom...
Rahul: are you alright!
Geet: have you seen the state of her face?
Rahul: emm...
Geet: that's sick... I am more scared of Maan sir now... How could he do that to someone... And she is loving it... That's disgusting.... You can easily fuss there is no love!
Rahul: it's there personal matter... We should keep out of it!
Geet: it's good... If personal matter stay in there room.... Ok... From today on... You will never force me to go round his office... Or give me any of there project.... I don't think I will be able to face them from today on... That was disgusting....
Rahul: umm.... Geet I think you are over reacting....
Geet thinks for a min... I think you are right... But maan sir.... A boring dude... Act like this....

Bothe bursts out in laugh…



part 9


After while they comes back... Geet trying her best to control her laugh... While Rahul trying his best to make geet laugh...

Geet: hello mam!
Sam: hello... Are you alright...
Geet: yes perfect...
Sam: you can call me sam!
Geet: Aww thank you...
Sam: so what's your plan?
Geet: nothing... Just going with the flow...
Sam: any boyfriend?
Geet: Nop!
Rahul: yes...
Geet: Rahul... No....
Sam and Armaan confused...
Geet: we joke....
Rahul didn't like that....
Armaan relief....
Sam: Aww... Have you ever had any?
Geet was getting uncomfortable.... : I usually don't really talk about my personal life... Anything els... I am happy....
Sam: I am sorry... You and Rahul seems very close...
Geet: we are best friend... From school....
Sam: Aww... Haven't you.... she was indicating towards making love???


Geet: no (What a sick lady.... feel sorry for maan sir) we have no such a relationship... I believe in a relationship... Love playas vital role... We don't have anything like that... We are just good friend....
Geet hated her going on and on about her and Rahul... She made everything clear... In that one sentence....
Armaan and Rahul was Bothe falling for her heavily..... Maan stood behind.... Loving every word from her mouth....

Sam: maan! Where have you been?
She hugs her tight....
Everyone bit uncomfortable... Maan pushes her way....
Maan: drive...
Maan gave armaan An angry glare.... For making him drunk....
Armaan with a sorry face....

Armaan: I think we should leave geet.... We have to be at the site... For the designee...
Maan: yea...
Sam: shall I come....
Maan: no... You stay here... Nothing much to do for you....

All three disappears leaving Rahul and sam....


Geet: don't you think... This will be the best way?
Maan: yea...
He kept liking his lips... Where sam bit him aggressively.... It was hurting..,, and he didn't put any medicine on it.....
Geet and Armaan looked at him with a worry face....
Geet: sir... Are you alright? I think you should take rest for few days!
Armaan: I am really sorry man.... I really didn't expect...
Maan: shutup! Never ever do that to me again!
Geet jumped with his word....
Maan realizes... He lowers his voice...
Geet takes a small tube out and hands it to maan.... "umm.... Apply to your lips.... You will fell better....."
Maan: thanks!

Armaans mouth hung open.....: thanks And MSK!
Geet looked at him in surprise...
Maan: shut up...

As the day went by.... Maan ignored sams call.... He seiches it off.... Just didn't want to talk to her.... He was angry.... Frustrated.... Which he couldn't expose....

At lunch time... Armaan took geet out... Leaving maan by him self.... He sat in his car.... Relaxing.... Last night.... Hangover still didn't go off....

After hours they came back.... To discus the site again....

Maan walked out of the car...

Geet: do you think... He ate anything!
Armaan: umm.... I don't think so....
Geet: shall we give him the food!

Bothe brought food for maan.... Geet was petrified... To even talk to him... He poked Armaan.... "u go!"
Armaan: he is already mad at me... He will through the food on the floor....
Geet: I am not going... I get sick watching him!

Bothe laughed at how much maan petrifies them....
Geet: fine I will do it... If I puke... It's your fault sir.... Armaan smiled...

Geet walks towards him...
Geet: umm... Au... Hum.... I mean me and sir... Brought your lunch!
Maan looked at the packet...
Maan: thanks! But I am not hungry!
Geet: umm... It's good to work with a full tummy... Otherwise you won't be able to concentrate!
Maan looked at her in confusion... It's the first time ever.... Someone fought back... Or talked against his no....
Maan snatches the food and walks way....
Geet just kept her laughter in her... Seeing his face would have made anyone laugh'.



part 10


Next day... It was time for geet to leave.... Her work was done

Geet: I should take a leave...
Rahul was putting everything in the car!
Armaan: I will see you 2mx... An thanks for everything....
Geet: it's ok...

She smiles and disappears with Rahul...

Maan walks in.... Looks at armaan waving goodbye to a car.... Looking much better....

Maan: who you waving at?
Armaan looks at maan... Geet.... Owo.... Your face looks much better... Her medication... Did really work!... Did you give any to sam?
Maan: no!
Armaan laughs....
Maan: not funny! Where is geet going?
Armaan: back to deli!
Maan: oh!
Armaan: yea... I will miss her to!
Maan: hmm....
Armaan: do you think she likes me?
Maan didn't like that... But he had no chance with her... After what she seen here....
Maan: "sure.... She is a nice girl!"
Armaan looked at him in a shock!
Armaan: MSK... And complimenting a girl!
Maan: umm... Oh... Me....
Armaan: stay way from her... I don't think... You will ever have a chance.... Defiantly not in this life time.... And stay way from her.... She is my!
Maan: don't claim anything... That's impossible for you to touch!
Armaan: I have never claimed anything!
Maan: neither Have I.... Don't presume anything!

Bothe walks off....

Sam was packing maan and hers cloths...
Sam: this week was the best holiday... For such a long time...
Maan was working In his laptop.... He wasn't listening to her...
Sam: we should do this more often!
Maan: ....
Sam: are you listening?
Maan: hmm... Yea!
Sam: I want this to be like in Are honeymoon...
Maan looks up... : isn't that every-night! .... I thought... Past one year... Have been are honeymoon!
Sam: of course... She closes the laptop and sits on his lap...
Maan looked angry... He pushes her way... Garbs his bag and walks out...
Sam confused...


Back in mumbi... Bothe Dadi was back... Round maans house... M Dadi invited geet... Rahul and r dadi... They were having dinner together...

R dadi: have to say.... Savitri... Your cooking is still fabulous...
Geet: I so want to Learn cooking like this... Dadi... Please.... You have no clue... Mum always shouts at me...
M dadi: come twomoro night... We can cook the dinner twomoro together...
Geet: I love to.... She become exited...
M dadi: tik hi beta... I still think maan ki geet sounds nice...

Geet and Rahul Bothe coughs....
Geet: Rahul ki geet is perfect Dadi....
Rahul and r Dadi likes that...
R dadi: iski nazar utaro...
Rahul smiled and looked at her lovingly....
For the first time maan comes to the mansion... Straight from his trip... Usually he is always round sams....

Dadi: ap... Ahea!
Maan: why? Can't I come here?
Dadi: Nahi... Ap to kabhi ... You always round sam.... And what happen to your face? Did you have a fight?
Maan looks way in embrassed.... "no Dadi...."
He walks way in pain...
Maan laid on the bed... After long time... He closed his eyes... Thank god he had no memory of the night... Nothing... He looked round... Remembering geet.... She was out of his reach... He was nothing to her.... He wasn't even sure what he felt for her.... Confused.... But all he knew... He liked being with her.... He... He....
Maan took a deep breath as Sammera called... He cuts the call... She calls again... He cuts the call....

On that day he slept peacefully... After sooo long time... He woke up in the evening... Had a shower and came to the dining room.... He hard some laughter.... Maan pepps.... For a second he thought... He was imagining.... But it was her.... Geet.....

He stands by the door... With his arm crossed... Geet drops the plate full of atta..... Shocked....
Geet: dadi... I thought ... U said.... Sir is never here!
Dadi: hmm... Bit shocked her self.... Maan! Ap! Ahea!
Maan: emm... Ohh.... Why? Can't I be round my house?
Dadi: no... I mean.... You and Sammera!
Maan: ha... I wanted to stay way from her for some days....
Dadi Extremely shocked...: is everything alright!
Maan: ha.... Just... Nothing... I am hungry....
Dadi: alright... We made...............…..



part 10


Next day... It was time for geet to leave.... Her work was done

Geet: I should take a leave...
Rahul was putting everything in the car!
Armaan: I will see you 2mx... An thanks for everything....
Geet: it's ok...

She smiles and disappears with Rahul...

Maan walks in.... Looks at armaan waving goodbye to a car.... Looking much better....

Maan: who you waving at?
Armaan looks at maan... Geet.... Owo.... Your face looks much better... Her medication... Did really work!... Did you give any to sam?
Maan: no!
Armaan laughs....
Maan: not funny! Where is geet going?
Armaan: back to deli!
Maan: oh!
Armaan: yea... I will miss her to!
Maan: hmm....
Armaan: do you think she likes me?
Maan didn't like that... But he had no chance with her... After what she seen here....
Maan: "sure.... She is a nice girl!"
Armaan looked at him in a shock!
Armaan: MSK... And complimenting a girl!
Maan: umm... Oh... Me....
Armaan: stay way from her... I don't think... You will ever have a chance.... Defiantly not in this life time.... And stay way from her.... She is my!
Maan: don't claim anything... That's impossible for you to touch!
Armaan: I have never claimed anything!
Maan: neither Have I.... Don't presume anything!

Bothe walks off....

Sam was packing maan and hers cloths...
Sam: this week was the best holiday... For such a long time...
Maan was working In his laptop.... He wasn't listening to her...
Sam: we should do this more often!
Maan: ....
Sam: are you listening?
Maan: hmm... Yea!
Sam: I want this to be like in Are honeymoon...
Maan looks up... : isn't that every-night! .... I thought... Past one year... Have been are honeymoon!
Sam: of course... She closes the laptop and sits on his lap...
Maan looked angry... He pushes her way... Garbs his bag and walks out...
Sam confused...


Back in mumbi... Bothe Dadi was back... Round maans house... M Dadi invited geet... Rahul and r dadi... They were having dinner together...

R dadi: have to say.... Savitri... Your cooking is still fabulous...
Geet: I so want to Learn cooking like this... Dadi... Please.... You have no clue... Mum always shouts at me...
M dadi: come twomoro night... We can cook the dinner twomoro together...
Geet: I love to.... She become exited...
M dadi: tik hi beta... I still think maan ki geet sounds nice...

Geet and Rahul Bothe coughs....
Geet: Rahul ki geet is perfect Dadi....
Rahul and r Dadi likes that...
R dadi: iski nazar utaro...
Rahul smiled and looked at her lovingly....
For the first time maan comes to the mansion... Straight from his trip... Usually he is always round sams....

Dadi: ap... Ahea!
Maan: why? Can't I come here?
Dadi: Nahi... Ap to kabhi ... You always round sam.... And what happen to your face? Did you have a fight?
Maan looks way in embrassed.... "no Dadi...."
He walks way in pain...
Maan laid on the bed... After long time... He closed his eyes... Thank god he had no memory of the night... Nothing... He looked round... Remembering geet.... She was out of his reach... He was nothing to her.... He wasn't even sure what he felt for her.... Confused.... But all he knew... He liked being with her.... He... He....
Maan took a deep breath as Sammera called... He cuts the call... She calls again... He cuts the call....

On that day he slept peacefully... After sooo long time... He woke up in the evening... Had a shower and came to the dining room.... He hard some laughter.... Maan pepps.... For a second he thought... He was imagining.... But it was her.... Geet.....

He stands by the door... With his arm crossed... Geet drops the plate full of atta..... Shocked....
Geet: dadi... I thought ... U said.... Sir is never here!
Dadi: hmm... Bit shocked her self.... Maan! Ap! Ahea!
Maan: emm... Ohh.... Why? Can't I be round my house?
Dadi: no... I mean.... You and Sammera!
Maan: ha... I wanted to stay way from her for some days....
Dadi Extremely shocked...: is everything alright!
Maan: ha.... Just... Nothing... I am hungry....
Dadi: alright... We made...............…..



part 12


One week have passed.... Sammera was going mental.... No maan anywhere.... She was ringing him madly..... She went wild.....

Sam: where is maan? She asked dadi angrily....
Dadi: excuse me... Get out of my office!
Geet stood there bit shocked...
Sam: get out geet!
Dadi: excuse your language young lady... How dare you talk to me and my stuff like this... She roared at her....
Sam: how dare you keep my maan way from me? She screamed to...

Geet became worried seeing dadis health....
Geet: mam... Please...
Dadi: she was not anymore...
Sam screamed again....

It wasn't good to work in a poor health.... Specially shouting....
Suddenly... Dadi couldn't breath....
Geet screamed.... Security and staff gourd ran in.... Ambulance.... Was on his way......

Geet sat there waiting.... Didn't trust Sammera to be with her... If she had a chance.... She would have killed her.....
All the press were outside.... Strom was created.....
Maan ran in.... Shocked to see geet there...
Maan: how is didima? Where is she? He was panicking!
Geet: culm down sir... She is alright.... She just had a mini heart attack... She is out of danger.....
Security guard was pushing the press way....
Maan took a shigh breath of relief...."how this have happend?"
Geet: au... Sammera mam had a arguments about you... With dadi... And she screamed at her... So she screamed back.... Then....."
With each word maan went crazy....
Sammera ran in from the Crowed and hugged him tight.... Geet bit uncomfortable... Looked other way....

Sam: where have you been?
Maan pushed way...
Maan: how dare you?
Sam: what's wrong with you?
Maan: how dare you talk to my Dadi like this?
Sam: what do you mean? Who have told you that?
She looked at geet...
Maan: you disgust me! If you wernt a women... I would have killed you right now... If anything happens to my dadi... I won't spare you....

All the press were recording this... Picture of the angry maan....
Maan: get out of my sight! He shouts in anger...

Sam who didn't want to create scene infront of the press... Moved way....
Geet and maan went in a private room... Way from the press....

Maan sat on the corner worried.... Thinking.... Geet homeward reason... Didn't feel petrified today.... He looked distress.... Needed someone to support.... Geet just couldn't get the idea.... How could he.... Do such a thing.... I mean date a girl like Sammera.... So low... In mind.... It was disgusting geet... But his care for dadi was making her think again....

Geet brought some hot drinks and offers him.... Maan wasn't interested at all.... He nodes gently... Negatively....

Geet: have it.... It will be good for you!
Maan takes it... "thanks!"
Geet: it's ok...
Maan: thanks for dadi...
Geet: she is my dadi to... You don't have to say thanks...
Maan looked up... She looked more beautiful then ever.... His eyes refuged to remove gaze.... He stared at her for a minute... Then looked back at the hot drink....
geet: is there anyone els in the family... I mean you are the only one who came!
Maan: yea my brothers... But they are abrode!
Geet: alright!

Nurse walks in...: hello Mr and Mrs Khurana...
Geet and maan stood there shocked...
Maan: "she is not my wife...." he looked at geet.... Geet gave him an embracing smile...
Nurse: I am sorry...
Maan: how is my dadi...
Nurse: doctor is calling you...
Geet: I will stay here...
Maan: if you want... Umm... Ehh... You can come in!
Geet: thanks...

Dr: you have to be very be care full .... She is perfect now... But no mental stress please...
Maan+geet: yes doctor....
Embrassed.... Bothe looked at one another...
Maan: can we take her home?
Dr: yes....

All the security guards were round.... As three made there way to the car and to the mansion....
Maan brought 3 personal nurse... To stay with dadi... 24 hours...

Dadi: geet beta... I don't mind if you stay the night here... If it is ok with your family...
Geet: umm... Ok didi.... I call my mum and let her know....
Soon as she call... First word was...

Mum: stay way from MSK!
Geet: what?
Mum: we were watching you in tely!
Geet: why what happen?
Mum: nothing.... That serious... Just stay way from him beta...
Geet: don't worry ma.... I am staying here for the night... Dadi is really I'll....
Mum: alright….


part 13


Geet woke up middle of the night to get some drink.... Hall was pitch black.. But light from laptop.... Geet walked to the kitchen... The noise made maan jump... He turned round.... It's geet....
She drunk some water and was about to walk off with a jug ... She caught maans eyes...
Maan looked way.... : you could have called nakul!
Geet: it's just water... I can manage!
Maan: ok!
Geet: it's 4 am... Don't you sleep?
Maan looked at her surprisingly.... First time ever... She made some effect to talk to him properly...
Maan: umm... Ehh... No....
Geet: what? You don't sleep?
Maan: I mean... I have lots of work to finish off!
Geet: you could do that twomoro... In the office!
Maan: umm.. Eh.... No... It's too much... I have to finish this off by end of this week!
I really don't want any help from Sammera!
Geet; umm... Alright.... Geet didn't like to disturb..... Knew he wasn't happy with her... And she didn't like getting personal.... "goodnight!"

Maan sat there... Really wanted to talk to geet more... But of course no use...

Next day geet made breakfast... Dadi and geet sat there eating... Maan joins...
Maan: how are you feeling dadi?
Dadi: extremely good... Are you going to the office?
Maan: yes!
Dadi: you still have one week off...
Maan: I really don't have time for this dadi...
He walked off... Without having breakfast...
Geet: umm.. It's good to have breakfast....
Maan stopes.....: he looked at geet angrily.... Everyone was shocked.... Then heart attack... As he seats down... And actually finishes his breakfast!... Then walks off!
Dadi looked at geet in shock: he never listens to anyone!
Geet: hmm.... Maybe he was hungry... And nun of you ever stopped him....
Dadi: no... I always try...
Geet: idk...
Dadi: I know I should not ask you this... But you have a week off right... Would you be able to please go and keep an eye on maan... Please....
Geet: umm... Alright dadi... But just for you...
She smiles...

Office....

Geet walks in... Rahul and Bothe Armaan were calling... Armaan were furious... But couldn't say a word.... Rahul... Didn't like the word... But he always agrees with geet...

Geet knocks on maans door...
Maan: come in...
Geet: good morning sir!
Surprise after surprise for maan... The girl who... For past months... Haven't spoken to him or came anywhere near him.... She is in his home and office!!!!!!!!! But he was happy to see her..... Maan wasn't sure him self.... But her face always makes her day............. Like all his stress disappears................................

Maan: umm tum! I mean geet!
Geet: sorry sir... I was working with dadi for two weeks... And I still have a week left... I have to work with you.....
Maan liked that...... His heart was jumping like a small baby.... Whole week with geet was like a paradise..... But..... Maan didn't deserve her at all...... Specially remembering what Armaan have told him.... He already have shared a special relationship with someone..... No matter how hard he may try..... He could never turn those clocks back..... And win geet...... That's never going to happen..... Not in this lifetime..... Not after she knows everything..... And still.... He could have never lied to her......... Maan was in deep thought..... He had no idea what his mind was thinking..... Not at all.....

Maan: yea.... Sure......
Geet: thanks sir.... I will be in the next office.... If you need me.... Please do call.....

Sammera wasn't in office.... Maan insulting her in public.... Really did create a bad image.... So she decided to hide for sometime.....

Maan kept looking at geet.... Now ad then..... He had no clue.... That he had a GF....
Geet walks in with a file...
Geet: sir.... Do you think... This will be suitable?
maan looks at the file...: likes geet concept... I think perfect...
Geet smiles....
Maan was stun with her smile.... That was the first time she actually smiled at him....
Geet: thanks... I will complete this designee and will bring it back to you.....

As the day went by... Maan couldn't stop thinking about her smile.... Something was different about that day.... After 2 long years... He felt happy.... Happy... Some weird happiness.... Started to cover his face.... His heart.... But typical maan have to shout at someone....
Someone asked why he was happy....

Maan: I don't pay you to gossip.... Get back to work!

Geet stood there jumped with his high voice... She rushes in to her cabin.... Maan noticed that... Then he realized.... How Armaan and Rahul.... Always talks in low voice in front of her.... She must get really scared with high voice..... Maan smiled... I Guess that's not happening here.... But she is only here for a week.... That doesn't make any difference..... '..



part 14

On maan and geets second day... Sammera comes back to the office.... She walks straight in maans office...

Sam: will you explain... What's going on here?
Maan: I thought I made it clear!
Sam: no you haven't! What is dis?
Maan: I need time... To think everything through!
Sam: you had enough time... Over a week...
Maan stands up and sam cones close to.... Resting her hand on his chest...
Geet catches a glimps.... She closed the curten... To give them privacy....
With matter of a second.... Maan looked at geet again.... Found the curten close.... He closed his eyes.... What do you want?
Sam: I want answer.... Today at 8 sharp... I want you home....
Sam leaves....

Maan sat there silent.... Relaxed for a minute.... He wasn't sure him self.... Which way to flow.... One way.... His some type of love.... Sam and him.... Shares such a personal relationship.... And another direction.... Something.... Nice was happening to him.... He didn't knew how to react....

After hours geet walks in... Maan looked tense...
Geet: sirrr.... Sirrrr... SIRRR...
maan jumped... He looks at geet angrily...
Geet: sorry... You were dead...
Maan: what?
Geet: I mean you were thinking!
Maan: what is it?
Geet: I am going... It's 7....
Maan: oh... Ok.. I See you 2mx...

Geet leaves... Flowed by maan.... He sat in his car.... Thinking.... If he really wanted to go round sam.... Why did she call him tonight.....
Maan relaxed in his car...
Geet knocked...
Maan jumped again....
Maan: what is it?
Geet: umm... Oh... I suppose to go round your house... Will you give me lift... I can't see a taxi....
Maan: umm... Yea... I was going home to....

Bothe sat in the car... Silent... Not sure what to say.... Geet didn't say a word.... Still petrified...
Maan: umm... Did you call dadi?
Geet: yes...
Maan: how is she feeling?
Geet: good... But she wants me round...
Maan: and oh....

Geets phone rings... It's Rahul....
Rahul: where are you?
Geet: hay... I am going round dadis house...
Rahul: oh... Ok I am there... Dadi is cooking tonight...
Geet: no not your dadi... Maan sirs dadi....
Rahul: oh! Why? And this time?
Geet: yea... She is not feeling well... She wants ne round her...
Maan: you said dadi was fine!
Geet: shhh..... It's maan sir... He is giving me a lift!
Rahul: umm... Why are you with him?
Geet roles his eyes... : you are not my BF... And she cuts the call!...

Maan: are you two alright? He didn't want any problem in her life... Because of him...

Geet: it's nothing... Dw... He always over react....

Both Arives at the mansion..... Geet and maan walks in to dadis room...

Geet: how are you felling Dadima?
Dadi: good beta...
Geet: I will stay tonight as well... She smiled...
Maan pleased: I will be back Dadima...

Maan went to his room... Switched his phone off... He was going no where tonight... Specially not round Sammera...

It's 9pm... Geet cooked dinner for everyone...
After dinner round about 10... Sammera called home number... Geet answers... ... ...
geet: hello...
Sam: give the phone to maan... Or tell him to call!
Geet: yes mam... I will pass the message on....
She hangs up...
Geet walks round the mansion to look for maan... She was less petrified of him now... Thanks to dadi... But still... He always gives her creep....

Maan was doing his usal marcle art.... Kick after kick... Punch after Punch.... he was wearing no tops.... His every muscle was visible... Looking hot... Sexy...
Geet pepps... She wasn't that inspired.... On his body... But the way he punched... It was full of pain.... The kick... He was hurting him self.... Geet looked curious... Wonders.... Why is he doing this to him...

Geet: sirr....
Maan frozen....
geet: Sammera mam called! Umm.... Here.... It's the phone...
Maan looks at her angrily... Snatches the phone... Smashes it... Geet jumps .... Shocked to see this type of behavior... And walks out....



NEXT: maan faces lifetime decision…



part 15


Geet stood there... Silent.... Not sure how to react Exactly....
Geet: umm...

Next day...
Geet was in office before maan... Only 2 more day to go... Thought maan... Then she is leaving....
Sam was back at work...

Sam and geet...

Sam: what are you doing here?
Geet: umm... Dadima... I mean mam have asked me to stay few more days... I am leaving this Friday!
Sam: why not now? She was extremely rude...
Geet: (what a bitch!) umm... She made me sign a mini contract!
Sam: what?
Geet: sorry mam... I also would like to go... But... I guss it's only 2 more days...
Sam: don't worry... You can go... And don't worry about the contract...
Geet didn't want to break dadis promise... But at the same time... She had no aspects of arguing with this natanki!
Geet: if you want mam... I will leave!
Sam: please do!

Geet walks to her cabin and starts packing her stuff... Maan notices... He walks to her cabin...

Maan: where are you going?
Geet: oh... Umm... Sammera mam said... I can leave!
Maan: what?
Geet: it's really nice working with you sir! She smiles at him... And leaves... Leaving maan standing in the empty cabin... Even his last hop seems to tremble.....

Maan makes his way to Sammeras cabine...
Maan: why have you let geet go?
Sam: why? She was about to in 2days anyway... I don't see ... Why you making such a big deal!
Maan: I am the boss here... And I decide... What to do!
Sam: maybe! Why you didn't come last night?
Maan: we not talking about are personal life here!
Sam: yes we are...
She puts her hands round his neck...
He removes it... Taking few step back...
Maan: we are done!
Sam: I am pregnant!...
Maan was about to walk out... His stopped... Frozen!.. Like his world just crashed under his feet... Like... He wasn't sure how to react! Happy!... Exited! Hatred! Sad! Scream!.... He just couldn't react... He wasn't type of guy... Who would back way from his promise.... But there was something... He couldn't believe... The night... The one night... He doesn't have any memory about it.... That night... Something different happen....

Sam: I am pregnant!
Maan didn't look at her... He wasn't happy... She walks in front of him and hugs him tight...
Sam: we need to get married soon!
Maan didn't take anything in after the word marriage... Nothing.... He didn't love her...

Sam: shall I fix a date?
Maan: hmm...
He frees him from her hug and walks out...

Maan walks out... No clue how he will say this to dadi... She already have a mini heart attack... And she doesn't want this child... To....
He sits in his car.... It is a responsibility... That he can't ignore... Can't run way... The great MSK never ran way... From any situation... But... He have to sacrifice all his life... For something... That... Is not.... He couldn't think... He wasn't happy at all.... No where near.... He wanted to scream... Scream out loud.... He drove.... Fast as he could.... Faster then ever.... Far way as possible.... Then stoped near the cliff..... Rushed out..... Taking his blazer off.... Screaming.... To the world.... Screaming.... Screaming louder then ever.... He wanted through all those pain out.... Out.... With those rower that was coming out of his heart.... He screamed louder.... And louder.....


Geet sat up from her bed... Like something somewhere just happened... Not sure what... Like someone was in pain... In deep pain....

Heer: Di... Are you alright?
Geet: hmm... Yes... Just had a bad dream... Like someone was in deep pain...!
Heer: you and your bad dream... Please sleep...
Geet: yea....

Next day... Geet was back to her normal office... She didn't look that happy at all... Something was bothering her... She decided to ignore...

Armaan: you are back... Early!
Geet: yea... Mam is in hospital... And Sammera mam is back... So she let me leave early...
Armaan: that's nice of her...
Geet: yea... I know!
Armaan: there is a new project... And we me you and Rahul... Have to go to banglore... For two weeks!
Geet: banglore! Two weeks!
Armaan nodes...
Geet: alright... Hive me few hours to pack... I will see you in airport tonight!
Armaan smiles...: I will see you later...

Geet disappears from town for two weeks... Meantime maan was getting forced to get married... Shasha wasn't type of girl who would leave maan that easily... He really needed help... Help to solve this problem... It was eating him inside... He couldn't talk to dadi... there was no chance... But it's his child after all... He would never neglate his chil... He agrees to marry... In 4 months..........

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Weeks have passed.... Maan haven't seen geet.... Or geet.... To maan.... There was nothing.... Nothing at all could happen to change something…..



part 16


Maan sat in the office... Thinking whats happening to his life... He was becoming a father... But why he wasn't happy! What was bothering him... Dadi have refuged to talk to him... BCs he decided to go back to Sammera.... She have tried... Enough to separate them... Only person... Who could talk to dadi now... Was geet.... And he haven't seen geet in 4 weeks now.... He was hopeless.... Everyday... He brings out hop to see her.... But there was no use.... Nothing could be done.... There are no chance of maan seeing geet.... But he was dying to see her one glimpse....

Jewlary shopping:

Sam: maan.... Maan... Ok which one?
Maan: any!
Sam: you have no taste!
Maan: they all looks the same!
Sam: no... Bothe different!
Maan: umm! Whatever!
Sam: maan... Dev used to choose better then you!
Maan: why don't you ask Dev!
Sam: maan! You are too much!
Maan ignores... He looks at a ring... White gold.... Guci... Spines.... Maan about to ask for it... A ladies voice interrupts.... Maans eyes twinkled... Seeing her.... He couldn't stop looking....

Geet: hay....
Shopkeeper: hello madam...
Geet: I Have enough for thy ring now... May I please....
Geet didn't realize at all... Maan was standing right next to her....
Sk takes the ring out....
Geet tries every finger... Just before she could try it on her index finger... It drops in maans pam....

Geet: I am so sorry... I.... Her voice disappears as she looks up... Hi sir....
Sam disappeared....
Maan: it's ok.... He gives the ring back... Geet puts it on her finger...
Geet: how are you sir?
Maan smiles faintly... As Sammera hugs him from the back...
Sam: hi geet?
Geet: hello mam!
Sam: what brings you here....
Geet shows her the ring...
Sam: engagement ring!
Maan shocked...
Geet: no... I loved this ring... Was waiting for ages to buy... Just managed to save enough... To buy this....
Sam: oh yes.... Forgot you are middle class!
Maan felt like slapping her....
Geet laughed.... Took her word as a joke... : not everyone is lucky to have a super rich MSK....
Sam: of course... Sammera gets the best.... You can make a move on Armaan....
Maan really started to get irritated....
Geet gave her a disgusting look...: no thanks.... I will pass.... Excuse me please...

She brought the ring and walked out....

Geet: pappa ji.... Am I always the one who meats so low person!!! Why??? SHe laughed at her self... Feeling sorry for maan...

Maan looks at her lovingly... As she disappears...
Maan: you are sick!
Sam: wht do you mean!
Maan snaps out payed the bill and leaves the shop... Leaving Sammera....

He rans after geet.... Geet enters a food shop...
Maan: geet....
Geet jumps and turns around....: hi sir....
Maan: I am sorry for Sammera!
Geet: it's ok.... Never knew you were back together!
Maan: umm... Yea....
Geet: I am happy for you! Congras... How is dadi?
Maan: actually... She is not happy with me! Because of Sammera!
Geet not surprised at all... : oh... Umm... I am sorry!
Maan: it's my fault!
Geet: ek bat bolo apse!
Maan: bolo!
Geet: ap Sammera jasi larki Ke shat shadi kue kar rhi ho!
Maan gives her a sad smile...
Geet: I ... Know... You don't love her!
Maan: looks up... That's not true!
Geet: you wouldn't have come after me... Leaving your future wife in the shop alone!
maan looked at her thoughtlessly... Not sure how to react!
Maan: umm... Ohh... She is pregnant!
Geet: ahh... Congras...
Maan: thanks! heart more
Geet: you don't look happy! You becoming a father... She smiled...
Maan: I am happy...
Geet: my food is ready... Congras again... Sirr... Please do send us the innavation... To us your employe... She smiles as she disappears...
Maan felt helpless... He wanted to scream... Every word that came out of geets mouth... It heart him for some-reason.... It was unknown... His feeling...... Towards her... Was unknown... She had no felling... Nothing for him.... Nothing.... Probably never will... Only in his dream.....
It was raining... He soaked him self.... Dripping....
Maan drooped sam home and he made his way home...
Surprisingly geet was there... Talking... Laughing with dadi…



part 17


Maan: dadi!
Bothe jumps...
Rahul: hay... Congras...
Geet: Congras again...
Dadi: ap mera Bhu kab arhi hi... Mera gr8 gr8 grandson ki sat?
Maan shocked... The thing... He couldn't say... Geet have told her...
Maan looked at geet... As suddenly... The whole hall started to fill with people.... Everything froze ... Everything... He just couldn't remove his gaze from geet... There was something special about her.... Something special.... Maan was hugged... Greeted... By one person to another....


Later on in the party...

Maan: thanks!
Geet: it's ok... I knew Dadi would be happy... Hearing about your child.... So I said that good news... Before other less happy news!
Maan bursts out in laugh....
Geet looked shocked... Just stood there... Actually whole hall went silent... All looking at maan....
Maan stopes: ummm... Ehh....
Geet: you laugh! I mean I am sorry sir!
Rahul pulls her way... Maan didn't like that....


Rahul: what did you say... That made him laugh?
Geet: I don't know!
Rahul: he never laughed in his lifetime! Well we never seend him!
Geet: idk!
Rahul: just stay way from him!
Geet: stop telling me what to do and what not to do!
Rahul: geet!
Geet: please... You are not my BF!

She leaves....

Dadi: are you alright beta?
Geet: yea...
Dadi: what happen?
Geet: it's Rahul... He is being complicated!
Dadi: just give him time...
Geet: I hope he finds a good girl... I am not really in to him... He is just not my type!
Dadi: don't worry beta...
Geet: how shall I not worry? He have been like this for past few years
Dadi: just ignore beta...

Rahul left early.... Leaving geet... Angry annoyed....
So maan dropped her home....
Geet: thanks...
Maan: I hop everything is ok between you and Rahul!
Geet: don't worry about him... He will be fine by 2mx....
Maan: thanks... For telling dadi!
Geet: it's ok... By....

Maan looks at her loving... No matter what happens to him.... He will be always there for her.... Intel his last breath...

Maan sat his room silently...
Dadi: beta... Are you alright?
Maan: yea... Just taking sam for a scan...
Dadi: yes.. Beta... That's a good idea...
Maan: yea...
Dadi: why you are not happy?
Maan: nothing dadi!
Dadi: what's wrong?
Maan: nothing
Dadi: maan... What's wrong?
Maan: I don't love her...
Dadi: what do you mean?
Maan: I don't love her at all... Like I used to...
Dadi: why are you marring her?
Maan: I don't know! Probably because of are child!
Dadi: maan... I know you don't love her...
Maan: what can I do?
Dadi: just go for a checkup...
Maan: yea...
Dadi: and don't tell Sammera... That you taking her!
Maan: why?
Dadi: just do!

In office:

Armaan: I think we are doing very well
Geet: yea... I think we are sir...
Armaan: do you think.... You can finish this by tonight?
Geet: I see why not!
Armaan: I will stay and help...
Geet: as you wish... I really do need some help...
Armaan smiles... Looks at her lovingly...

.... .... .... .... After hour....

Geet: I am done with this... Would you like me to help you?
Armaan: yes please...
Geet starts to designee... While Armaan next to her...
Armaan: geet...
Geet: yes sir...
Armaan: umm... There.... My sister wedding is next week... Would you like to come with me?
Geet looked at him in surprise... : umm.... I will try... But I won't promise....
Armaan: thanks!
Geet smiles and stands a bit far way from him...
Didn't like his closeness...
Armaan forcefully grabs her close.... against his body.........….



part 18


Maan and sam in hospital...
Sam: hospital!
Maan: yes it's important... Good for your health!
Sam became worried...
Maan: what's wrong?
Sam: nothing... I don't think... It's that
Maan: hmm...
Sam: it's not that important... I am feeling fine…

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Geet: let me go! She asked him angrily...
Armaan: what's wrong with you? Why can't you see my love.... God damit!
He shoves her against the wall... Holds her firmly....
Geet: what are you doing? Let me go!
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hospital......

As Bothe were about to enter...
Rahul calls maan....

Rahul: is geet round your house?
Maan bit surprised! "umm... Why she would be round my house?"
Rahul: she is not answering her phone! It's a bit late... And she always call...
Maan: what? She is not home yet!
Rahul: no... We are extremely worried!
Maan: I am going... Ok... I will call you....

Maan leaves straight way... Leaving Sammera in hospital... Alone...

Maan drives to Armaan office... Straight way....

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Geet: let me go.... She shouts... As Armaan starts to abuse her...
He dupata was already off... Geet was extremely week compare to him... She tried her best.... Pushing him with her Bothe hand.... Against his chest... As he forcefully shoves her against the wall....
Armaan creases her face.... Geet petrified....
Whole office was empty... Her scream would be no use.... Nothing could be done... Nothing was working....
Tears started to roll down her eyes... Armaans tries to kiss it way.....

Suddenly someone pulls him way... Geet was shocked.... She was in tears.... She faints on maans arm.....

Maan punces him hard.... While holding geet... He picks her up and duppta and walks way...
Armaan already on the floor....
Maan rushes in to his car....
Maan: geet! Geet! Geet! .... Geet... Trying to bring back to her sense....

Rahul calls again...
Maan more worried about geet....
Maan: hello...
Rahul: have you found her....
Maan: Rahul....
Geet wakes up... And snacks the phone... "I am fine... Just round dadis... She wasn't felling well... I will call you later..."
Maan looked at her confusingly.... "why dis you lie!"
Geet: Rahul... Beloved him allot... And I don't want his business to be affected... Because of me!
Maan stood there shocked... "have you realized.... What just happened to you!"
Geet was shaking... There was scratch Mark on her arm...
Maan drove home... Sammera called... He switched his phone off....
Geet couldn't even walk properly... She was in shock... Couldn't believe.... Armaan could go this low....

Maan picks her up... As she couldn't walk... And walked towards the outhouse....
Maan made her relax... And quickly opens the first aid box....
Geet: could you please not tell this to anyone....
Maan looked at her angrily.... "I will and he have to pay... Heavily... What he have tried...." he couldn't even imagine... What Armaan tried...
Geet: please! Because... I wouldn't like to be in public... Not like this....
Maan realised... What she meant... But maan.... He probably will kill him now....
Maan: ok....

Mann gently applies the medicine on her arm... Then picks her up... And makes her rest on the bed.... She couldn't think....

Maan: you relax... I will call Dadi...
Geet: no... She snaps... Don't!
Maan: ok I won't... I will be in the living room... You relax here....

Next morning geet woke up... Felling much better.... A shopping bag... Full of new cloths.... Geet looked round... No maan.... She went in for a shower... And changed.... Came out... Found maan on the sofa... His both hand was bleeding.... then geet thought... Before she fainted... Maan only punced him with one hand....
Geet: sir.... Sir.....
Maan: no answer.... She looked at the first aid box.... Cleaned up... Both of his hand.... And bandaged over it.....

Maan woke up.... His both hand.... Bandaged.... A note was on the side.... It's from geet.....

Thanks for everything.... Hop to see you soon..... Maybe in a year or two.... With your child and wife..... Thankyou.....

Geet.......

Maan looked at the note... Tears started to roll down his eyes... didn't knew how to react.... There was something he felt... Was leaving him.... Something.... Running way.... Something..... Leaving him..... He was murdering his happiness.... He knew it would be impossible to even think about her.... Let alone live... She was a moon and maan a filthy dust.... Of the lonely earth'.


art 19



Maan sat there silently... Then quickly rushed out...

Mum: geet! Where are you going?
Geet: I need some time off!
Mum: but what happened?
Geet: I can work for the khanna industry anymore!
Mum: what? Why? I thought that was your dream!
Geet: not anymore!
Mum: but what happen?
Geet: don't mum!

Geet walks out... Finds maan waiting outside of her house!
Maan: where are you going?
Geet: I don't know! Somewhere far!
Maan: you are not going anywhere! Specially hiding from Armaan!
Geet: please sir! I Have to go!
Maan takes her bag and starts to walk in... Geet snatches the bag back...
Maan pushes her against his car.. And blocks her way...
Maan: if you go... I will tell this to everyone!
Geet: you have no right to blackmail me sir!
Maan: you not giving me much option!
Geet: I don't have to sir!
Maan: as you wish...
He frees her and starts to call someone!
Geet snatches the phone...
Geet: fine! I will go back home!
Maan: have you quit from his job yet?
Geet: no! I signed a 2 years contract!
Maan: I will wait here... Bring me the contract paper!

Geet some weird reason does whatever he was telling her...
Geet: why am I listening to you?
Maan smiles: you have no other option!
Geet walks off in frustration... after 10 minutes... Comes out again....
Maan: hmm...
He looks through...
Maan: did you even read... When you signed this paper....
Geet: no! I thought Rahul did!
Maan roles his eyes... Let's go!
Geet: where?
Maan: you need to sign something!
Geet: sign what?
Maan: just sit in the car!

Geet did what he told her... Atlast maan ha the gut to talk to her properly... Like after last night... Everything seems to ease down... Maan had no clue why he was loving this moment... Like he can live his life.... Like this forever... By just looking at her...

Geet sat there extremely confused... No clue why she was listening to him.... Like he had some types of spell on her... Casting one afte another... Making it impossible to break the barrier....

Geet: umm... What wil you do?
Maan: taking you off from this contrac! So he can't make a case on you!
Geet: but how?
Maan: I have my way!
Geet: I don't want you to do this for me!
Maan: umm.... You helped my Dadi! That's in return!
Geet: I didn't help dadi for this! She is my Dadi... That's why I have helped her!
Maan: umm... Ok! I am Maan sing Khurana... I don't have time to listen to your bak! Bak!
Geet fumed in anger.... Like I asked for his help! She murmured under her breath!
Maan: you need my help! You have no opetion!
Geet: stop talking about my option! Like all my option is closed! Ad it only cones down to you!
Maan looked at her angrily... Didn't say a word... And stopped in front of a big building!
Maan: Common... I don't have all day!
Geet fumes more....

After 20 minutes... They come back.... Geet looking at maan.... Without removing her gaze....

Bothe sat in the car... Silent!
Geet: I... I will pay you back!
Maan: stop being nusense! Have I asked for the money!
Geet: no... But... You ... Paid... 2 mil.... That's like!
Maan: Chup! Ek dum Chup!
Geet doesn't say a word!
Maan: I will drop you home!
Geet: can't believe Armaan could be this low!
Maan: well done!
Geet: what?
Maan: your home!
Geet: umm.... Thanks... Sir!
She rushes out...
Maan smiles seeing her running home...
He completely forgot everything... His whole day went by helping geet out... Looking at her... When she was next to him... Ad then remembering her.... When she wasn't....
He laid on his bed.... Thoughtless.... Lost in geets memory..... He was happy.... That he have been useful to her... He could never dream about... Being with her.... But he can at-least... Help her when she in trouble..... ..... ...... ......

Maan completely forgot about all his stress.... He was more concern about geet…



part 20


Few weeks have passed... Maan haven't seen geet for long time... And he started have dough.... Samara is not pregnant... She had no symptoms... Maan haven touched her since they were back from Shimla... And that have been well over 4 months... Wouldn't there been a bump he wonders....

In one evening... Geet comes round... To see Dadima.... Sammera and maan also present....

Geet hugs Dadima and maan ad Sammera walks in.... He becomes exited sewing geet after such a long time....
Geet: hello sir! Hello mam! She smiles and asks nicely.... How is your health? How is the baby....
Dadi and geet looked at her tummy... In great concentration....
Geet: that's odd.... Wouldn't you have a bump by now? Geet looked at dadi....my cousin is 4 months.... Her bump is visible!
Sone excitement came in maans eyes.... Hoping she wasn't pregnant!
Sam: umm.... Actually... It completely depends on the body... You know....
Geet: yea I guss!
Geet and dadi walks out of the living room.... And enters the kitchen....
Maan looked curious!

Geet: are you sure she is pregnant!
Dadi: she is not!
Geet: hmm... Why she is lying!
Dadi: her habit.... That's the 2nd time....

Maan stood at the door... Shocked! Sam already have left... To avoid further question....

Maan: 2nd time!
Geet and dadi looked at him in shock!
Geet: umm.... Oh.... 2nd time for my cousin! She tried to change the subject!
Maan: dadi.... What are you hiding?
Dadi: beta... She already have aborted a child before!
Maan stood there is shock... Hold on.... What do you mean!
Dadi: a year ago....
Maan: that's imposible.... I never! He stopped! Thumped....
Geet and dadi looked at him with a surprising face... And a disgust thought.....
Maan rushed out.... Went rounds Sammera....

Geet: umm..... I should leave dadi... Maybe see you soon....
Dadi: why don't you stay round for some more time....
Geet: maybe another day....
Dadi: would you be able to help maan out.... From this!
Geet looked at her.... She was already under maans depth.... Maybe this can pay off... She thought....
Geet: you mean Sammera?
Dadi: yea....
Geet: smiles... Maan sir done allot for me... Of course I will....

Later on the evening... Geet calls maan.... Just before he was about to enter... Sammera....
Maan happy... Shocked! Surprised.... First time ever she called....

Maan: hello!
Geet: hi sir....
Geet wasn't sure how to start... She really Disn't like to interfere in his personal life.... But she had promise dadi... She will talk....
Geet: sir.... If you need any help.... I.... I ca....
Maan: it's ok... I think I can.... Actually... Can you met me... In 10 minutes!
Geet: I am home! It will take me 30 minute atleast!
Maan: I will pick you up!
Geet: ok!

Somereason... The fear they shared... Have disappeared.... Geet was comfortable with him.... And maan... Loved her company..... Even-though he knows.... Nothing could ever happen between them.... Geet is only there... Because he helped her.....

Maan picks geet up....

Maan: umm... Ehh.... Are you sure... That you want to help me!
Geet nodes!
Maan: ok.... Umm.... Do you know any doctor... It's your friend!
Geet: my sister is a medical student! She must know some!
Maan droves back to her house.... "call heer!"
Geet looked at him... With a confusing face.... She calls her... Here walks out.... Nearly a stroke.... Seeing MSK with her sister....
Maan: heer....
Geet and heer Bothe looked at him.... Surprised....
Geet: how do you know her name?
Heer: MSK knows my name!
Maan: get in the car!

Heer rushes in....
Maan: any friend.... Who is a doctor!
Heer: yes.....

Maan wasn't type of guy... Who would leave someone... That easily.... Specially.... Cheating on him.... ..... ..... ....
Sammera had no clue what she was putting her self in to.... .....


Dadi: geet.... Why don't you join Khurana industry?
Geet: I don't know Dadima.... I will apply again for a new job soon! So I might do!
Dadi: you don't have to apply... We seen your talent!
Geet: hmm... Thanks Dadi!

Rahul calls....

Geet haven't said anything to Rahul... And Armaan.... Geet have no idea... What have maan done to him.... His business seems to be heeding towards bankruptcy.... Which geet was extremely shocked about.... Geet would dare not ask anything to maan.... He always was in high temper.... Then she thought.... Have dadi gone mad.... Trying to make me work with him..... It's like.... Basically.... "khudki paro me kulari marna!"
Dadi: hmm...
Geet smiles... And answers the phone....

Geet: hello!
Rahul: where are you?
Geet: round dadimas!
Rahul: you re always round hers.... You having days off.... And I never see you!
Geet: sorry baba! Umm... Ok... Pick me up... I will see you soon!

Maan walks in... Geet smiles... : by dadi.... By sir.....
Dadi: by beta!

Maan: why she always leaves.... Soon as I walk in!
Dadi: hmm.... No.... It's rahul..... Probably complaining.... That he never see her.... I hope something.... Happens between them soon.....
Maan became irritated.... Didn't like that at all.....
Dadi: becra Rahul..... Loves her blindly.... And she .... I really wonder who she loves!
Maan went In deep thought.....
Dadi: maan! Maan!
Maan: haa.... I am tirade.... Goodnight Dadima!

Maan couldn't sleep at all.... He kept thinking about geet and Rahul..... Even though they had no chance..... But he still felt.... Some weird feeling.... Again.... Armaan incident started to play in his mind.... Thinking about how week geet was.... At the same time.... So innocent and pure..... Anyone could loose there balance near her..... Anyone.... Even he didn't trust him self.... Last thing he could remember from the Simla night.... When he was drunk.... Was geet..... Nothing els...... So he must came close to Sammera.... Thinking it was her...... He still hated him self for that night.... Curse..... Geet would never.... Ever would be close to him..... Knowing each and every fact about his life.... Or he could ever touch her..... He deserves someone far better then me..... Someone pure like her..... Unlike me......

Tears started to roll down his eyes.... Like happiness.... Was not under his name.... Not anymore...... All night..... He thought about.... The tremble of his life...…….



NEXT: big twists……




part 21


Few weeks have passed....

Sam: when are we getting married maan!
She hugged him....
Maan jerks.... Pushing her back.... But she tries to seduce him..... Maan holds Bothe of her hand tight....
Maan: it's not good... When you are pregnant!
Sam: I don't believe in that.... She pushes him....
Maan taken back... And leaves the room... "we have an appointment...."
Sam: what type....
Maan: doctor and nurse is coming for checkup!
Sam shocked! That wasn't a good sign.... Not at all....
Maan: are you ready....
Sam: maan I said... I am fine....
Door bells ring....
Doctor walks in... Then nurse... Flowed by geet and dadi....

Sam was no where near to give her self to the doctor...
Both walks in a private room....


Sam: look doctor... I am not pregnant.... So I will pay you whatever.... Just tell outside.... That I am pregnant!
Dr: excuse me!
Sam: yes... M....
Dr: your report shows... You already have aborted a child.... Years back!
Sam: yes.... So!
Dr: was it with the same person!
Sam: excuse me!
Dr: I need to track down everything! Because you are pregnant!

After the checkup....

Sam: no... I am not!
Dr: yes you are... You are 4 weeks pregnant!
Maan walks in...
Maan: how is she?
Dr: Congras sir... You becoming a father...
Sam petrified....
Dr: 4 weeks.....
Maan shocked..... He stood there...
Maan: no... Thats impossible.... We haven't....

maan knew exactly what was going on behind his back... but he needed her to confess.... so .....


Sam: maan.... Maan.... I am so sorry... Listen...
Maan took a deep breath.... With a relief.... He knew very well.... She have been sleeping with other men....
Sam: maan please give me one more chance...,
Maan: we are done... Just because I respect women... I won't put this on media.... Consider your self lucky.... By the way.... You are not pregnant at all.... You are also sacked from Khurana industry... I don't want to see your face from today on!

Sam stood there shocked silent...

Maan leaves the room... Dadi slaps her hard.... Geet flows maan...

Sam: "I won't spare you for this... Maan sing Khurana!

All three in the car....
Dadi: I am so happy today... Geet smiles while eating chocolate...
Geet: now sir needs a sweet girl and settle his life...
Maan Didn't like that.... He became upset....
Dadi: ha beta...
Maan: can you two please... Be quit!
Geet and Dadi laughs....

Weeks have passed.... It's geets first day at Khurana industry.... Nowadays maans life seems to revel round geet all the time.... Although... He became more irritated.... Arrogant.... Egoistic..... And god knows what els.... He was back to the old maan.... He Didn't have to change much for geet.... Geet never gave him any of that types of attention....

Geet: may I come in sir!
Maan looks up... Yes...
Geet: I have finished this project!
Maan: ok... Talk to Adi.... I am bit busy!
Geet: yes sir!
She leaves.... Maan was surrounded by works... He needed some time alone... All the stress Sammera have put him through was allot.... He started feel something for geet.... But of-course... He wasn't worthy of her... He kept him self distance.... He wasn't sure how long this could go along for.... But he tried his best... To act normal....

Maan and geet in conference room.... Geet presenting....

Maan just couldn't remove his gaze from her.... Not at all....nothing seems to work.... Geet was slowly cleaning his blood.... Removing poisons that Sammera have left in him.... Nothing seems to work for him.... She was the one.... Whenever he was round her.... Everything used to revolt round her.... Everything..... Maan closes his eyes looked way in frustration.... "she could never be my.... Never! " he said to him self... Repeating!
Everyone have left... Maan was still lost in his thought....
Geet: sir! Sir!
Maan: yes....
Geet: meeting... Finished.... I should leave!
Maan: yea... Sure!
He looked at his watch.... It's 8:00pm.... Maan: do you want a lift?
Geet: it's ok sir.... Rahul is picking me up! She smiled and left....

Maan sat there... Smiling... Jealous...



part 22


Rahul: how was it?
Geet: really good... But Maan Sir looks so upset nowadays!
Rahul: probably what Sammera have tried!
Geet: really don't like her...
Rahul: yea... Same... Her talking style is so low!
Geet: yea...
Rahul: anyway... Dadi was asking about are engagement...
Geet didn't like that... Hmm.... She thought....
Rahul: do you really want to marry me?
Geet: if you want me to!
Rahul: no... Geet... I want you to love me...
Geet: I don't know... You are my best friend... And love.... I don't know!
Rahul: then don't marry me!
Geet became exited...
Rahul: I know you love anurag!
Geet looked at him in shock!
Geet: anu....
Rahul: he is back! He came back for you...
Geet looked at him in more surprise....
Rahul; we are going there now!
Geet: anu is back!
Rahul nodes.... : he is waiting for you....

Rahul stopes the car.... Geet rushes out.... She couldn't express her felling.... Nothing at all.... Surprised.... Shocked.... Thoughtless.... She ran towards him.... Stopped before hugging him.....

Geet slaps him tight.... Tears started to roll down....
Geet: one year! Couldn't you even call!
Anu: I am sorry....
He huggs her tight....
Geet: "I hate you!"
Anu: I love you....
Geet: why haven't you called.... What about letters.....
Anurag took out a pack.... Geet opens it....
Anurag: 379 leatters..... All for you...
Geet huggs him even tighter....
Geet: I hate you.... Hate you.... You......
Anurag: I love you..... Love you.... And and only you......


Next day in the office...

Geet was weirdly happy... Her life was complete..,, love of her life was back.... Her life is complete....

Adi: you look very happy!
Grey humming.... : yes very....
Adi: humming.... Hmm.... I can smell boy trouble!
Geet: yes... My Anurag is back.... Forever....
Adi: ooooooooo who is anu?
Geet: love of my life...... She smiles....
Adi laughs... And they Bothe enters maans room...
Maan 2 noticed geet oddly happy today... But he didn't ask... Her happiness makes his day.... So no spoiling!
Adi: sir....
Maan: hmm....
Adi: you and geet have to go to banglore in two weeks time again....
Geet: hmm...
Adi: yea... Your presentation!
Geet: alright! How long for?
Adi: one week!
Geet:(oh no.... After so long anu came back... Now I have to go to baglore.) ok...
Maan: ok.... Do I have any meeting today!
Geet was in deep thought.... Maan and Adi noticed that....
Adi: geet lets go.... We have arrange everything for party twomoro....
Geet: yea....

Geet was round dadis again.... She was learning some new dishes.... Maan walks in... With his marcle art cloths... Just warring a vest and long bagy trousers....
He sits on the table... Drinking water... Looking at geet lovingly.... Dadi noticed that.... He was lost in her... Couldn't remove his gaze.... Geet just Didnt care.... Really concentrate in cooking....

Geet: (anu you beter like this.... Wasting my time on you....)
Maan: what are you cooking dadi?
Geet who didn't realise at all... That maan was lost in her for past 30 minutes....
She jumps... Stopes all the food... She maks a sad face.... "dadiii......"
Dadi and maan just laughs....
Dadi: maan scares you this much!
Geet: if you he comes in and goes like a ghost... Then of course yes....
She puts her hand on her mouth.... : "sorry sir....."
Maan didn't like that.... He walks out....



Next: Geet cooks for Maan :D

x



part 23


Geet rushes out....... sorry sir... i really didn't mean that.....

Geet: (oy geet.... he is already upset enough.... now you just made him more upset....)

maan dosn't listen....

Geet: sir... sir...

Maan: hmm... what is it?

geet: i really...

before geet could say another word... she slips......

maan looks back with sudden silent..... no face.... "OK!" then he looks down.... geet flat on the floor...

maan: geet!

geet: ouch!

maan tries to help her.... but she fails to get up....

Maan: "Are you alright?"

geet nodes negatively..... "It hurts!"

maan picks her up on his arm....

Geet: please sir i can manage!

maan: you couldn't even get up properly... at least let me help!

geet embarrassed on his arm....

maan takes her to the living room...

Geet: umm.... i will be alright...

maan: hmm... ok!

maan was about to walk way...

Geet: sir....

maan: i thought you will ok!

geet: umm.... it hurts....

maan smiles... wait here!

after few minutes he comes back....

maan: where?

geet: its ok... i will do it...

maan hands her the cream....

it was geets back.... no clue how will she do it........ she straggles.......

maan watches her for a minute... straggling....

Maan: give it to me...

Geet: its alright... i will do it...

Maan snatches it..... "turn round!"

geet does.... she had a big bruse.... on the top side of her back..... luckly she was wearing a low cut top.... but the string was covering her back....... maan hesitated....

Geet also getting uncomfortable... Maan spowly pulls the string... Barley touching the string... Tickeling geets sense.... Bothe started to drink there sliva.... Maans hand was snacking.... Touching her.... Wasn't in his dictionary.... He suppose to stay way from her....
He gently touched her bare back... Shaking.... Tickiling geet....
She could feel the warmth of his hand.... Like it was soothing to her heart.... A weird feeling came in her... Unexplainable....
Every stroke of his hand on her soft skin....was bringing maan close to her.... They were standing Extreamly close.....
Geet could feel his warm breeze on her back from his mouth.... Soothing the pain..... She started to breath heart.... Some weird feeling started come in her... Like she was Loosing it.....

Bothe were confuse.... What was wrong with them.... Every touch..... Was physically weakening them....

Maan pulled way.... Before he went completely mad on her...
He ties the string back...

Maan: it's all done...
He leaves the place straight way... Before he outburst with feelings....

Geet: sir!
Maan stopes...: yes!
Geet: thanks!
Maan nodes.... About to walk way again....
Geet: sir!
Maan: yes!
Geet: umm.... I have cooked something for you...
Maan: hmm....
Geet: umm.... I don't know if will like it.... But dadi said... Italian was your favourite!
Maan looks at her... With a confusing face....
Geet: I have cooked extra!
Maan: I will try!
Geet smiles and walks in to the kitchen... Maan flows....

Geet serves... Maan eats....
Maan takes a spoonful of pasta and shoves it in his mouth.... Eating like a normal man.... Extreamly quick....
Geet: you can slow down.... You have plenty of time....
Maan: hmm.... Ok! .... He does slow down.... But puts double the amounts of food in his mouth....
Geet: umm.... Sir... Less!
Maan looks at her angrily....
Geet: khana atak jaigi!
Soon as geet mentioned about coking... Maan started to choke....
Geet rushed with some water...
Geet: ahem! Ahem!
Maan strayed to eat slow and with small spoonful....
Maan: happy!
Geet nodes... With a big smily face....
Maan finishes eating... And hurries off... Geet looks at him confusingly....

Maan just wanted to stay way from her... More he stays close to her.... Weaker he becomes.... which wasn't a good sign.... he always finds him self starring at her....


geet comes after him with more water.... he was still chewing on some pasta.....

Geet: sir.....

maan turns round...: yes!

geet: water... you need it!

maan: i am fine....

he starts to choke again.... maan gets angry and takes the water... hated how she was right all the time...

geet smiles.....


Next: busy day at the office... Anu gets angry with geet…..



art 24



anurag…

age 21…

possessive and angry lover… Loves geet madly…..



Anu... drops geet office...

geet: thanks anu...

anu: anything for you...

geet smiles...

anu: i have spoken to dadi....

geet: really!
anu: i want to marry you... soon as possible.... i have stayed way from you... because of bro... not any more...

geet smiles....: it's not your brothers fault... you need some time alone to concentrate on your education.

anu: i guss you are right.... but i wasn't doing bad at all...

geet: but i was because of you... she teases him....

anu: how? you work for.... he looks at the sign... Khurana Industry! you know... its so hard to work here... specially... its Maan Sing Khurana!

geet: he is not all that bad!

anu smiles: oh really! and what else you know about him?

geet: beter then you!


anurag comes to kiss her.... geet moves back.....

geet: not yet!

anurag smiles....: shadi ki bat ai nahi caliga...

geet smiles...: we will see after marriage....

Anu: i am taking you back to USA..... he shouts as geet walks out....

geet: to me.... shadi nahi karungi....

Anu: shadi to tumko mujce karna paregi!

geet: no chance...

anu: why? whats wrong with me?

geet: umm.... you are so ugly....


before anu could get out to catch her.. she runs in the office.... anu smiles and drives way..........


geet runs in and bumps in to maan...... maan catches her by waist.....

geet: sorry sir.... me oh...

maan looks at her angrily...: look where you are going!

geet: sorry sir!
maan: in my cabin in two minutes... Dictation...

geet: yes sir....


geet rushes in maans office....

Maan: I want this letter to post to Mr sagal

Maan: dear mr sagal.. Thank-you fir the invitation. Mr maan sing Khurana and Geet Handa will be able to make to the party... Hop to see you soon.
Geet wrote in down!
Maan: want you to post this today!
Geet: yes sir!
Maan: you may leave now!
Geet: sir!
Maan: yes... He was looking at some file...
Geet: are we attending a party twomoro!
Maan: no... I was joking!
Geet: no... I meant!
Maan: yes!
Geet: nothing!

Geet walks out... "dust danav!"

As the day passed by.... Maan and geet Bothe became busy.... Surrounded by work....

It's 9:00pm.... Maan no where near going... Geet can't leave... Because he isn't....
Geet walks in maans room...
Geet: sir!
Maan: yea.... He answers lazily.... Looking at some file....
Geet: umm... It's 9:00
Maan: so...
Geet: I should go!
Maan: go!
Geet: oh! Umm.... Ok!
Geet leaves.... But doesn't leave.... She starts to mummble.... "dust danav!"

Maan sat there knew what geet was thinking... She won't go Intell he leaves... Maan liked that..... It was Extremely sweet of her....

Maan flows her.... After few minutes... Finds her in painter.... Making hot chocolate.... Staring the spoon..... Forcefully...
Maan: it will break!
Geet jumps and drops the mug!
Maan roles his eyes... Let's go I will drop you!
Geet: no! Umm.... It's alright!
Maan: it's 10 now! Too late!
Geet: I will call a taxi!
Maan: hurry....
Geet flows....

Bothe in the car... Anurag who was waiting for her .... Gets Extremely angry.... 10pm... And she is with her boss.... In the car.... Didn't even notice him....

Geet looked restless...
Maan: what's wrong?
Geet: nothing!
Maan: hmm...
Geet: no... I am ok sir!
Maan: you look tensed!
Geet: no....
Geets phone were kept ringing....
Maan: your phone!
Geet: it's ok....
Maan: umm....
Geet: I am fine.... Not important!
Maan: ok!


Soon as geet Arrives home.... She tries to call Anurag.... No use....
He was Extremely mad....

Maan started his normal marcel art.... Twomoro was the party.... With every kick and Punch.... Geet appeared in front of him....
Maan closed his eyes.... Wanted to keep his mind way from geet....




Next: maan and geet dance.......... anurag leaves in frustration......



xxxx

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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#68
Hi Keyama😒 Sorry for the sad smiley face
I just read like I think 8 parts or something from the part after he saw that his name was on her hand

OMG!!! So much has happened in these parts
I was so so so sad when I read that Geet and Anu were getting married and then was so happy that Maan and Geet were marrying and then was so sad to see Maan being so emo coz he had everything in the world but had nothing at all. His wife loved someone else.I can't imagine how he must be feeling.On top of that, Geet is making things hard for him by crying all day and all night.I know I know that she's in sadma that her (whatever) Anu is dead and all but still come on!! Maan loves her so much still cares and bothers to console her in spite of her being so cold towards him.Any other man would have not even married her or even if he did,he'll not be so patient. And what the hell?She calls him sir!! How pathetic is that now? And on top of EVERY DAMN problem already caused by the two idiots Dev and Meera, they still have the audacity to add fuel to the fire that is burning our Maan's heart !

I am so sorry for writing so much of nonsense..but that's just what I feel..Sorry if I repeated any of the points again coz I was just plain upset.

Anyways,I hope they remain married and most importantly,they are HAPPY! Hmmm...just where is he bringing her? To her mum's?I dunno! Please update soon and don't you dare not reply to this comment and about ur surprise..I was gonna give it to you today but forget it till you make the FF happy! Lolz...just kidding,a few more days for that...

That's all for now! Bye!

PS: Did you read my FF?I sent you a PM..Do read and comment:)

Edited by bluedreamz953 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: bluedreamz953

Hi Keyama😒 Sorry for the sad smiley face

I just read like I think 8 parts or something from the part after he saw that his name was on her hand

OMG!!! So much has happened in these parts
I was so so so sad when I read that Geet and Anu were getting married and then was so happy that Maan and Geet were marrying and then was so sad to see Maan being so emo coz he had everything in the world but had nothing at all. His wife loved someone else.I can't imagine how he must be feeling.On top of that, Geet is making things hard for him by crying all day and all night.I know I know that she's in sadma that her (whatever) Anu is dead and all but still come on!! Maan loves her so much still cares and bothers to console her in spite of her being so cold towards him.Any other man would have not even married her or even if he did,he'll not be so patient. And what the hell?She calls him sir!! How pathetic is that now? And on top of EVERY DAMN problem already caused by the two idiots Dev and Meera, they still have the audacity to add fuel to the fire that is burning our Maan's heart !

I am so sorry for writing so much of nonsense..but that's just what I feel..Sorry if I repeated any of the points again coz I was just plain upset.

Anyways,I hope they remain married and most importantly,they are HAPPY! Hmmm...just where is he bringing her? To her mum's?I dunno! Please update soon and don't you dare not reply to this comment and about ur surprise..I was gonna give it to you today but forget it till you make the FF happy! Lolz...just kidding,a few more days for that...

That's all for now! Bye!

PS: Did you read my FF?I sent you a PM..Do read and comment:)




hay hun.. i loved ur comment…. gr8 analyise…. and yes i am replying lol…. lved it… and no. i havent but about to read ur ff now…… do pm me……… i have like 100 pm…. sorry… for delay

but loved..
xxx
and sorry… this aint getting better
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Posted: 14 years ago
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*sighs* I knew that you're not gonna make things good for us readers
I kinda gave up hoping,just HOPING that you'll make things better...You know how bad that is?That means...😆Actually I dunno too what does that mean but it just means that it's BAD!!
hmm.It's okay..when you're free,do read and i'm gonna update my other FF too so you'll be having a double dhamaka!Anyways,enjoy!!😉

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE




hay hun.. i loved ur comment'. gr8 analyise'. and yes i am replying lol'. lved it' and no. i havent but about to read ur ff now'' do pm me''' i have like 100 pm'. sorry' for delay

but loved..
xxx
and sorry' this aint getting better
xxx

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