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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
omg omg omg....cant believe he's doing dis for revengE!!!


update ASAP!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks 4r pm....... very intresting.......... I send u buddy request if get it plz let me know actually i m new here still don't know to send buddy request trust me its a tough job
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice 1 du continue soon its going really well ..........................du update it soon tc......................god bless u ........ du pm me...................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved gunjan and Geet
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
that is really nice....great update ......really loving it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
part 5

Manav looks upset and he is thinking of something.Gunjan sees it and goes near him.
G:You look upset.What's the problem?
M:Nothing.
G:No,something is desturbing you.I see some kind of worry on your face.
M:Nobody understands what is going on in my mind.How did you understand it though i'm a stranger?
G:How can you be a stranger for me?You are my husband.
Manav looks at her deeply.
G:We may not be a real couple.But i can understand your feelings from your face expressions.
Manav is surprised:How?
Gunjan bends her face.
G:I don't know.Tell me what bothers you.You are angry with Soniya for ditching you.So you want to take revenge.But there is one more truth..ie you love Soniya now also.What you plan is not a revenge to break her heart.You are just doing thid drama to get her back.Right?
Manav looks at her with wonder.
G:Don't worry.You will get Soniya back.
Manav smiles.She also.
She thinks:I'm helping my own husband to get back to his ex-girlfriend.My fate!
She feels pain in her heart.
M:You are so nice Gunjan.Will you be my friend?
He extends his arm.She holds his arm slowly with a smile.He smiles.

Gunjan wears a red silk saree.Manav enters the room after coming back from the office.He is stunned to see her beauty.He can't take his eyes off her.
Gunjan notices it and becomes nervous and shy.She hides her shyness.
G:Why are you staring at me like this?
M:Nothing like that.You look very beautiful..stunning....
G:Thank you.You please get ready fast for the puja.
M:Puja?I don't believe in it.No God heard my prayers.God separated me from Soniya.
G:Don't say like that.God does everything with a good intention.Everything happens for good.After separated from Soniya you realized how much you love her.She will also realize it.Maybe for that God did that.
M:I don't know.But i can't be philosophical like you.
They both laugh.

Manav and Gunjan attend the puja.
Gunjan prays:God!Please help me to get everything which Manav wants.He believes that his dream will be fulfilled through me.Please help me to help him to get Soniya back.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
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Yipee! First one to comment!
wowww
that was relly nice ...👏

Waiting for
your next part!
plz dear continue soon
thanks for the pm😊





Edited by -sofiya- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
ssooo NiIce....
please cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59

Hey Jenni,

Awosssssssssommmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeee update
I realy glad that how geet help him to get back sonia n how she understand him
realy can't wait for next pls update soon yaar
n this is too short plsssssssssssss make longer than this plssssssss
update soon
love u
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
Its really nice....... But its too short yaar plz update soon.......i m sending u buddy request if u get it plz let me know.

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