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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice 1 again du update it soon .....thnx 4 de pm........................tc.....................god bless u..........:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Jeni,

Thanks for pm cute n nyc update!
finally gunjan n manav met! :D love the scencs
n i feel bad for devyani dhruv shud he si so rude n careless
pls we want more maaneet scencs n want maan also think about geet gunjan ;hope u update soon the next part can't wait dear 😳😳😳😳😳
love u😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi that was really nice update can u plz add me in pm list plz 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome yaar continue waiting 4 ur next update da
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
wow that is eally awesome...great update it is....
loved it....keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Coffee house Part 3


Devyani,Chandni and Gunjan are chatting and laughing at the Coffee house.Suddenly Gunjan's eyes fall on Manav who is sipping coffee and watching Gunjan.
She thinks:Manav is here...
She blushes when she realizes that Manav's eyes are fixed on her face..
She goes to him leaving Devyani and Chandni in wonder.
G:Manav...you were here?I did'nt know that.
Manav thinks:You never know my presense even when i'm with you.
Manav smiles simply.
G:What a pleasant surprise!How did you vanish so fast yesterday?
Manav says in his mind:I wanted to be with you for more time.But i doubted whether you will like it.But now your eyes say that you crave for my presense.I hope so.
Manav gets up:Ok..Gunjan..i'm going.
G:Ok bye.
Manav goes.Gunjan does'nt move till he vanishes completely.
She goes back to her friends.
D:That is the business man Manav.Right?
G:Yes.
D:Saw him at yesterday's party.Why did you go to him?
Gunjan smiles simply.
D:Yesterday i was shocked to see you dancing with him when he asked you to dance with him.Today he came here.You went and spoke to him.Is it love?
Gunjan becomes shy.
D:Gunjan..be careful.We can't trust these rich business men.For them girls are a time pass.
Gunjan's joy fades from her face.
C:Manav Gareweal?No way.Adi knows him.He is a nice guy.
Gunjan smiles.
D:But love exits only in the beginning.After some time the sweetness of love disappears.Earlier I and Druv used to crave to be with each other.We used to find time to roam about.But now..Druv is always busy in his hospital.When he gets free time i'm stuck up in the school.Now there is no romance in our life.Life becomes boring fast in our busy life.So don't think this excitement will last forever.I don't believe in love.
C:I don't think so.I believe in love.I know Adi since our college days.Our romance has'nt gone sour.Still we have candle light dinners and a walk on the beach.But Gunjan..i forgot to tell you one thing about Manav.I heard that he is a divorcee.
G:He divorced only once?
C:Ya.Why did you ask like that?Teasing me?
G:No never.I know that he divorced his first wife.Did'nt he remarry?
C:No.He is single.He did'nt marry after his divorce.
Gunjan's face becomes gloomy.
C:What happened Gunjan?Suddenly you went to some other world.
D:Still thinking of Manav?
G:Yes.
D:After knowing that Manav is a divorcee also you are thinking of him?
G:Yes.I can never stop thinking of him.Because i can't forget him.
Chandni grins:Gunjan is out of control.Deeply in love with Manav..
D:What rubbish!Gunjan..you don't know anything about Manav.You don't know how his character is..why he divorced his wife..then how can you fall in love?
G:I'm not falling in love now.I fell in love with him long ago.
Chandni and Devyani are wondered.
D:What?You have seen him before Adi's birthday party?
G:Yes.Our first meeting took place long ago.And i know why he divorced his wife.
D:How?
D:Because his wife was none other than me.
Devyani and Chandni are shocked.
They:What?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow that a big twist............Pls continue........... great plot 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😲 iam really shocked nice update diffrent from other FF
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey jeni,
Thanks for the pm lovly, awosome upate dear pls update soon na can't wait for next part plssssssssssssssss
update na some other part
n yes Wow that a big twist............Pls continue........... great plot
I m waiting
love u
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
nice update.. wow wht a twist.. do continue soon

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