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Posted: 14 years ago
.sireesha.,sweginju :-thanks for waiting.
mrk_1 :-it'll be 8.30 pm as per IST

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Posted: 14 years ago

Sorry friends, I'll be updated the next part after 10 pm. I have some urgent work but I'll update tonight.

update almost done.
pls sorry , wait for some time.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part5:-

Both silent in the whole journey.

Maan:- look, geet ,I marry u but I just….

Geet looks at him and said u have no feelings for me. I know. I said earlier also, I'll not force u to any relation with me. U r free. If u loves some one, go and marry her or live with her. I have no objection but for few days, we have to do this drama for those reason.u must be think, what type of girl I'm. A girl told u to marry but no expectation from her husband, maan u know , I have lost one relation today munshi jee who is like my chacha , like my father figure but he …. Geet paused.Maan looks at her and feel bad for her then placed hand on her hand and said geet,I'm sorry.

Geet:- no , maan u r not, u know maan after received ur letter. I went to meet munshi jee to but heard his plan to k….k….kill u .I was shocked but I made decision to save u .I know u r an officer who capable to handle every situation.but still.

Maan:- geet. I can understand,

Geet:-Maan , I'm sorry

Maan:-sorry for what.

Geet:-not to trust u .I promise ,I'll never repeat this again.I was ..

Maan stop the car and said geet.I can understand in fact.If I was on ur place then also reacted like this way.so, no problem.

Geet smile and said maan, We have to in form dadi ma.

Maan:-Yea, but if we called her now then she will not understand anything.

Geet:-but maan, if any one means, chacha ,I mean munshi jee call dadi ma then.

Maan:- hmmmm, ok call her.

But geet sat there silently.

Maan:-what happen?call dadi ma.

Geet:-I'm sorry maan.I left my cell there.

Maan:-what but y?

Geet:-I was in a hurry and for got at mandir.

Maan:-Mandir. Which mandir. Shiv jee mandir or Radha krishana mandir.

Geet:- don't know.I cannot remember now.

Maan:-Grt.Miss handa.

Geet:-Excuse me.I'm Geet maan singh Khurana, don't' forget it.

Maan rolled his eyes and said take it and call her now.

Geet:- hmmmm.

Geet tried again and again but no response but after some time dadi ma called maan.

Geet looks at maan and said dadi ma.

Maan:- take it. Y r u looking at me like this.

Geet:- but,I'm feeling.

Maan:-oh when u gave me those lecture that time u didn't feel nervous.

Geet:-pls maan help na.

Maan:-no sorry darling.I'll not, u placed me here, U forced me to marry u b y ur some lame excuses and now tell dadi ma.

Geet:- Dusht Danav, Dash Sar wala Ravan.What do u think of ur self. I forced. Oyeeeee. U marry me on ur own will and u r not minor that I told u to do that and u'll do it.Forced u.

Maan:-geeeeeeeeeeeeeetttttttttt.

Geet:-look, maan,I'm ur wife , and pls give some respect , don't shout like ,….

Maan cut her and said just stop ur non sense talking and call back dadi ma.

Geet:- call back dadi ma , oh no, all because of u.

Geet call dadi ma and dadi ma said maan beta where r u?I'm worried. I just heard that geet marry to some one and flee from the house, what is this beta?I cannot believe it but munshi jee call me and in form me this .he was very upsate and crying bitterly.maan r u there?

Geet shocked to hear it then she composed herself and said dadi ma.

Dadi ma shocked to head geet.

Dadi ma:-Geet, u r with maan. How r u beta.what happen y munshi jee said me those things beta.pls tell me all are lie. Pls beta.

Geet looks at maan and plead her by her eyes to tell dadi ma something.

Maan ignored first then said put the call on speaker.

Geet do that and then dadi ma said geet, r u there, where is maan. What is this , no one is telling me the truth.What is going on there?

Maan looks at geet angrily and said dadi ma .

Dadi ma looks relief and said maan beta, how r u bete, now tell me.

Maan:- dadi ma we r coming in delhi, we will reached tomorrow morning. Pls wait and till then don't trust any one except me and geet. We will explain u everything, just trust geet, she did nothing wrong.

Trust me dadi ma and trust geet.

Dadi ma:-I know beta, I was just worried for both of u.ok, have safe journey……

Maan:- have ur dinner,

Dadi ma smiled and said yes beta, and medicine also.

Maan smiles and said good night from me and geet also.

Dadi ma smiles and said good night both of u.

Maan cut the call.

Then Geet said we will halt at nearest hotel. Then U'll drive tomorrow morning.

Maan looks at her and said no way.

Geet:-I'm not asking u just tell u do what next.

Maan:- and u think,I'll obey ur order like obedient hubby. Then forget it.

Geet:-Ok,I'll call dadi ma then.

Maan:-Geettt.

Geet:- do u remember ur back hurt by sword, yea I know u have minor cut but still, It's my mistake and I should treat u early.

Maan:- u forgot U already treat u by give some medicine to erase the pain.

Geet:- but I have clear the wounds then bandage it. Pls stop this argument and go to the nearest hotel.

Maan looks at her.

After time they reached near the hotel, maan asked the receptionist two room. Geet slapped her forehead and said babajee. Pls give him some brain. Every time messed up everything and now.

Geet come forward and hold maan's hand and said no, we want just one room, pls, booked it by mr and mrs Khurana.

Maan looks at her and then whisper, r u mad, here two room available and u asked for one room.

Geet smiled at him and said uff, pls just stop ur mouth and ask for one room, we husband –wife.

Maan heard it and suddenly realized it's true, now he is married man.

Geet to the receptionist , pls book one room , we will checked out tomorrow morning.

Receptionist looks at maan then to geet and narrowed her eyes.geet with extra sugary smiles said hurry, up, we r tired.

Receptionist:-ok, after the formality she give the room key to and suddenly asked Mr. Khurana she is ur wife right.

Geet looks at receptionist and said look……

Maan hold geet and said yes.thanks and enter the lift.

In the lift geet said maan , how dare she asked me that question?

Maan :-

Geet:- she is such…..what is her problem. Maan……… u r not letting me to show that girl to her position.

Maan:-

Geet;-I'm talking to u maan.

Maan:-

Geet looks at him angrily and said ok, don't tell any one that, I'm ur wife.

Their floor comes and maan came out from the lift while geet follow him.

Maan open the door and enter room and said do u need special invitation.

Geet came after him but stood there silently.

Maan:-look, geet,I'm not happy with this marriage. I was just agree cause of those reason but now I can clearly understand it's my fault, I'll handle those situation very well but with out this marriage. It's just ruin our future nothing more.I care for u as a friend nothing more. And for the rest of the world. Just like today, I'll tell everybody … that u r my wife, don't worry about it but geet, I'm not happy that u r behaving like my wife.

Geet listen to all this feel some one pierced her heart with knife, she control her tears and said I'm sorry.I'll never repeat my mistake and as for this marriage, yes it's big mistake but for some days, then u'll be free.

Maan know that he again hurts geet but he is helpless. The way today geet behaved it's clearly shown that geet loves him and want to work this marriage but he cannot let it………..

Geet:- if u don't mind then can I dressed ur wounds. And don't think ,I'm doing that cause of ur wife.I'm doing my duty as I'm doctor.

Maan:- I know u and trust u.

Geet:-open her bag and take medicine and cotton and bandage. She call reception for some hot water and some food for dinner..After it she cleaned the wound and then apply some medicine and tie the placed with bandage,

Geet:- done, take ur dinner and after this eat this medicine.

Maan:-thnks but I don't need any medicine , cause I don't have too much pain now.

Geet:- It's completely doctor's advice nothing more, still it's ur choice and after this geet want to leave when maan caught her wrist.

Maan:- Geet,I'm sorry. But I really want to see u happy but ur happiness with not me. Trust me.

Geet:- leave my wrist. And for ur information, I'm happy with my life. And I'll promise u today, I'll never some between ur happiness.

Maan:- U r not coming bet ween my happiness geet,I'm just telling u.

Geet:- Eat ur dinner other wise that will be cold.

Maan:- Geet.

Geet:-I'm fine, I was just carried away nothing more. U start with ur dinner. I'll be join u.Geet headed towards washroom..

Both ate their dinner silently.

Maan:- u can sleep ….

Geet cuts him and said go to ur bed and sleep there cause u r injured. I'm not in mood to argue with u. Good night.

Geet sits on the couch and close her eyes….

Maan lay on the bed but cannot sleep for sometime.

Geet: - sleep maan. U'll be tired other wise….

Maan:- same thing applicable to also geet.

Geet:-Maan,I'm not injured ,pls go to sleep.

Maan:- geet. R u angry on me?

Geet looks at maan then said no.

Maan:- then come here and sleep here .I know u trust me so, pls come here.

Geet:-maan, I can adjust here.

Maan:- then Admit that u don't trust me.

Geet:- u r very stubborn.

Maan:-yea, I'm .now come here.

Geet goes lay besides but maintain a very safe distance from maan.

Maan :- geet,

Geet:- maan, now listen to me and go to sleep. I obey ur word, pls u at least listen to me. I'll not disturb in future it's just cause of ur health.

Maan:-ok , y r u angry , good night my wife.

Geet looks at maan then turns her face another side.

Maan dost off to sleep within few mins…..geet get up and goes back to the couch and sit there. She looks at maan and said to herself, I'll go from u very soon maan. I was just doing it to save u and ur family. Dadi ma gives me shelter and I'll protect u and ur family always. I'll never forgive munshi jee who always played with our emotion……..baas, someday more,

Slowly geet also dose off to sleep.

Next day morning, maan wake up early, as his usual habit to wake up early for work out. He turns but found geet is no where. He looks at couch but she is no where in the room.

Maan:-where is she?

Suddenly Geet, came out from wash room and looks at maan who looking at her.

Geet: - sorry we r late. I told dadi ma that we will little late today.

Maan: - it's ok. Order break fast. I'll be back…….

Geet:- where r u going?

Maan:- wash room.

Geet :-kk.

After maan came out from wash room, geet tell him to eat his break fast.

Maan:- and u?

Geet:-I ate it.

Maan:- don't lie.

Geet looks at maan and said maan , pls. eat ur break fast , we r already late. and then eat this medicine.

Maan :-I'll not. Eat ur break fast .

Geet :-I'll be waiting for u in the lobby, come fast.

Geet leaves the room and maan :- this girl, never listen to me,. Always do her own way.

Maan also skip the break fast.

Maan paid all bills and heading towards the cars….Geet already standing there with her luggage.

Maan:- y r u carrying ur luggage?

Geet:-first it's not heavy have minimum things and second I don't want to bother u .

Maan going to her side and hold her shoulder from when u r bothering me for anything.

Geet:- maan , don't create scene here. We r already late.dadi must be waiting for us.

Maan left her and said now,. Pls sit in the car,.

Both are silent till they reached to delhi.

Before entering the Khurana mansion, maan:- listen geet, don't create any scene in front of dadi.

Geet:-hmm but in her mind, like I'm only the person who create scenes, baba jee y r u taking too much exam ?)

Maan looks at geet and said stop complaining to ur baba jee,.

Geet makes a face.Maan smiles and said let's go …….oh one mind.I should inform dadi first.

Geet:-y.

Maan:- pls close ur mouth un till,I'll tell u to open it again.

Geet to her mind uff, dush danav, dus sar wala raven…………

Maan called dadi. Maan :- hello dadi, we standing in front of mansion.

Dadi:-then y r u waiting there, come in.

Maan:-oh dadi.

Dadi:-What, beta?

Maan taking deep breath and then said dadi , we married.

Dadi shocked and confused to hear it.Dadi:- means beta.

Maan:-me and geet are married now.

Dadi:-what?then a long pause.

Maan wait for some time then said dadi, r u there? R u ok.

After some moments, dadi :-yes, I'm ok. Is geet with u?

Maan looks at geet who looks little guilty and shy, maan said yes dadi, wanna talk with her.

Dadi:-no, both of u come now. but don't enter the mansion until, I'll tell u

Maan:-ok dadi.

Then he cuts the call.

Maan to geet, now let's go.

Geet just nodded her head.

Both come in front of the mansion door and waiting for dadi.

Dadi came there with aarti thali.She is looking little tensed and worried.

Maan:- dadi ma oh,

Dadi raised her hand and said pls, stop for some time.

Then dadi ma taking arti both of them and said to geet. U come first and hit this kalash by ur right foot then placed ur foot on this red thali and then come here.

Geet nodded and do as dadi said.

Maan still standing .Dadi takes gee thand and said now maan, where is maan.uff u stay here.Maan come here.

Then maan enter the house and stand besides geet and said yes dadi,

Dadi: - both placed ur hands to this thali.

Geet nodded but maan said ok.

Dadi try to hide her smiles to see them like this. She wonders what happen tot hem that they marry like this.

Maan:- now dadi.

Dadi:-hmmm placed ur hand to this wall and geet u also.

Both do that.

Maan:-now, any more rasam are left.

Dadi:-yes so many

Maan :- what so many but …

Dadi:-we will talk about those rasam later.

Maan:- thank God .

Geet pulled maan's shirt .maan looks at geet then understand. Then both taking blessing from dadi.

Dadi bless them.

Maan:-Dadi , I want to tell u something about.

Dadi:- both of u go and take rest.

Maan:- but dadi..

Dadi:- go beta, bahu must be tired also. Take rest then we will talk.

Both nodded and headed towards maan's room.

Here, dadi tell servant to take their luggage from the car and take some food to their room.

Both enter the room, geet again pull maan's shirt.

Maan looks irritated and said what happen y r u pulling my shirt , tell na.

Geet looking here and there and then saw something goes there.

Maan looks at her and said what r u doing now,?

Geet write a note and give it to maan.

Maan:- what is this geet? Now u have problem to talk with me.

Geet eyes are wide and she turns her back.Maan read the note.

Maan,

May I open my mouth, I'm suffocating.

Maan rolls his eyes and said yes u can.

Geet turns and said thanks.

Maan:- u know what u r impossible.

Geet:- no wrong. I'm not u r the one who is impossible.

Dadi knock the door and said may I come in.

Maan said :- dadi, from when u r asking for permission to enter my room.

Dadi said to servants come and placed those plates there.

After this now u can go.

Dadi to maan:- now eat the lunch.then take rest , we will talk …..

Geet:- now.

Dadi looks at geet then said bahu.

Geet hold dadi's hand and said pls dadi.

Geet looks at maan then said dadi, we … we……

Maan:- dadi there is some problem cause of that we cannot tell u truth till today, that we love each other.but munshi jee against it now cause he fixed Geet's marriage to one of his close friend's son but he is not good for us and add I love geet and geet also but we r feared and have little fight some times ago so, I rejected her that time and so she also avoid me but now both of us solved the matter and marry but I'm really sorry dadi ma, that I tell u after our marriage not before it but situation is like that , so. ………..

Both geet and dadi ma looks at maan with a wide eyes.

After some time, dadi ma said hmmmm…..but u can tell me at least about it.I have also some dream about my grand son's marriage. I"m not against ur marriage but still it's ok. One mind do u tell anything about it to munshi jee?

Maan:- no.I"ll not , at least not now.

Dadi:- but y, he is geet's guardian.

Maan:- but he tortured geet and told her to forget me. Then u think,I'll call him and tell him about our marriage , no dadi ma. If anything matter now that is ur blessing and acceptance, nothing more.

Dadi:-ok. Now ear ut food and take some rest.

Dadi ma turns and said geet……….

Geet still stand there like s statue.

Maan looks at geet and think this girl , na.

Maan shook geet by hand and said darling, dadi ma calling u.

Geet looks at geet and then at dadi ma then whispered yes….

Maan shook his eyes and said now what is this?

Dadi ma:-I think geet need some rest; I'll talk to u later.

Dadi walk out from the room.

Maan :- complete the food geet.

Geet turns and said maan,

Maan close the door and said I told a big lie to save dadi ma from the shocked. Look geet, I can understand ur reason but dadi ma will not able to take it . So pls co operates it. And……we r just doing drama, nothing more, now complete the food.

Geet :-I'll not.

Maan:- looks geet, don't create problem. I have enough problem and now u r here as my responsibility so , pls and more u know when u r marry me that we will never be like normal husband wife,

Geet:-I know and don't remind me this thing again and again.U can eat .

Then geet sit in the couch and fold her arms .Maan shook his head said last time I told u eat the food.

Geet:-

Maan:-ok fine as u wish.

Suddenly maan pull her forcefully and said give u another chance eat the food or I"ll forcefully …..

Geet looks at maan and said u r mad, u r truly dush danav, dus sar wala danav……..I'll not eat food, do what ever u want.

Maan's grip on her hand and waist gradually tight and geet closed her eyes due to pain.

Maan saw her face and free her.Maan:-pls geet, listen U'll not take anything from morning and it's evening now pls geet eat something,

Geet turns and said I'll not.

Maan:-I don't know u r that kind of girl who wants to ful fill ur wish by such stupid game.

Geet shocked to hear this and said what do u mean maan?

Maan:-I mean u want to marry me and placed some stupid reason now when I told u that I'll never accept u as my wife then u start ur new drama by this hunger strike.I know u now very well geet. U not different from any other .U r also same.I think ………………

Geet eyes full of tear and said complete ur accusation maan.I want to know what do u think about me?

Maan:- look ur self geet and u'll know about it.

Maan left the room without touching the food.

Geet sit there and crying and said y maan , y? u r changed u r not same maan.I promised u that I'll never forced u for this relationship and u just told me those thing.y maan. U r changed and our friendship also changed but as I promised u I'll leave u soon baas just few days , wait , u'll be free .

Here in the down stair dadi ma saw man left the mansion and he looks really angry.

Dadi:- now what happen?

After some time geet came there and said dadi ma.

Dadi ma:- yes beta. I'll think to tell u about ur reception.

Geet:- dadi, we will arranged reception later but not now.ur health is not good .

Dadi ma:-but beta.

Geet:-pls dadi ma.

Dadi ma:- do u fight with maan,

Geet:- no, dadi ma . he is sad to hear that ,

Dadi:- that.

Geet:- today is karva chauth so.

Dadi:-oh yes, I forgot it.anyway do u eat anything in the morning. I have to send u some sargi na. but.

Geet:-it's ok dadi ma.yes.

Dadi:- wait for some time….I'll call some one who can put mehendi on u. ok beta.Thanks for coming to my maan's life.

Geet smiles and said thanks dadi ma.

Then full days, going on , ladies put mehendi on geet's hand and then at the evening geet's dressed up like a bride .

Every one praise her . some one said look at her mehendi , it's too dark.wow maan loves u.

Geet looks at her hand and think maan loves me , that will never happen in my this life time.

Then every one attending the puja and listen the katha.

After this all waiting for moon.After some time moon come ut and every one break their fast , except geet.

Dadi:- beta break ur fast, don't know when maan will return.

Geet:-no dadi ma,I'll wait.

Dadi:-ok, but go to ur room and wait there. U'll tired also, take some rest, when maan will come,I'll call u.

Geet nodded and goes to her room.

After entering the room, geet close the door and lay on the bed and crying there. After some time she dose off to sleep due to too much stress.

Here in the hoshiyarpur, police arrest munshi jee, as maan logged complain against munshi jee for fraud their business, doing numerous illegal work……….

Police arrest Rishav and rahul also.

In the police station, Munshi jee, Rishav and rahul sitting.

Munshi jee:-it's my fault to trust u Rishav, other wise, my plan is full proved.

Rishav:-no it's not my fault, all cause of ur daling daughter geet.

Munshi jee:- who told u to kidnapped her and when u kidnapped her who told u free her and maan.At least u should kill that maan.

Rahul:- maan beat us.

Munshi jee:- wow one man army, he alone beat u all and u all were standing there to see it.

Rishav:-don't get hyper now and think for next move.

Munshi:-I was planned for this for years ago when I found geet,but everything is just ruined by maan.I'll never leave u maan singh Khurana.

Rahul:- but geet is ur own daughter

Munshi:-yes, but I want boy but my wife give me this girl who is always bring problem with her.

(note this is some peoples thought only boy can bring luck but not girls, nothing personal or anything , if u all want this part will be deleted.)

Flashback:-Munshi jee's wife died after their daughter born.Munshi take his daughter to his relative's house but after some days he take her and placed her near the old school of hp.then savitri devi take his daughter and from that days he planned to get Khurana mansion and their property by his name.

Munshi jee's daughter geet, but on one know her true identity in fact geet also don't know anything about it.. munshi jee tried hard to convince savitri devi about maan, geet's marriage and succeed but maan reject it and again munshi jee planned a new thing but his hatred towards maan gradually increased and when this time maan came to hp he wants to kill him but fails then geet also flee from his prison, all his planned fails and now maan starts investigate about his works and soon many things will be come out but before that he have to finish some important thing )

Flashback end.

( note:- Munshi jee is that kind of person who wants to rich in shot cut way , so when he see savitri devi struggled with her only grandson after her losses ( her son, daughter in law and grand son) . munshi je came and offer to help her. He also poor that time. Savitri devi give him a job then gradually munshi jee became close and plot his plan there,Savitri devi un ware from all of this)…….

Here in the delhi, maan came back and saw dadi waiting for him……..

Maan:- y r u waiting for me?

Dadi:- maan u really loves geet or u show me that u loves her. Or if u don't loves her at least care for her.

Maan:- I don't understand anything, where is geet.

Dadi:- don't u know she kept karva chauth for u long live.

Maan now understand y geet kept avoid to eat food.

Maan:-oh I for got it, I'm sorry where is she? I'll meet her now.

Maan runs to wards his room and found close door.

Maan knock the door, and said geet open the door, geet open the door.

After some moments geet open the door and saw maan stand there.

Maan looking at her and then hugged her tightly and said I'm really sorry geet.I don't know and but still what ever I told u it's not right, I was angry and I just …….

Here geet was shocked and then try to free herself.

Maan free her but said come one break ur fast.

Geet turns and said I have my food and break the fast already.

Maan holds her wrist and said don't lie to me.I know u, come on. Other wise, I'll tell u dadi that U r fighting with me.and u know.

Geet looks at maan and said let's go.

Maan smiles and said that's like my geetu….

Geet and maan walking towards stair and geet looking at moon then at maan and then doing puja. Then maan break her fast.

Geet:- now eat this.

Maan eat sweet and said but I was just skipped the food.

Geet:-I know, I'm no

But stopped to see dadi ma there …

Dadi ma:-what's going on?Again, maan scold u………

Geet:-no dadi ma.

Dadi ma:- good. Now come with me. Maan u go to ur room and take ur cloths which are laying on the bed and take it and change and then come to meet me.

Maan:- but dadi ma.

Dadi ma:-do as I say. No more arguments.

Maan:-ok.

Maan going to his room and saw a sherwani placed there. He looks at the sherwani and said what is this now.

Here , in the dadi ma's room dadi ma give geet a red, and white lehenga and some jewelry and said take it and wear this.

Geet :- but dadi ma.

Dadi ma:-pls beta. It's my wish,

Geet:- but dadi ma, I'm already ready and again .

Dadi ma:-beta this dress have some purpose.

Geet:-Purpose?

Dadi:-uff, now go ready now.I'll be back soon.

After geet wearing everything, she stand in front of mirror when maan came there and said dadi ma where r u?

Geet turns and saw maan who is looking extremely handsome and dashing.

Maan who is dumbstruck by geet's beauty.Geet looks at maan lovingly but suddenly remember everything said by maan, she turns and said dadi ma is not here.

Then Dadi ma enter the room and said oh toh both u are is here. Good.now give this to geet.help her to wear it.

Maan:- what is this.

Dadi:-Payal. Make her wear it.

Geet:- but dadi ma.

Dadi:- one min, what happen to both of u. look like u r trying to hide something from me.

Maan and geet both said no dadi ma.

Maan come forward and take geet's hand and made her sit on the bed then take her feet and placed it on his knee.

Geet looking shy and try to remove her feet from his knee.But maan looks at her and said geet, don't blush too hard, u placed ur feet many time on me.

Dadi ma looks shocked and surprised and giggles.

Geet shocked and looks at maan who is smiling to see the action of dadi ma and geet.

After complete his work , he looks at geet and said beautiful.

Geet looks down.Dadi ma :- now maan take and go to ur room.It's ur first night. I know u married yesterday but in this house it's ur first night.

Maan takes geet in his arms and said ok dadi good night.

At the corridor, geet:-pls put me down.

Maan:- y, u r not heavy and I can carry u.

Geet:- but I don't want.

Maan:- ok then he puts her down to the bed and said so, what's up mrs geet maan singh Khurana.

Geet looks at maan and said I'll sen u divorce paper after two days then U'll be free.

Maan looks shocked then said really. Ok but what about dadi,

Geet looks at maan then looks down but tears falls from her eyes.

Maan held her chin and said geet, I'm sorry.I don't want to hurt u but it's…..

Maan weeps her tears and said sorry geetu, now don't cry,. We r friends na. friends also fight with each other. Like us.

Geet sobbing and said u said too many things to me.

Maan:-Ok I hold my ears now pls don't cry and see here are our dinner, eat some food.pls now no more argument , karva chauth also over , so pls.

Geet:- hmmm,

Both ate their dinner silently…

After that maan said geet u can remove ur jewelry then sleep on the bed.

Geet:-ok but where u'll sleep?

Maan:-I'll …..in the couch.

Geet:- and what about ur back injury.

Maan:-Geet,I'm trained soldier .I can handle it.

Geet:- u r still angry on me na.

Geet turns and said I'll leave tomorrow.

Precap:-Next day morning, geet wake up and found herself on maan's arm. She tries to remove his hands.

Maan and geet again argue with each other.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello all

updated next part in page 41.pls read it and comment it.
hope u all like it.........
here I try to clear many puzzle if anything left then that will be clear in coming parts.
and all my lovely readers pls add me or send me buddy request then I can send u pm for this ff.
one more imp thin this is not simple love story .Maaneet are married but there is still lefts lots of drama.
love
rakhi
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.. luved the cute maneet fights.. munshi ji is really bad.. Wow Geet doin the KC vrath...precap looks gr8.. do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesooooome....
superb.....
fab.upd.
loved it........
do cont.soon....
thanx for the pm.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update....

thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part!!
Thanks for the PM..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
Loveeee the part.
Continue soonnnn.
Thanxxx for the pm.



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Heyyyy there tHanks for the update I loved as it's very different and I can't wait for the drama which is going to hAppen.

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