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Posted: 14 years ago

There was just dust, thunder and fear all around. The sound of the blast made everyone forgot everything and just rashed towards the safest area and than the worst happened, random shot out strted, it seem tht some one was shooting rapidly without even thinking where to target and whom to.

I was watching my family at the other end of the road and I was stacked this end. And than I was pulled with forced and pined against the wall.

With a shock I looked up to him, ya him, his hold was telling me its someone him, but I cant see his face, it was to dark, moreover he was so close to me, completely covering myself in him.

I tried to free myself from his hold, that made his hold to strong, again I tried and he looked at me with anger, I can just see his eyes, hazel brow eyes with so much depth, moreover blaze. He didn't utter a word but his eyes told me he didn't want me protest, neither to speak. But how I cant.

He again was looking at the disasters condition at the market, after the blast and still going on firing. Concluding he grip my hand and pulled me to the opposite direction to run for.

Man: chalo yaha se…he was pulling me, and I was still standing here

Nupur chaloo yaha se….

He knew my name , did he called my name…

Nupur: mein ny nhi jana tumhary sath…

He stoped and turned towards me, n looked at me , as if telling me to trust his honest eyes, as if was questioning me, but what……

OH god, I was busy admiring my luck at the sight infront of me, she was standing few steps away from me, strange peace and solace I was feeling inside, when I heard a sound and everything changed, with force I was hited to ground but when getting my senses I just looked and was looking for her fanatically, I body lying died here, some there, they were nt in single peace, my heart was sinking and I was dying every single minute. No lord this cant be the end of my love, but than I saw a girl standing in middle lost and hell scared, hugging herself so tighly, Nupur scared, gosh it's a sight to watch. I thnk God but than the shooter start the firing randomly….

Not thinking for moment I rashed towards her, n grip her shoulder I took her to corner, stupid was standing in center like n idiot to b target . how can she be so carless, didn't she knew who precious she is.

I pinned her n covered her with my self, I didn't dare to look at her, I know I'll get lost in her, romancing at street is not ethical, and I am a respectable citizen.

She was struggling to get out of my hold, whn I look at her, she got that im not gonna loss this time, n she innocently like a scared kitten lowered her eyes. It better to leave this place, I cant take her to her family now, there are at better save area. Whne I pulled her to make her come with me as if I have evry right to , she didn't moved rather strt arguing…at that mo moment I need to show her my face,

She was looking at me, n I was finding answerer in her face, did she remember me, or I was just a mere uselss milestone in her life. Ya I have grown up, I bit changed to, matured a lot, afterall im 30 now.

Her face was showing some sign of surprise..but the moment broke as the sound of firing strts again , n now I forcefully pulled her n made her run, in the next lane my car was parked, I forcefully made her sit, n locked her door, rashed to my side and than towards my home.

Nupur: mjhy jany do pls ….her voice was full of fear

The pierced me like anything, so I was some useless milestone she did'nt recognized me, rather she is fearing her safety with me, gosh , that's to much to be taken.

I turned and looked surprised towards her, she was again finding answer in me.

Man: dekho im not gonna harm u, abhi u cant go that way, u just need to be at safe place. U have ur cell tell them ur safe and trust me ur, tum yaha nhi rah sakti pls understand..

She was still looking fearfully at me, did knew what is right or wrong…

His voice was similar, reminds me of someone, so as his eyes, but it cant be , he is looking so much decent and mature, that someone can nevr be, but God knows wht made me trust him , I didnt said a think and he smiled and continue focusing on drive as it was also not less than an adventure, as hustle and bustle was there throughout the city

MY god his smile, his smile is too similar to that someone too, is he, no cant be ..shall I ask, don't act stupid..

Nupur: tum mera naam kasay jantay hoo….

Ahh so finally miss bhushan is acting like busty bhuhan, I chuckled and I see the typical idiotic frown on her face, but to my luck my home is there, n now she will knew whom I am.

I steal a glance to her, her expression changes to waoo, and than to "whts this"….so she is getting on the right track. Common busty bhushan aren't getting it ….

I asked her ot come out and she reluctantly did,

N whn I knocked my door, ya my mom has an special habit of locking the inner door of the bungalow,

She almost lost her balance, her jaw was droped n she was just looking at my mom, seems her voice was choked , n I was smiling and than chuckled at her expression she was looking like the most cutest species ever, adorance and compliment I am giving to Nupur bhushan….ahh life

Nupur: maaa…the scream was louder than that of the blast, I tell u ….

N I closed my ears as a reflex

Mayank: gores Nupur, cant u learn to talk in deci belles, rather kilo bells….

Nupur: she turned around to see me….and than return to maa..but her mouth was as it is hunged up….

Maa yeah…maa yeah ..yeah

Mayank: yeah yeah eyah…..wht busty bhushan ur record got stacked, such a roden soul ur at this AGE

Nupur: wht do u mean at this age han, nasty creature of the stoneage town…..

Mayank: ha ha I m of stone age town a, ur are suffering from amnesia, and wht u r sayin that to me, tum mera nam kasay janty hoo…mimicking…

Shilpa anty has now crossed her hands and was leaning to the entrance of her home…..enjoying this sight after years….

Nupur: tu that is'nt my fault, when the gr8 OLD, filthy people, have just arrived from the laundary han…..tumahra baal kaha gay..han ..uur gay, yeah tu tumhara doosara janam hoga hain na, ek dam se KHUMBAK KARAN, se kuch insaan types lag rah haoo

Mayank: oh really …in full on irritation….than wht happen to u …..the nastiest people of the city, OMG looked at ur hairs, seems like a girl nhi….mjhy itna miss kiya k baal bahra liyaan han…

Nupur: miss kerti hai tumhain meri joti…..jo log dosto ki qadar nhi kertay…I am nt bother to them ..samhjy…

Mayank; Nupur..dont u know…pause.forget it …pause…why the hell im giving u explanation….

Nupur: have I asked u haan…..

SA: bsss…she shouted…uff…tum dono aj kuch 11 years bad mil rahy hoo…aur herkatein wohi hai…nupur kam se kam us stoneage k daur se nhi tu mjhy se tu mil lo…

She almost jumped to SA and hugged her tight

Nupur: OG god maa I soo missed u…..

SA: ab andar tu ajao….

Ya it has been 11 years I went abroad, I was studying there, I left my colloge in between as got a scholarship and went to state to completed my studies, within few months I called mom to, u most be sensing that me and Nupur seems to be so closed than y not any contact.

Sometimes u take decision thinking tht they r best but than the turn to be worse, n I took not to contact her decion as with the day I reach state I was missing her like anything, evry thing changed for me, everything lost…

Nupur and I was besties at colloge, ya me was like long hairs, pretty long I tell u

Nupur: Mayank panteene k add k lyan model k audition hai….ja tu chal ja..kuch kam wam mil jay ga…kahbhi tu kam aay teri yeah lambi, gahani zulfay….

Mayank: jelous , tu tu ganji hai…..

Nupur: aay teri tarha gandi nhi hoon smajhy,, short hairs , no maintenance, ur stink u know that\

Mayank: I don't u do, me subha he shampoo ker k aya hoon smajhi, yeah tu hai jo wk mein one time shampoo kerti hai..groesss….eee…

I use to have long hairs, tie a band around the head, she use to have boy cut, tie a band around her head too, we use to have a pathetic rock band, uff pathetic I tell u and for the purpose to be cool I have pierced my one ear, and she has her eys brow.. as I wasn't allowed by the two ladies , mom and her , to get a tattoo , I made it with oil paints , actually she made with oil paint,

N God tht day , and the way she made I can never get over it,

Nupur: Mayank hilna maat, phir kaho gay karab hogaya

Mayank: abay yaar tickling hoti hai tu mien kiya kero

Nupur: mard k bacha ban stonage….

Mayank: dekh mjhy tang maat ker nupurrr….

She was making at tattoo, were, that now made me blush , I know boys don't, but that do sometime…boy…oh boy….ok fine I am a man now, thik hai ab ……

I asked her to made a tattoo on my chest, mid of it , wch strt from left side of my neck reaching down the chest, n that so of a dragon….heheh….

She has beautiful colour, art ability in her, so I asked her , n at that moment honestly it doesn't matter to us,.

She was leaning completely on me, n I was lying on bench…no no…not collage, y home roof top…our aaadaa…..

Her one hand was till elbow was resting on my shoulder n neck, and other was busy drwing the art, she was almost lying on me, I can actually even today feel her breath, she use to take glance at the picture we took out from net wch was lying beside me, n she turned her face back n forth continusly and if by chnce I'll raise my head, we would have….ahem ahem…ya I am blushing again….

That was the first time I found her closeness, to much to tolerate, but she is she was not at all bothered…

Nupur: Mayank ab tum hilay tu dragoon ki jaga dragoon fly bana do gi ..pakka

Mayank: Nupur mein kiya ker….

Oh my god…now thts too much to handle….she is teasing me just imagine a girl teasing u..

She was slowly, n slightly caressing my skin…n loosing my strength to stay clam I rashe a stood by

Mayank: tumhain sharam nhi ati ..ek shareef larky ko seduce kertay hoa

Nupur: kya…shreef, tum, kaha se, shreef larko ko baal asy nhi hotay, na woh tattoo ban ker ghoom tay …aur woh bhi larki se…haaa….aur mein tumhain seduce kerti …

Mayank: mana ker raha hoon asa nhi kero ,…magr nhi

Nupur: chup kero….tu colours merge kasay kero gi ullu…..wasy bhi hogaya..dekh..

I turned around to look and mirror and I tell u that was eve better than what was in picture,as an impulse I hugged her tight..

Mayank: thnkiii……ur the most happening stud...

Nupur: Mayank haat….oh freakkk

I broke apart n brust out load, it was her favt white kurta she love to wear on jeans, always and its now completely an mirror image of wht is on my skin…..

Nupur: Mayank tu mary ga meray hatho rukh….

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She chuckled at the picture hanging on my house wall, where she has a vase in her hand and I m saving myself…courtesy my mom, she took the snap…

Mayank: OUCh…I smiled

Nupur: lol…tumhary hath kya kiya hasher kiya tha na mein ny

Mayank: ji…meri mom k favt vase gaya …lol

Nupur: kitny, careless, aur weird hotay thay hum …god…tumhari shakl dekho….aur ab dekho, how can any1 recognized u, no french beard, hair neatly cuted, insaan lag rahy hoo..Kumbak karan….

Mayank: kaha ka khumbak karan, ab tu sonay ko bhi nhi milta…

If ur thinking she didn't beated me with vase, ur mistaken..she did…

Mayank: Nupur

SA: Nupur, Mayank ajao khana kah lo chalo….u called home na

Nupur: ya maa…..mom also shouted knowing ur back..

SA: hay I soo missed my shoping friend I tell u…

Nupur: ya atleast some one did missed some on

Ahh ha so ms bhuhan is mocking on me, I was about to tell u how much I missed u, but for the first time I hate my mom…itni karab timing ufff…

I lost my old self, actually didn't find it worth any more, it was there that I only study, i just want to finished it up as soon as possible and rash back to her, distance strengthen the bond, made people cum close, so true it was in my case.

Distance I don't know wht made impact on her, but I lost myself, n found myself heads over heal in love with her, everything around my life just everything strted to gave me peace when it just the way she liked..evrything is now for her, by her , wished with her…

Nupur: lagata hai kumbak karan khary khary soo gaya…..

I looked at her.. meeting after 11 years, has no excitement no effect on her, maybe I was thinking to much and some how it never matter, friend came in life and went away it me who is still standing at the same place…

I am cuming u guys strt, I excuse my self saying I'll freshen up, my mom agreed as she can read me completely , I have thought when I'll meet her, this will happen that will happen, she is gonna beat me , hug me, shouted at me..but nthing happened as sort of that, nthing.

Even looking at the house she didn't got any vibe, it decored the way my mom n she always use to discuss, same colour , same wall of memories, same dining area, same room of ours, sorry mine…

Common Mayank u need to go down today u cant get locked ur self and drench ur self in her memories, u always wanted her one glimpse so u have it as ur gift today. Ya this friendship day I asked lord to pls let me see her and so wish is granted than why to complain…

I reach down n took my place, no not my usually she had occupied it, she and mom were continuously talking and I was just nt in a mood to, ya, no, I donot know, was my way of interaction.

Some how I have lost hope, n lost my words too.

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fizu
what an amazing OS dear
oye mayu with longgg hair- BY GOD ye kya ho rha hai
waha GUL ki update main mayu was girly- here u portryed mayu as panku type(panku means a boy with long hair with eaarrngs. lol lol)
yaar flashback part was damn cute- specially tatoo part..lol
fizu u just wrote it beautifully
now im waiting for next prt
janu do update ext part soon


Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely Os dear
I am terribly waiting for next part thanks for pm
cont soon


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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely one
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
feeling so sorry for mayank. helplessness is the worst of all the feelings. but when you take some wrong decisions, they have their consequences.
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Posted: 14 years ago
bechara mayank..feeling sorry for him...waiting for next part.plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderful start..
Cant stop laughing imagining how Mayur luks in the past..and the dragon tattoo was cute😳
Poor Mayank..but I have a feeling that Nupur also loves him..
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it...
awesome OS...👏
waiting 4 d next part...

wow Mayank having long hair n Nupur boy cut...god cant imagineee...😲😲😲

update soon...
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
this is really fab!!!!...its fantastic...
would love if u write a second part to it please...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow this is so good lovely os
mayank and long hair and nupur with short hair they were gr8 friends
wating to read the next part
😊

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