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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum update dearie...totally loved it alot
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing os😊 pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
so sweet os
luved mayank n nupur look...mayank with long hair and nupur with short hair...wat a combination
luved the flashback part n nupur tattooing on mayank chest..and he felt something fr her...grt
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
thats a v v interesting update..cant wait 4 the next part..
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful . plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fiza, wonderful os dear.
amazing
just loved it.
OMG!!! mayank with long hair...french beard n dragon tattu n earring...OMG!!! it was so ...so...weired...lolz
i cnt express my proper reaction.
bt loved it.
loved d flashback most.
it was grt.
waiting for next update.
continue soon
thanks for the pm.


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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update dear...
mayank long hair.lol lol...kiya lag raha huga...
tht was really amazing...
loved thm yar... 🤗 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello

This as many of u may have guessed, is specially written for friendship day, thts 2morow.

Its dedicated to all the lovly friends I got here, came as blessing in my life..last part of story u may find ridiculous but its worth reading for the set of girls belonging to terriost gp…

This for my friends from me..special JIYA JI, Sujata, valiyah, aswathy, maha and my janu Hitler faria..

Suja , faria and jiya specially faru do read last part carefully….wasy tum sab k liyan kuch na kuch hai…if u get it….

Thnku all speiclly u FARIA who came as a reader, conconeditiy talked , and we gel to each other like anything, thnks for taking me as I am theSADu…lov ya

Lov ya all

Fizaa….cascade, khumbak karan…fiza JI…lol

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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PART :2

Mayank: Nupur anty ko bata do ..abhi halat thik nhi, I'll drop u home 2morow early in moronig, pakka…mom..my head is still aching can I take rest…

SA; oki…

Mayank: good night

Nupur: I kept standing there for long until, his slow step make him reached his room, TURTLE I tell u, he even finishes his food always at the end, but today he was behaving so cold, y, he didn't talked to me and left his dinner, nor after dinner, I though we have so much to share…but than …

SA: kya hua

Nupur: is ko kiya hua..asay kyun baat ker raha hai…

SA: woh ab asa hi hai Nupur, itni hi baat kerta hai…aur tum joa poch lo us se

Nupur: per woh tu rest kerny gaya hai

SA:: acha tumhain kab se itni formalities k kayal honay laga woh bhi Mayank k case mein haan….

She is right, I have evry right to slam this nasty , idiot , ullu , and the k series man, how dare he talk to me like that

Nupur: I need to take care maa…im cuming

She chuckled and winked and I rashed to his room, it was horrifyingly dark…God this stupid man has really changed, he hates siting in dark, he actually is afraid of it , I tell u, he always is…ahh there it is..

Nupur: tumahry tu sar mein dard tha…aur yaha garay pardosi ki beti ko taraty hoo( gazing on grils)

Mayank: a surprise voice at my back, I just chukled.

Nupur: ary Mayank barish…tumhary baal tu cut gay phir bhi

He chukled more…

Nupur: nhi Mayank pls apny baal band lo…ufff…tuhari yeah gani zulfay ghata chah chay ki aur phir bin mosaam barsaat…

Myanak: poiting finger, mera baalo ko kuch maat kaha samhjiii…

Nupur: oh hello…silence and all, kiya hoo umer k sath sath bolny ki shaktii bhi chali gai kiya….

Mayank: kasi hoo…

This isn't a question I was expecting, tht is even in a weak voice, pls Mayank dont, u will broke me too….

Nupur: tumhian kiya fark parta hai….as I accompany him on the side…

Mayank: hm..mjhy wasy bhi kisi cheez se kaha farak parta hai…tumhain parta hai..have u just tried to find out where I am , or see wht I am doing

Nupur: if u have lost ur memory tu may I recall it, ap ny mjy sirf jany ka batay tha aur kuch nhi

Mayank: ya ya mera email id tu tumahry pass tha hi nhi hai na …

Nupur: tu tum bhi tu contact kersakty thay na …nhi ..tum kyun kero gay

Mayank: han I cant…u know how difficult it was for me , you know everything, If I would have I would have lost last strength in me, per tumhain kiya….

Nupur: Mayank

Mayank: nhi kiya Mayank…tumhain tu mjhy se baat bhi nhi kerni tu jao ab yaha kyun aai hoo

I was smiling at his childish tone, n so vulnerable to ...

Nupur: mayankk

Mayank: he turned to me ..kya hai….

I hugged him tight…

This warmth is toxifying, it's a wave of paradise for me, with in sec I wraped her in my arms , tighly mayb crashing her but I don't care, if there is any possibility of more nearness I would have done that too..i just dotn want to loss her

This such a different and complete feeling, so long I was missing this place near ur heart, his so much possessive hold is change in our hug, by arrythmaic heart is another, n im losing my self is also to be added, an to top the list, I don't want to get out of here

Mayank: missed ya…mere whisper it was near my ear.. I can feel shivers , crashed his colloar in my fist…

She snuggled more and I crashed her more..

Mayank: u wont leave again

Nupur; I never u did…I feel her voice shivered but….i broke apart

Mayank: I left u haan..but I was always there but u never bothered to know im dead or alive….

Nupur: vampire don't die so u cant I know…..

Mayank; if breathing doesn't means so

His eyes her giving me shivers, his words are acting like blaze, hi touch is making me weak…im losing at my strength tht was guarding so many emotions, of longing , desires, incompleteness in side me….

He grip my hand furiously n walked in side room, taking out a parcel he puted harshly in my hand, and went back to terrace…after he has pased a strong glare at me….

Opening it I smiled widely,,, wider than widely actually …..

I always thought , is this from him…but always console myself tht this idot nevr remember his own birthday, his examination timetable ya I need to remind him evrytime, else he will prepare for wrong paper, so how can he remember friendship day.

And thn if bychnce he did, flowers and cards oohhh nooo, he knew I hate such chessy thing and he himself is allergic to flowers, and cards he always find waste of nature…ya ya tree made paper, paper made card, so for him paying card he will die with global warming…gosh such n evr reaction

This parcel is what I am receiving from past 9 years on evry friendship day, a card simply written happy friendhip day, cherish life….and a white lilly ,

Today to the contrary it has a red flower to attached with it, plus card have someline too…

" I know its out of trend to tell this to u this day, but his day made me what I am today,

I know it may sound chessy, stupid or filmi, but than this is what it always has been everyday,

Ur thought, ur prescnce, ur aura, ur touch, ur skin, ur breath, ur scent, ur voice is all,

All that has been hold inside me these years long, I wish I could say u staying right infront of u , but losing u one more time, I don't have strength too, so here I am not on my knees neither bowing down my head, want ur permission to stand beside u through thick n thin, to wash away ur tears, to hold ur hand , to strengthen u, to tell u im there, whn u need me or not need me, when u want me or when u don't want me,

MS Nupur bhushan I have n will, love and care for u, always, as I do….

Let me introduce my self to u….

Stoneage, I hope u remember…or may b…

This is undefinalbe feeling she was having reading this, he suppose to post it today but he found me , so he didn't, but wait a min ..wht the hell he has wriiten

Nupur: Mayank I am gona kill u for this..

She said n I shuted my eyes tighly, I feel my heart finally drown in flood of emotions, my head droped down, losing evry hope….

Nupur: wht did u wrote…..han

Myanak: wht evr I felt

Nupur: so u feel this

Mayank: han

Nupur: tum ny asa socha bhi kasay

She was saying full on ager n he plainly

Mayank: socha nhi hai, I feel that ..n I have no regret on that

Nupur: I will make u regret on this ur whole life….

Tum ny yeah lika kasay

Mayank: pen see….

Nupur: tumahri woh ungli na thor do….

Mayank: thor do….aur kuch bach hai woh bhi thor do

Nupur: I how dare u write " I hope u remember" she mimic

Mayank: hainnn….

Nupur: han tu.nhi how dare u worte that

Mayank: tu tumhai uper walay kisi words se problem nhi hai

Nupur: han ..per us ko chor tum ny yeeah kasay likha

Mayank: us ko kasy jhoro…uski tu pakarna hai…tu tum ghusa islyan nhi hoo tht I love u

Nupur: nhi per tum nyy eah kyun likha

Mayank: I need ur answerer right now

Nupur: first anwere me

Mayank: chup ker…..forgot that abhi answer me

Nupur: amnesia tumhain tum bhool ho gay..mein nhi bholti ..smahjhy

Mayank: samhj gaya …per asnwere me

Nupur: kya samhj gay…tumhain pata hai mjhy kitan bora laga tah tum asay hi chlay gay, phir contact bhi nhi rekha..mjhy ,..mjhy laga tum bhool gay…mil gai ho gi koi aur…tattoo banatay banaty seduce kernay wali….mein kitan roi …just image mein meiin…..roii..her friendship day ..jab yeah stupis idiot se without name card mjhy milta tha

Mayank: tu tumhin paat nhi tha k yeah mein hoskat hoon

Nupur: nhi yeah hoskata hoon kya kiya matlab hai…ho tu vijay bhi sakta tha, rahual bhi

Mayank: rahul…woo woo …tu us se abhi bhi contact hai…saala mer maar bhol gaya kya

Nupur: nhi bhola woh….her rooz taunt kerta tha…Mayank kaha hai…ab kaun bachy ga…dil tu chata tha bolo as if he cares…per nhi izaat ka sawal tha na

Mayank: wht do u mean as if I care….nupur I always did care..i love u yaar

Nupur: nhi nhi…sirf ap hi tu mahan hai …as if I dont love u …

His full on irritating expression changed to grin and than smirk whn he looked at the "wht itni jaldi kyun bool diya" wal expresiion

Nupur : I didn't mean that

He was nooding yes with a grin , n sliding his hand on her waist, pulling her closed to him…

Maynk don't dare to, no way mayankkk

Mayank: as if u meant that ….

Saying so he captured her lips with his in kiss, slowly and seductively feeling the love and passion he has, and actually they have craved and have lost hopes to …..

Brokeing aprt he looked at her…..n smiled..

Maaynk: breathing heavly….how many time u practice kissing so deeply

Nupur: she looked at him …..I disgusting creature …I dreamed evry day, n have practically practice tht many time to perfect…sarcastically

Mayank: nupuuur….how many time u kissed sumone else…haaan

Nupur: wht u want me to check and count, how I will remember

Mayank: u kissed sum1 else than me…how could u …he was behaving like a child

She smiled at his cutest expression and disblevie, how can he even think so , she griped his hairs tighly to tell him how best she is At THIS and clearing his all apprehensions, showing how much she love only him like this…..

Broking apart

Nupur: don't u dare leave me again

Mayank: am I nuts

Nupur: u doubt ….

SA: Mayank…teri bhook kahtam hogai hai kiyaaa

Mayank: kaha maa..abhi tu aur baar gaii…

Nupur: maa…choro…woh tumary liyan khana laga rahi hoon gi…saduu…naraz tu asay hoaty ho..k bs..…chalein Mayank JI….

Mayank: chlo…Nupur JI…..tum se clarification mangni hai abhi…

Nupur: chal hat…mein koi clarification nhi day rahi bs….

Mayank: tumhary tu achy bhi day gay…

They were cuming out of the room, still arguing

Mayank: per tum rahaul se abhi bhi baat kerti ho

Nupur: meri marzi…..

Mayank: kalmu..

Nupur: don't start ur k series

SA: ap yeah K series kiya hai…

Mayank: mom ap k samany

SA: kyun kya itna romantic baat hai

Nupur: maa is batmezz ki hi ijaad kerda hai..series of galiyaa…

SA: k se….

Mayank: han kalmuhi…isk agay beep beep….

She moved forward and spread her hand near his head as he cam near dinng table

Mayank: maa pls baal maat karab keroo

SA: beta karab nhi ker rahi sahi ker rahi hoon…she said and winked moving to kitchen to take dinner out …

After dinner. I was siting with shilpa anty we were catching things we lost in these years, wht she is doing wht I m ….

Mayank: tu cascade kya ker rahi hoo

Nupur: hilter is kafi zayada popular ..interior decorator hoon samhjy

Mayank: aur tu tum kuch ker bhi nhi sakti

Nupur: tumhar yeah ho ghar hai na kuch kcuh ghar jasa meri hi wajah se lag raha hai samjhy

SA: wasy kiya pyar hai nhi..sab kuch tumhari pasand ka…nupur..tum ny

Mayank: mom…tum coffee nhi pila rahin

SA: nhi ..mein sonay ja rahin ..tum Nupur ko us k room dekho do…I mean tum dono k…aur Nupur subha mein bhi chla rahi hoon tumhary ghar

Nupur: sure maaa…mjhy pata hai is hitler k sath rehna muskil hai

SA: is lyan tu ab se muskil mein tumhain dalny wali hoon….ab tum sabhal zindai bhar is ko….

Good night…

Nupur: tu Mayank ji mera kaunsa room hai

Mayank: aay Nupur ji pls…

Griping her hand he took her and open the door …

Nupur: yeah tu Dracula ho mjhy pata hai per itna adhera …

Mayank: ander aao …ya khabi andhera nhi hota….reaching inside as he switch on the button the whole room lighten up with lights, and gliters….it was a huge room, empty too, with sum picture of them on a wall, a big picture in center of them…and a window on one corner…to other corner was a door…

Nupur: yeah darwaza…he close his eyes in yes and smile…and she rashed to the end…..OMG Mayank…tum ny yeah sab kuch wasa hi hai….

Mayank: haina …

Nupur: tum ny kasay kiya ..yaha asi koi jaga hosakti hai ….

Mayank: ur wish my command…dekho ik taraf yeah city k center mein hai aur dosri taraf…ur favt sea…he slided his hand and backed huged her…

Nupur: it unbelievable….

He pressed his lips softly on her shoulder,.,

Nupur: mayankk

Mayank: I waited so long for this Nupur…..

Nupur: nhi bridge per tum akelay tum wait ker rahy thy ….mein tu yaha tafree ker rahi thi haina

Mayank: chukled…nupurs….dance…

She nooded n yes…

Mayank: music…hmm

Nupur: cell phone mein kuch nhi hai kiya …..

Pulling her colliding her to himself…he griped her waist as she put her hand on his shoulder and one in his hold…his eyes has an strange kind of passion ….

Twirling her round he threw her away and pull her back, back hugging her…hiding his face in her hairs, he nuzzled in her neck, slightly kissing her ear….tracing her face slowly and seductively with his fingers from forhead to jaw…he made her hairs on the other side…

When she moved away..but he grip her bth hands n pulled her back in same place….kissing her neck deeply…..twirling her round her again…n again too wch she chuckled….he griped her waist n she went off her feet..getting supported from his shoulder…..sliding down, she was looking in his deep demanding eyes….as he made her cum back on her feet…but he made her went in heaven again…as in closed the distance between them…..sealing his lips with her..slowly and softly …..wch ignite them both as she pulled him closed , more closed as possible….

Broking apart ..she hugged him tight..when he to squeeze her in his arm..

Nupur: happy friendship….pause…. day….

Mayank: smiled,…happy friendship…..day….

(U can stop here)

Chalo is khushi mein ek sloopy kiss

Nupur: kya woh kiya hoti hai…

Mayank: Nupur tumhain sloppy kiss nhi pata

Nupur: han tu….by god mjy tu kiss itni muskil se smahj aai uper se yeah sloppy , butterfly and. To top the list latest bata chal k feather bhi kuch hai…… wht not….

He was laughing

Had hai nupur …tera kuch nhi ho skta ….

Mayank: wasy … Nupur is ki tu saaza milay gi….haan

Nupur: ohh hello na tu mein tumhari choti dulhan hoon….aur na tum us k serial kisser….samjhy door rahoo…

Mayank: nhi nhi…ek Nupur one pls…

Nupur: mayakkk….no no…mayankk….

Imagine whtever u want…..

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow beautiful...
wht a friendship ...👏 👏
loved it...
best part was types of kisses...😆 😆 😆
butterfly, feather, sloopy...🤣🤣
yar fiza beautiful gift u have given...
thanks aload...🤗 🤗
love ya...
Edited by drmaha - 14 years ago

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