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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: roshneerakhali
what i love about this ss is that its kind of positive towards life and love.its a fairy tell yet its not impossible.
i'm happy for nupur. happy that she was lucky enough to go past her ego and accept his love. i know a few girls so unlucky that they'd never be able to go past their ego, not even to accept the love of their lives, no matter if it destroys their lives.

hey thnku so much

i know its too positive....like a fairy tale.....but yet life can b a fairy tale if v just except things as thy r....

hmm its not abt always luck....at times u dont get such trust ..tht u feel like lossing urself to sum1 n having faith tht he will nt break u.....

a person is unlucky if it doesnt excpet it love...it true..

thnks for liking it dear

lov ya

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#352

Originally posted by: Auroni.92
Kya dialogue likhti ho fizuuuu...
Sach mein maza aa gaya...
Pehle emotionally romantic aur bad mein cutely romantic...Just like pure Mayurilicious...Though characters wr totally opposite from the real but the jhagras wr typically MNish...😍😍
The last bit when nupur said 'main tumse pyaar karti hoon' by mistake that ws my fav part...😍😍
Loved it when nupur ws wiping the cake and mayank just admiring her...Vaise esha will be very angry with this new girl in his life...And u know what my bestest friend's name is esha...😳
Now update ardhangini also...🤗

uffu meri original life waly sar pakara lay.... i just hate people when thy say dialogues in real life...n here im writing mostly dialgue based ff n ss😆..strange...haina

thku so much jani.....for liking it tht much

lolz...hey glad u like there confesion...ijust want to make it diffrnt

n m glad uliked it

lolz..ya she must be...oye thts soo sweet ...ur frnds name is esha....

lov ya

thnkkuuuuuu

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#353

Originally posted by: mahakmev
lolz it's an osom ending lovedddddddd it

thnks dear

thnks a loot for liking

n appreciating my work ...always..being there

lov ya

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: valiyah27
Just loved it to the core😳......................the dialogues r mindblowing.............n Mayank being Mayank made her confess...............enjoyed every bit of ur writing dear................so simple......yet outstanding................do write more............thnx for pm...........!!!

thnks aloot dear

hey such a huge compliment

glad to cya active here again...

keep smiling like this.....

thnks for liking

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: -Faria-
lalalalala
res

last part????????????
nehiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Editttttttttttttttttttt

Finuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
what is this u ended this SS- kya budai hoti agar ye FF ban jati tou
khadus no. 1- mera itna accha concept ki end kar di-- huh

Ur Update was superb as usual jani
mind-blowing
Awwwwwwwww mayu is so sweet- he discover a soft ad cute side of our nups.
He knew nups is really good at heart.......
oh so thats the reason for which nups alwz hate chemotherapy- ahh feel bad for her...

Oyeeeeeeeeeee mayur magical hug- wo bhi itna tight hug.lOL
yaar it was too good

OMG- Mayur got married and they were fighting as usual
ye mayu bhi na- humesha meri nups ko tang karti hain

hehehehehe i loved the suicide wala part-
its remind me - mere suicide wala dhamki towards u.LOL

kahi tu jaan-bujh kar tou ye nehi kya......

nupur: y u love me'.

Mayank: deemagh nhi hai islyan

lol lol lol- bikul sahi jawab.lol

Mayank: Nupur'bs hogi na galti tum se pyar kerny gi'ab kya jaan lo gi'wasay tumhain mjhy se pyar kyun hoa

Nupur: mjhy tu tum is islya payar hai ..kyun kkk

Mayank: nuprrrr'he scream '.scring her'..u said tth'finally tum ny confess kerhi diay'.

Nupur: no no'I didn't 'I didn't mean tht

Mayank; he stood up'yes u do..mein tum se pyar kerti hoon is k aur kya matlab hota hai'..u lost the bet 'u confessd '

Nupur: dint

He graped her droping thmself'.huging her frm back

Mayank: uff'.pagal..islyan ki hai shadi'itna sara adventure kisi k life mein hoga'.kal se soch raha hoo'diet increase kero'.

Haye- finally Nups confessed her love- wo bhi unintentionally.LOL

but mayu hai na- tang kichne main ustaad(tujhse sikha hai ye sab).

i loved my mayur here- they r sweet , loving and veryyyyyyyyyy cute.

they r adorable and world best jodie

finuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu superbbbbbbbbbbbbb, fantastic SS jana

loved it to the core

kya mujhe ye ss ka ek epilogue mil sakti hai...

hey dont give me angry look- maine kuch jaida nehi manga ek epilogue he manga- samjhi

so waiitng for it

plz update soon

Love ya............

teri tu

ek tu OS k SS banya....

phir 3 parts ko 5 parts mein kiya

aur phir bhi mein sadu

tu khadoos...hitler

hey jani thnks for liking

han hug tu dayna hi tha warna kahty so unromantic.....

hmm i told u ..u will fall fro this nups ..she is diffrnt charcter....aur tu mjhy dhaat rahi thii

aray tu tu bari smart hogi hai...sucuide wala part bhi yaad hai.....rofl

baz na aan tu

epilogue

mil jay ga...pata hai tujhy na nhi kah sakti......

sabar kerna parhy ga tujhy ...

as im nt in a mood to write humour....

lova ya dear alooot

fizu

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: vampire_girl
reserved
abhi edit karungi dont worry 😆

____________edited___________

haila last part
aisa nahi ho sakta yea dhoka hai
itna acha aur pyara ss itni jaldi khatam nahi hosakta😭😭

ok the part was beautiful
most unique confession😳
yara tum itne sweet mayank kahan se lati ho api
mujhe bhi bata do🤣

awesome blossome
and specially the last part
that was really mindblowing

awesome ss api
do start a new one soon ok😳

love
tasfia

shukar kamal hogaya

ap ny abhi edit kerdiya

SS tha meri jan FF nhi.....khatam tu hona tha

but im sooo glad u liked it

mein order per banwati hoon asay mayank....warna thy dont make such man anymore

thnku so much for liking

yup im on a new one ....but finding no time too write

n teri tu

ehass update keroo na plishhhh

love ya

api

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: jiya_angel
haaye... luv u yaar fiza🤗
kya ending thi... ekdum perfect👏

Nupur kabhi nahi badlegi😆... confess karke ki nahi kiya😆

and Mayank... by god!!! wo toh sach mein pagal hai... monkey baar se jump karne ka threat???🤣

Awesome blossom👍🏼

~jiya~

lov ya too jani

thnks for liking it dear

lolz...han nupur nhi badlay gii

ROFl....

thnks yaar

im really glad u liked it

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#358

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti
amazing
amazing

amazing.........dat was sooo freaking hilarious

jst loved their sweet cute n adorable nok-joks....loved mayur soooo much

the dialouges, scenes were fabulous

really wonderful ss dear...write more

thnku

thnku thnkuu

im soo gald u liked it

i'll inshallah......with all ur prayers n support

lov ya

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#359

OMG!!!!

is it last part????...........no way!!!!

it is the bestest part of this ss.

superb dear

awesome..............mindblowing................i couldnt find the appropriate word to descrbe this update.

wowwwwwwwwwww

awesome gal :D

mayur love confession was grt :D

how sweetly maynak handle this jungli billi :P

their post marriage scene was also awesome.

Nupur: is sab ko tum ny galti kaha…..mayank………… divorce papers lao abhi k abhi

Mayank: ek sharat per tu alimony k amount nhi mango gi

Nupur: haaaaaaaaaaaaaaa….thik …bilkul thik hai….us k badlay mein tumhari jan lay loo gi….she hit him with a pillow

Mayank: Nupur..kasai biwi ho apny pati ko marti ho

Nupur: ex ..pati….

He graped her droping thmself….huging her frm back

Mayank: uff….pagal..islyan ki hai shadi…itna sara adventure kisi k life mein hoga….kal se soch raha hoo…diet increase kero….

Nupur: kyun

Mayank: roz subha itni exercise…1 hafty baad tu mein nazar hi nhi aao ga…..ouch …lagti hai yaar….

Nupur: tu bakwass band rekho……..saying so she closed her eyes agin ….feeling the closness inside her ....

this was the best part.

i was laughing........n adoring this part at the same time.

awwwwwwwww................so sweetly u desplying thier love :D

mindblowing :D

ok, nw stop my brainless bak bak :P

start a new one soon................soon matlab very very sooon.

thanks for the pm.

PS. updated my comment on pg 48 :D

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#360

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

teri tu

ek tu OS k SS banya....
phir 3 parts ko 5 parts mein kiya

aur phir bhi mein sadu

tu khadoos...hitler

hey jani thnks for liking
han hug tu dayna hi tha warna kahty so unromantic.....
hmm i told u ..u will fall fro this nups ..she is diffrnt charcter....aur tu mjhy dhaat rahi thii

aray tu tu bari smart hogi hai...sucuide wala part bhi yaad hai.....rofl

baz na aan tu
epilogue
mil jay ga...pata hai tujhy na nhi kah sakti......
sabar kerna parhy ga tujhy ...
as im nt in a mood to write humour....
lova ya dear alooot
fizu