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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#331

what i love about this ss is that its kind of positive towards life and love.its a fairy tell yet its not impossible.
i'm happy for nupur. happy that she was lucky enough to go past her ego and accept his love. i know a few girls so unlucky that they'd never be able to go past their ego, not even to accept the love of their lives, no matter if it destroys their lives.

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#332

Kya dialogue likhti ho fizuuuu...
Sach mein maza aa gaya...
Pehle emotionally romantic aur bad mein cutely romantic...Just like pure Mayurilicious...Though characters wr totally opposite from the real but the jhagras wr typically MNish...😍😍
The last bit when nupur said 'main tumse pyaar karti hoon' by mistake that ws my fav part...😍😍
Loved it when nupur ws wiping the cake and mayank just admiring her...Vaise esha will be very angry with this new girl in his life...And u know what my bestest friend's name is esha...😳
Now update ardhangini also...🤗

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drmaha

@drmaha

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#333

res

cant describe in words how beautifel this ss was.........👏

loved it doc........🤗

mayank nai jis tarah nupur se confess karwaya that was the best part......👏🤣

now cum up with epilogue atleast.........😉

soon........ohterwise doc..............😡

🤣🤣🤣

love ya.........❤️

🤣

Edited by drmaha - 14 years ago

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#334

lolz it's an osom ending lovedddddddd it

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valliyah

@valliyah

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#335

Just loved it to the core😳......................the dialogues r mindblowing.............n Mayank being Mayank made her confess...............enjoyed every bit of ur writing dear................so simple......yet outstanding................do write more............thnx for pm...........!!!

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#336

lalalalala
res

last part????????????
nehiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Editttttttttttttttttttt

Finuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
what is this u ended this SS- kya budai hoti agar ye FF ban jati tou
khadus no. 1- mera itna accha concept ki end kar di-- huh

Ur Update was superb as usual jani
mind-blowing
Awwwwwwwww mayu is so sweet- he discover a soft ad cute side of our nups.
He knew nups is really good at heart.......
oh so thats the reason for which nups alwz hate chemotherapy- ahh feel bad for her...

Oyeeeeeeeeeee mayur magical hug- wo bhi itna tight hug.lOL
yaar it was too good

OMG- Mayur got married and they were fighting as usual
ye mayu bhi na- humesha meri nups ko tang karti hain

hehehehehe i loved the suicide wala part-
its remind me - mere suicide wala dhamki towards u.LOL

kahi tu jaan-bujh kar tou ye nehi kya......

nupur: y u love me….

Mayank: deemagh nhi hai islyan

lol lol lol- bikul sahi jawab.lol

Mayank: Nupur…bs hogi na galti tum se pyar kerny gi…ab kya jaan lo gi…wasay tumhain mjhy se pyar kyun hoa

Nupur: mjhy tu tum is islya payar hai ..kyun kkk

Mayank: nuprrrr…he scream ….scring her…..u said tth…finally tum ny confess kerhi diay….

Nupur: no no…I didn't …I didn't mean tht

Mayank; he stood up…yes u do..mein tum se pyar kerti hoon is k aur kya matlab hota hai…..u lost the bet …u confessd …

Nupur: dint

He graped her droping thmself….huging her frm back

Mayank: uff….pagal..islyan ki hai shadi…itna sara adventure kisi k life mein hoga….kal se soch raha hoo…diet increase kero….

Haye- finally Nups confessed her love- wo bhi unintentionally.LOL

but mayu hai na- tang kichne main ustaad(tujhse sikha hai ye sab).

i loved my mayur here- they r sweet , loving and veryyyyyyyyyy cute.

they r adorable and world best jodie

finuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu superbbbbbbbbbbbbb, fantastic SS jana

loved it to the core

kya mujhe ye ss ka ek epilogue mil sakti hai...

hey dont give me angry look- maine kuch jaida nehi manga ek epilogue he manga- samjhi

so waiitng for it

plz update soon

Love ya............

Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago

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556195

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#337

reserved
abhi edit karungi dont worry 😆

____________edited___________

haila last part
aisa nahi ho sakta yea dhoka hai
itna acha aur pyara ss itni jaldi khatam nahi hosakta😭😭

ok the part was beautiful
most unique confession😳
yara tum itne sweet mayank kahan se lati ho api
mujhe bhi bata do🤣

awesome blossome
and specially the last part
that was really mindblowing

awesome ss api
do start a new one soon ok😳

love
tasfia

Edited by vampire_girl - 14 years ago