We're the Perfect Two-MJHT FF- Part14- pg140 19/5

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ammykhan

@ammykhan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#891

love the update.It is really nice.Gunjan past is really painful but loved the way samrat pacified her.Even mayur scenes were nice.Continue soon.Thx 4 the pm.

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#892

wonderful update

loved sajan part....finally gunjan tells him abt her past n am scared pata nahi us ke past mein kya hoya hoga....bt now everything is normal between dem....

awwww...mayur..wat can i say abt them yaar..they r sooooo cute sweet adorable

luved their hug kiss...nupur telling her convo with maa n den mayank reaction were mindblowing

jst loved them soooooooooo much

cont sooooooon plzzzzz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#893

Hi Mansi

Finally you UPDATED yeahhh....but i'm sooo sorry for my late comment, actually i was dying to read this but didn't get time to do so...but nevertheless i'm here now.

Its amazing, you gave us such a beautiful update after a long wait, Gunjans breakdown to samrat was the sweetest, i could really see she loved her dad ...fathers are very prominent in a childs life, we always think mother are more important but we forget our fathers are a part of us also, i'm so glad she told samrat everything ...and he is there to take care of her which is the sweetest...

And Mayank and Nupur sooo adorable,the peck on the cheek was absolute cutness personified😳 ...its nice to see their relationship heading somewhere and their comfortableness with each other can be seen now which is ofcourse great as always and then the preganancy ..thing ..by god hilarious...I'm loving them...

Outstanding update Mansi...thank you for writing it you have a way with your words with connects me to this story very much.

Again sorry for the late comment.

Sajjal

Edited by -Sajjal- - 14 years ago

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Saniya

@saniya.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#894

Mansi 🤗

FINALLY you updated PHEW ! Okay, Gunjan's past was terrible i mean her Dad past away on her birthday thats horrible ! LOVE how Sam is there supporting her and loved their hug (:

MayUr are starting to get close, thats good 😆 & Mayank fliritng hehe !

NOW, if you can please continue soon =]

Sorry for this short comment, am way too busy thats why !

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#895

Mansi welcome back ....

The past of Gunjan was just too painful and brought tears in my eyes - it was extremely traumatizing and - I loved how you showed Samrat understanding her situation, supporting her and his love for her is beautiful ...

Nupur's innocence is so visible in her antics and everything - she is just too cute and Mayank and Nupur's scenes were really cute but today for me Samrat stole the show - I felt so good reading about him ...

Mayank and Nupur are getting closer, their conversations and actions, the way he hugs and sleeps and everything is just beautiful ...

I am so keen to read what happens next ... please update soon :)

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gurpreet

@preety88

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#896

wonderful update.......gunjans past was really sad..liked how samrat understood gunjan....mayur scenes are cute...why didnt u pm me....cont soon

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#897

awesome part!! i loved the way MN equation has become so much cuter LOL..I love the way they are awkward n comfortable at the same time.. and Gunjan's part was really sad! sigh!! but well written! :)

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Shruti_0505

@Shruti_0505

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#898

this part was awesum

loved it

mayur were so cute

specially nupur

she expressed her feelings n mayabnk reciprocated

finally gunjan opened up to samrat n poured out her pain

i hope mayank does teh same soon

his bitterness at times the reason behind it

update asap

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#899

Loved the part

Liked how Mayur were getting close

Nups n her antics for her bro is fab

I really wish Gun jus get those thoughts of no one loving her frm her head out

Loved that Sam confessed

Lets c wats aage

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stuti

@stuti123

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#900

hey mansi......i just finshed reading the 12 parts of this FF...nd i loved it sooooooooooo much .............its so nicely written .....loved each nd every bit of it lots ............cant wait to read the next part ...nd plz do pm me wen u update it.......i am there in ur friend list ......so plz do pm me wen u update it.............

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