We're the Perfect Two-MJHT FF- Part14- pg140 19/5

Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 14 years ago

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HY IT HAS BEEN A MONTH U HAVE UPDATED.

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 14 years ago

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waiting for ur update dear
plz update it soon

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#913

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update mansi

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jenshad

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Mansiiiiii 🤗 . . . When are you updating ?!! 😳

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hey Mansi,

That was indeed a very special update I must say!😃 Everytime I read your story, it is Sajan that always capture my attention simply because you bring a freshness to their story. Its not that your Mayur parts are any less but if asked to choose between both the couples' parts, Sajan may have the edge in your story😛 But in this update Mayur takes the cake with their sweet talks!😳😳

I simply loved how you portrayed the closeness between the young couple😳 It was so gradual and steady that made it the most natural thing for them. Do you remember that I had commented once before about Nupur having no space issues with Mayank when she just straight went and hugged him infront of Samrat and the others for helping her in studying?😆 After marriage , such hugs may have a more intimate sense to them and it would be hard for a couple, especially ones in an arrange marriage to be more comfortable with each other. But I must say that you have shown this progress in a way that makes me go 'aww'😳😳😳😳 (Thank god for emoticons, they say it all! :))

I also liked how Mayank tried to tease Nupur and how our drama queen rose to the bait😆😆 So she likes her husband to cuddle her, eh?😉 Good going and then Nupur has to broach the topic of pregnancy there😆😃 and make her husband uncomfortable. I agre with Mayank there when he says that things are going fine 😊 Both of them should take it slow but steady😉😃

God, Nupur's such a nautanki!😃 She feigned sickness just so that her brother and Gunjan could have some time alone without Mayank hovering over their heads. I'm sure Nupur would play a perfect cupid for Sajan as she might find more such instances to leave them alone in future too😉

Frankly speaking, though you revealed the flashback from Gunjan's point of view, my whole attention was on Mayur. Therefore I had to go back and read the update twice to give the parts with Sajan their due attention. Aww, Gunjan's dad died on her birthday!😲 What more is needed to traumatize a girl, especially one who's closer to her dad? I hope Samrat can totally soothe all her inner wounds and in a way, fill the space of her dad who always motivated her to do things she loves

That part about girls teasing Gunjan in school is so true. During my school days, one of my classmates were taunted so mercilessly by others that I had to stand up for her everytime though we were barely friends. Girls can be so mean sometimes and Gunjan's plight suddenly reminded me of this classmate I had back in school!

Now I am waiting impatiently for the part that has Mayank's POV😃 and how he coped with the loss of a father figure in his life. I am sure that you would use this opportunity to bring Mayur even more closer than now as you did with Sajan. Hopefully I made up for mot commenting on the previous two updates with this loongg comment😃 Do continue soon😃😃

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Saniya

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Mansi hun, when are you updating?

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Ekta

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Posted: 14 years ago

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awesum FF yaar........its 2 good.......

ur a fabulous writer........

evn though u r a MAYUR fan u giv equal imp 2 SAJAN in ur FF.......m really happy seeing that.........gr888 going.......jus luv ur FF.........

can u plzzzzz PM me wen u cont???? i'l b really glad.......plzzzzz........

awesum FF.........do cont soon & plzzzzzz PM me.......plzzzzzz.......😊

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Ekta

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Posted: 14 years ago

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i luv ur FF lyk anythng yaar.......among all MJHT FF's, this 1 is my fav.......

u do gr8 justice 2 both SaJan & MayUr..........luv both in ur FF........

gunji's past was sooooooo painful.......i had tears in my eyes reading them.....😭..... & sam is such a sweetheart.........just luv him.......he understnds gunjan sooooo much........

so SaJan gonna hav a luv marriage........gr8888......hope sam makes her 4gt her past & move on in life wit him.......

MayUr r sooooooooo cute in ur FF........just luv them...... & dnt just get me started on SaNu, coz den my commnt just wnt end.......in 1 sentence thier relatnshp in ur FF wud be........

"WORLD'S BEST SIBLINGS EVER"..........luv them 2 the core.......

u r such a wonderful writer yaar........if a producer happens 2 read ur FF na he'll surely sign u 2 write a script 4 him........the best thng is that u dnt drag situations lyk u ended MayUr wedding in just 1 chptr....... & i really lyk it..........story shud move fast.......plzzzz keep SaJan wedding fast 2 coz i dnt wnt it 2 b dragged........i wud b more intrested 2 watch thier life after marriage.............mind-blowing FF........i wud call it........

"MY FAVOURITE MJHT FF"........(OFFICIALLY)👏🤗

CONTINUE SOON
UPDATE ASAP
& PLZZZZZZ ADD ME 2 UR PM LIST.........PLZZZZZZ..............😊

M ADDICTED 2 UR FF............😳

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 14 years ago

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