We're the Perfect Two-MJHT FF- Part14- pg140 19/5 - Page 55

Originally posted by: -jaee-

Mansi, first of all - I don't want you to end this story as it is really awesome and as I said to Sajjal - the show is ending but the characters are going to live in our memories ...

Coming to your update - It was fabulous : perfect emotions, the conversation between Samrat and Nupur; Samrat and Gunjan; Nupur and Mayank and Nupur and Gunjan was really good and it perfectly brought out the essence of love between them ...

Mayank and Gunjan's fight was a shocker!!! 😲 I could never imagine them fighting like that ... And then the family hug was so sweet ...

"Ab mujhse door bhaagkar koi faayda nahi" - loved this line .... Samrat and Gunjan's "date" was amazing ... She loves actions films - her true self is I think coming out ... Then the McDonalds scene was again amazing ... "Sweetheart" just cracked me up ...

Mayank always holds her hand - the way she held his hand : it was such an innocent gesture ....

Why are you leaving us again and again on a cliffhanger - And then ... what? Gosh I am so curious now .... Please continue soon ...

*Edited*

Okay, I was just reading it again😳 and the scene of the family hug has something more to it - maybe I am just seeing too much but Samrat moving away from Nupur and giving that space to Mayank but Nupur getting closer to Gunjan - it seems their relationships are somewhat going to be like this .... Okay, I know I have gone mad ...

Originally posted by: nikitasharma.

awwwwwwwwww awesome part.........

firstly plz dont stop.....love this ff....keep contunuing it.......

sanu were so adorable........their bond is really very sweet!

hope mayur lovestory starts up soon........

waiting for d nxt part..!do cont soon!

n thnx for d lovely pm!!😛😃😛

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

superb update

mindblowing

firstly sanu convo.....little emotional bt luved their bond😊

den majan fight 😲😲cant imagined mayank n gunjan fighting....bt dat was funny n den gunur scene....family hug....awwww... awesome

luved sajan McD scene

n den the last mayur scene......holding hands, nok-joks n deciding room colour n go fr shopping.....soooooooo sweet, adorable😳😳

n u left at cliffhanger

plzzzzzzzzz update sooooon

n tnx fr pm

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

Mansi... I already answered your question when you mentioned about your so-called-last-MN-OS, right?? So won't repeat myself...😊

Once again- I loved all scenes...Mostly MaJan fight for the first time..It is something which we never got to see in the show.. I had a nice time imagining that scene..🤣

But my fav line of this update is hmm..well..U can guess right?

😳😳😳😳😳

Ab mujhse dur bhag kar..koi fayda nahin hai.

Sadu Mayank se itna bhi nikalwana mushkil hain,By God!!😆

Aur haan,FF band karne ki sochna bhi mat!!!🤔

Nivi.

Originally posted by: mayurg2010

hey mansi i loved the whole part
as ordered by you i read the whole part without skipping even a line.......
both mn and sg parts
actually i always do read each and every part in your ff.......
but ya a request yaar.......
please add some sweet moments of mn na.......you know!! like mayank teasing nupur. and all.........

Originally posted by: tasfia123

hey mansi🤗
if i say that this ff is one of the best ff i am sure that would be 120% true😃

amazing update
loved every bit of it
samrat and nupur scene was very cute😛
gunjan and mayank fighting and they stopped just like that 😆
unusual fight i would say🤣
samrat and gunjan went out😳
and he said sweet heart...... awww 😳😳
mayank and nupur choosing color was really sweet😛
i dont understand why do they always end up with fighting😆
but awesome update👏

and this time it was a short part
actually mujhe long chapters padne ki adat ho gayi hai
isiliye yea wala mujhe bohot chota laga😆
and pls dont end this ff so soon
mjht khatam horaha hai par mjht ke liye humara pyar to nahi na😛
so jaise tumne socha hai waise hi ending karna ok
and i think that was a long comment 😆
anyways pls update next part soon
with a longgggggggggg chapter😉

love
tasfia