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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: naddiya26

next update will be here
http://naddiya26.blogspot.com/


i will cont my FF's at the address above if i have readers
do tell me ...
i had enough over here
i love you all allot will cont here if you all want

hiii naddy..
plzz post ur updates both at ur blogspot and IF.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
Do continue ere plse and pm me I love ure fanfic
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Posted: 14 years ago
i would prefer if u update on IF..bcaz i cant rlly log onto ur blog and read the FF..its easier to keep track of new updates.
pls do consider updating of IF.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Sorry for the Delay dear.......

Thats Lovely.......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏........
Loved it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much....❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.......
wow Im so happy that Maan married Geet infront of the Press....😃😃😃😃.....
The Pics are so beautiful...❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️......
Loved it sooooooooooooo much when Maan said❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
"drama over move" 😳😳😳
"sorry i never did it before made your face a mess" ....😳😳😳😳😳😳.....How Cute.........
Im reading the Update again and again............
Thats really Wonderful...........
Eagerly waiting for the next part.........
Pls Update Soooooooooooon............
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Posted: 14 years ago
please con here its fantastic and i love your ff please con here pleaseeeeeeeeeee

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Posted: 14 years ago
muhhahh
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ds is sumthing which shld happen in serial...... CVs atleast learn sumthing 4m ds ff...........😡
dear loved it a lot.........👏👏 do update soon and post it to geet cv so dat dey can do some fair wd mannet love..........😆😆
waiting 4 nxt update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow all da parts were awsome.god wonder wt devs mom and his sister r gone plan to do loved how maan was supporting and holding geets hand 2 gd god this old man wonder wt he is up to plus reporter update soon xant wait 4 the next part thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey naddiya,
love u dear thabks for pm n updating for us also muhhahh

love the way maan care for geet n geet listen always him a good wife lovly can't wait for next u finish in lovly point n I eagerly waiting for the next part

hey sweety pls do pm me whenever u updaten an always remember me bc I m u r loyal fan I love u r ff n u also so pls remember me

update soon n

love u
waiting 4 nxt update😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
click the above link
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next part i have prob in adding some error is coming since it is fixed i will add there ,then compile here sorry for that...
here you can read here..for my lovely readers 😕

ff Despair......story till now part 1 to 15 for new readers


i love you all alot

ff despair part 16

Geet: thinking "how dadi will take it what she is going to think of her?"
Maan: you should be strong to face any circumstances ? hold her hand more tightly

Geet: but why are you suffering because of me? looked at him
Maan: "is it must answer every question ?"
Geet: jee nai
Maan: why are you so scared?
Geet: kuch nai
Air-hosted: "sir coffee or juice"
Maan: one coffee & one juice
Geet: i will not take
Maan: why? if you remember papa said listen to him
Geet: ajeeb mushkil ha.. murmur
Maan: did you said any thing to me? ..he heard her but pretended he had not listen
Geet: jee nai
Maan: Good finish it like a nice ..paused gave her glass
Geet: just took 2 sip bus
Maan: should i help you? looked at her
Geet: jee ..she didn't get him
Maan: took glass from her hand ..
Geet: smiled thought he will keep it
Maan: placed next to her lips "now finish it ?"
Geet: shocked
Maan: khatam karo
Geet: looked around "everyone is looking at us "
Maan: "you very well know i don't care about every one"
Geet: ajeeb..paused quickly drank the whole glass.
Maan: kept the glass ..hide his smile started taking tea
Geet: uff
Maan :looked at her "did you say something to me"looked at her

Geet: jee
Maan: jee ha , yeh jee nai
Geet: closed her eyes as she could not see more in his eyes.
Maan: thinking what happen to me at that time ..recollected the hotel scene looked at her ..how he grabbed her hand & walked to the mandir

Geet: looked at him
the pilot announced "ladies & gentlemen we have reached Delhi airport."
both looked at each other as if trying to say something
Maan: yes say?as he read her eyes
Geet: aap bola
Maan:"there will be people out there & i am sure they will ask different kind of question just don't get scared."
Geet: jee
Maan: you were asking something
Geet: jee kuch nai
Maan: ok lets go gave her his hand
Geet: mein aise theek hoon .. roll her duppata at her finger
Maan: please .hold her hand
they walked out Meera & Dev where there .
Meera: hug both
Dev: showed Maan a thumb up
Maan: gave him a week smiled he could feel she was crying
Meera: bas Geet wipe her tears.. if you will cry like that you will get sick.
Maan:didi lets go home.. he just pull her next to him.
Meera: yes dadi is waiting for you both.
Geet: held Meera "why me didi?"
Meera: sabar Geet see now you have Maan with you...
Maan: looked at Meera as if saying didi whats wrong with you?
Dev: murmur these ladies never see the situation..
Maan: by the way your wife is crying more than mine .take care of your wife
Both Meera & Geet looked at him
Maan: why you both are staring at me like that...asked Geet & Meera.
Meera: "i will tell you later "
they sat in car, Geet & Meera at back.
Meera: looked at Geet she was rolling her duppata at her finger"why are you that nerves?" patted her cheek
Geet: looked at her could feel Maan staring at her in back view mirror.
they were about to reach home
Sasha:kya ha yeh Geet
Tasha: pata nai bhabi iss ki crazy ha , bacha iss ka crazy ha ...
nt: dekhe leta ha Geet ko hum bhi.
Ved: nano when they will come?
Dadi: must be coming , you don't tease didi
Ved: promise i will not tease her
they reached ...Maan got out open door for Geet
Sasha:kya nakhra ha jee
Geet: really felt weak in her knees should she cry on her father death or smiled at her shadi she without intention hold Maan arm it was dark no body notice .. he grab her from her waist
Maan:whisper "are you ok ?"
Geet:"nai"...
Maan: didi called Meera.. as he saw Dev sisters looking at them
Meera walk to their side "leave her i will take care of her "
Maan: removed his hand..he turn his face as he knew she will cry when she will meet dadi.
nt: kya drama ha yeh.... saw her hugging dadi..& crying
Meera took her in her room
Dadi: Maan come here called him
Maan: jee wipe his tears ... hug him
Dadi: "i am proud of you"
Maan: dadi kuch samahje nai aaya tha muhje ko iss waqt.
Dadi: everything will be fine by passage of time .
Maan: i hope so.
Dadi: meet Dev sister
Maan: please you introduce me
Dadi: come with me .. they walk to them. "this is Tasha youngest, Sasha& naintar"
Maan: hi
they in chorus Hi
Maan: who was that who use to clean her nose in her frock at didi shadi
Dadi:"Maan"
Maan: sorry but that pic is still in didi shadi album
Meera: dadi come here
Dadi: wait i will am coming.
Maan: what happen didi?
Meera: she is calling dadi..
Maan: ok excuse me please walked to his room.
Tasha: kon tha woh bola aap dono looked at their blushed face
Sasha: she
nt: you
Ved: chi chi chi ..you use to clean your nose in your frock...
Meera: ved & tanu did you guys had your dinner ?
Ved: yes can we meet didi
Meera: no
Tanu: but why?


Meera: she is not well... you go with maasi to papa i will come ..
Tanu: lets go maasi ...
Sasha : hit her foot .."maasi"g
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Maan: could hear her crying .. he walk to the door but stop
Geet: dadi first Mama & my sisters now papa... am i that bad ..
Dadi: beta bas bas... if you will cry like that you will get fever again
Geet: papa left me alone
Dadi: beta i am with you Maan is with you .she was hugging her & crying
Meera walked to Maan room "come have dinner"
Maan: no didi..i am having headache
Meera: give are time ..as she saw him walking in his room
Maan: she didnot cry in front of me..
Meera: Maan
Maan: please ask dadi to let me go to her i will not let her cry
Meera: could hear her bitterly crying..."log ha ghar mein" their relative arrived to console Maan as they saw him on TV
Maan"i am fed up of these people Didi" he locked the door of his room.
Meera: maan
Maan: aap khana lekar aai & ask dadi to look after guest i will look after her as she is my ..paused
Meera : could see pain in his eyes."ok wait" she walked in her room
Dadi:was sitting Geet was keeping her head in her lap... crying..
Meera: asked nakul to bring dinner...
Dadi: i will sleep with her
Meera:dadi you will get sick i will stay with her please you go and look after guest
Dadi: looked at her
nakul Khana...
Meera : give me ...DAdi please you go & see guest.
dadi looked at Meera who was again & looking towards their room common door.
dadi ok ....she saw Maan shadow..kissed Geet fore head
Meera closed door as dadi went out.."come Maan"
Geet: at once sit
Maan: looked at her "kya haal kar diya ha aapna...get up wash your face"
Geet: i am fine..
Maan: i know you are get up or i will wash myself
Geet:ajeeb.. got up walked to wash room
Maan: smiled dekha..
Meera: wah ...
Maan: chala aab aap bhi jai apna hubby ka paas.
Meera: you are very ... geet came out
Geet: where are you going didi?
Meera: there are guest dear i have to see.. see you in morning.. walk out of door knock at door
Maan: hmmm
Meera: lock ...
Maan: ok he looked it
Geet: sit on bed.."i don't want to eat"
Maan: ok then i will too not eat he closed all the bowls kept plate back..
Geet: cleared her throat
Maan: kya
Geet;but why will you not eat?
Maan: as my friend is not eating.
Geet: ok she picked up plate took out little started eating.."see i am "
Maan: smiled he too had ... there was a pin drop silent in room
Geet:bas
Maan: ok let me keep these dishes .. he took tray & walked out...
Tasha was talking to Meera saw Maan coming
Maan:didi take it
Meera: she had
Maan yes
Meera: but how?
Maan: haar baat bata nahi ha Good night.walk back to Geet room
Tasha: oh... she walk out to give news to her sis...


Maan: eat this gave her tablets & lie down
Geet: but i am not sleepy
Maan : sit next to her "you lie down talk to me you will get sleep"
Geet: but
Maan: kya
Geet: if you sleep paused... recollected
Maan: i hope you will not drop me this time
Geet: shyly turn on other side....
Maan: tell me about your school....
Geet: school ....she told him few thing felt sleeply
Maan: hold her hand in his "hmmm"
Geet: was asleep
Maan: picked pillow from other side placed behind his head ..just run his fingers in her hairs ... he was having ache he didnt know when he lie next to her and slept ...
to be cont.. hope you liked it
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: palak13

Wow all da parts were awsome.god wonder wt devs mom and his sister r gone plan to do loved how maan was supporting and holding geets hand 2 gd god this old man wonder wt he is up to plus reporter update soon xant wait 4 the next part thanks 4 the pm

sweeti i have added to parts part 15 & part 16 do check it

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