FF*Despair*(maaneet)pt20at pg 133(17 nov) - Page 65

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kooliio

amazing update!!!

awww Mr. Handa is no more!!!
poor geet😭..feeling bad for her!!!
but happy that maan is there with her!!!
and who is rahul?? 🤔..am i missing something??
cant wait for the next part!!!
pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM
p.s. i'm really glad that you will continue with all your FFs😛

about Rahul
he is Bharat Chawla guy dev 's step brother 3 **** sis
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Posted: 14 years ago
naddiya
thanks for the update
thank u for continuing the ffs
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey nadi,

so nice to see you back!!!!!!!!!!!!
I WAS SO WORRIED...........

well loved the Update!!!!!!!!!!!
worried bot Geet,
ab kya hoga.................
please kuch karo..........

Love
Lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago
thnks 4 the pm
gr8 bt sad update
plz update the next part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow...that was sad one....but really awesome
also....great writing....loved it
abnd do keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
I feel really bad 4r geet....... Poor geet.....!!!OMG sare evils Nt,sasha, tasha, rahul R in same family..... God
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it..... though sad part
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 13
Maan hold her picked her up in his arms before she could collapse
Dr: come with me ..
Maan: i am sorry yar i didnot have courage to tell you truth.. held her close to him
Dr: please lie her down here
Maan: carefully placed her on bed
Dr: checked her she had fainted because of shocked she will be fine ..he gave her injection & gave her a drip to gain some energy
Maan: when she will wake up? ..he sit next to her removed her curls from her face
Dr: i can't say that..please you come & sign & take the dead body
Maan: wait i will call my bhai he will do all these formalities .
Dr: ok
Maan: sit next to her hold her hand in his "Geet now we both are same "he cried
he called Dev & told him .just sat next to her.. "Geet Wake up yesterday we became friends you can't do this to me "
DEV: kept his hand on his shoulder"Maan"
Maan: just hug him cried like a child "how i will look after her "

Dev: we all are with you ..

Maan: but she
Dev: come with me
Maan: no if she get up she will be scared i promise i will not leave her ..
Dev: ok i will bring coffee for you here...
Maan: i don't need
Dev: how you will protect her then?
Maan: hmmm
Dev: walked out
Maan: hold her hand next to his heart"please Geet ,we have met each other 78 hours before but i feel i know you since ages "
Dev: take it gave him a cup of coffee
Maan: bhai
Dev: for her take it
Maan: took it .
Dev: went out...called Meera
Meera:was crying from other side
Dev: Meera why you are behaving like kid
Meera: poor Geet

Dev: if she had not met Maan she must be a poor girl but she has a guy who love her more then his life so don't call her poor .. be brave we will come with dead body as soon as Geet if fine

Meera: how is Maan?
Dev: he is just crying like you..
Meera: can i talk to him?
Dev: he will not leave her side it is useless to ask him.
Meera: ok you take care of him
Dev: you don't have to say that. i love you ... as Dev closed few guys from back pat him
Dev: yes may i help you
old guy: i am handa elder brother
Dev; oh ..bit shocked
old lady :where is his daughter?
Dev: sound something fishy " she will come in a while you guys go & see dead body"he walked away
at Delhi
Sasha: why you are crying bhabi?
Meera: Geet father died
Tasha: oh so sad
Meera: where is dadi?
Ved: in her room
Meera: beta please don't do any sharat please
Ved: Mama i will not
Meera: hug him
Ved: is mamoo with didi
Meera: yes
Ved: ask mamoo not to leave her for a min
Dadi: beta he will not. walk from behind
nt hit her elbow to sasha..
Meera: dadi
Dadi: Meera beta fix her room ask Adi to do arrangement for funeral
Meera: dadi she fainted Maan will not come till she is fine.
Dadi: did you talk to him?
Meera: Dev said he is not talking to anyone .
Dadi;sorry beta you girls visited us we could not welcome you properly
nt: koi baat nai
Dadi: beta please dont mind you stay in out house as i don't know how geet might be?
Sasha: ok ok we will stay with her
Ved: maasi she stay here next to mamoo's room ..you stay there..samjhee he ran to Geet room

Meera:ved what are you doing with didi things..shouted

Tanu we both are painting for didi & mamoo ..she just closed the door...
Meera: come i will show you your rooms
Tasha: why we came here
nt: come with me i will tell you ...
At Mumbai
Dev: walk around then he enter Geet room
Maan: was still sitting in same position
Dev; she has uncles
Maan: oh they are here
Dev: what?
Maan : took out file from bag gave him
Dev; you & dadi are her ..paused
Maan: yes papa could not tell me everything ...
Dev: ok i will call mom she will sit her you go & sort it
Maan; i will not move from her till she open her eyes.
Dev:Maan
Maan: please bhai

dev mom enter with rahul

Maan: just got up stand in btw Geet & rahul so that he couldn't see ..
Devmom: oh beta .fake.crying
Dev: looked at Maan face"mama you come with me " pull her out closed the door
Maan: Geet bas karo utho please i can't control my anger now" covered her properly
Geet: papa murmur
Maan: cup her face in his hand sit next to her "geet "
Geet: open her eyes "where is papa?"
Maan: just press bell to call dr..."geet"
she grab his shirt try to sit ...
Maan: "relax "
Geet: where is papa Maan?looked in his eyes
Maan: hug her tightly " he left us yar he left us " he started to cry ... holding her
Geet: "could feel the truth and purity in his emotions she shiver in his arm but didnot cry ..just few tears roll down her eyes ..."ssshhhh rota nahi Maan shhhh papa ko daard hoga"
Maan: couldn't believe his ears ..he looked at her only few tears came out of her eyes.. she was shaking her head "rota nai " wipe his tears with her hand.

Maan: hug her more tightly

Geet: whisper "you said be brave see your friend is brave"
Maan: yes she is .. he wanted her to cry but she didn't..
Geet: can i see papa..with a questioning eyes
Maan: yes but let this drip finish first made her lie down placed his hand on her's
Dr: was standing with Dev..he just came
Dr: checked her
Maan: can i take her home?
Dr: yes but you first see me
Maan: Geet Dev bhai is here dont get scared i will come in 5 mins.. kissed fore head. she just closed her eyes..
Dr: walked out with Maan
Maan: jee
Dr: she should cry or she will take this to her heart ..
Maan: i know may be she see her papa she cry.
Dr:take her i am coming with you.
Maan: ok both walked in Dr took out her drip.

Maan: come with me gave her his hand she looked at him ..with eyes he asked her to hold it

Geet: hold it she corrected her duppata
Maan:took her all weight on him as they walked out
they walk to the room
Maan removed the sheet
Geet: looked at him "papa you too left me" few tears drop her eyes
Maan: held her more closed to him.
Geet: looked at Maan "will you leave me?"
Maan: no never ...
Geet: he use to say that too.. few tears drop from her eyes .
Maan: bas chala
Geet: jee she was feeling very weak in her knee hold his hand more tightly.
as they walked out
old man: oh geet beta
Geet: who is he? whisper
Maan: she is not fine what every you want to talk ,talk with me .
old man: who are you?
Maan: please not in front of her

Old Man: try to come close to geet

Dev came in between them"Maan you take her "
Maan: just picked her up & walked to the room .made her lie .."don't worry"
nurse again gave her remain drip.
they all walked to the room..door
Rahul & Dev stop them
Maan: came out "jee bola what is your problem"
old man: who are you?
Maan: if i asked same question from you?
old man: she is our daughter
Maan:acha what can i do then? she doesn't know you by the way.
old man:we can't leave our daughter to someone else
Maan :i have right
old man: who gave you that right
Maan was about to say
Geet from behind"my papa"
old man:beta
Geet: please show your fake love to someone else not me
Maan: why you got out of bed?
Maan saw nurse was standing with her drip
Geet: hold his hand "can you stop me"
Oldman: i asked handa don't give education to girls"
Geet: where were you when papa needed you? he was with him not you
oldman: i was angry from him
Geet: "then how your anger vanished after his death"
Maan: was just looking at her face...
old man: but you are alone...you are our blood
Geet: i am not alone firstly jis ka koi nahi hota iss ka upper wala hota ha...
old man: this all bookish talk
Geet: showed him Maan hand in her's"He is with me..
point at Dev he is with me,are you bhai
Dev:placed his hand on her head "yes"
oldman: how is he ? not your blood relative
Geet: he is my fiance.. showed him Dadi kangan
Maan: bas now you can go or i will lose my temper
oldman: she is not married to you

Maan: dev bhai
Dev: showed him the file
Maan: read it she is my responsibility
old lady ..chee chee kya zamana aagaya ha
Geet: please it is hardly (looked time in Maan wrist watch) 6 hours my papa body is still here you all are doing this drama.
old lady : you come with us
Geet: i will stay were i like you can't stop me. lost her balance
Maan: grab her"please read that carefully it is clearly written she will stay with me.. please excuse us
both walked in. made her lie
nurse hang the drip bag walk out
Geet: Maan
Maan: hmmm
Geet: sorry i called you my fiance out there
Maan: even if you had called me your husband i had not mind that...
Geet:looked at him in shocked...
Maan.he gave a weak smile .. just relax i will take you to Dadi ..sit next to her
DEVMom...heard that..."so she is not his fiance"
to be cont ..hope you liked it
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update nadi.................:):):):)

Thumbs up👍🏼

🥳👏 👏 😎 😃

update soon

love u

waiting

MEENA

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: meenaveed

great update nadi.................:):):):)

Thumbs up👍🏼

😃

update soon

love u

waiting

MEENA

🤗

let me breath update soon😡
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