MAYUR FF...Unexpected Magic. - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
awesome........ready for another magic show
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22

Amazing Mehak. I loved reading it.

Do continue further would love to read it

Sajjal

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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
i'm already excited to read furthur parts...!!
Great start..!!
plzz do continue soon..!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Mehak šŸ¤—
First of all congratulations on your FF hun <3
And OMG! The concept and the start is abos**tely amazing!
Very well written. Love it <3
Continue soon =]
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Posted: 14 years ago
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here begins the magic show.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank u so much guys...šŸ¤—

PART 2:

Mayank and nupur were both very excited, getting the reward of thier countless hardwork, but on the other hand destiny was planning something else for them..thier parents which lived in the same city for 20 years never met each other but suddenly they MET!..one day in the shopping mall...

SS... tum yahan...

TS..arey didi..ap...

Shilpa and tulsi had been neighbours in morena from thier childhood...they shared a very special bond. Seeing each other for the first time in delhi made them over whelemd...After a revival of their old memrioes and their bond they shared before thier marriage and after
remembering how their mothers even were bonded, they came to the present..

SS...aur tum apne bachon ki sunao..ab tu nupur aur gunjan dono bari ho gai hon gi

TS..ji haan aur nupur tu..

SS..kia?..

Tulsi found her only friend she had in her life so shared everything with her..

TS..ap batiye didi, aisey kaise bhej den akele...aur wo itni khush hai k batate hoye dar lagtahai...bht pereshan hon main..

Shilpa again went to her past..it felt as she was hearing the conversation again...history had done this before..and in the past it was SHILPA..who wanted to go to the city for studying and her mother was very tensed and then this was the SAME thing her mother said to tulsi's mother and then tulsi's mother got shilpa married to one of her far relatives..mayank's dad..

TS..didi ap sun rahi hain..

SS...arey haan...main sun rahi hon..acha main chalti hon...apna number do main tumhain phn karon gi..

They exchanged numbers and shilpa knew it was the time to PAY BACK...she rememberd her mother saying that do help that family who got u married...

She reached home though very deeply and called tulsi..and gave her the news tulsi so wanted to hear..
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M..maa aj dair ho gai..

SS...han mujhe merey bachpan ki dost mil gayi thi..

M..wow!...kaun?..

SS..tulsi..morena main hum neighbours they...20 sala baad miley hain..

M..that is so great..tu maza aya ap ko..

SS..haan...ik zimadari mili hai..

M...kia?..

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G..kia?...maa , bauji, ap di k sath aisa kaisey kar sakti ho?..ap..ye..

TS....tujhe kuch nahi pata..tu chup reh..

G.,..nahi rahon gi chup...hamesha di k sath asie karte ho..wo kuch bolti nahi hai tu ap faida uthatey ho us ka..ap ki waja se wo science parthi rahi hai, jab k ap ko pata hai usay arts ka kitna shoq hai..

TS..gunjan tu..

G....maa plz...ap aur bauji hi kehte they na k parho, mehnat karo, naam roshan karo..ab jab di kar rahi hai tu ap ko shaadi yaad a gai hai...

SB..gunajn ahista bolo beta tu..

G..nahi bolon g ahista..main bata do, main ap dono ko di ki zindagi barbaad nahi karne dongi..

N..kia hua?..

Tulsi, Shashi and gunjan turned, nupur was standing there holding her book...they all got tensed..

N..kai hua gunjan tu itna uncha ku bol rahi hai..maa kia hua?..

TS..kuch nahi beta tum..

G..nahi..di main bataati hon, maa aur bbauji..

SB..gunjan!..

G..bauji plz....di maa bauji tumhari shaadi karwane wale hain..

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M..maa!!...

mayank was shocked, not in the condition to react..

M..kai mtlb shaadi..kia mtlb maa?..

Shilpa had asked mayank to marry her friend's daughter bcz she was very worried..

SS..beta wo bhi havard ja rahi hai..dono sath chale jan..us k parents bht pareshan hai. tum..

M..maa plz..main ku?..ksi aur se karwa do..main ku?...

he sat down on his knees holding her mother's hands who was sitting on the sofa..

M..plz maa aisa mat karo..main wada karta hon, jahan kaho gi shaadi kar lon ga..per abhi nhai..maa plz..asia mat karo..

Shilpa was very stern..

SS...tum shaadi karo gey ya nahi?.abhi!..

M..maa ye kia baat hoyi...main nahi karon ga...

SS...thek hai..

Mayank knew that his mother had tears in her eyes...she went inside and mayank followed her..

M..maa plz aisa mat karo..

mayank also had tears in her eyes..

M..maa achank ku kar rahi ho aisay..plz itni mushkil se mujhe apni life ka aim mila hai aur tum..maa plz..

SS...mujhe jawab do mayank..shaadi karo gey ya nahi...

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N...karon gi...

nupur's voice almost broke down..

G..di!..

N..gunjan tu chup reh..maa bauji ap jaisa kaho gey main waisa karon gi...

Tulsi move forward to hug her daughter, gunjan saw tears in her eyes..nupur went inside..

G..agr meri di ko kuch hua na tu main ap dono ko kabhi maaf nahi karon gi...

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Both maynk and nupur had agreed for teh marriage, not bcz they weren't able to protest jsut bcz they loved their parents too much, they couldnt
dissappiont them..they asked the reward of giving them life, and they both gave their life...

The ceremoines were held very simple, neither of them asked to meet or talk to each othr, they were both so much in shock that
no charm was left..

Nupur who had been dreaming all her life for her husband was afriad of him....mayank dint even saw nupur during the marrige, due to her ghunghaat, tulsi had some reservations abt her kundali so she suggested nupur to cover her face during
the amariage...

They wer abt to leave when gunjan called mayank..

G..jiju..

mayank turned...

G..meri baat suney gey plz...

Gunajn took him to a side..

M..bolo..

G..jiju mujhe ap se sirf ye kehna hai k plz meri di ka khayal rakhna...wo bht achi hai...kabhi kuch nahi bolti, chase us k sath kuch bhi ho jaye...us ne shaadi bhi maa bauji k liye ki hai..plz jiju di ko kisi chez k liye giulty mat tehraana..us main clarifications ki himmat nahi hai..wo abhi shaadi nahi krna chati thi..main janti hon ap ne apni maa k liye shaadi ki hai, aur di ne bhi apne maa buji k liye shaadi ki hai..plz usey pyar se baat karna ..plz jiju us ne apni shaadi k bht khuab dekhey they,plz unhain mat torna..wo mar jaye gi..plz...

gunjan had tears on her eyes...and mayank didnt knew how to react..all he could do that he nodded..

The bidaai was filled with tears,

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They recahed the sharma house...nupur had lifted her ghonghat but mayank wanst intrested in looking at her...

Maynk was sitting alone in the lounge when his mom came..

SS..beta bahir ku bethey ho..ander jao tumhari dulhan..

M..maa plz..shaadi kar li hai na..ab aur kia chiaye ap ko?..

SS..mayank main tu bus..

M..acha thek hai ja rah hon...nahi tu ap phir kaho gi k main ne koi baat nahi mani..

He stood up in anger, shilpa wanted to talk to him but she knew he wont listen..

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he opend the door of his room, the whole room was scented with roses...the bed was coverd with roses...candles lit all over the place...he looked around and he saw his wife..

wearing a bright red lehnga, with all her hair open and pulled to one side, she was looking out of the window, she had taken of all the jewellary,..she was looking simple even in that heavy lehnga...her empty neck and ears were incresing her beauty...
moonlight was shining on her face...breeze sligthly playing with hair.... fora moment mayank was mesmiresd...
Edited by mehak03 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
Yay...after veryyyyy LONG im first!😃

I loved this one Mehak..See I guessed the story right. I loved how you made the connection between their parents!😳 So sweet of Shilpa.

Them married..so soon?!😲 I loved how Gunjan supported them! awww!😳 also MG convo!!šŸ‘

Mayank's anger...and Nupur's quietness..wow Itz gonna be AWESOMEE!!šŸ˜³šŸ˜‰

I wonder how can you fit so much in 1 chap..I toh can write only one scene in this much space!šŸ˜•šŸ˜†

Thanks for starting this one...Im so used 2 getting one update PM of urs in the night!😳

Also thanks for hurrying..up. Nw can sleep! GN!šŸ˜†

Continue soon!

-Mansi
Edited by -Mansi- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
wow mehak fab update yaar
just hope they become atleast frnds
it was so nice part loved it
and thnx for the pm
Edited by jainypatel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
wow....married already...!
I loved the gunjan-mayank scene..!
Lets see how they take each other....both of them did it for the same reason...

Looking forward to harvard....they'll definitly bond there..!

Great update..!
i really wasnt expecting a PM so soon..! :-P
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Gosh, Mehak absolutely fab update.
The way you described the whole thing and the conversation between Gunjan and Mayank was so touching.
Beautifully written! Bravo!
Love <3
Daania

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