MAYUR FF...Unexpected Magic. - Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago
I am loving it <333!!
Parapapapa!!

Lovely story!!
I am in love with your words.

-Akansha!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
mahek ji.. thnk u ji!
finally .. aap ke badle hue naam ka raaz pata chal gaya!😆
well.. part ws nyc...
i luvd d way.. gav d detaild explaination of all d formalities @ airport!
& luvd my confident nups & surprisd mayu
just luvd it!
thnx 4 d pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update mehak ......i am loving the pace nd the way this FF is progressing ............loved the update lots .........do continue soon .............
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovd it!
waiting for the magic to begin!
thnx for the pm!
do cont soon1
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u so much guys...🤗, and i am really sorry for the spelling mistakes i make...😭

PART 6:

The plane moved forward on the runway..first slowly but gradually its accelaration increased...and as the speed of the plane increased the speed of nupur's prayers increased and the power with which her nails were sinking in mayank's arm also increased...Mayank was feeling pain but he let it go bcz nupur was very nervous....the plane's speed increased..it moved fast and fast and fast...and them suddenly the front tyres of the plane were lifted from the ground...they had moved above from the ground...nupur closed her eyes more firmly...mayank was busy noticing her fear so much that she didnt even realise when the plane moved up...then the back tyres also lifted and plane was moving upwards in a slanting condition...nupur's nails penetrated so deep that mayank thought they would come out from the other side...and then the plane staightnd in the air...

Ladies gentlemen we have successfully taken off from the delhi international airport..the seat belt warnings will vanish in a couple of moments but it is highly appreciated that u keep them wearing
throughout the flight.

Nupur slowly opened her yes...and losesend her nails grip on mayank's arm...the warnings had vanished and the whole plane was lighted with normal white light ,all the passengers were normal...

M...u are alright?..

She turned towards mayank who was smiling at her..nupur smiled in return with a little nod...she wiped of some traces of sweat from her face...

M..tum dar gayi thi na...

N..hmmm...

Nupur was still nervous...the feeling of being in air was haunting her...

They had televisions fixed at the back of every seat, which made them face the passengers seated at the back, facing the back of that seat..the
volume control buttons were on the arm rest of each seat, and had a port for earphones, which were placed in the pocket of their seats..

Mayank switched on his tv...it showed the path of the plane first...

N..ye dekho nupur..we will be moving over the atlantic ocean..see..isnt it great

he pointed towards the map..

Nupur again lost her senses...

N..pani k oper se guzrey gey...agr gir gaye tu..

MAYNK was shocked at her reaction..

M..nupur kaisi batien kar rahi ho

N...sorry..wo..

M..its ok...thek hai..map band kar detey hain...

He closed the map...and switched on the tv in front of nupur's seat...

M...tum kia deko gi....kuch films aur documentries bhi hain..

N..kuch nahi..

M..nupur relax...14 ghante ka safr hai..normal raho gi tu jaldi guzr jaye ga...aur agr gin gin k guzaro gi tu bht mushkil hoga.

N..hmmm...

Mayank realised that she was not comfortable..

M..acha pani piyo gi?...

N..nahi...

M..oh God nupur!...acha so jao...

N..mujhe neend nahi a rahi...

M..haad ho gayi..atleast try for once... tange uper kar lo...be comfortable.

Nupur tilted abit towards mayank and placed her legs up on the seat..she was so thin and slim that she perfectly fitted on the seat...

M..chalo ankhen band kar lo...

He placed his hands on her eyes..and he closed them..he gently rubbed his hands on her forehead, and he could see that she was going down into sleep peacefully..he kept on rubbing untill he was sure that she had slept...then he switched off her telvison and switcd off the light on the top of her seat

Air hostess came..

AH..sir ma'am ko utha dejiye, lunch kar lijiye..

M..nahi actually she was very nervous, so let her sleep..

AH..ok , ap lunch karen gey..

M..umm..nahi,..,hum sath kar len gey..

AH..ok sir..

All the lights of the plane were switched off bcz the flight flew from delhi it was almost evening for people in delhi..

Only some passengers were having there lights switched on the top of their seats...rest almost the whole plane was sleeping and some were watching tv..

Mayank was also reading a magazine...and then he switched on his tv and watched all the documentries stored in the tv...

It was almost 4 hours since they flew,and nupur was sleeping..

He looked at her..she was sleeping peacefully...completely curdling like a kitten...with her hands under her neck..

Mayank called the air hostess..

M..can i have blanket and a pillow plz..

AH..sure sir..

She brought the blanket and a pillow and mayank covered nupur with it...she uncounciolsy grabbed the balnket..and felt more conmfortable..

Mayank slightly lifted her head, by his hand and placed the pillow beneath her head...she felt disturbed but mayank again rubbed her forehead to make sure she went asleep...

He was looking at her..and was satisfied that her journey is being carried peacefully..she would have been so sacred if awake...but some where in his subconcious he was waiting for her to wake up...he wanted to talk to her...but this feeling was not that strong enough yet to take over his rational part..

Then he himself titled a bit on the seat, facing nupur and he placed his one leg up on his seat, making himself comfortable..

He began thinking the happenings of his life in the past 24 hours..Marriage!!...which he never exepected to come to him so soon..but he liked nupur!!

she was cute, smart, intellegent, innocent, down to earth and most of all she was adorable...he rememered her cute "suniye" and smiled to himself...this gesture of her's had so much affection and respect,and he enjoyed it..although he hated courtesy but he didnt wanted stop nupur from this. He remereded her scream of "gunjannnnn', her nervousness, her confident smile...her feared expressions, her huge eyes,.and then....her ...her open hair...

this made him close his eyes and he too went to sleep..

After some time both of them were woken up by another announcement..

Ladies and gentlemen please wear ur set belts as we will be moving from some low air pressure packets and as a result plane might undergo some turbulence...

N..turbulence..OMG...

M...tum ku uth gayi ho.?..

N..ap ne suna turbulence...

M..plz nupur, its ok...itni door k flights main turbulence hoti rehti hai...its ok..

She gain clutched her his arm...and again started mumbling some prayers..the plane shook a bit but the warnings vanished soon..

M..dekha kuch hua?.

Nupur smiled

N....kitna time reh gay hai?..

M..um..approx 7 hours...

N..main itni daie soti rahi..aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chala..

M..haan..achi baat hai na..warna itni dair main tumhare saat minute guzarne they, a now we have covered almost half the journey...

N...hmmm...aur wo..

AH..sir ab lunch karen gey...

They both turned towards the air hostess...mayank looked at nupur

M..what say?..

N..ok..

Bot of them starightened the desk in front of them , which were clipped at the back of the seat in front of them..

They opened their tray..it was fish rice in one tray, a mall bowl of cut fruits, a pastry,and salad in one small bowl..all things were wrapped in plastic..

M..i will just have fruits...mujhe fish nahi khani..

N..aur main bus pastry khao gi, mujhe bhi fish nahi khani..

M..fruits bhi kaho na...

N..nahi,mujhe fruits nahi psnd..main nahi khati..

M..i dont believe this..,how are u alive?..

Nupur giggled..

N..ap pastry nahi khaye gey..?

M..nahi, i am not that fond of sweets...

N..hmm..

M...ok if u are not eating fruits tu tumhare fruits main kha leta hon..

N..ok..ye lijiye.,.*handed her the bowl*..aur ap mujhe apni pastry de do..

M..ya sure..*handed her the pasty plate.*

They both were having their lunch when mayank spoke up..

M..i dont believe i asked u for ur fruits...

N..ku?..

M..maine kabhi aisey nahi kiya hai..

Nupur started laughing...

M..i am serious..i mean hamien miley 24 ghante bhi nahi hoye hain,..aur main aisey frank ho gaya hon jaise pata nahi kitne janmon se janta hon tumhe..

N..waise main ne bhi kabhi aisey nahi kiya hai..

M..wohi tu!..i dont understand from where has this comfort level arrived?

Both of them laughed, as they both were unaware that this was the UNEXPECTED MAGIC taking over them

nupur watched all the documentries of the plane...and then mayank had coffee..

M..tum chai pe lo..

N.main chai nahi peti..

M..ufff...tum khati kia ho nupur?..

nupur gain smiled...

The time passed in the plane...when the annuocement said..

Ladies gentlemen please fasten ur seat belts as the plane i about to decend to the Cambride airport USA..

this time mayank himself placed his arm under her hand and she agian clucthed it unconciously...the plane started declining.....with great speed..the front tyers collided with the ground and then the back tyres..nupur eyes still closed....the plane moved with great speed on the runway and slowly it came to rest..total stationary..

We have succesfully landed on the Cambrige Internatinal airport USA..the local time is 11.00 am, hope u had a good time flying with us..and lastly friends..
welcome to the UNITED STATES of AMERICA..
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!! That was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

I loved it Mehak!😳 Her chanting prayers..digging her nails into his arm...her sleeping..her getting scared of the plane falling into the water😲😆 their lunch..and his sweetness!! He giving her the blanket and pillow was sooo niceee!!😳😳

Ive never been abroad ..so it was nice seeing what happens in an international flight!😳

Im so excited for the story now..wow! Its gonna be awesomeee!!!!!🤗

-Mansi
Edited by -Mansi- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I can't believe it 😲 - it is as good as I travelled in the same plane with them 😆 You have described even minute details. Mahak - you are truly a wonderful writer and your stories have that magical touch.. Keep up the good work 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Madam, from where should I start? It was such an adorable chapter .... Nupur's nervousness and Mayank understanding her fear .... it was really cute ... I am totally in love with this story ... the increasing comfort level; admiration for each other ... everything is just perfect ... and I see you have included fruits and no sweets in it 😆 as well ... thanks so much ... The best parts were - Mayank's thoughts and his actions of care in terms of making her sleep; putting blanket and pillow and finally putting his hand under hers ... lovely ....
Edited by -jaee- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow dear mindblowing part
loved it aur u have described
whole journey in details
thnx for the pm🤗
Edited by jainypatel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it
beautifully written😊

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