MAYUR FF...Unexpected Magic. - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u so much guys...šŸ¤—..

and yes i changed my usernamešŸ˜Ž.. bcz i hated that 03 in my username...it looked so odd...
ok back to update..šŸ˜†


PART 5

THE FIRST STEP WAS CUSTOM...A fat cheeky officer , who was about 40 in age was sitting on the desk..he had two officers by his side...

CO..two people..?

M...yes..

CO..lekin samman tu mujhe ziyada lag raha hai?...kitna stay hai ap ka?.

M..two years..

CO..oh..than its ok..koi cigarrates carry kar rahe hain ap?...

M..nahi...

CO..Ma'am perfumes ya cosmetics hain ap k pas...

Mayank was about to answer when the officer interuppted...

CO..let her answer...

N..cosmetics aur perfumes hain but they are not in excessive quantity..utne hi hain jitne do logon ko allowed hain...

CO..hmmm..ok..i dont think i need to open ur luggage..u both seem sweet...u may move in..

Mayank was surprised to see nupur speak so confidently...

they moved in...Next was their immigration

They were standing in the line..

M..nupur ye thora tricly ho sakta hai,..aksr schorlship pe jane walon ko illegal suspect kiya jata hai...u just have to stay calm..ok..hum illegal nahi hain..

N..i know..dont worry..

Agian confident smile..he was confused that was she the same girl he married last night..

Thier turn came..the immigration officer was middle aged woman, wearing specs..old but styllish...

IO..passports plz..

mayank handed her the passports...she opened the first one..

IO...*reading*..mayank sharma..*she typed the name on the computer, opened the next one*..nupur bhushan...bhushan?..
*looked at both of them*..may i know how are u both related?..

M..we are married...

IO...*took pf her glasses*..married?...but Mr.sharma u re just 20..*reading the passport*..

M..so?..

IO...ummm..nthing...so nupur..why isnt ur surnmane as ur husband's ? moreover why is ur passport saying SINGLE?..

SHE ASKED INA VERY STRICT VOICE, MAYANK THOUGHT THAT NUPUR MAY GET CONFUSED...BUT SHE WAS NOT..

N...bcz we were married last night...

IO.....LAST NIGHT?..HMMM..newly wed bride...may i see ur marriage certificate..

mayank handed her the certifiacte.

IO..ok...i hope u have submitted a copy of this in the embassy...

M..yes we have..

IO..good!...ok now ur visas say student visa, so ur university recomandation letters plz...both of urs...

Mayank handed her the papers..

IO..MY MY...what an intellegent studious couple..both going to havard...

The officer smiled and so did mayank and nupur...

IO..ok..so all is well...

she stamped and then scanned the passports..and handed then back to them..

IO..All the best Mr & Mrs Sharma...

Both of them smiled unconciously...FIRST TIME THEY WERE ADDRESSED AS A SINGLE NAME...THERe NAMES WERE LINKED...AND IT FELT NICE..TO BOTH OF THEM

next they moved to the cargo section...mayank handed their ticklets to the officer and started placing the bags on the revolvong belt..

N..suniye...

mayank turned..an so did the other couple standing next to them..

N..wo main soch rahi thi k ye brown bag seal karwa lete hain...nahi tu khol jaye ga..wo wahan seal kar rahe hain..

she pionted towards right...an automatic machine was sealing bags with sticking tape...

M..lekin ye...

bivi ki baat maan lo beta..

they both turned..an aged person was smiling at them...

nayi shaadi hoyi hai na,tab hi bhes kar rahe ho..maan lo...

he was giggling...mayank and nupur felt somewhat awkward..

M..thek hi..main karwa lata hon...

They booked the luggage and now nupur was just having her handbag and overcoat and mayank was having a small briefacse which had their documents and his jacket..

they entered the waiting lounge...it was huge lounge with shops all at its side and seating arrangement in the middle...

They were alot of people...mayank and nupur sat on two joining seats..

M...abhi thora time hai..i guess adhe ghante main check in shoro ho ga...kuch khao gi...

N..ummm..*she looked around*..macdonalds..?..main le k aao...

M..ok..per sirf apne liye..i dont eat junk...

N..oh...tu ap ko jo psnd hai hum wohi..

M..come on nupur..i told u no courtesy..tum kha lo..i will have something else..

Nupur smiled and went and so did mayank.., she returned after a while munching her fries, and mayank was sitting there reading newspaper eating CHOCOLATES!...

nupur couldnt help smiling..

M..kia?..

N..ap chocolates khate ho..

M..tu..

N..nahi wo larke nahi khate na..

M..ye kai baat hoyi..larke ku nahi khate...i love chocolates...tum khao gi..


N..nahi..

M...ku..kha lo..merey pass aur hai...

N..nahi main chocolates nahi kha sakti..mujhe nose bleeding ho jati hi...

M..oh..thats bad....

N..main coffee bhi nahi pee sakti.

M..OMG..u know u are missing the worlds two most delicious things...

N..i know...

M..hmm..wasie i am impressed..u are so confident...u really good at the immigration desk

N...thank u..ap hi ne tu kaha tha k remain calm..

M..haan but ur tough looks were awesome..

N..really i was tough..??

M..very much..and u know what..she got scared....


Both of them broke into a laugh...THERE FIRST LAUGH TOGETHER,...

Then there was the announcement..

Passengers travelling from AIR INDIA Flight AI.. 6675...New Delhi to Cambride USA are requested to procced to gate number 21 for check in..the plane is ready for boarding

M..chalo..

they both stood up, took there boarding passes,and statred walking...they walked into the plane.it was connected through a passage with the airport,a beautiful air hostess welcomed them...

they moved to thier seats..mayank placed their coats in the cabinets above..

M..tumhe tumhara bag chiaye ya ye bhi uper rakh don..

N..nahi ye merey pass thek hai...

Three seats were two side by side..by the window..Nupur sat by the window and mayank sat on the other end...there was lot of hustle bustle in the plane, people were adjusting to their seats..when there was the final annoncement..

Good Afternoon ..Captian Shashank welcomes u all with his cabin crew...we will be taking off in a couple of minutes from the NEW DELHI INTERNATIONAL AIRPORT and our destination is the CAMBRIDGE MUNCIPAL AIRPORT USA..,
the total distance to the destination is 1015.4 MILES..we will be travelling at the height of 3000 AGL from ground level, the total time required will be approxiamtely 14 hours 51 minuites...
plz fasten ur seat belts as the plane is about to take off, hope u have a good time flying with us,..

all the doors of the plane closed, the lights of seatbelt warning started flashing..they both fastened their seat belts..all passengers were seated,...it was silence..

the engines started and the plane moved forward with a jerk.. nupur closed her eyes, mumbling some prayer.. placing her hand on mayank's
arm, her nails digging deep into his skin.

Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow ! this is amazing ...........
and the wonderful mayur journey begins .............
i am becoming a huge fan of ur writing & day by day it is becoming more & more ..............
and this time i am even happy to be the first one to leave a comment šŸ‘
Edited by ginny09 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hmm simple yet beautiful
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Mehak sorry hun i didn't comment last part i just readed now both parts were outstanding no words to describe ur update love u hun thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow. this is just nice. i want to see mayanks expression about nupur grabbing his hand.well done mehek.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww..it was nice!! <3 Wow..Nups and so confident? Amazingg!!

Mayu was eating chocolates? 😲 LOL. You know uve actually potrayed me..I too dont like chocolates and coffee! 😳 Im missing the worlds best two things?šŸ˜²šŸ˜†

OMG! Nups flight tension?! AGain MEEEE! Uggh! Im so freakin SCARED of travelling by flight! I need someone to calm me down..

Wow..Im seeing myself in ur FF!!

Continue soon sweetheart!šŸ¤—

-Mansi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hmm madam, I just loved the update ... They are gelling quite well with each other ... I love how they are talking to each other ... Mayank doesn't eat junk šŸ˜‰ ... Nupur is quite confident ... The best part was the end portion where Nupur gets scared ... that was so cute ...

By the way, you have included not one but two things of mine - Junk food and I fear flights - I too make silent prayers not just in flights; but also in buses, trains ... I fear travelling .... and hmm you have also included your chocolate and coffee šŸ˜†
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Posted: 14 years ago
The way Nupur reacted while the plane took off.. that was my first reaction too.. although I dug my nails on the arm-rest as couldn't do that to the person sitting near me...
Nice update..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderful update!!!!šŸ‘
Nupur is so confident....woww...
Hmm.... So Mayank likes chocolate.......šŸ˜‰
Cont soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
hein mahek loved your ff please pm me next time pleaseeeeeeeeeeee

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