MAYUR FF...Unexpected Magic. - Page 16

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesomeeeeeeee update mehak
u describe the whole journey beautifully.
good job dear
keep it up

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Posted: 14 years ago
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mindblowing update
u have written whole update sweetly 😊
Edited by .rumki. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update Mehak!!!!!👏
How he cared for her.....so sweet......Nupur's nails & Mayank's hand..😆
Mujhe toh lag raha tha mein asli mein plane mein beti hoon....
Agar tum aise hi acche acche & pyaare pyaare updates karogi toh tumhari saari spelling mistakes maaf..😉
Cont soon..😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one dear loved it

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow !!!!!!!!
mindblowing !!!!!!!!
amazing !!!!!!!!!
great !!!!!!!!!!
fantastic !!!!!!!!!!
fabulous !!!!!!!!!!
aur kya kahoon words hi khatam ho jayenge !!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Reserved :]

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Hey Mehak,

What a Plane ride you took us all on, i actually felt as if i was in the plane. I have been on international planes tones of time and you described every little details perfectly. Mayank was so sweet ordering her to sleep...and then telling the air hotess they'll eat together..ADORABLE

The bestest part was when Nupur thought they might fall in the water😆..how cute can she be? I'm loving the story so far...but i have question How does Nupur really survive? I mean she doesn't eat fruits, doesn't drink tea....wats wrong with the girl?

Great Update =)

Edited by -Sajjal- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i loved it mehak...it felt as if i was travelling vd thm...
great piece of writing..👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
what an update............u reminded me of my first journey .............bas Mayank was not there me alone😔...............now let the magic begin soon..................!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Mehak 🤗
I'm sorry for not being able to comment on the last part.
But both the parts were totally fabulous! I'm loving all the little moments between them 😳
Wonderfully well written. Loved it <3
And thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was just amazing .........
ok tell me one thing
have you ever been to america or a long trip to any other place by flight?

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