FF: Geet-The Song of Life (note pg 35)

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Sara

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Posted: 14 years ago

#181

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Badria

@sharbatvemto

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Posted: 14 years ago

#182

nice update yaar

but don't you think that there negotiation is a lot and not very necessary??? I now they are funny friends and extra but it talks the whole story by their talks without any action between the main leads.

i mean you can talk about them but in very shot way and the rest should be about the main lead and story.

thanks friend, and reaaaallly loove your story. plz don't be upset from me.

Edited by sharbatvemto - 14 years ago

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Jiwan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#183

Hey guys, just typed up a little something. It's not much but don't really have time to expand on it just yet.

On the Other Side of Town

"Veerji!" Sakhi exclaimed, running towards the entrance. "You're finally home, how come you're late?"

"That ignorant girl!" Maan muttered under his breath, nodding at Sakhi and walking towards the staircase.

"Did you just say 'girl'?" Dadi asked, walking down the stairs.

"What? You met a girl veerji?" Sakhi asked walking behind her elder brother, "What's her name?"

"Yes, Maan beta, who is she?"

Maan stopped at the first step and swivelled his head angrily between Sakhi and Dadima. "I haven't been in the house for more than five minutes and you've already started! Where's Vicky? Why don't you call him to join in with the taunting?!" exclaimed Maan, his face turning a beetroot red.

"Oh stop overreacting Maan," Dadi sighed, "We're never getting going to get a response out of him regarding any girl, Sakhi."

"I know Dadi, but we still need to try. I don't want my elder brother to end up a male-spinster."

"I am still here," Maan sneered, "and there's no such thing as a 'male-spinster', it's called a bachelor."

"I know, but you will be a male-spinster not a bachelor when you get old," Sakhi replied.

"Sakhi!" Maan hissed. "I've been away on business for a month and this is the welcome home I get?!"

"Better than the welcome home you gave us a few months back!"

"What...what welcome home did Maan give you?" Dadi asked, breaking into the now heated conversation between the eldest and youngest siblings.

"Nothing Dadima," Maan replied, staring at Sakhi.

"Maan veerji!" boomed Vicky's voice from the balcony. "How are you? How was the trip?"

"Finally, one Khurana who has the decency to ask about me," Maan said loudly, making sure Dadi and Sakhi could hear him loud and clear.

"Do you really think he cares how your trip was?" Sakhi shot back, raising her eyebrows.

"Of course, I care Sakhi!" Vicky replied, "I'm not like you. Let alone asking bro whether he wants some water, you're questioning him about a random girl? But bro, I have to ask," Vicky continued, ignoring the daggers shooting towards him from Sakhi, "who is this girl?"

Dadima, who had been listening quietly for a while now, burst into laughter. "And you thought Vicky didn't care," dadima chuckled. "Oh Maan beta, why don't you understand? You even mentioning the word 'girl' brings our curiosity to the forefront."

Maan bewilderedly looked between the three and sighed, "You're all bloody mad!"

"I guess staying in London for a month really has rubbed off on you," Vicky said. Taking one last glance at Vicky, Maan took the stairs two at a time and walked towards his room.

Edited by Jiwan08 - 14 years ago