Maaneet SS: Shaadi&SuhaagRaat COMPLETED pg:1,10,19 - Page 20

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow... that was hot..... he he...

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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW THAT WAS HOT & SWEET
WRITE MORE & PM ME
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was awesome!!
wow soo intense....
totally liked reading it
Maheen xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
so i JUST read this and im sitting here like 😲😲😲😲😲😲...im reading at work so everytime someone walked into my office i had to minimize the screen!! 😲😲😲😲 talk about all sorts of hot and bothered...woot woot yaz...just woot woot!!! 👏👏👏👏👏 umm...is it too much to ask for a choti si...pyaari si...epilogue? 😳

JAZ

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Posted: 14 years ago
wooooooooow!!

yasu...loved this short FF.....all the teasing going on with Geet and then even Maan being teased by his bros was a fun read.....the suhaag raat....was ahem....HOT and woooooo....very well written!!

excellent work!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Well, that was.... *hides in her hair* 😳

I just read all three parts, and each was written impeccably!
Maan and Geet together are perfection...😃

However this part made me laugh, mainly because my fingers at that moment were icy cold as were my feet...
(don't worry, they're just naturally like that 😉😉😉) :

He moved closer and the blood raced to her head, leaving her toes and fingers icy cold.

Thanks for the PM and keep writing away such gems! ⭐️


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Posted: 14 years ago
U deserve more than Tonnes of comments
Loved the way in 1st part u showed Geet's nervousness n teasing
The 2nd part Maan getting teased was fab
His reply to Additya was awesum
Adi's laughter is toh out of this world🤣🤣🤣
Dadi's happiness knew knw bounds i felt
SR if ur mum wuld hav read toh kya hota😆😆😆
It was good
Liked the way u showed their passion n love towards each other😉
Awesum SS😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome... mindblowing....
loved all d parts..
plz pm me if u write more on maneet..
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Posted: 14 years ago
ive read ur FF till begini till now nd its sooo gud
love maaneet!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
just read the parts and oh my twas so romantic......................and me blushing............................very beautiful SS dear..........................

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