TRUST ME ONCE( MAANEET FF)note PG 85 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: shreya satish

loved it....

pls add mein ur pm list...
whts up with geet??





thanks
to knw whats gng with geet read next part
plz accept my pm request so that its easy for me to send u a pm next
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: taanni

interesting start.

add me to pm list.

wht happened to geet?





thanks
u will knw whats wrng with geet in next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: seema05

we trust u pm me tooooooooooooooooo





dear u can trust me to send to u a pm as u trust ur next breath but i do believe u will accept my buddy request so that its easy for me to send u pm next time
Edited by topsyturvy23 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: tinatartari

nice ff.plz add me 2 ur pm list.i hav added u 2 ma buddy list,thnks





thanks a lot
got ur request n added u both to my pm list n buddy list
will update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: hermoini

wow this ff sounds so so intresting .....i was wondering pinky maans assistant where the hell is geet .....cn u add me 2 the pm list ..nd yah cnt sent buddy req hv problem do u mind sending me 1 plz ....nd yah do continue asap






thanks a lot
n i dnt mind sending u a buddy request bcoz i myself sending the request to all the ppl who wants me to pm them but havent given a eye to the msg i have posted regarding the buddy request i have posted after the part
so no worries i suppose u must have got tha request by now
will definitely add u to my pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36

Part 2

Pinky 'Yes Maan she is Geet'

Maan ' What happened to her. Why is she in such a bad state? Did she met with an accident. What happened to her dammit tell me'

Pinky 'You remember when I joined your office as your personal assistant told you about her.'

Maan 'Yes I remember you couldn't stop singing praises for your sister. Though I have never seen her in person but I can practically say I know her very well. You couldn't stop worshipping her for the sacrifice she made for you. You told me how she dropped out of college without completing her studies to find a job to just support you in your studies. Your parents died early and left you with nothing. So she had to work day and night to support both you.'

Pinky 'Yes she made sacrifice at that time and till now she has been making them for me. You wanted to know why is she in present state. Its because of me.'

Maan 'I don't understand how can you be responsible for her bad state.'

Pinky 'I am. She has been through hell just to provide me everything I asked for. She never did think about herself. I never knew what she did. How she managed to fulfill all my demands. I just made them and they were fulfilled by her. I am so selfish. '

Maan 'Pinky you are not selfish. You know that and I don't need to prove that to you. Now tell me what happened to Geet.'

Pinky 'Last week Saturday you remember I took a day off. It was because I had planned to pay Geet a surprise visit. I went to her husband Dev's house . I reached the place and rang the bell but no one answered the door. I thought maybe no one is at home. I was about to return when I heard someone screamed. I banged the door and rang bell many times but no one answered. So I immediately called the police and when they arrived I told them I heard someone screaming. So they cracked open the door. When we rushed inside I couldn't believe what I saw. Geet was lying on the floor black blue everywhere on her body and her clothes torn. The Dev was on her and trying to molest her. She was unconscious and bleeding to hell. Police immediately arrested him and Geet was rushed to hospital. I couldn't react to everything. It was like I have been thrown on in hell. When I reached hospital Geet was being tended to and I wasn't allowed to meet her. Later when she regained consciousness she denied to give any statement to the police against Dev. We couldn't understand anything why would she not testify against that beast but she simply denied anything and refused to speak to anyone. I was helpless seeing her so frightened so helpless so vulnerable. I convinced her somehow to come and stay with me. She is so frightened that sometimes she screams in her sleep. Its all my fault because I made all the demands from her and never thought what she does to fulfill them all. She couldn't finish her education because her top priority was to provide for me. She didn't testify against that beast and now he is free because police don't have anything against him.'

Maan 'how can police set him free. They have caught him red handed so what else they need.'

Pinky 'They want a statement from Geet and she has denied to give one. I don't know why is she not testifying against him. She says he is her husband he she won't testify against him'

With that Pinky again bursted into tears. Maan was soothing her out when they heard a shrill scream from the room in which Geet was lying. Pinky rushed to the room and saw Geet crying hysterically. Pinky ran towards her and hugged her murmuring soothing her. Atlast Geet sobered down and Pinky put her to sleep once again. They went out of room together.

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guys i am plz requesting u again those who want me to pm them abt the update plz add me to buddy list. it is very difficult to send 50 pms to to all the ppl one by one. and i am serious those who want pm all u have do is add me . those who wont i cant be sure that i will be able to send pm to each n every one of u. those who have prob adding me tell me i will add u myself

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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
😭 😭 for geet ...cannot see her in pain
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
hey, that was amazing...loving your fanfic continuee soon ....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
nice update.plz update the next part soon!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hmmm its quite diff !! gosh plz add the nxt part 2 .....btw thanks fr adding me ....dev is geets husband....nd geet defending dev...whats up with tht ..i wonder wht maan cn do to help her .....liked maans concern fr pinky

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