A Contract-new FF on Maaneet (upto part 26)

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#281

I liked the song sequence but personally I would suggest you to not to go into too much details about the steps. I am sure writing the song sequence would have taken a lot of your time. You can give the song lyrics in the update but don't go into the intricate details since as readers, it takes time to visualize and many readers just simply skip this visualization. I'l be honest that I myself do this when I am in a hurry. Instead you spend the time on writing a longer update😳

I don't know if I have been able to put my thoughts into words properly or not but, trust me, no intention of offending you. This is simply my view point.

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Amina

@KreyaArshiLover

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#282

loved the part pl send me the next part quick

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sravanthi vangala

@sravss

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: shivangi783
I liked the song sequence but personally I would suggest you to not to go into too much details about the steps. I am sure writing the song sequence would have taken a lot of your time. You can give the song lyrics in the update but don't go into the intricate details since as readers, it takes time to visualize and many readers just simply skip this visualization. I'l be honest that I myself do this when I am in a hurry. Instead you spend the time on writing a longer update😳

I don't know if I have been able to put my thoughts into words properly or not but, trust me, no intention of offending you. This is simply my view point.

thank u for ur suggestion.🤗

thanks for being honest.😊