M&G FF: My Loss,His Gain *NEW!: Chp.6, Pg.39*Jul12

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Navpreet

@dimpzz

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#131

hey tia!
finally u pdated!
really glad!
d update wz fab....
d short n complete flashback of wt happened wid geet wz nice....real sad
she lost her mom when she born.....sad.....she wz never loved...
but now she wz gnna get it all
until she realised dev is maan's brother................
m glad tat atleast they r engaged.....
can't b separated.......
feeling really bad for geet
n hope dev tries to undo all wrong deeds he had done....by punishing naintara n geet forgives him....
i'd be d happiest person...😃
hehehehehehe
d update wz written beautifully
i juz luv d way u write
itz beautiful!
update soon sweety!

love
Navpreet

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ManEet_KaSh

@ManEet_KaSh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

OMG!!! Tia!

No way, this is so bad!!

This is equally bad as it was in Geet! (well it's the same thing, anyway)

Ohh Gawd! what will happen now?

I just hope that ManEet don't end up in a broken relationship!

Oh pls update soon, I'm dying over here!

Yamini

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Saz

@Chotii

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#133

OMG another beautifully written part. I feel awful for Geet! You unfolded her past, her insecurities and all her sufferings so wonderfully. Gosh... Even in the ff, her horrid past won't allow her to live in peace? Urgh.

Fantastic update. I really loved the way You showed Geet/Dev coming face to face. That was brilliant! Her reaction to it as well - all the events running in her mind and then squeezing Maan's hand in fear, pain god knows what else... Tia... amazingly depicted. I felt like I was watching another version of what could have happened. Brilliant update!

Looking forward to more! xxx

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Vijaylakshmi Singh

@Lakshmi86

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#134

Hi,

It was a fantastic update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Man your words wre so short and so deep,

you need only a sentence to finish the story and that too beautifully,

I love your writing style,

you are amazing.................

Hmmm worried ofcourse of next update

Love

Lakshmi

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Jenifer

@Jenifer.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#135

I read! I finally read! But in my defence, I've been reading one update per day so no glaring from you, Missy!

Needless to say, it was a amazing peice. Geet's feeling of being rejected as so many points in her life hence her insecurities was brilliantly portrayed. Liking the hate match between Dev and NT, should be spicer in the coming updates and as for NT, that woman's too dangerously delicious to fully loathe! But I have to say, what I liked the most was seeing a lil of the old Dev, the one who joked around with Maan. He's been lost in the show and with where you ended, I'm guessing were back to seeing the solemn him again. Sigh.

Now, it all starts with the next chapter. This is GHSP the Tia way so bring the drama on!

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roopali

@rsroopali

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#136

omg after such long thy meet &y such bad things happen during gud occassions onlyyyyy
luved d update

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known

@mitzi11

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#137

great update i hope there not gonner separate Maaneet pls cont soon thanks pm

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Saz

@Chotii

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: nihatri
wow

^^^ Ditto that. I randomly re-read the update and that ^^ is my feeling exactly. Wow in So many ways!
xxx

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Amna

@cutiepie9512345

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Posted: 14 years ago

#139

Brilliant work Tia!!
Looking forward to reading Geet told in your style.
Mind blowing descriptions and loved the word choice!!
I can't wait to read what happens after this!!
Magnificent!