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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Muskan
😛
Fabulous update yaar. Iam not having words to praise. U r simply beyond any praising. Sub limit par kar diya aap ne. I like the conversation between Maan and Geet. and Geets silly jokes also. Seriouly kahan se ye sub aata hai aapke dimag me. 😉
Keep writting soon yaar. Iam always checking kahi aapka PM to nahi aaya. Waiting eagarly for ur update. Ye week end katna bahut mukhil hota hai ek to serial bi nahi hota and aapka Update der se aata hai.
Plz dont mind iam addicted to ur updates. Take ur own time. God bless u. Till then happy writting.
Bye
Lakshmi
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Posted: 14 years ago
I love this new ff of urs!!
I am a biiiiiig fan of u and ur ff's!!!
I love it how Geet doesn't know her " BACHAN" is Maan hahah.... 😆!!
I hope golf happens without her friends 😆!!
Thanks for the pmz!!
Plz update soon...!! xx
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 13

geet sleeps off pulling the sheet over her head
her phone rings... she puts in the silent & sleeps agian
at 12pm raaji pushes her off the bed..
raaji - didi aap ka phone me 100 miss calls hain
kya kar hare hoo, prem aur armaan ne to landline main bhi 10 bar
phone kar diya, uttoo na 12 bajrahen hain
geet gets up at once & checks her phone 100 missed calls
she scrolls up ...5 missed calls from maan...she closes her eyes
she calls back immediately....no response..
geet - raaji is number pe try karte rahena..I will get ready
she rushes to the loo has a shower & slips into her jeans
geet - uttaya kya
nahi di..to try karte rahe, lekin yeh kaun hain
geet snatches the phone & says - aake batati hon
aabhi mujhe kanhi jana hain
geet hops into her silver BMW & drives to Delhi golf club...her body gaurds followed
aaj to mujhe kaa jayega..uff ...lekin main usse itna kyun dar rahi hoon
nahi nahi I commited that I will meet him at 11am..one hr late
mere standards ke liya to jaldi hain...lekin
wat is this yaar..kya sochega mera bare main
relax geet sorry boldena
she parks the car & rushes to the reception
Mr.Bachan kanha milenge...
receptionist - sorry
geet mumers aab uska naam yah - DD kanha milenge
receptionist she checks the list of people yanha koi DD nahi hain
she pulls the records & starts reading the names
receptionist - you cannot do this & calls the gaurds
geet shot glance at her & continued...
Mr.Chopra
Mr. Sharma
Mr. Maan Singh Khurana... yeh yanha kya kar raha hain
tabhi mera saat sab bura bura ho raha hain....how much I hate this guy now
she looks further
Mr. Malhotra
Mr. Arjun Prakash
Mr. David thomas
the guards requests her to give the recod back
she snatches the book & says I am looking for some one wait
her gaurds stop them she gets annoyed at her helplessness & tears the book & throws it away
receptionist - i request u to leave
geet creats a scene..I am not leaving without meeting Mr.bachan screaming on
top of her voice...maan notices her & walks towards her
receptionist - maam u r disturbing our guests
geet - I am not leaving without meeting mr.bachan, get that straight
ek to woh phone bhi nahi utta rahe hain...aur tum mujhe aapna yeh stupid attitude
dikharahe hoo
receptionist - if u don't leave now I will call the police
geet - call the army if u want I am not leaving without meeting Mr.bachan
maan smiles... at her act
receptionist picks the phone to call police
maan cuts the call - its ok woh mere saat hain
geet - sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry
maan walks to the field...her gaurds wait near the car
geet follows..main so gayi thi aapne mujhe raat bhar sone nahi diya tha na
maan stares at her...teehk hain maine hi phone kiya tha
lekin aap to mujhe sone kaha sakte the
maan shots another stirn look
teehk hai kaha tha ...lekin main soee to nahi na finally
maan wearing the gloves and looks away
geet - itna naraz kyun ho rahe ho main to sirf 1hr late hoon
maan looks at the watch
geet - new watch...aachi hain
maan pulls his hand away
geet - 1 hr se thoda jada
maan - haan 1hr se 1hr jaada
geet - teehk hain 2hrs late hoon
maan looks into the stand selecting the club
geet - sorry kaha na
maan picks a club ...looks at it & keeps it back
geet - please itna gussa mat karo
he lifts a cub & swings it in the air...geet bends down getting scared
geet - maroo ghe kya?
maan puts the club down & takes another one
geet - us se hi mar lena tha...
maan swings it again... he picks the ball & places it
he focuses on the flag & then swings his club..looks at geet & takes his shoot
geet claps ....very nice shot...
maan ignores & walks to the ball...geet follows him
geet - mane to aap ke shot ko bhi aacha kha diya..aab to gussa mat karo
they reach the ball...it was quite walk & geet kept
saying sorry sorry sorry..holding her ears
maan saw his ball was very close to the hole
he tried aiming ...geet - bachan kaha na sorry
maan changes the club again & dose'nt look at her at all
he swings the club softly twice & was about to hit..
geet took the ball & turned away
maan - GEET ...damit u just spoiled the whole game
maan makes a mark roughly where he assumeed the ball was
and placed another ball...geet took that one too
maan - give me the ball now
geet turned her back...placed another ball she took that one too
maan shoved the club in the stand & walked to geet
she moved away.... maan put his around her waist & held her hand
she waked her hand & tried to move ahead...maan put the other hand &
took her into his arms from back..ball chodo in stirn voice
from back of her ears he said...phele mujhe se kaho ki naraz nahi hoo
maan pulls the ball she snaps her hand & tries to run out
maan pulls her in his arms in a jerk..don't even try that
u will hurt urself
... maine sorry kaha na..phir itna naraz kyun ho
maan still tries to take the ball ..she pulls her hand away..tring to bend
out of his arms & fall infront....maan bends along & they roll over
the field...over each other...almost hug almost maan on top of her
then she on top of maan & again....finally they stop
maan holds her from rolling further...& lies next to her resting on his elbow
geet struggles to catch herself & clings on to him
she was in a mess..with grass all over her face & her curly hair
maan removed the grass from her hair looking at closed & scared eyes
them removed it from her forehead...then from her neck...moved further down
geet slowly flutered opened her eyes & looked at maan
maan stopped at once & lie on the grass looking at the sky
geet sat on maans stomach pinning his hands with her knees...& pulled his collar
tum aapne aap ko samjhthe kaya ho..kaha na sorry
maan was enjoying his plight actually did'nt want to say anything
maan smiled & looked away...
geet - uff finally smile to kiya & left his collar
main kab se aap ko mana rahi hoon..itna koi gussa karta hain kya
maan - u were 2 hrs late
geet - so do I have to manaofy u for 4 hrs
maan - atleast 1hr
geet aacha
& starts hitting his chest still sitting on his stomach😉


precap
aarey golf sikhana to rahe hi gaya😳...... some other day...kal ke liya lunch ...
what say????😉
NEXT PART 14
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice part..I really Geet & Maan talk...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Ahaha fabulous update yaar!!! it was so cute how geet was looking for maan's missed call first...she didnt even bother to look at how many times prem and armaan called her and she didnt even call them back...she called maan first! 😃......so cute....she so loves him but she doesnt realize it yet! 😉...and wat can i say abt maan.....i love it how he was taking full advantage of geet saying sorry to him lol....i bet he was enjoying annoying her 😆....and wow geet doesnt even kno his real name yet, let alone tht his name is maan singh khurana 😆....she calls herself his friend and she still hasnt asked for his name ahaha. cant wait for her expression when she finds out his name 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
hehehehehehe golf toh ek bahana thaaaaaaaa - hazur ko to apne dill ka haal acha karne ka iraada hai - us ke liye toh har ghadi har modh pe woh uske kareeb jaane ke raaste hi dhoonde ga - aur kya?? chahe lunch, golf, coffee date ya phir lift hi kyun na ho
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Posted: 14 years ago
fabulous update muskaan...😆 really loved maan's behavior n geet to lajawab...😆🤣 update soon dear jst cant wait to c them together...loves forever
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Posted: 14 years ago
This is great di...lolz
geet - 1 hr se thoda jada
maan - haan 1hr se 1hr jaada
geet - teehk hain 2hrs late hoon
Hope Geet manages to manaofy Maan soon
Thanks for the lovely update
Please update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Missed you and your updates yesterday😭
Ek toh weekend aur oopar se muskan gayab, Aise koi karta hai kya? (Geet style)

As for this update, loved it😊
Reception scene was really good. Bachan se milna hai, DD se and then she snatched the register and curses MSK least knowing ki uksa Bachhan MSK hi hai😆😆
Loved the way she was trying manofy him😊
Maan bhi kam nahi hai, poore mazze le raha tha, tang kar raha tha hamari Geet ko😛
But Geet toh Geet hai, she knows how to get things her way. Balls hi uthani shuru kar di😆
Ab kya karoge Mr. Maan Singh Khurana?😉

Awesome update😊
Now going to read madhoshi update😊
Please update Pyaar ka ehsaas too😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome musky
but geet ko uska naam toh bta do yaar taki atleast woh usse dhondh sake golf toh sikhaya nahin abh lunch pe toh le jayega na😆😆😆😆😆

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