MayUr FF: I Thee Wed (Ch. 13 - Pg. 105) 12/06/2013 - Page 23

amazing update!!
loved the way u portrayed the 1st day of their married life!
cont soon

this ws a really coool updt

it was a mind blowing update
i really love their understanding
lovely update
update next part soon

love
tasfia

You started your Physics and Newton again haan.... The best line for me was this

RESS

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You know what Akki why I love your writing this much, coz its natural!!!

It doesn't seem like I am reading some fiction, everything just flipped across my eyes as if I am watching all that going on. Mayank and Nupur through so good friends but yeah it really is so uncomfortable to live with some one 24/7, I means its kindda weird feeling and awkwardness and you have put that in words brilliantly. I simply adore each and every word you write!!!

This upate was beautiful juts like Nupur in blue Saree😉😆, haha, ok coming to point. It indeed was a Gorgeous Update, I loved when Mayank said, "Sea is beautiful, isn't it?" he is so damn adorable man!!!😍

Just brilliant piece of writing my jaan!!!! You are excellent and yeah my comment might is not proportional to length of ur update!!!🤣

Keep it up!!!
and yeah update next soon!!!😉

Akki another lovely part😃😃

Totally love the new feelings that MayUr are going through despite knowing each other inside out for ages....😃😃 and their flirting is soooo cuteeee......😃😃

despite being best friends, things have still changed for both of them...in a good way...for the better...😃😃 and they are slowly adjusting to sharing their space with each other....😃😃

All so realistic and beautiful, as usual :))

Loved the shirtless Mayank and the Nupur in a blue sari😃😃

Update soon okies??😃

Res :]

EIDTED

You know akki, I cease to wonder with each of your update if couples like that exist? I know friends like that exist. But two people who are married to each other...and are the best of friends? Thats an idol relationsip anyone looks for... My friend when she got married she told me " i'm marrying my best friend --- " then somehow through the months she became his wife and they forgot they were the best of friends at some point in their lives?😆 But they are happy so thats all that matter.

Coming to your update....i won't say your awsome...because hun those words don't even suit you anymore..you above and beyond.

I can't believe they actually discussed their akwardness....it seemed so real. And then Nupur in a blue sari...😍 she was gorgous. And the fact that they were not sorry about this marriage was the sweetest part for me.

Akki... Do continue Soon.

Sajjal