FF.manneet **TREMBLE of LOVE** part 25 pg70 - Page 26

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hermoini

kya yaar ...its nt easy 2 patch up these 2 ppl..they r poles apart ...maans heart beating fr geet ...but hes way ahead in relatioship with sameera ...i mean both r physically involved na ..nd geet knws all dat..will shestill accept maan ..i mean wont she feel its risky coz maan cn fall fr another grl after geet he might leave geet like hes leaving sameera....im thinking frm geets pov ..but its u the narrator after all who i trust completely...ur twists r famous fr gving us heartattack !!! lol kidding .....full faith in u..so far mindblowing .....👍🏼


hahaha loved that… and yes thats true…. so geet have to be carefull…. maan have to do hell of allot to win geet :D
xxxx
and next few parts :D pls dont hate me… i am updating now… just looking for some photo
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: riyaanu87

will you be posting some more parts now??😊


yes i am hun
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dimpzz


awwww...........no way m i gnna stop reading ur ff's i really luv all of them!
n i dun hate ur maan..........
yea i noe he slept wid sameera n stuff....but sometymz u get carried away ryt....m sure she must hav done sumthing n u got him under her control or sumthing......
but wteva it is ....i cn never ever hate maan!
i luv him for wteva he is! :D
newayz update sooooon! :)


awww ty … u already making me feel beter :D
xxxxxx will update now… xxxxxxx
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 14

On maan and geets second day... Sammera comes back to the office.... She walks straight in maans office...

Sam: will you explain... What's going on here?
Maan: I thought I made it clear!
Sam: no you haven't! What is dis?
Maan: I need time... To think everything through!
Sam: you had enough time... Over a week...
Maan stands up and sam cones close to.... Resting her hand on his chest...
Geet catches a glimps.... She closed the curten... To give them privacy....
With matter of a second.... Maan looked at geet again.... Found the curten close.... He closed his eyes.... What do you want?
Sam: I want answer.... Today at 8 sharp... I want you home....
Sam leaves....

Maan sat there silent.... Relaxed for a minute.... He wasn't sure him self.... Which way to flow.... One way.... His some type of love.... Sam and him.... Shares such a personal relationship.... And another direction.... Something.... Nice was happening to him.... He didn't knew how to react....

After hours geet walks in... Maan looked tense...
Geet: sirrr.... Sirrrr... SIRRR...
maan jumped... He looks at geet angrily...
Geet: sorry... You were dead...
Maan: what?
Geet: I mean you were thinking!
Maan: what is it?
Geet: I am going... It's 7....
Maan: oh... Ok.. I See you 2mx...

Geet leaves... Flowed by maan.... He sat in his car.... Thinking.... If he really wanted to go round sam.... Why did she call him tonight.....
Maan relaxed in his car...
Geet knocked...
Maan jumped again....
Maan: what is it?
Geet: umm... Oh... I suppose to go round your house... Will you give me lift... I can't see a taxi....
Maan: umm... Yea... I was going home to....

Bothe sat in the car... Silent... Not sure what to say.... Geet didn't say a word.... Still petrified...
Maan: umm... Did you call dadi?
Geet: yes...
Maan: how is she feeling?
Geet: good... But she wants me round...
Maan: and oh....

Geets phone rings... It's Rahul....
Rahul: where are you?
Geet: hay... I am going round dadis house...
Rahul: oh... Ok I am there... Dadi is cooking tonight...
Geet: no not your dadi... Maan sirs dadi....
Rahul: oh! Why? And this time?
Geet: yea... She is not feeling well... She wants ne round her...
Maan: you said dadi was fine!
Geet: shhh..... It's maan sir... He is giving me a lift!
Rahul: umm... Why are you with him?
Geet roles his eyes... : you are not my BF... And she cuts the call!...

Maan: are you two alright? He didn't want any problem in her life... Because of him...

Geet: it's nothing... Dw... He always over react....

Both Arives at the mansion..... Geet and maan walks in to dadis room...

Geet: how are you felling Dadima?
Dadi: good beta...
Geet: I will stay tonight as well... She smiled...
Maan pleased: I will be back Dadima...

Maan went to his room... Switched his phone off... He was going no where tonight... Specially not round Sammera...

It's 9pm... Geet cooked dinner for everyone...
After dinner round about 10... Sammera called home number... Geet answers... ... ...
geet: hello...
Sam: give the phone to maan... Or tell him to call!
Geet: yes mam... I will pass the message on....
She hangs up...
Geet walks round the mansion to look for maan... She was less petrified of him now... Thanks to dadi... But still... He always gives her creep....

Maan was doing his usal marcle art.... Kick after kick... Punch after Punch.... he was wearing no tops.... His every muscle was visible... Looking hot... Sexy...
Geet pepps... She wasn't that inspired.... On his body... But the way he punched... It was full of pain.... The kick... He was hurting him self.... Geet looked curious... Wonders.... Why is he doing this to him...

Geet: sirr....
Maan frozen....
geet: Sammera mam called! Umm.... Here.... It's the phone...
Maan looks at her angrily... Snatches the phone... Smashes it... Geet jumps .... Shocked to see this type of behavior... And walks out....



NEXT: maan faces lifetime decision…



ok.. next one… sox…. umm.. pls leave some comments

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Posted: 14 years ago
Keyama❤️❤️,
We do not hate your Maan. After all, this is life, things like this happen in life. Life not smooth sailing all the time. N so we understand....
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️Everyone, almost has a past in their lives. Its is the present moment and future that counts....❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
So the moments Geet n Maan are sharing right now in their present moment will create a beautiful future for both of them = Tremble of Love or how I see it as Temple of Love. 👏👏👏👏
Will always Love Maan n Geet.
Chalo, will wait for your update.
Love u
Rachana
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Posted: 14 years ago
luved it so much thanx for updating so fast u r to good dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
ok next part is up now….
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update!
Seems like Sameera will be out of the picture soon😃
Maan confused😆
Lets see wat happens in the next update.....


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Posted: 14 years ago

part 15


Geet stood there... Silent.... Not sure how to react Exactly....
Geet: umm...

Next day...
Geet was in office before maan... Only 2 more day to go... Thought maan... Then she is leaving....
Sam was back at work...

Sam and geet...

Sam: what are you doing here?
Geet: umm... Dadima... I mean mam have asked me to stay few more days... I am leaving this Friday!
Sam: why not now? She was extremely rude...
Geet: (what a bitch!) umm... She made me sign a mini contract!
Sam: what?
Geet: sorry mam... I also would like to go... But... I guss it's only 2 more days...
Sam: don't worry... You can go... And don't worry about the contract...
Geet didn't want to break dadis promise... But at the same time... She had no aspects of arguing with this natanki!
Geet: if you want mam... I will leave!
Sam: please do!

Geet walks to her cabin and starts packing her stuff... Maan notices... He walks to her cabin...

Maan: where are you going?
Geet: oh... Umm... Sammera mam said... I can leave!
Maan: what?
Geet: it's really nice working with you sir! She smiles at him... And leaves... Leaving maan standing in the empty cabin... Even his last hop seems to tremble.....

Maan makes his way to Sammeras cabine...
Maan: why have you let geet go?
Sam: why? She was about to in 2days anyway... I don't see ... Why you making such a big deal!
Maan: I am the boss here... And I decide... What to do!
Sam: maybe! Why you didn't come last night?
Maan: we not talking about are personal life here!
Sam: yes we are...
She puts her hands round his neck...
He removes it... Taking few step back...
Maan: we are done!
Sam: I am pregnant!...
Maan was about to walk out... His stopped... Frozen!.. Like his world just crashed under his feet... Like... He wasn't sure how to react! Happy!... Exited! Hatred! Sad! Scream!.... He just couldn't react... He wasn't type of guy... Who would back way from his promise.... But there was something... He couldn't believe... The night... The one night... He doesn't have any memory about it.... That night... Something different happen....

Sam: I am pregnant!
Maan didn't look at her... He wasn't happy... She walks in front of him and hugs him tight...
Sam: we need to get married soon!
Maan didn't take anything in after the word marriage... Nothing.... He didn't love her...

Sam: shall I fix a date?
Maan: hmm...
He frees him from her hug and walks out...

Maan walks out... No clue how he will say this to dadi... She already have a mini heart attack... And she doesn't want this child... To....
He sits in his car.... It is a responsibility... That he can't ignore... Can't run way... The great MSK never ran way... From any situation... But... He have to sacrifice all his life... For something... That... Is not.... He couldn't think... He wasn't happy at all.... No where near.... He wanted to scream... Scream out loud.... He drove.... Fast as he could.... Faster then ever.... Far way as possible.... Then stoped near the cliff..... Rushed out..... Taking his blazer off.... Screaming.... To the world.... Screaming.... Screaming louder then ever.... He wanted through all those pain out.... Out.... With those rower that was coming out of his heart.... He screamed louder.... And louder.....


Geet sat up from her bed... Like something somewhere just happened... Not sure what... Like someone was in pain... In deep pain....

Heer: Di... Are you alright?
Geet: hmm... Yes... Just had a bad dream... Like someone was in deep pain...!
Heer: you and your bad dream... Please sleep...
Geet: yea....

Next day... Geet was back to her normal office... She didn't look that happy at all... Something was bothering her... She decided to ignore...

Armaan: you are back... Early!
Geet: yea... Mam is in hospital... And Sammera mam is back... So she let me leave early...
Armaan: that's nice of her...
Geet: yea... I know!
Armaan: there is a new project... And we me you and Rahul... Have to go to banglore... For two weeks!
Geet: banglore! Two weeks!
Armaan nodes...
Geet: alright... Hive me few hours to pack... I will see you in airport tonight!
Armaan smiles...: I will see you later...

Geet disappears from town for two weeks... Meantime maan was getting forced to get married... Shasha wasn't type of girl who would leave maan that easily... He really needed help... Help to solve this problem... It was eating him inside... He couldn't talk to dadi... there was no chance... But it's his child after all... He would never neglate his chil... He agrees to marry... In 4 months..........

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Weeks have passed.... Maan haven't seen geet.... Or geet.... To maan.... There was nothing.... Nothing at all could happen to change something…..





i couldnt find maan screaming on the clife… but u can imagne………………… him screaming…… when he founds geet was pregnent…..


ok pls pls pls pls

do leave me some lovely comments hehehe

and u can hate maan… much as u like… loved all the comments before

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Posted: 14 years ago

both parts lovely super pls cont soonnnnnnnn thanks pm

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