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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8...beautiful part...loved it completeley...
continue soon...
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome 👏
nice part ⭐️
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

heyyy

i am a new reader to this ff and must sayy it iss gr8!!!!

hope AR confess soon

plss add mee to your pm listtt plsss

continuee soon

sakshi

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey...thanks for the pm...i just read your whole ff & god i loved it to bits
awesome man....but this was a really short part...pls update a longer part soon....waiting eagerly for your update....i really love this ff man...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 14B

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Riddhima walks in followed by everyone else.

Rid: mujhe armaan se akel baat karni hai

arm: ridzi dekho..

rid: agar tumhe mere bare mein kuch yaad naahin hai toh tumhe yeh kaise pata hai ki sab mujhe ridzi bulate hai? hm? dekho i need to talk to Armaan ALONE NOW!

Abhi: Armaan hum jaate hai, you know what you have to do. aur mai bahar sab ke saath baat karte hoon.

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Outside the room

maan: what were you saying you know what you have to do aur mai bahar sab ke saath baat karte hoon? what's going on Abhi?

abhi: woh actually, Armaan really did come out of the coma miraculously, but he is not suffering from partial memory loss, nor is his personality any different

rahul: toh phir what was that hot maal thing?

atul: and why did he lie to riddhima?

maan: and how could he lie to me and rahul?

abhi: tum log to armaan ko jaanta ho na? phir bhi i have to explain? armaan riddhima ko jaan se bhi zyada pyaar karta hai. he was hurting a llot when he thought she really loved kabir. he knew maan and rahul felt bad as well. He felt that he can't just up and stay away from her as it will hurt her too much, but staying near her was too painful for him as well and he knew she would sense the pain on his face sooner or later. If she found out about his one sided love she'd feel guilty. So he decided upon coming out of the coma that he will fake memory loss and a personality change. he figured if riddhima thought he forgot her and he was completely disgusting now she would stay away from him. that she would dislike him. She wouldnt even sense his pain. He also figured that maan and rahul wouldn't feel bad for him as they'd think he was fine and now since he doesnt remember his love he wont be hurting anymore.

maan: armaan bhi na bilkul buddhu hai!

rahul: hamesha superman banna hai use

maan: isliye toh bi kehte the na, woh armaan nahin supARmaan hai....hamesha dusro ki bare mein sochta hai

Atul: hmm lekin ridzi toh bhi use pyaar karta hai, toh ab kya hoga?

Abhi: pata nahin, lekin he should tell her the truth.

Anji: but the golden question is what's going on inside? is he telling her? I mean there is nothing stopping them now is there?

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Inside Armaan's hospital room

rid: agar tumhe mere bare mein kuch yaad naahin hai toh tumhe yeh kaise pata hai ki sab mujhe ridzi bulate hai?

armaan: woh actually...

ridz: i know ki yeh sab ek natak tha. tumne toh mujhe bhuliya bhi nahin. i know ki you can forget yourself but not me. to phir kyun?

armaan: dekho basket i'm sorry, woh maine socha ki tum kabir se pyaar karte ho aur i couldnt take it. aur i knew ki if i tried sstaying away for no reason it's hurt you so i figured if you thought i dont remember and my personality is different maybe you wouldnt like the knew me and would stay away from me...

rid: armaan why couldnt you take it? why did you feel bad seeing me with kabir?

armaan: riddhu dekho woh sab important nahin hain. kabir is your boyfriend.

ridz: nahin hain. i cleared things with him this morning. i want you to tell me why you couldn't see me with kabir. WHY DID IT HURT YOU SO MUCH? WHY HAVE YOU BEEN AVOIDING ME EVER SINCE I TOLD YOU ABOUT HIM?

armaan: BECAUSE I LOVE YOU DA**IT!

ridz: i love you too teddy. i love you too

with that riddhima hugs armaan. both of them are shedding tears

ridz: please don't ever even pretend to forget me armaan, main marjauga. aur never endanger your life again. agar tumhe kuch hojata toh mera kya hota?

arm: i'm sorry, i promise aisa kabhie ahin karunga phir lekin please tum kabie bhi marne ka baat mat karna basket.

ridz; phirse kaho na basket teddy

armaan: i love you basket

ridz: pata hai teddy. pichle kuch ghante mein main taras rahe thi tumhare muh se basket sunne ke liye.

armaan: i'm sorry

ridz: it's okay. ab toh sab theek hai na.

armaan: haan, waise riddhu baaki sab ke cover ups tumse thora covering hai. tum toh wah wah kya sexy...

ridz; armaan! yeh sab tumhare galti hain! i didn't have time to change into something appropriate! I didn't even realize! omg i've been here so long oh gosh!

(actually riddhima was wearing a pinkish purpleish tunic type dress on top of her bikini's, but the tunic was totally see through)

arm: don't worry my jacket was inside my bag so it made it through the accident without getting spoiled. i think abhi put it in that cupboard. you can wear that. lekin ab pehne ki koi zururat nahin hain. ab toh mere alawa ko aur nahin hain.

ridz: armaaaaaan!

arm: riddhimaaaa!

ridz: waise itne broken bones! tum ghar kab aaogi? and can you travel like this?

arm: hmm well 1. that depends on abhi. and 2. i think i wont be able to make the road trip back we were planning. i'll catch a plane and meet you guys back home.

ridz: hmm you don't think we'll really let you go alone do you?

arm: haha no...not really

ridz: waise armaan. tum woh chipkili nataasha ki saath itne chipak kar kyun naach raha tha?

armaan: hmmm kuch jal re hain kya? waise what was that, why did you get so drunk? and you were going insane to dance with me

ridz: i hated seeing you with that chipkali. i always felt there was something special b/t us but i didnt want to ruin our friendship by prodding it. so i ignored those feelings. it was always so easy with you. phir when u just left that day, when kabir came, main itne bechain hore thi. like i couldn't take it! phir i saw you, lekin you were with nataasha! you were ignoring me and were dancing so close to her. i couldn't take it! i realized how deeply i loved you. toh i started drinking. phir i guess when i was drunk my emotions started coming out. i wanted to be with you. feel you with me and not her.

armaan: hmm toh you remember everything?

ridz blushes, : haann...waise why were you dancing so close to nataasha the lambe naak wali chipkali?

arm: hhaahaha well she was hitting on me, then maan and rahul called saying you guys were here. i needed to show maan and rahul, and well to a point to you that i was fine. I needed to distract myself from you. i needed to make you dislike me. loving you and seeing you with kabir was going to be too hard.

ridz: i'm sorry armaan, if i had never said yes to kabir all this would have never happened.

arm: why did you say yes?

ridz: pata nahin. i knew i didnt love him. i knew i felt something for you. i wanted to compare it with someone else. atul is my jeeju, rahul is my brother now, maan well i know he and geet are secretly in love but not telling anyone yet, so i didn;t have anyone to compare us with. then when kabir asked me i felt maybe i should try. see after dating him if i feel different about him or if i really love you afterall.

arm: hmm, toh if you knew all along ki you are attracted to me, toh didn;t you feel embarresed always seeing me in my boxers? huh??

ridz blushes

ridz: armaan!! waise we were just friends aur you look so cute when you walk around all confused in your boxers.

armaan: hmmm naughty naughty girl....wow mere girlfriend toh not only sexy but kafi naughty naughty hain....hmmm i likeeee

ridz's mouth drops.

ridz: armaan!

armaan just grins and leans foward and lightly kisses riddhima's lips. just a sweet simple kiss. then he just smiles at her

arm: lekin i think naughty naughty ke liye we should wait until i am better *winks*

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done!

okay this is the last update until like january-ish, can't give an exact date.

i will be out of town until sometime in january. so i wont be able to read or write ff's until i get back. i promise to read all of them when i get back , and to update my ffs then too! i will try to update mere khwabon before leaving but no promises!

-pms later





Edited by ammy_ka_ashu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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complete the part MISSY......

EDITED 😛
yeahh luved the part Ashu...:)
finally everything is cleared btw AR and others..)-:)
and AR moments were sooo cute... but still Armaan cant live without teasing his basket😉
thanxx for completing the part and continue soon...:) now i want the next part soon..:) (jst jkn take ur time)
tc :)
Preet <3
Edited by cutiepreet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear...once u have completed with this part pls do pm me on the update...tc & update soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

HI dear.....I am GEET nd a die heart fan of DMG and AR FF😊....,just read all the parts of ur ff in one go nd must say I just loved it yaar👍🏼......I really like Armaan's character.... really want to join this jouney,,,,so could u plzzzzzzzzzzzz add me to ur PM LIST....thanks in advance nd do continue soon...😃

take care
GEET
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cutiepreet

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complete the part MISSY......


hahaha okayss just for you :D lol
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ammy_ka_ashu


hahaha okayss just for you :D lol



thank u..:) but do it soon...😆

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