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cuteshilpa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#191

wwwwwooooowwwwwwwwwww loved the part it iz awesome cont soon

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roshni mittal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#192

hey sweety great part

thnx for the pm

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punam

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Posted: 14 years ago

#193

hey ...liked this part...simply amazing!...arman and his noutanki! ooff!!...super noutanki boy.!...anyways plz.pm me when u ud and sorry for late comment dear.....luv......😃😃😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

#194

PART 14a

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abhi helps armaan go to the doorway, once outside abhi shouts kya hua?

this gets riddhima's attention, she notices armaan standing there, and runs over to him, knocking down atul and muskaan (who were holding her)

she runs and hugs him tightly, as if her life depended on it

ridz: teddy, please kaho na sabko ki main tumhare bina kahe ja nahin sakta, please teddy kaho na sabko ki armaan aur riddhima ek dusre ki bina nahin reh sakta...please kehdo sabko....kehdo ki tum mazaak kareho, kehdo ki tumhe mujhe yaad hai, tum mujhe kaise bhul sakte ho? kehdo na.........

armaan: dekho, please just calm down

ridz: armaan please kehdo na sabko ki tum bhi mujhe pyaar karte ho jitna main tumhe.....please kehdo na ki hum ek dusre ki bina nahin jee sakta, please kehdo na teddy kehdo na...(in between she is crying a LOT)

armaan (with tears in his eyes now): kya...tum....tum muhje.....tume mujhe pyaar karte ho?

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riddhima starts furiously kissing his bare chest making armaan go wild

armaan: riddhima....ruko, and answer me, tum mujhe pyaar karte ho?

riddhima still in her trance doesn't hear his question, she just lifts her face and looks at him, stares at him for a second, then captures his lips with hers, shocking not only armaan, but everyone else, including Abhi who was holding armaan up all this while as armaan had broken a leg, an arm, and a few ribs (As well as bruising a lot of other places and deep cuts).

Abhi in shock of what just happened accidently let go of armaan, who immeadiately fell back on his back, taking riddhima down with him.

Riddhima noticing that he isnt responding to her, lifts her head back and is confused to see her lying on top of armaan. armaan looked like he was in severe pain.

suddenly she was lifted up by atul and muskaan.

abhi: oh my gosh! armaan i'm so sorry! woh i was so shocked by evverything i didnt realize i let go of you.........

armaan: uff abhiiii let me get betterrr, i'll kill youuuuuuuuuuu, now help me up saala!

maan/rahul: abhi? as in abhimanyu modi?

abhi: haan, finally pechana apne bhai ko?

maan: abe yaar it's not our fault we havent seen you in so long! are armaan why didnt you tell us?

armaan (still on the floor): sorry was focused on trying to live, or maybe get up from the damn floor....

abhi: shit! ssorry yaar,

maan, rahul. and abhi help armaan up and take him back to his room.

riddhima on the other hand was fighting atul and muskaan to go to armaan

atul: riddhima hosh mein aao! HE DOESNT REMEMBER YOU!

geet: haan ridzi, dheere dheere sab yaad aajayega, lekin you shouldnt force yourself on him like that! it's not good for his health!

ridz: dekho i know ki mere armaan nataak kare hain! meri dil kehta hai ki yeh sab nataak hai! he remembers me! armaan khud ko bhul sakta hai lekin apne riddhima ko kabhie nahin!

anji: uff! maybe he doesnt love you back ridzi! hosh mein aao!

ridz: nahin, he loves me too, i know he does, aur maan aur rahul bhi toh kaha tha...

maan comes out and asks riddhima to come in...

TO BE CONTINUED

Edited by ammy_ka_ashu - 14 years ago

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Kamal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#195

great

thnx 4 the pm

update soon

Kamal

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Parneet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#196

woo wooo... too much drama is going on..lol
but the part was cute..and funy..lol :) <3
awww finally Ridz again well confessed her love but Armaan still is asking her the same ques since the last part..lol
anywayzz omg. i still cant get over that Abhi let Armaan go & he fell on the floor along with Ridz..lol
but i hope they forever and ever get together in the next part..:)
thanx for the pm and continue soon..:)
GIVE ME A LONG PART PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ:)
tc :)
Preet <3

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princess14

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Posted: 14 years ago

#197

great part but that was too short!!! plz continue soon!

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Antara Mazumdar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#198

heyyy not fair y such a small part no fair ne ways grt part cont soon

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jasmine ansari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#199

hey ashu thats not fair yar. After long time u update it and tht to with so small part.
Plz update nxt very soon. Asap.
Thanx for the pm.
And ya the part was realy nice.
T.c.
Anuj.