mayur FF $journey from hatred to love$ - Page 16

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Arjunlicious-

Wooww! Mayu startin to fallen in love with her awwie cant wait for the next update!

thnx alot SAm
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii................its a really nice ff continue soooooooooon..................and do pm to me
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: RoSe21

gr8888888 update!!!!

thnx swetyyy😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tasfia123

awesome update sweety
mind blowing
hmm...someone's falling in love
really nice update
do cont soon

lots of love
tashu

thnx alot tashu 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hey Jany
lovely updte dear
wow mayur r so sweet
so finally mayank fall in love with nupur
but he don't want to accept it
hmm good- age age dekhte hai kya hota hai
keep it up

thnx alot fari dii😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: chelsi

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii................its a really nice ff continue soooooooooon..................and do pm to me

glad dat u liked
will surely pm u 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi guys here goes my next part


mayank nupur at their appt.

m : hey nupur byee kal milte hain

n : aaj kyun itni jaldi byee kar rae ho

m : wo actually aaj maine dinner nae banayaa so mujhe ghar jaakar hi kuch khaana hoga

n : ohh so ye problem hain tum aaj mere ghar dinner kar lo i don't

m : par nupur

n : ohh mayank tum kitnaa sochte ho aaj tum mere saath dinner kaer rae ho ok

m : so main ghar jaake aata hoon

n : yeah sure

both goes to their rooms

n : hmmm aaj mayank dinner pe aa rahaa hain to should make some special dish fr him

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m : aaj nupur ke ghar pe dinner hain to mujhe handsome to dikhnaa hi hogaa naa

then he started chosing his clothes standing in front of mirror

and mayank's cell rangs

n : hello mayank kyaa kar rae ho

m : tumne iske liyee phone kia hain kyaa

n : nopes main to ye pochnaa chahti thi ki tum aa rae ho ki main akeli hi dinner kar loo

m : no no i m coming just give me 5 mins

n : ok i'll wait only 5 mins phir kehna mat ki khaana kyun nae bachayaa

m : ok ok byee

n : hmmm byeeee


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n : so mayank tum finally aa gayee

m : yeah

n : waise u r looking handsome

m : u too looking sexy

nupur blushed and goes to kitchen

nupur thinking why i was blushing in front of him

nupur controll urself he is ur frnd not boy frnd to itnaa blush karke aa gayii wo kyaa soch rahaa hogaa


mayank came

m : kyaa hua nupur r u alright

n : yeah i m fine

m : to wahaan se kyun chali aayi

n : wo actually i thought ki mera khaana jal gayaa that's why

m : ohhhhh

n : so lets start dinner

M : yeah sure

both went to dining table

m : wow nupur meri fav dish

n : yup butter chiken

m : OMG dekh ke hi muh main paani aa gayaa

n : so lets start

m : yeah

both start their dinner

m : wow nupur tum itnaa achcha cook kar leti hoo its nice

n : thnx waise i love to cook

m : wow that's gr8 abse to main tumhare hi ghar aa jaungaa hum dinner lnch sab saath main karenge

n : yeah sure

and after dinner both sitting in hall

n : mayank dinner ke baad its time fr desert wait main leke aati hoon

mayank nooded and smile

mayank thinking tumhe ye kyaa hogayaa hain why r u smiling like a mad usse dekh ke tere face pe ye ini badi smile kyun aa jati hain

nupur came

n : mayank

no reply

nupur shouted

n : mayank

m : haan nupur

n : tum kahaan kho gayee the

m : tumhare bare main soch rahaa thaa

n : kyaa

m : i mean ki tum kitna achcha cook karti hoo wo soch rahaa thaa

n : ohh ye lo ice cream


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so guy here was my update hope u liked it

do comments ad press like tab


luv jenny...



Edited by jainypatel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update jenny loved it

thx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
great ............
tumhare bare mein soch raha tha .......was nice ........
butter chiken sun ke toh mere moh mein bhi paani aagaya ..............

great update ............
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Jainy
lovely update
mayur dinner date was very nice
loved it

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