mayur FF $journey from hatred to love$

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Shamsa aka Sam

@Shamsaaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

Lovely update cant wait for the next part where she manoyfin Mayu aww<3

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Posted: 14 years ago

#172

hey jainy
lovely update
do cont soon

love
tashu

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Rehma

@Miracle_leo

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#173

i read part8,part9 n part10 in one go its awesome,sorry for late reply.mayur scenes r amazing n i loved your ff very much,dont know why but mujhe tumhari dono ff se yeh ff kuch zyada achi lagti hai.wow its mean mayank love nupar par manta nahi hai dil n dimag ki jung,mayur dinner date is too gud actually loved that scene yeh part9 main tha.loved mayur rain scene its very nice.plz update soon n thanks for pm.

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samira

@-Samira-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#174

Jenny lovely update thanks for the pm

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@Jenny..

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#175

hey guys thnx alot for commenting on my ff it really matters for me so keep commenting..😳

@faria 70 : thnx alot faria glad that u liked the rain sequenece😃

@rumki : thnx alot sweets 😃

@ amritaluvarti : hey dear thnx alot and yeah mayu will alyas remain sadu😛

@ zarfishan1983 : thnx alot di for liking ...😃

@ginny09 : u guessed right jahaan nupur hain to manane ka dhang t o thoda alag hi hoga naa😉

@ rubab : thnx alot sweets will surely pm u 😳

@ achoose : thnx alot dear😃

@ arujnlicious : thnx alot sam will update soon😉

@ tasfia : thnx alot tashu😊

@ chelsi thnx alot dear ....😃

@ miracle_leo : thnx alot rehma di glad u like this ff more and thnx for ur precoius comment...😃

@samiralovemayur : thnx alot dear 😊

thnku all of u my frnds for encouraging and appreciating love u all...🤗

jenny...

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@Jenny..

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#176

hey guys sorry for updating too late...😳
so here goes my next update...

nupur thinking : uff ye ladkaa kabhi sidhi tarah manta hi nae isse to manana hi hoga...

after college she went to mayank's home
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mayank opened the door

m : hey nupur aaj ghar ka rasta bhool gae kyaa

n : haan swami aapke pyaar main

mayank was shocked

m : what tum ye kyaa keh rae ho and kaun swami main koi swami nae hoon

n : arrey i was kidding

m : ohh phir theek hain mai to dar hi gaya thaa

n : ab main anda aaon ya phir yahaan se hi byee karne kaa irada hain

m : yeah sure aao naa

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both sitting on sofa mayakn doing his work and nupur is getting bored

n : mayank ye kyaa hamesha books ke saath beth rehte ho kabhi life ko enjoy bhi kiyaa karo

m : mujhe to boolk main hi enjoyment milta hain

n : i mean ki tumhe dance yaadrama jaisi activities main bhi participate karna chahiye its good for u

m : how

n : like agar tum dance mai participate karoge t tm sabhi ladkio main famous ho jaaoge

m : mujhe famous hone ki koi zaroorat nae hain

n : haan dance karne se tumhari health hamesha fit rahegi

m : nupu tum mujhe yahaan dance ke advantage batane aayi ho kyaa

n : arrey nae mayank wo main yeh keh rae thi ki tum mere saath dance competition main paticipate karo

m : nae nupur main kabhi dance nae kiyaa

n : arrey isme kyaa problem hain tumhare saath dance champion nupur bhushan jo hain wo tumhe sab sikha degi sirf ek baar haan keh do

m : so tum manne nae waali

n : nae jab tak tum haan nae bolte main nae jaane waali

m : ok to main tumhare saath participate karunga

n : wow mayank thats great

m : are u happy now ?

n : yeah mayank i m really happy thnx alottt

m : ok ok no thnx and sorry in frndship right

n : wow mayank mere saath rehke tum bhi srk ke dialouges bolne lage

m : haan tum ho hi aisi koi bhi tumse door nae reh pataa

n : kyaa

m : umm i mean ki tum hamesha kisi bhi tarah se mana leti hoo wo kitni bhi naa kare par tumhare saamne hamesha haar maan jataa hain

n : isiliyee to main nupur bhushan hoon

m : yeah

n : so mayank lets start practising

m : abhi nupur

n : yeah kyaa problem hain

m : ok alright

mayank played soft music in background

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both starts practising and suddenly nupur lose her balance and was about to fall but mayank held her by waist
and they shared a cute eye lock after few seconds mayakn made her stand

n : umm mayank i think i should leavi its too late

m : yeah we'll do rest of practise tomorrow at college okay

n : yeah sure byee gud night

m : gud night and byee

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mayank was not able to sleep and was thinking about nupur

m : kyaa mujhe sach main nupur se pyaar ho gaya hain i mean jab bhi usse dekhta hoon kabhi naa nae keh pata

and he slept thinking of nupur.......

precap: both practising for function and a new girl comes to tech mayank salsa and nupur is feeling jealous

so guys here was my update hop u like it do comment and critisize..

jenny.....:))