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@Lifedream

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Posted: 19 years ago

#101

aaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...That was soooooo sweet nikita!!!!! I luved it!!! AWESOME job!!!! Plz cont. soon!

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Sweety

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Posted: 19 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: nikita_88

sorry but you will get some sweet moments but sorry for that i just wanted to move the story forward

I agree with u... but dhis ficiton is base on dhm..& if u don't develop dheir part dhn we miss everthing....

well..wht more I say u r dh better judge..... thnx 4 reply...👏

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Sweety

@nightangel

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Posted: 19 years ago

#103

Ks: Love you more then yesterday but love you less than tomorrow
They Hug

now u r on track.... good job!!! besides dh above one is so cute....

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: nightangel

now u r on track.... good job!!! besides dh above one is so cute....

Thanx i will tell my mates b/friend that he sent that to her last year with a bunch of flowers so i remembered it

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#105

thanx for all the comments guys!!!!!!!

by the way guys if you have any ideas for the fan fiction just private message me!!!!!!!!

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#106

Part 22

Kumud and Kshitij get married on the beach with just Rahul there!!!!!
They have a small and sweet wedding ceremony!

Back in Mumbai
Kapoor house is going mad with all the engagement arrangements
Ka: Everyone stop and calm down ok it doesn't matter if isn't ready yet we still have two days to go
Ab: I know but I want it all to be perfect for you
Ka: Only one thing will make this perfect
Ab: Huh what beta tell me??
Ka: Nothing you can to do papa the person that can do it we will just have to wait and watch to see how much she cares about me??

We see Ks and Ku in there bedroom
Ks: Mrs Oberio?
Ku blushes
Ks: I love you
Ku: I love you too
They hug then Kshitij starts Kshitij starts kissing her cheeks and neck and hands taking of her jewellery slowly
The scene fades away as the lie on the bed

Kk: Aai I am going to tell Abhay the truth but first I need to talk to Sid and Kumud
Aai: Kali will be happy but are you ready to face Abhay??
Kk: Yes I am and Kali needs to have me there with her
Aai: God is with you

Kk and Sid
Kk: Sid there is no easy way to say this but I think I am going to tell Abhay the truth Kumud needs dad's love and Kali needs me and I will still always be there for Rahul!!!!!!
Sid: That's good are you happy with your decisions??
Kk: Yes I am and how long am I going to spend hiding from Abhay and everyone else in this City?? Ok thanks but I need to talk to Ku I when is she coming back??
Sid: Tomorrow
Kk: Ok I guess tomorrow is the end of my death
Sid: Yes it sure is

Kk phones Ka
Ka: Mom
Kk: Kali beta I am going to come to your engagement tomorrow it's time to tell Abhay the truth
Ka: Thanks mom I love you
Kk: Love you too beta

In Goa the next day we see Kumud packing and Kshitij in lovely mood
Ks: I don't want to go cause if we go everyone one will want you and I won't get to see you plus we aren't telling anyone we are married not yet anyway!!!!!!!!!
Ku: I know but we have to go it is your brothers and my sister's engagement if you remember
Ks: I know but you have to let me tell Pinky about us
Ku: Ok and I can tell Kali
Ks: Fine you have you told Rahul not to tell anyone!!!!!!!!!
Ku: Yes I am not that Dumb
Ks: You see I didn't know that
Ku like Huh!!!!!!!!!!!! Hits him and runs he chases he catches her gives her a big kissssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They reach Mumbai
Ra: Well I think you two should part before anyone finds out
Ks: Very funny
Ku: mama
Ks: What?!?!?!
Kk: Hi
Ra: Mom you here
Kk: Yeah I needed to talk to both of you!!!!!!!
Ks: Ok I will go see you both later anyway need to talk to Pinky!!!!
Kk: Ok please don't take this the wrong way Rahul but I need to this for Kumud and Kali I have decide to tell Abhay the truth that I am alive plus I can't miss Kali's engagement she is my daughter and it becomes your and Kumud's time to get married I will have to come out so better now then never

Hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!
The End!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read you comment

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago

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Lifedream

@Lifedream

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Posted: 19 years ago

#107

The K and Ks parts were soooooo cute!!!! Plz. cont. soon!

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Sweety

@nightangel

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Posted: 19 years ago

#108

dhy married!!!gr8..congrats!!!!good going 👏 👏

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Nikita

@nikita_88

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Posted: 19 years ago

#109

cool thanks for the comments guys love to read them

Nikita

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Nikita

@nikita_88

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Posted: 19 years ago

#110

Part 23

Ra: Ok I agree with you mom and I did come and talk to you then
Ku goes away
Kk: Kumud wait
Ra: Mom leave her I will go and talk to her

Ku: I feel like I betrayed my mom's trust getting married to Kshitij
Ra: No you haven't look at me (she looks) you listened to your heart but think you are getting your dad and finally I know how long you have been waiting for this
Ku: You are right I guess plus still got your wedding and engagement to go!!!!
Ra: Yeah that will be the day
They go back
Ku: Sorry mama but I think what you are doing is right for all three of us!!!!!
Kk hugs her

Pi: What's the big smile for?!?!?!?!?
Ks: Can you keep a secret?
Pi: Another one bhai you becoming a rebel!!!!!!!
Ks laughs: No listen me and Kumud got married in Goa!!!!!!
Pi: WHAT!!!!!!!!
Ks: Keep it down
Pi: With out me or anyone?
Ks: We had Rahul, your other half
Pi: Very funny but as I am a nice person I will keep your secret…
Ks: Thanks I love you!!!!!!
Pi: Saying it to the wrong person
She laughs

Ku: When are you going to go mama??
Kk: I was thinking right now as I have both of you with me as well
Ra: Are you sure mom?
Kk: Yes
Ra: Driver let's go to Kapoor house
Driver: Yes Sir
Kk: You ready Ku??
Ku: Yes

Call Kali
Ku: We are coming with mom to tell papa the truth
Ka: Really I am so happy
Ku: Same here
Ka: How long will you be??
Ku: 10 minutes

Kapoor house
Ka dancing
Ka: PAPA!!!!!!!!!!!!! Where are you??????
Ab: Why are you so happy??
Ka: You will see!!!!!!
Ab: But I am going out
Ka: WHAT!!!!!! YOU CAN'T
Ab: I have to meet Sid uncle
Ka: Its ok Sid uncle will understand if you don't make it I am sure!!!!!!!
Ab: Fine then I will stay

Ks: So Nakul you ready for tonight?
Na: I think so I can't believe I am getting engaged
Ks: Well you will be fine but can you keep a secret?
Na: Yes
Ks: Only Pinky and Rahul know but me and Kumud have got married
Na: OMG when, where, how??
Ks laughs: In Goa yesterday and a pundit got us married like he does for most weddings
Na: Nah I couldn't have guessed!! What I said was out of shock!
Ks: I know but I thought it was funny

Outside Kapoor House
Ra: Look you have to go know before tonight
Kk: I know you are right Rahul
Kumud and Rahul walk in
Ka: GUYS!!!!!!! Thank god you came!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Where is she?
Ab: Who am I waiting for?
Kk walks in: Me
Abhay shocked

Hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!
The End!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read you comments!!!!!!

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago

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