Kkusum from 18 year leap

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Lifedream

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Posted: 19 years ago

#91

That was just FABULOUS!!!! Plz. cont. soon!!!!

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Sweety

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Posted: 19 years ago

#92

oh no...we hav to wait.. dhis not fair!!!!
ok..ok..just joking....good going.... 👏 👏
wait 4 dht part!! 😳 😳

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tisha

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Posted: 19 years ago

#93

it was awesome part
i can't wait to read next part
plzzzzzzzzz cont soon

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#94

Thanx for all the comments!!!!!!!!!

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#95

Part 20

Sid: Abhay you??
Ab: No it's my ghost
Ka (to Nakul): Tell mom not to come here just tell my dad is here
Na: Ok
Ka: You here??
Ab: Came to give Sid a Birthday present!!!!!! How come you are here??
Sid: For my Birthday party it's more like its Rahul's party all these are his friends
Ab: Oh well I would stay but I can't got a meeting anyways bye
Ku: Thank God Pa… Abhay Uncle left

Garv is drunken Pinky has a finally try
Pi: Tell me what happened in America!!!!!!!
Ga: Well it was Kshitij idea so we nicked a car and went joy riding it was lucky we got back we just parked the car and then the owner came out and at that time we both didn't know how to drive!!!!!!!
Pi: OMG Kshitij Bhai did that this is brill
Ga laughing cause he is drunk
Pi: Bhai I heard your driving story
Ks shocked: Please don't tell anyone
Pi: Ok I won't as you haven't told anyone my secret

We see Nakul and Kali dancing
Ra: Dance??
Pi: Ummm………OK why not?
Ra in his head YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pi in her head he is not bad quite cute best I have seen in ages!!!!!!!
They dance and talk

As months pass

The project is coming together well

Kumud and Kshitij are working well getting close and they realise they love each other we have some great Kshitij and Kumud moments on the beach in the office and at parties!!!!!!!

Kali, Pinky, Nakul and Rahul realise they are in love!!!!!!!!

We also have some Kali and Nakul moments!!!!!!

Pinky is like whatever to Rahul but she is starting to care about him!!!!!!
Also Kumud is getting close to Abhay and starts seeing him as her dad!!!!!!!!!

Sid happy with the project coming along!!!!!!!!!

We see Sohan going around to Kkusum's house but to see Simran and using Kk as an excuse!!!!!!!!!!

Kali and Nakul engagement is being planned!!!!!!!!!

Ka; OMG I am getting engaged I am so happy soon it will be you Kumud
She blushes!!!!!!!!
Ku: Shhh but I have something to ask you about mama she won't be able to come the party or see the engagement we have to tell papa the truth and tell mama to show herself!!!!
Ka: You said papa for the first time but I will get Rahul and we will work on mama
Ku: Ok thanks a lot anyway I have to go on a business trip this week- end with Rahul and Kshitij
Ka: Oh well I will get him to come tonight

Kk place
Ka: Please mama you have to come and tell papa the truth
Ra: Mom Ka is right and she is your daughter I think she wants you to be at her engagement and so does Arymaan Uncle and Nakul
Kk: But I can't it will bring a lot of pain
Ka: And what about mine knowing my mom is alive and she is not here with me
Ra: Think about it
They leave
Kk crying
Aai: Kkusum show the truth to the whole world
Kk: Aai how can I?
A: For your Daughter

Hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!
The End!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read you comment

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago

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Lifedream

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Posted: 19 years ago

#96

That was BRILLIANT!!! I am sooo happy that Kshitij and Kumud are realizing their love for each other!!! That was great'!!!!

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Sweety

@nightangel

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Posted: 19 years ago

#97

nikita..sorry buddy but dhis is not fair... make us feel how they [k+k] relize their love,the sweet moment etc...

anyway good going.. 😛

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: nightangel
nikita..sorry buddy but dhis is not fair... make us feel how they [k+k] relize their love,the sweet moment etc...

anyway good going.. 😛

sorry but you will get some sweet moments but sorry for that i just wanted to move the story forward

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#99

Thanx for all the comments guys

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Nikita

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Posted: 19 years ago

#100

Part 21

Goa is where the business meeting is!!!!!!!
Ku: Great we have finally reached and soon this project will be over!!!
Ra: Yep I just hope we get this deal!!!!!!!!!!
Ks: Don't worry you will get the deal Kumud is there with you!!!!!!!
Ra: Look I know you love my sister but no need to butter her up in front of me!!!!!!!!!!!
Ku: Rahul!!!!!!
Ra sticks his tongue out
Ku: When's the meeting?
Ra: It's at night so you can enjoy yourself until then
Ra goes!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ks: Great I am going to bed
Ku: WHAT!!!!!!!!!!
Ks laughs: Do you think I am going to leave you alone today it's just us two no one else!!
Ku: Love you!!
Ks: Love you more then yesterday but love you less than tomorrow
They Hug

We see some beach moments with Kumud and Kshitij
They are running down the beach
We see Kshitij picking her up and dropping Kumud into the sea
They splash water at each other
They eat ice cream

Back in Mumbai
Ka: I wish mom will understand and tell papa the truth
Na: Yes I know I think papa has gone to talk to her
Ka: I hope it works
So: Hey Kali! Bhahbi was so stressed today I think see is planning to tell bhai the truth!!!!!!!!
Ka: Great!!!!!!

We see the Business meeting
Deal guy: Says you have got the deal
Ra and Ku: Yes
Ks: See I told you will get the deal!!!!!!!!
Ra laughs

Kumud calls Kali
Ku: We got the deal, we got the deal this project is almost over great na??
Ka: Yes great I can't wait to tell everyone

At a club in Goa
Ku and Ks are dancing
Ks: I will be back in a sec
Ra: Can I have a dance with the lovely lady?
Ku: Sure why not handsome!!
Ks goes to the loo

His phone rings
Ks: Hi
(New Character but will tell a bit later on about her sorry I can't tell you now or it will kill the rest of my story)
Rhea: Hi Kshitij major problem??
Ks: What
Rh: Look Kshitij you know you're the only person I can turn to after everything that has happened
Ks: Fine I will do my best send my love to Keya
Rh: I will do thanks so much please don't tell anyone and my parents are getting to much!!!!
Ks: Ok I will send you money for now and we will talk later
Rh: Great thanks by the way how are things with Kumud??
Ks: They are great I am planning to propose soon
Rh: Wow great so good to see you happy you deserve every happiness in the world
Ks: Thanks Rhea talk to you soon Kumud is waiting for me!!!!!!!
Rh: Ok bye thanks again
Ks: There is no please or thank you in friendship

Ku: You took your time!!!!!
Ks: Well I just got a phone that's why
Ku: Dance
Ks: Just wait a moment that call remind me to do something (he goes on stage) Miss Kumud will you marry me and make me the happiest man in the world???
She nods

Hope you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!
The End!!!!!!!
Can't wait to read you comment

Edited by nikita_88 - 19 years ago

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