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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: jainypatel
very nice os keep it up👍🏼

Thanks for the comments Jainy...Glad you liked this OS also...was quite apprehensive about posting it😃😃

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: fariaa70
another beautiful OS ammy
it was really very touching dear
plz dont do this with our mayur
i want to c them together
plz try to write a 2nd part of this OS and give a happy ending
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Faaria...thanks for such a sweet comment😃😃
Happy to know it touched you😃😃

Well about the 2nd part...I really don't know how to go ahead yeah....maybe you could give me a few ideas?😃😃 I left it in suspense for the readers to decide for themselves whether they want a happy ending or a sad one...the story is actually ended at such a note that anything could happen next😃😃

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya
Amy... I couldn't stop grinning after I read the ArTi OS.. I really wish something of this sort happened.. I loved that OS...

And the MN OS... as wide my grin was there while reading the ArTi OS, I had the same length of frown while reading the MN OS.. Why do u want to separate them? And since you have imagined MN in this OS... put in their names and write a part 2 where they come together and live happily together..

And next time after you write, do PM me...

Thanks so much Divya😃😃 The ArTi OS was a happy OS wasn't it? considering that all us praanis' wishes of seeing ArTi together were fulfilled...lols😆😆

Awww why were you frowning?? it is not a sad OS....it is just ended on a suspense note where we don't know what happens next...the end is written in such a way that the reader can think of a happy ending or a sad ending...whichever they like....😃😃

Almost everyone wants a sequel though😆😆

I have added you to my buddy list k...just accept the request so it is easier for me to PM when i post something the next time😃😃

Thanks once again for the sweet comment😃😃

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: mehak03
amy MAYUR sepreated...😭😭..but it was very nicely written...👏

Awww no dearie...not separated....just left on a suspense note for the reader to end it in their way yeah....😃😃

Thanks for the compliments dear😃😃 And now I will expect big comments from you ok...dissecting the OS and giving me the good and bad points...because you are one of the ppl who so nicely ordered me to make this a gallery...and I complied😆😆 so now it is your turn to do your part and give me the good and bad points in my writing okies??😃😃 Hope you don't mind😃😃

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: amyluvsmayur

Faaria...thanks for such a sweet comment😃😃
Happy to know it touched you😃😃

Well about the 2nd part...I really don't know how to go ahead yeah....maybe you could give me a few ideas?😃😃 I left it in suspense for the readers to decide for themselves whether they want a happy ending or a sad one...the story is actually ended at such a note that anything could happen next😃😃

Amyyyyyyyyyyyyy
i want happy , happy n only happy ending
plz write a cute, emotional , sweet romanticwala update

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Amyyyyyyyyyyyyy
i want happy , happy n only happy ending
plz write a cute, emotional , sweet romanticwala update

Ummm well I will think about it ok...If i can come up with something, i will because it seems that is what ppl want...but if i can't get any ideas then too bad okies?? 😃😃

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relentless.

@relentless.

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#167

Updated on page 18 amy! 😳

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: amyluvsmayur

Awww no dearie...not separated....just left on a suspense note for the reader to end it in their way yeah....😃😃

Thanks for the compliments dear😃😃 And now I will expect big comments from you ok...dissecting the OS and giving me the good and bad points...because you are one of the ppl who so nicely ordered me to make this a gallery...and I complied😆😆 so now it is your turn to do your part and give me the good and bad points in my writing okies??😃😃 Hope you don't mind😃😃

my pleasure dear, i will surely do it, as i am a literature student so i TRAINED in critical analysis..now toh u just wait and watch...😈😳😆

Edited by mehak03 - 14 years ago

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sAnMunY

@sAnMunY

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#169

Hi

Thank you for the reply

I hadn't noticed the second story posted as I am fairly new to this site

I will give you the view, however do not consider it abhorring, a writer learns from critiques.

Every writer who writes something has either experienced it or is indeed a creative genius who conceptualises what they may have seen. Your first post is an articulate fantasy comparatively to the second one.

The second one looks like a normal movie story, though it has a personal touch to it, so I believe either yourself you have been in such a scenario / situation thus defining the expressed manner and justified it.

Furthermore, you have some parts which can be delved into further, despite this its wonderful that you have left the nature of the climax as a suspense. Thus its still incomplete, your ability to hit the climax shall put emphasis on how creative you are. Try some unconventional way of a climax, a normal one is always a safe bet, but something new is admired

If you know of any further scripts that are altruistic in nature here, Kindly inform me

I rate this one as 7, can be better

sAn

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sAnMunY

@sAnMunY

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#170

I forgot to note, that your first story has much literature prowess compared to the second one, which is a tad bit ordinary. The is the difference from good and nice.

However, I encourage you to keep on writing such stories, with your skill you will grow in confidence and be creative

Keep up the intelligent writing

sAn

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