PG 118 - FOR NOW AND FOREVER

Ansha

@lovelycactus

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

awsum amy...u are very talented writer 👏

plx write more 😊

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arachika_kapoor

@arachika_kapoor

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

awesum OS...

do write more...

waise i love ur signature...😆

its 100 times awesum-er than the OS...😆

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stuti

@stuti123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#143

lovely OS amy ........very nicely written loved it lots ...........

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Ask me ;)

@Jenny..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#144

very nice os keep it up👍🏼

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#145

another beautiful OS ammy
it was really very touching dear
plz dont do this with our mayur
i want to c them together
plz try to write a 2nd part of this OS and give a happy ending
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#146

Amy... I couldn't stop grinning after I read the ArTi OS.. I really wish something of this sort happened.. I loved that OS...

And the MN OS... as wide my grin was there while reading the ArTi OS, I had the same length of frown while reading the MN OS.. Why do u want to separate them? And since you have imagined MN in this OS... put in their names and write a part 2 where they come together and live happily together..

And next time after you write, do PM me...

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#147

amy MAYUR sepreated...😭😭..but it was very nicely written...👏

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: Ritu.mjhtrv
Amy just managed to read ur second OS.. very nice and emotional.. love it .. thoda sad thaa but nicee. write more amy.. u r good u know that . well done👏 .. you r such a good writer.

Thanks Di😃😃 Lovely comment and will try and write more soon😃😃
Love ya😃😃and thanks for the encouragement also😃😃

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: sAnMunY
Hi

It would be churlish to deny this is a commendable piece of writing.

However, it did take some time to fathom the nature of the writing. You have a precocious ability within you. And a pretty imaginative mind to come up with a narration as such.

Critiques to some part like the transition from the love to marriage, I believe that was a wee bit carried away on that note and would not make it realistic

The first kiss in any relationship defines how the relation will be, notably you should have exploited this area furthermore given the prowess of your skill

All in all a fine piece of work on a scale of 10 would give u 7.5

Keep it up

sAn

Thanks so much for the compliments and the honest reply😃😃

You have written a very good comment and i appreciate the way you pointed out the good points as well as the points i need to improve on😃😃

You seem to have quite good views on writing😃😃 Would appreciate if you read the second OS and gave your feedback on it also😃😃😃

Thanks once again...your comments made me happy😃😃

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: Yamini.Arjun
Reserved! 😃

Thanks dear...i hope you are planning to unreserve this soon...considering that you are one of the ppl I posted this second OS for because you wanted to read more😃😃😃

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