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Posted: 14 years ago
res 6 for chubzy
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Originally posted by: chubzy

To say tat ur update was Amazin, fantastic, fabulous, superb, beautiful, awsome etc etc etc... Would b an undrstatement! U r jst a Wondergal. "Emotions" which can only b felt u hv ability to pen them down flawlessly. I m simply amazd by ths update, d depth of love, trust, longing all togethr so beautifuly expressd. Maan manaofyin geet in his own style while displayin dominancy was breathtakin Thanx 4 sharing ths wondrful ff wit us n thanx 4 takin so much effort 4 us to give such an extremely long update n m NOT complaing abt its length infact i was heartly enjoyin. Wel said abt values of life. Plz cont asap.

chubzy ...come to my side ...and try writing a reply for ur comment
u will find how hard it is..
the snetences i hav highlighted ........i hav gt nothing to say ....except silent vowing down
thank u .....
again sayin
beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zerro

u touched my soul by this piece of art.it is not just a part of ur fiction,it is a painting in itself.nobody,NOBODY can write like u.u always make my day with these beautiful updates,but this one was like u put me in a world of wishful dreams.no number of smileys can sufice the apreciation u DESERVE.all i want 2 say is plssssssssss keep it up.

what shall say to u ...............i never seen such a reply in my entire writer life
thank u zerro
wishful dreams ...ahh.......rendered mum by ur wordss
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Posted: 14 years ago

res 7 for anupam aka shining moon

wait honey .....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Bul3


Reet..seriously you have left me speechless this time..I have read your reply yesterday but wanted to reply once I have some words..but I am still out of words obout how I feel..I have been thinking about your comment all the time from yesterday and haven't been able to take it out of my mind..I feel guilty and awesome at the same time..guilty because I had no idea that my not commenting can lead you to think about stop writing and awesome because I had no idea that my words meant this much to you..trust me,I never ever left reading your FF even when I stopped commenting as it was seriously not in my hands as I have been addicted to your FFs right from the very beginning of Bin Tere..then I read that you had some problems and won't be able to update for some time and I had come to your FFs uncountable times to check if you were back..it was just that I had study load at one point of time so I would just come on IF and read your FFs and leave without commenting though I LOVED each and every piece of writing you have written till date and I am not lying..I am really sorry for not commenting..I am really touched seeing you reply and would really like to thank you for making me feel special🤗..and you can never make a fool out of yourself through your writing..you are pass that time when it was possible or was in your hands..you are too good to achieve that now and I mean it!..and I would like to thank Vinitha loads for saving my mistake to turn into a huge regret by inspiring you to keep writing..YOU SHOULD NEVER THINK LIKE THAT..NEVER!!..and though I would not repeat my mistake,you should still talk to me before thinking such stupid things!..I have always loved your writing and you are an amazing writer..!..love you loads❤️

i m hell scared and elated....
wait .....let me gather myself
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Posted: 14 years ago
guys enough ...i cant read ur replies more.....i m hell scared ...
if i will read those replies anymore i will not be able to put down the piece i have written,....cause i m confused and nervous ...my brain has stopped working
....where are u guyz lifting me up ....hope i will not stumble ....
next post contains the update
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey reet..

u r like a rock of gibralter...noway are u going to stumble...coz we wud never let u...

see my besharmi...i am literally stalking u and waiting shamelessly for ur update...

but wen it comes to u i dont mind my besharmii........i can also beg for an update with elan 😆

..yeh dil maange more......of ur updates...

i think i wud say ' IN LOVE WITH U REET....😆😆

reva

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Posted: 14 years ago
guyz .....a little charecter analysis will be followed after it ..i want each one of u to read that .....
first of all ..i m nervous ....if u will put on my shoes u will understand how much praises affects one.....
aneway...this was most tough part writing.. i do good in pain..i know ..but falling in love and love itself is te most intricate and enigmatic creation of nature ...
why and how people fall in love is most difficult q....and most difficult in case of geet and maan ....one is budding lawyer unknown to the world of mayhem...and as well maan and his gangs attitude is not totally like a cruel selfish criminal......she is very young to understand the depth and consequences of the feelings...most of us.....are nt able to analyze the consequence of love at the moment of falling in love.......bt geet hasnt denoted it as love...but she accepted her feelings for chief .......and chief .....who were simply devoid of human emotions is not ready to adjust .....as well his work, aim. world are enemies of this serene feelings ....
sunaina and aadi
.....aadi harbours feelings for her ,,,,,,.....but sunaina ...a typical tomboy ....rough impatient and childish at most of teh times......but she is not devoid of normal human feelings ...she is slowly getting introduced ....but she is not in love.....unaware of her she has a soft corner for aadi......
her behavior towards geet ..
geet is a woman and getting attention from her dear ones...su dint like tat..she was kind of attrcted to chief ....like common people is attracted to spiderman or superman......this is like that only ....she is not able to distinguish the emotions....a woman can not accpet another woman easily when situations are not convenient ....she is rude impatient ,..because she is very tense about her brother and fellow soldier aadi ....about whom she is suddenly getting conscious ...
their undivided attention has been caught by geet ......a naive girl ,....out of their league.....so she is not able to adjust with the sudden change
human mind u see...
personally i m very fond of sunaina aka doctor anjali.....please dont hate her so much ...she is a simple human being ...and to err is human....!!
guyz i wrote it in one go...and cudnt check it for once ...so please forgive me for the flaws....but do point it out if u find.....
fingers crossed...here it goes
part 18

Dev was at a shock.......when he saw the car is disappearing in the horizon with geet in it ....he tried running after it ....but the torrential rain ....slippery muddy road and the car in its full speed had become his enemies to reach geet ...after the car disappeared he had tried his best to get any cab ...any kind of lift ...even tried to hire a cart to go after geet ....but to his sheer luck ....he wasn't able to do so ... he couldn't contact anyone by phone as by mistake he had kept it on the seat before getting out of the car ..

He had cursed himself umpteenth number of times for leaving geet in the car ...

As fast as possible he tried going back to pune as the nearest city was pune itself....to seek help from police ..well he tried so.....cause in the sinister of night with heavy rainfall on head with no car and one injured driver were not helping much .....

People who at national highway has sought for a lift only they know how much difficult it is....to get a lift at night ....no matter what a suave debonair he looked completely drenched in rain ...

So the night had proved to be the worst night of his life till date.....well I shall say everything has a first time......he still had rather lot of awful nights to witness....he guessed so ....while striding out through the dark secluded national highway ...

Dev couldn't think what might have happened to geet ...he had never felt so helpless over a matter ...when he had his cards contacts as well highly educated intelligent brain with him ..so did the only thing he could do ..... sulked....

Next day as soon as he reached pune he tried his best to lodge complain in police and made them start the investigations as soon as possible ....

Around evening he got the piece of news that he car has been found on national highway 150 kms away .....along with scattered cadavers of 4 goons abducted geet ...and nothing else......there was not a single sign of geet ......

They were at complete loss ...about who killed them so brutally with 3-4 bullets in each one's body .....

Dev tried his sources ...appointed private detectives ...but they were not able to proceed as all the marks of the other clues could be available were wiped away by torrential rain on the highway ...nothing could led them to a direction out of nothing what gulped down geet

Geet was missing ...!!! with no clue left behind her ....

However gathering himself together dev strode back to Mumbai ....and tried to involve CID over this matter ....

But no matter how powerful position he held at bar association of Mumbai high court ...procedures took pretty much time to start the proceedings ... he was shattered...

The sudden accident with geet .....and her deadly absence made him realise how much he had started counting her in his day to day life.....well he was in deed attracted to her ....but other than that she had kept a great effect on his personal life...

He thought of meeting geet's family members and trying apologizing them ....he was not much aware of her folks ...he knew it wont be easy to face her folks and spit that he should have taken responsibility of his junior and he failed so miserably ...but he tried....his conscience led him to her home...

As he introduced himself to dirjee.....he looked at his behind for geet ...who had been seriously worrying for his little grand daughter .....she never kept so mum before ...she was very dear to the old person literally and he depended on her a lot being his the only person to look forward

Dev felt a pang of guilt as he saw the expectant look in the old man's eyes....

After formal gestures he touched his arm to lead him to the sofa......after making him sit comfortably he narrated the whole thing ....except their real intention of hijacking the car ...

Cause he just couldn't tell it to one real old affectionate grandfather ....he decided to wait a little while cid proceeds with geet's case...

But dirjee wasn't yesterday born ....he understood ...and was complete loss of words as he realised the situation ....

Dev couldn't sympathize more with the person didn't utter a word after he had spilled the beans ...

He wasn't even able to lift his face too meet up his eyes....he got up from his seat and took the seat next to him ....

Dirjee....i m trying every possible to get her back ......i just couldn't keep the whole thing away from you since I got to know she has only u as ur family and as well the same works for you ....

Dir jee just nodded....he could see her parents dead bodies in front of his eyes...and his own silent promises to them...to love her ..protect her more than his own blood relations...

He loved geet most in the world....he was on the verge of crying when he felt geet and her dignity at stake .....but he still hoped for a guardian angel to protect his child ...

He was touched by the young man's gesture....it was an accident but this young-man made him feel home ...as he looked up to meet his eyes and felt his hand squeezed his own ....

He faintly smied at him ....

Dev was little stunned by the persona of this aged sikh business man.....his shattered face with tinge of tears in eyes and the glint of defeat of protecting his grandchild..and the immense worry he reassured dev with the faint smile ......made dev realize there are still lot of gentle-men there he was yet to meet ...he made him realise the fact he is not accusing him for failing so miserably to protect geet ....

He was grateful .....he did all the efforts to reassure him ...he made him talk with the officers next day .....and when police couldn't start the work for a while ..he kept on visiting dirjee while giving him updates of the progress of the investigation ....which were not much hopefull....but he tried.. tried his best to make him feel he is too equally affected by the whole incident ...

Dirjee decided to keep the things private and requested dev to do the same....for the sake of his grandchild's vulnerable reputation .....he requested him to continue the investigations as secretly as possible ......

Dev helped him in that way ....by keeping police away from printing her photo in newspaper and channel ....so cid wasn't able to proceed ....as far as the goons were concerned they came out with the piece of news that they are general local goons with black history in pune polices log book of older case histories..

But what on earth happened to geet ...how she was evaporated from the highway was beyond comprehension ...

Geet had kept everything to herself only about her chance encounters with chief and gang so there was nothing that could lead them to chief ....

Dirjee had one consolation in between all these ...and that's dev....his last words had touched him ...made him think over more more and more about the last say of his.....at which he had looked expectantly to him and he responded with the squeeze in his hand...but it was rather soon or may be rather late to think about these expectations ..he was broken totally after the sudden disappearance of the apple of his eye ..geet .

Dev too thought about his last sentence said to dirjee....he didn't know what on earth made him say so .....but after saying he realised he meant so ..and he said it from heart ...

Both of them again and again recalled the last long sentence of dev in his last meet with dirjee

Dirjee.......i just want to tell you....i was quite affectionate with the brilliant junior of mine...i strongly feel its only me who is responsible for the rueful incidence....but one thing I wanna make it sure to you that ....i will try my level best to get her back ...will leave no stones unturned to do so ....and once she comes back .....i m with her .. will be always forever ....i will take every possible care of her with the equal honor she used to get from me... ...i promise ..so I just pray ....i become able to get her back ..back to you ..and I mean every word of it ......advocate dev malhotra gives his word to you ...

Dev really prayed they find her back at any condition ....no matter how hard the situations will be afterward ...he promised himself to be with geet ...no matter what causes to his own reputation ...

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Hi......

Geet mouthed as she crept hesitantly to the two ......one half lying and one sitting on the bed and carelessly chatting over some matter ...

Both of them looked back at her ... baffled ... are they day dreaming ......

Aadi was the first one to recover and greet her as well making a seat for her ...

Hey geet ...come seat here .....he showed her the empty bed next to him ....

So .....how are you feeling today ........Yash responded as well..

I m doing fine ...but aadi what have happened to you ....why do u look so pale..and what's that ...she indicated at the bandage ....

May be his chivalry had cost him that ....but doesn't matter till its being paid back by affectionate nursing ....

saying which Yash winked at aadi ...while he tried to smack him...and both of them ended in roars of laughter's ...

All geet could get from the next banters of their ...that aadi injured by some accident in that fretful day.....he has injured himself in the process of saving that woman .....whose name is sunaina....

Jokes apart ...i m really hungry .....what's taking sunaina so long ....isn't she back from her stroll to nearest grocery ...or she has totally forgotten little handicapped fellows she had kept behind.....seems like my chivalry was not impressive enough....sigh...!! ......aadi punned..

Dude ...u r not little enough to be forgettable ....moreover they way you are utilizing the excuse of your illness to spin her around you ....was just too tiresome for our tomboyish sunaina ...

But jokes apart .......i m hungry too .....my stomach making gurgling sounds yash admitted as matter of fact ....

Ohh.....aa......i was thinking .....i mean.....can I ....well.....geet hesitated to put her words....since they are being so warm.....the way they befriended her she felt like making something for them...but didn't know how to put that ..

Are you just trying to suggest .....

Aadi narrowed his eyes ......and yash and him both exchanged quick glances to each other ....

And a yell came in unison ...

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease go ahead geet ...kitchen is all yours....do mercy on this poor hungry fellows......

Making geet startle first then break in laughter ....her face beamed at their gesture....

Okay ......10 mins ....i will just fetch garma garam chola batura for you .....with kadakl chai ...!!

Geet leaped in enthusiasm while she collided with the bed at the corner of the door....

She was about to stumble on the person lay in that .....but somehow managed to keep her balance....

M I hallucinating ...or its really a beautiful gorgeous angel dropped from the blue as the first wish of mine to the Jeanie in my dream...

A flirtatious voice made all of them look at the corner of the room ......where rishi who had just woke up with the collision with geet ..... remarked rather amazedly looking at geet ....

My Lady....my Eve ....you are as appealing as I dreamt of you to be... ....!! he spread his hand out towards her still with the dazed look in her eyes ...he said while trying vow down at his half lying position ....

Making geet flush and others giggle ....

Geet was looking in deed very beautiful .....as innocent and as pure as angel in maan's white shirt and her purple salwar with fresh wet hairs left open .......tiny drops of water still lingered in the ends...and her adorable face beaming reflecting her glee ....rishi was not too wrong to term her that ......

This angel is here to show u the clock ...its high time u wake up from ur sleep or r u having a reverie.....happens quite often with lazy bones who refuses to leave their bed at this sunny day ...... geet quipped back ...

which made aadi and yash explode in laughter .........

serves you right Mr Casanova ...!!

followed by another round of laughter to which geet excused herself and rushed to the kitchen ....this gang of criminals definitely has something good about them.....by which she is actually charmed

The last night me and him ...

Uhh the soreness of my lips.....i winced as I tried to taste the gravy of the chole ....it hurts ....

Damnn....!! I m rushed to wash my mouth by cold water ...may be that would help....

Darn him ..!!

But would that be able to wake me up from last night's dream.....or it actually occurred....i thought .....i felt a smile creeping on my lips...and I can do nothing about it ... no matter how hard I try ....i m not able to feel appalled about last night ....or any intense moment spent with him.....

He had come to me ....he was so drunk......and..again got physical with me....o my utter shame I didn't loathe it ................

Actually I ....lo...love it .....should I say it was the best night of my life......

I should not be saying this....but I am saying so...i never felt so much contented when he said ......he won't go until I stop crying .....

He is actually an arrogant dogmatic merciless hell of a criminal.... who always puts me on under his erotica.....forces himself on me....always rude and harsh with me..

But If I will define him so ..... I will be lying ....my righteousness will hinder me saying so ...

He is not that actually he shows....and I m feeling quite strong about it .....he has a face....under that black musk of his ...which he deliberately keeps covered .. deep under his ruthless harsh filthy attitude there is another person .....whom I m not able to reach....last night what he did ...what he said ...... clearly implies so ....

I never felt so contented before...... when he said the words...he will not go until I stop crying ...............

He was drunk ....but I was not ......in sense he lusts on me....and while he was not his senses obviously he will lose his control...and that's what he did...

But what did I do ....i was lost again under his spell....and I kissed him...i felt blessed when I kept my face buried in his shoulder ..and the whole long day when he didn't step inside my room I missed him....terribly ...

What is this.....?should I be feeling this for a criminal whom I barely know.....i don't know his name....neither I have ever seen his face....nor any idea about his past present future ....i know nothing about him.....

he is a riddle ...and I m unable to solve him....but there may be a cocoon of some human feelings buried deep very deep within him...shelled with his brutality ... ....which makes him sits beside me while I m sleeping ....hold my hand....change my dress but not rape me...which makes him come late at night to shush my sobs.....which is evoked by him....

And all of these things lead me to explore him....more and more ..no matter the fact he never ceases me startling .....i was never able to predict him.....but I m kind of getting adjusted with his temper tantrums ...his sudden wheeze of wrath ...i feel hurt ...but deep inside the pain....there is something intoxicated appeal about it...

But whatever It is.. To my utter dismay ...i have to admit ...i feel something strong ...strange about my kidnapper ....i feel hurt when he ignores me...i feel blessed when he cares for me...and I m aroused when he touches me.....

...and I cant control it ...which makes me feel elated.....this happiness is highly metastatic....knowing this is malignant ..

should I try holding myself back..which is becoming impossible for me day by day ....? or just enjoy the surreal feeling stepped first time in my life......

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After sometime as sunaina headed inside the house....she heard a sweet female voice humming a ghazal ...

Nearing to the voice she located its coming from the kitchen ....

Hmmmm.....

Bohot khubsurat gajal likh rahi hu....

Tumhe dekh kar ajkal likh rahi hu.....

She felt her eyes ditching her as she found geet in the kitchen ....

She rubbed her eyes to check again ...but it was no mistake she was really there ...very much ....humming the song while preparing some food...

She was about to bark at her why did she enter in the kitchen but refrained to do so ....seeing her absorbed in cooking ....she couldn't guess what on earth might have changed geet so much ...yesterday night she was sobbing after being slapped from chief and now can be seen blissfully cooking .

Haan...tumhe dekh kar aajkal likh rahi hu....

Bohot khubsurat gajal likh rahi hu....

Tumhe dekh kar ajkal likh rahi hu.....

Haan ....tumhe dekh kar aajkal likh rahi hu...

Sunaina cocked her brows......as she saw geet smiling in her own tune of music in between cooking the baturas .....

What has got into her all of a sudden ....yesterday she was so glum ....and today she is cooking and humming a semi old hindi song like she belongs to this house our gang from ages ..does she remember she had been kidnapped here .....this is a crack ....complete insane case...

Tumhare jawan khubsurat badan ko

Tarasha hua mahel likh rahi hu...

Na pucho meri bekarai ka alam ...

mai raton ko karwat badal likh rahi hu......

she was about to walk in ....when aadi caught her elbow from back ....

he got to know about last night's cat fight between them....so both yash and him was so moonstruck when geet headed to them herself and greeting hi...

he actually liked how geet behaved after that awful incident with chief .....he somehow suspected ...rather felt that geet harbours some unusual feeling for her interloper ...personally he liked geet through their [aadi and geet] tinny winey exchange of monosyllables ...or may it be the slight change or effect she has brought in chief ....or may be her straight humble approach ...

as sunaina crossed dining space aadi sense forthcoming danger .....and caught sunaina right on time .....but as sunaina was startled she stumbled back

while aadi quickly caught her by waist .....and saved her from falling ......to mouth a thanx sunaina looked up and his lovingly gazing eyes caught hers .......

miley kab kaha.....kitne lamhe gujare ...

haan....

miley kab kaha ....kitney lamhe gujare...

mai gin ginke vo sare pal likh rahi hu.....

geet was done with the breakfast .... was about to come out of the kitchen while humming the song ......when she saw most amazing scene of the morning ...

aadi holding sunaina in his arms .........who were oblivious of the fact their privy witnessed by geet

she strode back .... in way doing that an utensil fell from the platform..... floor causing rattling sound.....sunaina kind off baffled by his sudden act ...as aadi's eyes were infectious ....she sudden became aware of geet's presence and then quickly guessed what made aadi stop her......all of the things happened in fraction of seconds matter ....

sunaina hastily pulled away from aadi ....rather rudely pushed him off.....and went away ... pissed aadi followed her to the dining ...

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ahhh.......this throbbing headache .......!!

chief opened his eyes in a smaller room quite remote from the dining space....the room which used to be a guestroom once upon a time presently contained a single bed cot in one corner and a little wooden table and chair .

the irritant rays of sun blurred his vision first which made him realize its pretty late at morning.....he checked the watch for the time which made him sit up on the bed with a jerk ...

heck ..!! 9.10 am...

it was awfully unusual from very early riser maan singh khurana.........he never slept so late in morning...............having a habit of doing shadow practice at extremely early morning it was quite surprising to him that what made him sleep so long .....

last night me and her

damn this freaking headache ....!!

which made him recall his last night's heavy drinking ....he had never drunk so much before.......

what made me do that .......!!!

heck .....GEET ....!!!

shit.......did I go to her at that late of night in that freaking drunken state ....?

ohh no.........!!please tell me I didn't ..........

ohhh.............. I did.......!!

My god ......!! what did I do ,.....what did I say to her ....did I tell her about my confused feelings over her matter ....

Heck ......!! he clutched his hair tight in despair.....

When he tried to recall what he exactly did at last night ....!!

Wait .................I kissed her ......!!

Again ....he covered his face with both his hands still trying to fathom his inane deeds of last night ....he was quite physically attracted to the woman he had kidnapped....and he was not oblivious with the fact ....

He sat there frozen while he hazily remembered how he was again got physical with her ....

And why the hell she didn't protest......or I forced .....did I make love to her .....?

Probably no....but I m sure I dint stop on kissing ....i was too drunk to control myself......he pressed his fingers hard on his temple to recall every details of last night

Damn.....!! he slammed on the bed.......and his hand fall upon his musk...

Musk.....!! I wasn't wearing last night .......!! ....and geet ..............shit ....!!

With which he was able recall every details of last night .....

[ guys I m telling u ...a habitual drinker is able to recall his deed....well he might forget minute details but he is able to remember 85- 90 % of it ....so I m making it real ]

....wait ....it was me who was drunk ....she was not ........why did she allow me ....?

Rather she reciprocated ... she wanted to see my face....

Is geet ................

Is there any chance ..............may be.....geet ..................................!!!!!!

Naah .......that cant be.... he shook away the provocating thought .....it just cant be.....how can anyone .....i mean look at me......nothing but a killer ....geet is not oblivious to the fact ...she is quite sensible .....

He paused....

Except the fact she ........actually .........responded in the physical intimacy I coaxed her in..... i knew she is......kind of..... responds to my insane physical demands......but ....that is kind off.....i mean ....i m the one who always forced myself on her ..............i provoked her ..........................

But she gave in at the end .......

or I m just fancying the thoughts ......!!!

Or its my subconscious mind wants her to be attracted to me....physically ...........................as I m to her .....or ................................may be mentally ....!!

But ....the way geet gave in my physical demand .. But a girl like geet ................ will she just respond to that with anyone.....i mean someone like me.........

But ....thinking about what happened last night .....after I ......i ...slapped her ......the subtle play of emotions her eyes showed..................is it much more serious than that ....................................is she too physically attracted....or mentally ..... .....?...

.....each time I m thinking over that ...i m feeling that eerie creeping sensation again ... the heart rate hastening ...!

Gosh ....what's wrong with me...!!

As far I recall......whatever happened yesterday .....its not as simple as we shared the physical moments earlier ....both of us.....becoming quite involved......

Its so not good......again I m feeling scared.....

Darn geet ...!!

Where the hell my convictions...my decisions goes when she is around.....why my hormones drives me crazy each time she comes close to me.....i never felt anything for anyone else in my entire life.....

..why do I behave insanely ....why her tears bother me......why her glum face haunts me....i cant deny the fact anymore ...she actually affects me.....but after what happened in last 2 days ....why do I feel I affect her too....her heart flutters when I kiss her ....

Why my heart rate quickening as I m realizing ....might be....there is a chance ...geet .........

Is she..........................by any chance .............................falling for me..

Why my heart fluttering ...............................???

I sat there numb........

This sinking sensation ....

I don't like ...i so hate it ..but more I m trying get over with it ......its engulfing me...

Darn geet ....!! what shall I do with you ....!!

Chief regains his composure back as he heard someone is knocking at his door crazily ....

He hurriedly puts on his musk and opens the door....

Its her ...

....in his shirt

................the fresh dew drop of morning ...!!

He stood there for moments unknown to the fact he is really being silly ..standing there checking her out ....

Dammm her ....!!!

What do u want ......................????

The thing u r hiding in the room...........!! ...........she retorted after a little awkward silence ...

Why does he change his behavior each single time I meet him.....he has put on his musk again .....

Chief didn't reply and turning back ..... he sat on the bed facing back to her ....

While she hesitantly entered in the room .........and put down a glass beside him ...

Lemon water .....!!

U are not here to serve me......!

chief chose the words ...still refusing to look at her ...or rather face her..?

That was the thing I last expected myself to do !! ......she retorted sarcastically .......

Which was really true..... !! ....at the time he opened the gate to her ......somehow the tough expression of his eyes told her he will be rude.....she had pulled herself together to face the most enigmatic person she had ever met in her life..... ....a total unpredictable single piece item ....!!

Then what are you doing here at this time.... chief did the big mistake ...

Ohh really ....!! u can intrude in my room any time ....may it be past midnight .....and I cant ...??

Chief was rendered mum ......about last night he had no excuse to prepare ......actually he cant do it at all.....he was caught off guarded ....

Geet noticed his cold silence ....she wonders what gets into this person time to time....each time she felt about last night .....she felt numb....he was so ...so. huh ....!....why is he so rude.....so harsh.....like determined to hit me....take the worst out of me.....should I ask why he was there what he was exactly doing with me......But what's the use......he will either ignore it ...or come up another rude hit...

I don't like this bitter rude insensitive side of his......i admire the person more.............i met last night .....the person sat there beside me the entire night holding my hand................... but both of them are same person.............................she was lost in her thoughts when she heard him ...

I can wander anywhere I want ...didn't I say that before.....?

And do whatever you want.............. she muttered mentally ...

Yeah.... ....but Anyway the water was excuse...actually ....i came here to ask for something ....can I make a call....geet said calmly

Whom.....?

Police....she uttered intentionally

He cocked his brows and looked at her with narrowed eyes....

Police can be invoked in this matter ....if I don't call dirjee.....if u don't want that ......can i...

He clenched his teeth as he knew she just teased him ...............actually managed to tease him again ....

He dialed the number and pushed the mobile towards her..................

Geet picked it up and was about go out ...

Wait ..... talk in front of me...

Geet rolled her eyes...and started the talk as dirjee was already on the line.....

Satshree akal dirjee..geet here ..bahe gurude khalsa ..bahe gurude fathe...Yes dirjee.....yes dirjee..i m absolutely fine...please don't worry ...I m with my friend ...dont worry dirjee.....my friend takes a good care of mine.....

He knew she is teasing him again ......he fumed silently ....

What ......dev....!! ohh.....she glanced at chief ...!! dirjee stop those investigations.... actually the goons who were abducting me had caught a fight with another set of goons worst than them ...and I managed to escape....while my dear old friend crossed my way and picked me up ....

...i just cant tolerate this any more....

He clenched his teeth ....

Yes dirjee.....i will be back soon ...and trust me I m absolutely fine....nobody beats me up here ..

This little woman ....!! arrrraghhhhh!!

Ahh..nothing dirjee...i said that because you are worrying so much ..dont worry ... ...yeah my friend will drop me home soon...real soon .....i cant say when ..but you don't worry...okay dirjee ....she hung up the phone....

God......!! what will I say if she asks me what for I went to her room....do I even have an excuse....a proper one....which will not affect my inflated male ego ....

And look at her ....what is she upto........she never ceases me surprising ....she is talking like my behavior was well expected ........How come she can be calm like this......like...he groaned mentally ..

He was busy in his thoughts when he didn't notice geet had gone .....leaving him struggling with her in his thoughts .....

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Majaa agaya geet .....!!...this is just awsum .......!!!

tuckkkkk...!!
Aadi made a noise tucking his tongue with his hard palate ......while tearing another batura in his plate .....!

Yummicious ....!! rishi remarked without even looking up from the plate ....he is definitely not going let his angel go .....!!he decided while stuffing the batura in mouth

Tera haat mujhe de de geet .....!! yash made a dramatic expression ....to which geet couldn't suppress her giggle ....

But she stopped as she saw sunaina walking out without even touching the food......geet thought for a sec and followed her ...

Sunaina was very much aware of her presence behind her ....but she denied to acknowledge ...

Ahem......geet cleared her throat ....to which no response came...

What do u want to prove by doing this .........!!sunaina blasted out

Geet didn't reply watched her with calm eyes......sunaina didn't find next set of words at her calm face ....so again turned back facing her back ...

I m really sorry about last night sunaina .....!! geet softly muttered .....!!

The last thing sunaina expected ......

She was confused what to say next ....... she struggled with the unuttered words ...but actually didn't know whether to accept the sorry or retort it with sarcasm....

At that time.....chief entered ....and saw three musketeers of his stuffed their mouth with food...while grinning ear to ear ......seemed they are cheering over something ......the aroma of the food filled the air....

Geet heeded inside followed by sunaina...

Whats the occasion ...!! care to share......?? chief remarked as three of them saw each others faces...

Umm......celebrating the success of mission yash escape !! aadi remarked ...

Yash was about to say something ....when aadi kicked him ...........which went unnoticed by chief ...who was trying to guess the yellow big puffed up things in his plate..and some sabji in the bowl ...!!

Come chief ...taste ....aadi intervened and made space for him ....

As chief tore the piece of batura ....and dipping it in the bowl positioned in his mouth .....geet's heart beat quickened.......unknown of hers her fingers crossed ...she waited as he chewed the food...

Hummmm.........................

Hmm.....pretty good...!!

Sunaina ....i didn't know your domestic qualities has improved so much ...wow sunaina ...!!......quite applauding I must say ....!! ........

well the person will marry you definitely be a lucky one ....at least wont die starving ....the food is really delicious

So done ...you are going to cook for all of us from now onwards ....!! chief announced while his eyes were fixed on his plate ........

awkward silence in the room.......................yash and rishi didn't know what to say as they were aware of last night's slapping episode of chief and geet ............

while a smile played on aadi's face.......his eyes had the glint of mischief ...!!

geet flustered ....turning into variant shades of red...

Sunaina was......baffled ....little irritated with chief as his words implied she is not good in domestic help...which was quite true.....

Chief was busy eating ....as suddenly he noticed the discomfited silence of the room.....as he ran his eyes on faces of each one of person present in the room....

He stopped his eyes on sunaina's face ...which clearly implied she is not flattered with the praise ....

Aadi had a strange grin on his face ...

And geet stood there all red .....with eyes lowered.... she couldn't decide whether to run away ....or stand there in front of them.....

Whats wrong......!!chief pulled away his hand from the plate ...............aadi ....who cooked the food ...!!

Geet ....................!! rishi dared....

Chief sat still tongue tied.....................cursing his big mouth ...!!

After some moments ....!! okay the food is fine......but there is nothing to go so gaga over this.. by the way salt is too much in the sabji ...and the batura is pretty uncooked ......he finally commented while putting down the plate ...

He knew....that was lame.....too silly ....but he didn't know how to manage the situation ...

Gosh ....!!! this woman always puts me in trouble....!! he cursed

Yeah ....of course...... ...they say .....a person who lacks the ability cant praise the other .... after all ....bandar kya jane ...aadrat ka swad

Geet punned ...!!

What do u mean ....!! chief was taken aback at her sarcastic remark ...!!

Simple .....u urself the worst cook and that's why being jealous and narrow ....!!and what else you can do ....!!

Saying this geet left the room pissed out by his sudden change of attitude ....

Did she say that.... what I heard ......!!! chief asked aadi .. stunned at her remark .....she has just humiliated him in front of his subordinates who never dares to raise their voice in front of him ....

Aadi nodded loudly meaning yes...

Hey hello .....!! chief got up and hurriedly rushed out at her direction .....

What do you mean by I m the worst cook .....!! he stopped her by pulling her elbow at the entrance of the kitchen ....

That---- you---- are-- so-- not--- able--- to---- cook !! ................she said as a matter of fact ...

And exactly how can you say that ....when you didn't taste a single time yesterday .......chief couldn't control himself ...........

Now it was geet's turn to be shocked......

So you cooked yesterday ....

Chief immediately released her getting what he just said ....and turned away ....

Wait .wait......so actually it was you who cooked yesterday .....

Ahh......things becoming much clear now...!!!

So may I guess the slap was not for my reaction to sunaina.......

It was because I didn't care to admire your effort ....

Geet stop being dramatic .....!!...no need to over -exercise your ur pea sized brain that actually locates in your knees ..so just put it out of your mind and mind in your own business .......being cornered chief was trying to walk away from there ....

Geet coudldnt help smiling .....!!

You know something MR CHIEF ...!! when people is rude without any reason that implies two things ......either he is covering up his own soreness of inside ...or the actual softness of inner self.....in both way he is actually faking....!! I mean pretending ...!!

Geet told crossing both of her hands on her chest while he was walking out of room....

Have a nice day chief !!.....she remarked while going towards her own room crossing stupefied chief in the way...

He had no words left even to curse himself or her .....he was actually zipped ...

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Edited by maanmeet_Reet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
guyz .....its done....hope .................just hope ....its shud be like this only ....i tried wrting last night but cudnt ....
cause i dint know what they shud behave after the passionate night
well hope i will be able to satisfy u .....this portion devoid passion or intense romance
but sweets life is not all about romance
coming back to the reality ...i penned down the much i cud predict
neway ..i replied some of u ...and the rest i will do after nite 1 am ....
i will do that please check it tom or later at nite
thanx and love with all my heart
Reet ...!!
p.s.....i really wanna know how u wanted this to be,,...and comparing what i have written put down ur views....practically
i really wanna know...some of u are married and well known with love
me the bore is little oblivious to these things so i really want ur help
Edited by maanmeet_Reet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome parts!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...

mix of humour,passion,romance,friendliness and lots of other feeling beautifully blended there in update..!!!😊

somtime i was laughing, excited,waiting for there reaction....!!

All the mode of human behaviour is beautifully described...!!

ur prediction after passionate nit was very opt in their scenario....!!!

keep it up babes...u simple lest us speechless with every update 😉

OMG maan is thinking too much..can't he see wat geet is feeling for him 😆

how they thiking bout each other is adorable.😊😊😊😊😊

loving growing frenship of geet wid other!!!

and maan praising cook first and then taking his word back by js saying fine was hilarious...loved it...lol

vaise she will def make good wife to him...😍

bt i din like the way dev feeling for geet..i can under stand his concern for her bt not love😡....

and last not the least...loved the way geet smile after noing fact that chief has actually cooked for her...and her teasing while talking on phone...MARVELLOUS dear!!!

hey reet pls tell yaar...wen u going to update next????????

m waiting DESPERATELY 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉



Edited by Rocks.Dhara - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: maanmeet_Reet

damn guyz wait .....dont start reading ...big part left .....until u see the foot line

hit the like button
dont think its finished



Ho ok dear.. I was sad at first .. thought it's a small update

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