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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update!
so now itz confirmed tat maan is d cheif n d inspector!
man!he actually noez everything bout her.......hez actually lyk a deadly criminal-ish
the story is getting more n more interesting!
luved it!
n now he has kept sum1 to even watch over her......
gosh!
update soon.....really wnna noe wtz gnna happen!
n d precap-he asks geet to meet him?!
reet...........u noe this is seriously an AWESOME FF....m luvin it!

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Posted: 14 years ago

omggg this FF is getting me hooked..............

superbbb update..........
will be waiting for next update.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg so hes both???? i can't believe that her cousin sisters an informer...can't wait 4 the nxt update so cud u plz do it soon!!!! thank u...by the way great update xxxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey reet,

terrific update👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏......i know maan will come behind her as she was going to complain in police station....i love him😳😳😳😳😳😳....in this role....he is more manly.........and i only want some rough romance😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉....anyways i know the lady is maans informer.

plzzzzzz update soon cant wait to read more.......


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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveeeeeeeeeeeeeee the update.
I think maan is both inspector and chief.
Conttinue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.




Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏


great part
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey sweets ...

update will be up in few minutes .....me zooming out to take dinner ...!!
will BRB....!!
tabtak who hasnt read it yet ....read it fast .........pleasssssse hit the like button and keep loving me as well ...hehe
love
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wat an amazing update!!!
Chief and inspector Maan hi hai, I guess....
OMG he knows everything about her😲
He's also sent his informer to her place....
Wondering wat will happen next?😍

Must say, the story is really gripping!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
here it goes.........read carefully dont miss a word my sweets ....
and here is the pic of sunita
hope u like the update ...hit the like button if u do ....and plz do comment.... love u
part 5

Next day

Look plz try to understand ...i have to meet the person ....plz....its very much important for mey career ...plz let me go .....geet begged for the 100 th time .......

When she was getting ready for her appointment with dev .........Sunita had declared ..she cant go out of the house ..!!

She felt like crying .....but she cant .....at least not in fromt of this witch ....well this girl was beautiful in deed ...but she cant admit it to herself...after all she works for that moron ...!! humph ....

Geet sighed leaning on the sofa ......

And now where the hell is he.....its 4 pm ....and he hasn't turned up yet .....when I don't need him he shows his face to me...well masked face ....and when I need him ....he has no news..........she desperately wanted him to show up .......at least call....


wait I minute .....what m I doing ..? what m I thinking ?.....why do I need him ..? from what I m getting the idea that he will understand ......he is just a murderer a bloody criminal ..............she reasoned herself............why will he understand my problem .......geet whats wrong with you ... she shut her eyes tight ........since when this man has entered in my life ....everything is going wrong ....!! its my last chance to meet dev .......and what m I doing sitting comfortably in my bedroom ......

why the hell I meet you ....she muttered....and at that time phone rang again .......

absentmindedly she picked it up thinking its puja ..asking about her meeting with dev ....

hello ...!

missing me sweetheart ...!!!

she jumped up from the sofa ....
you ....!!

don't tell me yopu were not ....
she knew he is chuckling on other side.....

no I m not ......and listen to me carefully ...i have a important appointment with an advocate .....ask her to let me go ......

ha ha ....are you asking for a favor or giving order to me ??

whatever ..!!

girl .....ask in a proper way ...then I might think about it ....

she sighed....okay ...please let me go ...its urgent and nothing to do with you ....!!please.....she added the last please forcefully ..........she hated it but had no choice....

that's better ...give the phone to her ....

she indicated sunita ......

she didn't know what they talked about but after ending the call sunita asked her to get ready .....

she tried hard not to .....but while getting ready ......she smiled.....though he is a criminal....but he is.....

geet ...argghhhh..get a grip girl.....she again told herself....

as she was about to get out of the house......she found sunita coming after her ....

seeing the question in her eyes .....sunita replied ....i will come with you ...

geet sighed ......and shrugged ..okay ..!!muttering she got into the taxi as sunita followed her ...

she glanced at the girl sitting by her side looking front .....seemed she has no interest in the outer world except carrying out her boss's orders ....her high cheek bones ..shiney locks falling on her temples .....sharp nose....determined eyes ....tall and slender and feature was actually telling geet ..she can be fitted in his gang ......she found herself praising her with silent eyes......

so you work for him .....? geet tried to start a conversation ......

yes... curt reply came ....

is sunita your real name ...?

no ....

you are here to keep eye on me....

no ...

then .....?? geet was astonished at this reply ...

HE has lots of persons to do that ...she avoided naming him chief ....she cant let out a single information ....

Then what are you doing with me...?

If you try to pass the information to police I can stop you without creating any nonsense ...so that doesn't attract people's attention .....

I see............... now its geet's turn to reply in monosyllables ...... but she has to know more about this musk man ....

What did you do before u joined him ? I mean how far you have studied?

Sunita let out a smug chuckle ......we don't disclose our personal information ..

I thought you don't wanna do about professional information ...!!

Sunita couldn't believe her ears .....she turned at her to find she is winking at her ....

She was about to say something rude.....when she saw her smile was friendly .....and well...nice ...i can call it ...sunita thought in her mind .....

I have done masters in science ....she actually replied her ....

Geet grinned and said ..i guess u know everything about me...

Sunita nodded and popped out her mobile and started seeing something ...getting she is not interested in further discussion geet looked out ...waise manna hoga ....that man has employed some educated persons in his gang .....what about him ? how far he has studied....? well what made him choose this line ......her endless thoughts were chained only by HIM.....

all the way though geet tried hard not to think about him .....but finally realized her every thought was ending on him only ...she was irritated with herself......so much curiosity is not good geet puttar she warned herself...

she looked sideward to distract herself..... it's the same place where he barged in her taxi ......it had been more than 24 hours .........

she again cursed herself ....and opened her file ......

as they reached malhotra associates building ......sunita told her ...she will be waiting outside for her ....

nodding she looked up in front of her ....

white huge building ..... she entered inside......and noticed the lavishly decorated costly interior design of the building .....

she felt ping of pride inside .......she had been chosen here to do junior ship under the great dev malhotra ..........from now on wards her career is going to take a jump .... she was so lost in her future plans ....when she didn't notice the lift was was wide open infront of her ...and she was thinking with open mouth ....looking at the wall of fame ....
one day my name will be there ......

suddenly she heard someone is calling her ....looking up for the source she found the liftman asking her ....

madame will you be coming inside.....
but getting no reply from her ...he pressed the close button .....

smiling at her own reverie she rushed to the lift ....and ...........bumped with someone.......

she was about to fall losing her balance ...she closed her eyes in the anticipation of hitting hard floor.......but the floor never came ....surprised she opened her koel adorned butterfly eyes to find a handsome face wearing specs bending on her a few inches away .......................

she forgot to blink....as she felt he is gazing at her without a blink .......

blush crept on her cheeks ............ she got actually what might had happened..... she is hanging from this handsome man's arms that encircled her waist ...... and he is gazing her ....

and people enjoying this drama all around her ............she found people watching them with gapped jaws.....

she is gorgeous ........ he muttered herself as he saw the battling eyelashes ..........the pink gloss shined on her lips as she bit the lower one in fear ....her skin glowed against the luminosity.............................and the blush ......i wish I could touch them ......................he smiled thinking at his own thoughts ......when he saw her lips moving .....she is saying something .......

I m fine....let me stand .....!

Uhh ...ahem .....sure.....he made her stand gently ......

And asked ..... where you do want to go ...!!

Uhh ..i have an appointment with ....Mr Dev Malhotra ....!!the VERY FAMOUS advocate DEV MALHOTRA ... can you please tell in which floor his office is ?...... she said proudly ......

His brows cocked as he heard that .......and murmured in a surprised voice DEV MALHOTRA..???

Yes....!

What for you want to meet him .......!!

Geet sighed......okay I admit he had rescued me from falling ...but that doesn't mean he will start interrogating me .....god...!! he must be an advocate ..huh .....but I m not your defendant .!!!...... she thought in her mind .....may be he trying to be over friendly with me as few minutes ago I was in his arms ...........huh ...!!

But she kept mum ....

Hello ....you here ....?? he clicked his fingers in front of her ....

Uhh...yes...well I have been selected by him as a new junior .......

And you ,....? he was about to say something again when ......................

I was just asking him the way and see what he is doing ....what does he think of himself.......huh ....!! she thought .....before saying ....

Look ...i don't feel like to answer any further question of yours .....thanx for your help .....i will meet Mr DEV my self .......stomping she went inside the lift ....
leaving the bemused hunk behind ........................

.........he smiled looking at her trailing way ......

Muttering ..................... nice attitude.....!!hmmmm...!

Mam!! You may go in ...!! the receptionist indicated her to DEV's room ....

She knocked with trembling hand.........what if he discards me....ohh ......m I looking smart enough to be a part this reputed firm .......she thought ......

Come in .....a grave voice answered ...

She limped in .........gulped trying to ease her dried throat ......

Sir.............hello ...................... I m geet handa.........!! she spoke ......keeping her fingers crossed........

Ne junior ........final year law student ...Mumbai Law college ........the further information came from the chair ........it was turned back to her ....she could only see the back of the chair ......

Take a seat Miss Geet ..!!

She took the seat nervously .....

When the chair revolved to her .........

She looked up and jumped out of the chair.........

Aap ....?????

Yes me..........why ...? were you expecting some one else it to be........he chuckled ....

She tried to swallow and ease her dried throat .....but couldn't ........she had no words in her mind ......seeing the person sitting in front of her ......................

What happened.....seems like you didn't like your new boss ..!! he smirked......

No .....yeshhh.....she finally found her tongue .....vo ....i mean .....uhh ...i was.......actually .....vo ......mmmm. uhh .....i m sorry ...!!!!

She shut her eyes saying the last phrase quickly ....!!

When he broke in laughter ...... she prayed hard to babaji .....so that the soil cracks and she can enter to hide herself .....

Seat down miss geet handa.....relax..........

she opened her eyes hearing this ....

Its okay miss geet ...take your seat ...he again asked....

It was him....!!!

The same person she had met downstairs in front of the lift .....with whom she had bumped .........its him who had saved her from falling ....its him with whom she had argued .....and misbehaved........its dev malhotra .....whom she had humiliated in his own office........

Her face turned into darkest shade of red ...thinking what she had done ...!!

It was really good to hear from you ...............that I m famous ...! he chuckled again ...!!

I m sorry sir....vo actually ...!! she had no reason to defend herself.....

Its okay Miss geet ....i was kidding ...!! he controlled himself seeing her uneasy face ...and started talking about business......after sometime she felt quite comfortable discussing about law ....and her experiences .....likes ...and dislikes about different important judgments by different courts in last one year .....she didn't realise when one and half hour passed.........

He is master in his field.......she was quite impressed by her new boss......when her eyes fall on the clock ....

Uhh ,......sir ...i must go now.....she said...

Okay ....see you tomorrow miss geet ...!! he smiled warmly ........to which she too .......passed him a warm smile........

After she came out from the malhotra associates firm .....she didn't find sunita anywhere .....

She must have gone ....!! thinking I m too nave to cause harm to her boss......!! she chuckled.....and swiftly got into a taxi ....indicating way back......

She relaxed her muscles .......after leaning back in the seat .....finally got rid of him ......

At that moment her mobile ran and she picked it up ....with hesitated fingers ....she thought it must be him or sunita .....

Hello...geet....u have gone to meet dev sir na......plz knock at the police station for my purse.......on your way back home ...plz plz plz sweety .......she exclaimed in one breath ...

Geet smiled.....okay puja ....i m near to it ....i will call you after the talk with them ....

She indicated the taxi driver to stop in front of the police station ...

As she got inside.....she didn't find ....the MAAN Singh Khurana there.... ...

But ganesha was there ....who informed her ..it has been rescued but she have to collect it tomorrow .......sighing she was coming out when she asked...

Where is MR khurana ....?? she herself didn't know why did she ask that .....

Ohh Maan SIR......dont ask......its our luck that if he comes on duty .....or we have to do the false sign for him ...... he hardly shows up his face .... ganesha pouted ...

What ...??

Haan ...ganesha replied with a disgusted face......ofcourse he is having a tough time managing his senior's absence .....and manipulating documents ....as it might endanger his own job too ....

After a few words geet got what kind of lazy irritating bossy kinda person Maan is....!!! and also got another information ..........................Maan had been in a post of S.P ......at worli .........but ganesha didn't know actually what happened there .....on the basis of negligence on duty ....he has been demoted to O.C ....of this little police station ......but nobody dares to speak it up ....its only that ...ganesha is a very brave policeman ...and soon going to get a promotion ......!! all Courtesy Ganesha...!!

She sighed......what more can be expected from that joker ...!!! wishing best of luck to ganesha she came out of the police station ....

She was walking to the next signal ...when she found herself being dragged in a dark alley sideways ......

Within fraction of a second she found herself pinned with wall by a strong hand kept around her neck .........she felt herself clasped behind the iron hand ...the scent of Armani hit her nostrils ......his hot breaths fanned out on her face...............and she knew its HIM ....!!

How many times do I have to tell you what you should do and what u shouldn't ....>??? he groaned piercing the silence of the darkness...................... he pressed his hand further on her neck........his eyes glared in the darkness......the flame in his eyes told her he is not going to leave her today .......

She felt herself choking at the pressure ..... not able to inhale air...

Leave .....mmee......she stammered due to the pressure on her neck ........

When he didn't move a little ....still burning her with his angry glare ..... he didn't know why he was so rude.......he did want to hurt her ....but he was doing .....is it only because she went to police station again .............or SHE HADNT LISTEN TO HIM IN SPITE OF ADMONISHED BY HIM .............why ....he wondered why ...? why m I behaving so weird ...? ........why did I expect she will abide by my words............??

Her eyes welled up in pain ...................

He noticed the shining drop in her beautiful eyes that spoke volumes.......he watched her face wincing in pain.........

But what is it .. pinging inside me.......he panted ....why.....why this woman affecting me..........when I was looking everywhere for her .................. why it affected me when I saw her coming out of the police station .....why the mere thought affected me that she is cheating on me..??...........he gulped.........he gulped down the thoughts disturbing him to the core ....i don't want to think....don't .....women cant have any reason....

i m disturbed ... because she dared to defy me.....nobody can defy me .......!!!she has hurt my ego......... she mistook my kindness....and that's y I m bothered.........he concluded ...

Chief did u say that ...? you are bothered by a girl .....a mere woman ??? hah ...!! may be my ears are ringing ....but why are you so close to her .....to hurt her its not needed to breathe on her face .......not needed to glance at the shining pain in her eyes.......!!!!well how will I know whats going on in your complicated brain ......................or may be....just saying ...may be......ur HEART ...? I thought u don't have any heart ...okay ...sorry ..sorry no offence ....my job is describing the events not jumping onto the conclusions ...do whatever you wanna do with her .....trust me ......none can stop you ...after all....

.chuck ....leave it ....read on guys ......**wink **

You ahhh .....are hhhurting me........................she felt she will become senseless if it continues for some more seconds.....................ppp please....she mumbled with much difficulty ..

He released her but for some seconds .....again grabbed her shoulders ......jerking her up to his chest ....he groaned ....

You thought u can do this ......................as I was being lenient to your plea....... this afternoon ....gave you permission to meet dev malhotra ............... u mistook MISS GEET HANDA ...!!!... nobody messes with me...i mean nobody .....i don't let anyone mess with me............samjhiii tummmm!!!!!

He threw her to the wall....and turned back ....he shut his eyes for a milli fraction of second....

She rubbed her neck to ease the pain .........

I haven't utter a single thing about you............... she said in a voice choked in tears .......i just went there for getting the purse .....as puja asked me to do...

nobody has hurt her physically like this ....though she had been raised alone ....but dirjee was always a pillar to her .....she was alone in some way ..... she had no close buddy on whose shoulders she could weep on ....share her happiness and pain talk out her heart ...........and at the same time its the truth there was none who could hurt her like this ...she was always an obedient girl to everyone ...a typical good girl who knew her responsibilities.....never faced a serious scolding physical hurt is of beyond imagination ........

He didn't pay attention to her ...and dragged her ruthlessly .......she found a black scorpio parked in the narrow alley ......

Pushing her inside...........he himself got into the car ...... and zoomed out from there .....

She tried to open the door of the running car .....when pouncing on her ..... he grabbed her wrist .....stopping the car for a while ....he blindfolded her .....and again drove off..cutting the cold air into pieces...........

Please let me go .....she begged while flushing her face with tears ........ her wrist was still held in his iron clasp .....

He drove the car in one hand like a robot .......as if he couldn't hear any of words....

Please......trust me ...i haven't said anything ......she again spoke up ...being not able to swallow the cry ......

No answer came...........

Finding no other reason she tried once again ........................dirjee needs me.......he will be worried ...please let me go ........please...

He didn't respond to her plea ......but the car did ................................the engine groaned and gears clicked ....................and he pressed the accelerator hard to speed up the car ......

She got the groan in the answer .....

You shouldn't do this ........she mumbled as fresh drops of tear rolled on .......she found not a single light ahead as her eyes blindfolded ........and she zoomed into obscurity.....

She found her future lost in dark that seemed so very much glowing this evening ......

She leaned on the plush seat helplessly .......she couldn't stop sobbing thinking about the insecurity lying ahead ......will I be able to go home someday .......??... he was true ...i took him bit lightly ....she cursed the moment she had entered that stupid police station

But he didn't care to her muffled sobs ..... kept on driving like a machine .....

she didn't know how long he drove.......as she had fallen asleep being tried crying for a long time .............

suddenly something made her woke up ......as she found herself hanging in the air.........a pair of strong arms clasped around her .........the cologne was too prominent to her nostrils ..............his cold robust chest she felt on her side............ his warm and hurried breaths were fanning out on her bare neck ........

After a fraction of seconds she realized she is in his arms....he is carrying her .....but to where ....?

she didn't know she tightened her grip around his neck .........

And he knew she had woke up .....he continued walking not bothered by her ...

precap : well.....he the passionate angry young man .....she the punjaban beauty ...and living together in one place ..... and what else cud happen ...my mind is racing... is urs ???
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Edited by maanmeet_Reet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow! 😲 He was aggresive towards her! omg. i planned on mentioning Dev, but i seriously forgot about it by the time i reached the last line.
reet, ur story is soo gripping! Im completely hooked..i know u updated twice today but i just cant help myself- PLZ update soon😳
The pre-cap!!! ahhhhh my mind hs already reached there 😛
👏⭐️
Sadaf
Edited by kyphfanz - 14 years ago

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