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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
NICE PROMO😛
do continue soonnnnnnnnnnnnnn

nd my name is nt in d pm list why???????????????😭😕
nd u didn't pm me too😕😭

😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: kavyaa


u r such a cute doll😊!!! mah baby!!!! 14??? yo gal u r actually very young 4 dat naughty mind of urs!!! arre koi ni i'll wait till 2morrow!!! bt 2morrow means 2morrow!!! no promise breaking okh???😆
even i m crazy about AR😉 so dn worry about!!! ab jo tune details mujhe batai hai ab main kaise control karunge kal tak??? yeh kya kar diya jaane??? latka diya na mujhe😆 ...
& madam i dare u 2 talk bad of ur updates😡
!!!u r nt allowed woh right sirf mera hai 😈ok ok hum readers ka hai!!! i cant deny dem der rights na!!! bt u r NOT alowed 2 say anything bad about ur updates😡!!! ok?? get dat st8 2 ur head!!!😈
& i wud nvr be sorry 2 talk 2 u!!! rather i luv talking u!!! u r such a sweet kid ya!!!
temme na d names na... i promise i wn laugh!!! temme na....pleeshhh
luv u too babes oops baby!!!lol 😛😆
muahhh❤️
tanvi


haila...😲 another name..doll..😉 anywys..dont woryy..i will update my ff today and today itself.. aur theek hai..am shutting my big mouth abt nt liking my update still nw...nt gng to take dat rite frm u anytime...
😳..ur sweet...and abt the names...lets leave it right there...its so embarrassing....😲
luv ya too dii..
muah❤️
amal

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Posted: 14 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: jannat4ever

NICE PROMO😛
do continue soonnnnnnnnnnnnnn

nd my name is nt in d pm list why???????????????😭😕
nd u didn't pm me too😕😭

😕


thnkuuuuuuuuuuu....huh hws dat possible..well actually my pm list isnt updated...let me c if there any prob wid my pm functioning...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
Sorry for commenting so late😛😆

Awesome part... I was lil busy... but was extremely happy when i read ur pm... atlast u updated😃
Thanks... 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: arluver4life


haila...😲 another name..doll..😉 anywys..dont woryy..i will update my ff today and today itself.. aur theek hai..am shutting my big mouth abt nt liking my update still nw...nt gng to take dat rite frm u anytime...
😳..ur sweet...and abt the names...lets leave it right there...its so embarrassing....😲
luv ya too dii..
muah❤️
amal



better keep ur mouth zipped regarding critizing!!! dat's ONLY our right!!!!😈😎
oyeee bata naaa names!!! i'd luv 2 know!! den i'll decide na ki konsa sabse pyara naam hai & i'll call u wid dat!!! pleeshhhhhhhhh😊
luv ya sweetheart❤️
muahhhhh
tanvi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: arluver4life


thnkuuuuuuuuuuu....huh hws dat possible..well actually my pm list isnt updated...let me c if there any prob wid my pm functioning...



yeah even mah name is nt der!!!!😭😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77

tanvi dii...dont worry i will update my pm list..its only dat am too lazy lazy to sit and type out 144 buddies who are on my buddy list..dont worry na..i will update soon..and abt the part its cuming up nw..its nt complete..its really long...bt i promised today i will update..so a long incomplete part specially dedicated to u tanvi di...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: SnehaluvsAR

Sorry for commenting so late😛😆

Awesome part... I was lil busy... but was extremely happy when i read ur pm... atlast u updated😃
Thanks... 😊

aww sneha dii..its really sweet of u to fnd time to read my ff...i really appreciate ur support..it brings a smile on ma face...just luv ya all so much...thnx abt the part...and dont worry dii..my updates will b faster frm nw on.. muah
Luv ❤️
Amal
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: arluver4life

tanvi dii...dont worry i will update my pm list..its only dat am too lazy lazy to sit and type out 144 buddies who are on my buddy list..dont worry na..i will update soon..and abt the part its cuming up nw..its nt complete..its really long...bt i promised today i will update..so a long incomplete part specially dedicated to u tanvi di...



gal u forgot 2 temme d names!!! i wn leave u till u temme!!! i'll eat ur head up until u temme!!!! muhahaha 😈😛😆
😆😆u can pm me d names if u r shy!!!!!😳
oye hoyeeee u made mah day errr 9ght gal!!!!😃😆 m sooooooo happy!!! u dedicated d part 2 me!!! yipieeeeee & d part is cmg nw!!! yuhuuuuuu!!!! np wid d incomplete part!!!😊

Edited by kavyaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 7- Love, Rain and Romance....
Specially dedicated to tanvi dii, gauri dii, ridss dii, jannat and sneha dii who has motivated me to keep continuing my ff..and to everyone who is ready to give me a chance and having faith in me..

She was panting..Water dripped from her hair and her clothes stuck close to her skin doing justice to her figure..She quickly removed the dupatta she was wearing..The minute she turned back she realized that the dupatta was not where it was supposed to be..upon her neck..She blushed at the thought that a night could change her life..no actually her heart..she wondered if this was her dream for it was better than any dream she could possible dream..A dream that gave her bliss for sure..A dream that bound her to her heart..A beautiful dream

The clock struck 4 in the morning..bursting her bubble of dreams just the moment..she found herself with mixed emotions..Was this alright? Was it allowed for ladies of her age? Is it natural for her to dream and become a much more freely minded lady within the span of a night?

This pressure..This bliss was tending to get Ridhima all the mental stress she could have suffered the whole of her 23 years..what more she dint even know why on earth was she feeling like this..But she was happy and content with this newly aroused passion..She realized that this was what she had wanted all her life..Its what every girl of her age wishes and prays for..

As questions, doubts, happiness, tension, stress, hope started gushing out all at once she decided to empty her head into her silent companion, her diary..She ran to get hold of it..

Dear Diary,

Nights are quite special..More special than days..As someone said once long ago it is only in the dark that we are able to see the million actually trillions of twinkling stars..I love nights..But tonight..its different..its strange..but it feels right..and tonight shall rule my list of best nights ever..

As she poured out the events of 'the' night..she blushed a deep crimson..

*FLASHBACK*

How or When it happened..No one really knows..But it turned out to be a sort of a date between the 4 couples who now were admired by the onlookers..The boys decided to take care of each of their 'girls'..They would drop them back to the hostel once each of the pair spend the time together in any way they liked..shopping or eating or beach walking..anything..this was basically put forward by Rahul who seemed so interested in this idea of his especially because his girl was none other than Muskaan..Atul accepted eagerly for he did like Anjali as a really good friend..Rahul asked Armaan to talk to the guy Nikki was so engrossed dancing with and seeming happy with this stranger to them..Armaan had a word or two..No one really knew what he had talked with the guy..But they did see him hi-fiving the guy..The guy's name turned out some Abhimanyu Modi..Rahul scratched his head over and over persistent of the fact that this name was highly familiar to him..Armaan had to finally convince him that he will remember later when all the loudness around would be gone..Satisfied, Rahul dragged a giggling Muskaan out of the club..Followed by Atul and Anjali who decided to some beach walking in this beautiful night filled with the light breezes..Armaan watched Nikki being pulled by the Abhimanyu..And finally he realized that it was only Ridhima and himself left there in the gang to go out..He turned around to see Ridhima sitting at the bar..Was his eyes playing with him??He had seen Ridhima's cheeks experience a blush as she saw him walking towards her..Armaan was quite surprised with himself when he found himself loving the color that now was spread over the whole of her chubby cheeks..

Armaan: You are fine with coming with me, right?

Ridhima: (slightly awkward): Ya sure, why would I have a problem?

Armaan:Okay then..lets go..

Ridhima: Ok

As she got out of the high bar seat her pencil heels betrayed her and she was falling..o god why did she have have embarrass herself in front of Armaan.. With him, she always wanted to look good and she dint understand what was so special in him..But now noooo..

She opened her eyes only to see herself deeply looking into Armaan's eyes..As realization dawned upon her she knew that Armaan had kept her from falling down and had caught her right around her waist..She forgot to breathe as his deep blue eyes were truly encapsulating her..
The crowd's oohs and aahs brought them back to reality..

Armaan took some time to regain his posture and finally said : Chale..

Ridhima simply nodded looking..

When they had entered the car..Armaan asked softly: Where do you want to go?

Ridhima: Your wish..Im fine with anywhere..

Armaan: Ridhima.. you don't have to always nod to whatever I say..Wherever u want to go or whatever you want to go..you can tell me..

Ridhima: No Armaan..Im seriously fine with wherever you go..I mean im not that fussy about the places I go or what I do..

Armaan: You are sure na? I mean are you comfortable? If u don't like it.. then you don't have to take it as a date? Just take it as an outing with a friend..

Armaan was really scared if Ridhima would not like his company..He dint want her to feel anything close to uncomfortable..He was aware of the excess care he took of Ridhima..But he always acknowledged it to her delicateness..She was one human whom he had felt was really delicate..physically and mentally..And particularly, he hated seeing her tears..He had once seen her pass a lone tear when one of her favourite patients had died not being able to make up with the surgery..He had felt like a stone on his heart when he her beautiful brimming with those tears..It pained him..It left himself strangled..

Ridhima: Armaan, maine kaha na..am fine with you..And you know what I don't mind this as a date..i mean..you know..Im fine..Am really fine..really very fine..

Why in the world did he feel that she wouldn't like him..that she wouldn't like going out with him..And of course she dint mind a date..at least with Armaan..He always managed to soothe her senses one way or the other..But the apprehension that she just blurted out a deep hidden fact made her blush..

Armaan, too fascinated by the blush that crept Ridhima's cheeks grasped quite late of the words she just spoke..He was half relieved..Now that he knew she dint detest him or loathe him or hate him nor did he bother her..He never really understood why he felt conscious of himself with her around..

Armaan gave a naughty smirk..the first Ridhima ever had seen..one that she was about to see more than her own parents..one that would either make her blush or would make her scowl that Armaan recently realized he was totally obsessed with..

Armaan decided to shut the silence between them..

Armaan: Umm.. Ridhima..do you like being complimented?

Ridhima: uh..what..i mean why such a question.. Ridhima was totally confused by this sudden question on compliments when she expected him to tease her on her huge blunder..

Armaan: Kuch Nahi..But just tell do you?

Ridhima: Well..depends on who gives me and how it is given..in the sense, the honesty behind it..

Armaan:Acha ok..if I give you an honest compliment you will not feel awkward ?

Ridhima blushed..And just as she did so she could bet he said 'oye hoyye' under his breath..She had once heard him tell this to a lady who had given birth to an adorable daughter..Armaan, Ridhima noticed had a huge love for babies.. A fact that she was happy about for she too loved them..She found his oye hoyye very interesting..It was the first he had ever heard..she always wondered if he made it himself or he had copied it from someone unsuspectable..

Armaan: I will take that as a yes..

Ridhima simply nodded..

Armaan: Well.. that color looks lovely on your cheeks..

Ridhima's heart raced..It felt a strange sensation..Being complimented for her beauty was not something she was new to..but hearing it from Armaan brought in an altogether different story forward..

Totally left speechless..she looked away towards the seat window so that Armaan doesn't see the stronger blush making its way to her cheeks..Armaan on the other hand took this gesture as a sign of her disapproval..Devastated, he stopped the car and said : Ridhima, am sorry..I know you are a traditional girl..Im really sorry..I promise not to repeat anything of this sort ever..Please don't be angry..Please forgive..am really very sorry..

Ridhima cut him in and said: Armaan, you are impossible..I mean why do u keep thinking I am not fine..Dekho though I am a traditional girl I can understand whether a person has good intentions or not..You don't have to keep ensuring that I am comfortable because seriously I'm very much happy to be with you..ok..

Armaan stunned by this unexpected reaction of Ridhima couldn't help but pass a small grin..Ridhima had lost her temper..Of course she had a reason to..Which girl would like to be treated like this? She had totally lost her cool when he had blurted that final sorries, resulting in her scowl taking over the blush on her face..

Ridhima: And you know what..one more sorry from your mouth.. am seriously leaving the car..

Armaan: Nahi..i promise I won't tell another sorry..Im sorry for upsetting you..

Ridhima: Armaan..there you go again..you so can't control your sorries can u ?

Armaan: oops..o oh..I am sorry for telling sorry'

Ridhima: Armaan..ughhhhhhhh'.

Ridhima knocked open the door and stood there leaning against the car, crossing her hands with an angry scowl darning her face..She was frustrated by the turn of events..

Armaan cursed his luck to upset Ridhima, though he really enjoyed the scowl..Instead of feeling guilty he was feeling more of an enjoyment when he saw the scowl..He made a mental note to keep fighting with her only to see that scowl..But for now..he had to butter her so that a lovely night would not go a total waste..Making up his mind..he opened the door, walked to the other side of the car where his lady for the night stood..

Armaan: Ridhima.. Armaan touched her shoulder..but almost as he did so she twitched his hand off..

Armaan: Look..Please come na..No more sorries'I promise..Pleacheeeeeeeeeeee..

With that he gave his super pout to which Ridhima feel instantly..OMG that was freaking good..He looked like a cute baby when he did so..She had never seen anything of that kind ever..A desperate passion to see more of it grew within her..

Just then..to shatter everything..or so she thought..the rains made its way pouring cats and dogs..
Armaan quickly tried opening the door for Ridhima..and to his utter astonishment his door wouldn't open..By now, the pair were drenched in water..Armaan tried his door and nothing could simply make it open..Armaan was too much into cursing himself for leaving the keys inside because it led a better way for jamming the locking system when it rained..He dint feel nor see the pair of eyes which were scrutinizing every inch of his body..

When the rains had come shooting in, she saw Armaan trying desperately to open the doors..But far from these thoughts..the shirt Armaan was wearing..sticking to the well built chest of his felt her breathless..She knew by the look of his broad shoulders that he would be muscular..But this was too much..She never knew she would ever tell this word out of her own mouth..But he was hot...The abs, the chest muscles..everything was just perfect..He just looked like a perfect sculpture..

As Armaan turned around..he saw the best sight ever..The spaghetti strapped dress of hers soaked into the water followed by the dripping hair of hers totally struck him off..She was nothing less than a goddess or a princess or an angel..His heart paced its beat when a lone drop of water slid past her lips..Blood rushed faster than ever in his body..He felt a strange but welcome electric currents running across his body..In short he was electrocuted by her stunning beauty that outshone the beautiful moonlit night..His heart now felt the irresistible desire to touch her body..It made him wild..but he knew he couldn't suppress it until he succeeded in fulfilling that desire..He tried looking away from her..Impossible..But he also was aware that he had his duties to fulfill..To ensure she was safe..for she was his responsibility for the night..

Ridhima, aware of the stares that Armaan was showering upon her could feel her heart pounding faster than ever'

Recollecting his senses back..he finally found his voice back..

Armaan: Umm Ridhima..Mujhe lagta hai ki this rain won't end up until a long time..are you fine with walking back to the hostel..Its just about 20 minutes walk from here'

Ridhima: Ya, sure..

Ridhima: Umm, Armaan what about your car..

Armaan: I will come back tomorrow to get it back..it wont open the rains settles.

Ridhima: Theek Hai

Armaan: So, Chale

Ridhima nodded her approval..They walked for the next 5 minutes in awkward silence..

The rain began pouring heavier than ever..and just then Ridhima let out a sneeze..The doctor in Armaan and the caring fragment for Ridhima in him immediately aroused..

Armaan: Ridzie.. your fine??

Ridhima: Yeah..achoo'

Armaan: No you are not..Come with me..

Armaan dragged Ridhima to a nearby tree..Ridhima sneezed her lungs out..

Armaan: Ridzie, just a minute I will be right back..

He strode off..Ridzie saw him walking to a nearby house..He rang the bell and the door was opened by a young girl probably in her early twenties..The devil of jealousy instantly rose in her..She was totally taken aback by the cool way Armaan was talking with the girl and working his charm on her..Curiosity taking the better of her..she walked a bit more closer now that she could hear her a bit more clearly.

Armaan to the girl: She is my wife..and I need the dupatta for her..an old one will do..

She felt sudden warmth enclosing her..and she sensed a weird contentment when she saw the pang of jealousy clearly written on the girls face'For sure she was one among the numerous girls who were charmed out by Armaan.

She saw the girl getting inside the house and the minute she did so she spotted Armaan stealing a glance of hers and when he gave her a small wink her lips curled up into a genuine smile..

Armaan returned with a dupatta in his hand..

Armaan: Ridzie..I thought I told u to stay under the tree..What are you doing here in the middle of the road again..

Ridhima: Well, actually just wondered what you were doing..

Armaan: Acha theek hai..whatever..now come here'

Armaan walked with her back to the tree..

Armaan: Don't fuss..Am just doing what am supposed to be doing..

Ridhima once again simply nodded wondering what this guy was upto ..Armaan rubbed her head gently yet firmly with the dupatta..After some time he asked her: Feeling better?

Ridhima: Ya..Thnx..

Armaan: Shhh'(He put a finger on her lips..he moved closer to her..on an impulse she moved back..he moved even closer..she felt her back touch the back of her tree..)

Ridhima: Armaan'

Armaan: Ridzie..I don't do stuff to hear thanks from people..Especially when it comes to you..I do it because I want to..Because I feel content..I don't want to ever hear a thanks from you..I feel like I m nothing than more than a formal colleague to you..

She dint know what to speak nor did she know why she spoke the words that she let out just then..

Ridhima: You don't want it that way?

Armaan: (huskily) : No..

Ridhima: (in equal huskiness):Then don't take it that way..

Armaan: Are you sure?

Ridhima: Never been more sure.

Armaan: Without knowing me?

Ridhima: Isn't this knowing enough?

Armaan: For me yes..its more than enough..For you..i don't know

Ridhima: Then know that it is quite enough..

Armaan: Ridhima..

With that they found each others eyes filled with want..Deeper and deeper the duo went into the eyelock..It wasn't an eyelock..It was the initial bonding of two straying souls who had finally found solace in each other's simple presence..

Ridhima: Armaan, we need to go..

She was the first to break the eyelock aware of the fact that she wouldn't b able to endure the strong gaze of those blue eys for long..

Armaan: Uh what..o ya..okay..lets go..

Another 5 minutes passed by walking in utter silence..the rain started winding up'Just then Ridhima slipped on a rock..Moaning aloud in pain..she fell down once again to get into Armaan's arms..But unfortunately this time an eyelock dint make its way for Ridhima had sprained her ankle..

Ridhima: Ouch..

Armaan: Shh..Ridzie Sit Still..

Armaan bent down to examine her ankle only to find that it was quite deep..His face was filled with sheer disturbance..

Ridhima: Sprained my ankle..din't I?

Armaan: Yup..

Ridhima : Its ok..It happens sometimes..i had a major fracture once..Since then any small incidents and it sprains..

Armaan gave a look as she tried to get up..She couldn't get her balance and caught Armaan's arm..

Armaan: (in a slow voice): Ridhima, don't walk

Ridhima: Then?

Armaan: Let me carry you

Ridhima: WHAT?????

Armaan: It will hurt you every step you take.

Ridhima dint have an answer to that..Taking her silence as a yes..Armaan carried her..If his talking caused her heart to pound then his touch made her heart to pace wild..She was sure Armaan heard it beating..for she saw give her a naughty smirk..Not to let him win over her she purposely let a blush spread on her face..And seeing Armaan's expression she knew she had won this game..This game to which they won sweeter rewards when they lost..A game they were and only they were destined to play with each other..

.i hope u all enjoyed readin this update..do leave ur comments,compliments and criticism behind..till den luv ya all ❤️ 🤗gudnite...
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