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shaaz_91

@shaaz_91

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#321

hey
dey r gud n luvd d little changes u made
cont soon.........lyk really sooooooooooooooon
tc
shaaz

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Crazyy_Fan

@Crazyy_Fan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#322

Awesome...likin d wayy it izz gng..cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#323

Omg that was so amazing! Pleasee cont super soon and do pm me! I loved it to no extent! Thanks for the pm and do keep me on the pm list!

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sania

@saniashzadi

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#324

hey dear...

awesome updates...please add me to ur pm list

waitng fr nxt parts...update soon

love

sania

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Zarqaa

@cant.be.assed.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#325

awesome updates!i lovd them all!

thnx for the pm

do continue soon x

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DreamerReality

@DreamerReality

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#326

hey

just finished reading the 10 parts
and they were written beautifully....
i simply loved it !!
plz do continue soon
and add me to ur PM list

thnx fr lettin me knw abt dis FF
fab work!!!

-kinnari😃

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#327

hiiiiiiiiiiiiii

awesome update

loved them

loved da changes

cant wait 2 read more

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#328

Nice updates, just read the 10 parts. I loved them, but just a suggestion..i was kinda confused with the development of the story, you should have slowed it down, it was going at a very fast pace, we didnt really get to see much of AR or their relationship until Ridz moms episode or when the whole arjun thing. I mean, you should have shown their friendship and then the development of love since Riddhima is now totally Armaan-o-field..looll! But overall, nice updates! Also, the first part was the present and then, the rest flasback?...

youve got potential to be a great writer and this story was very similiar to DMG and i loved it...:)