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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Harneetluvesksg

heyyyy

i jus read all da parts of ur ff
and i jus luv ur ff
do pm me da next part
cont sooon

harneet <3


Heyya harneet dii..🤗
Thanks for giving my FF a try..
Thanks a lot loving it too
😳
Definitely will PM you
Yeah sure will continue soon
<3
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Cutiepie_KSG

just got your story. It's amazing. I would like to see a real confession of AR . Pls update soon and add me to your PM list


Heyya🤗
Thanks for giving my FF a try..
Thanks for loving it..
Umm..A sort of a confession will take place shortly..according to the story..it is christmas time..by the time its new year there will be something special..
Will definitely update soon
Yeah..have added you to my PM list..
<3
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shilpI007

welcome back dear
hw was ur exam??
i m waiting update ur all ffs
update ASAP😃
love u
Shilpa <3


OMG dii..😲
You are very fast..
Thanks for the warm welcome jaan😳
My exams went well thankfully..
Yeah sure..i will be updating all of them by the end of this week itself..
Love you too
<3
Dii if you are online for long..I am gonna put up an important note in a while..a special note😉..do check it..

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Posted: 14 years ago
HIGHLY IMPORTANT NOTE
Heyya Guys..
I am finally back all freshened up after exams..
I am now fully with my darling 3 babies (my FFs)
Ok guys.
Now probably this is gonna happen first time in the history of this forum..Well you see guys..when i reread this FF from the beginning..I felt something lacking..Some sort of plainness..As a die hard ARian..I personally couldnt catch the AR touch..And therefore for my personal satisfaction I am gonna rewrite the whole story uptil now (that is all 10 parts) once again..I have started it and gonna finish it soon..I will put it up together coz the story is the same..So next update means the revised and modified version of the whole FF till now..Once I am done with that only shall I go for part 11..So do keep waiting for that..coz I think you guys will like the newer version better..
And one more thing..I know you guys want a confession soon..Guys a sort of confession would be soon up probably by Part 15 or 16..and one thing I can tell coming parts would be filled thoroughly with AR romance..😉

Love ya all for the support
Keep loving LIYL..
<3

Edited by arluver4life - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arluver4life


OMG dii..😲
You are very fast..
Thanks for the warm welcome jaan😳
My exams went well thankfully..
Yeah sure..i will be updating all of them by the end of this week itself..
Love you too
<3
Dii if you are online for long..I am gonna put up an important note in a while..a special note😉..do check it..



YEAH, I M SO FAST😆
actually i missed ur ffs so, i cheked it then i saw ur reply


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shilpI007


YEAH, I M SO FAST😆
actually i missed ur ffs so, i cheked it then i saw ur reply



Hehe
Awwww...You love them so much jaan?😲
Thanks sooo much for that..
Keep waiting for the revised version..Thanks..
<3

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Posted: 14 years ago
wooohooo....
welcum bk...
i lobd dis anyhw....bt if u r sayng improved version....den dat would b bestest of best.....
w8ng 4 da modified 1....
AMOON
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 1: Smoking Dreams

Walking as a bride is a matter of honour to any girl..I am blessed in that matter..The Mallik House, my house forever, was decorated with flowers, orchids and bouquets..I was walking over the stairs of my house..and I had particular joy in stressing the word 'my'..My in-laws treated me more like their daughter and as my husband rightly complained a few hours ago that they loved me more than him..I couldn't help but blush when I called my man my 'husband'..The effect his name or thought has upon me was still a mystery to me..It brought me a sense of pride, a spark of affection and heaps of love..

I was still playing with my head over my husband's thoughts when I clicked open my bedroom door..I was struck at the sight before me when my lips curled up to a huge smile..I was surprised though I knew he would do his best to make our room look stunning..But obviously I hadn't expected this much..

The sweet smell of the aromatic candles hit my nose giving me a chance to control the growing anxieties within me..The bouquets that colored the room with their charming petals lightly waving at the switched on caught my heart..

What struck me even more were the framed of our pic that captured all moments that we harbored with immense passion..With quotes below them that took me to a whole new world..I tried compressing the overwhelming surge to see him..It was during moments like these when I wished he was here to join me and quietly embrace me..

I woke up from my dreamland when I felt the familiar hand clearing my hair off my back..I quickly turned..Despite my growing gush of desire, I had decided long back that I would play with him a bit..

Voice: Liked it?

He placed his hand around my waist..I played with his buttons, drawing stuffs on his chest that he purposely left open because he knew how much it left me mad..

"Well, I would have liked a white curtain than a red one"

"Look at my face and tell that"

He knew exactly where to hit..I bit my lips in order to help me wipe out the smile that had cemented my face..I looked up putting up a show of seriousness..He studied my face for loopholes..His face revealed no conclusions but his eyes shone with a tint of victory..

"Well..Mrs.Mallik is improving in her acting skills..But dear..you forgot one thing..This.."..saying so he poked his index finger upon my cheek..Ugh..my blush..it always played against me..But imagine my situation..He calls me Mrs.Mallik and still expect me not to blush..I decided not to fall for that..

"Actually Mr.Mallik..I wasn't blushing..Your sister-in-law, my elder sister had put some light make-up for me before sending me over here"

"Oho..I see..In that case, you win"

I stared hard at his face..How could he possible let me win so easily..He definitely was upto something..

"You are serious??"

"About what???"

He was acting as if letting me win was a daily ritual..I still could not catch hold of what he was trying to do..He gave a side smirk and I wondered what was in store for me..He took his hand off my waist and went to the washroom without another word..Leaving an astounded me..I walked upto the mirror..and stared at it trying to make sense in his actions..

I saw him come out of his washroom..With towel draping his lower body and drops of water running off his hair..The sight went past me..hitting me with an unimaginable force..I couldn't react..This was the second time of my life when I saw him like this..But the first time had gone as soon as it has come..But this was just not disappearing..I gulped and turned around facing the mirror once again..focusing on the process of removing my jewellery..I could see him once again grin and walk towards to me..I kept my hands at action but my heart was pacing wildly to god knows where..

He came close to me earlobe making my blood streams abnormal..

His chest stuck to my back and I could feel his abs playing along my lower back that was bare because of my sari..

He removed my earrings as I shut my eyes tight..the heat he was radiating in all terms was doing me nothing good..

He cleared the few strands placed over my back and removed the only diamond necklace that my in laws had gifted me..

Doing so, he brushed my back and traced it from a bit above my waist uptil my neck..He put full weight upon my neckline as he kissed with seductive fervor..Chills went down my spine..I had this experience a lot of times but each time I have had it, it brings out a new meaning..

All I could do was whisper a low 'Armaan' with all the might I possessed then..

He probably got a bit of sense back..He looked up..He chuckled at my poor stage..

And then to my utter horror..he once again traced my back till my blouse that was held just a two doris..He untied them despite feeling the tension my body was sending..

He went on as if he was determined to have the best of me tonight itself..

Slowly as time seemed to stop, he reached the hooks of my br* ..I froze..WHAT DID HE WANT?

I instantly turned facing him..I saw the desire in his eyes..Our eyes talked for a while..I could see how much he waited for this day..I knew that I was doing cruelty to him..I gave him approval to go on..After all how was I going to control myself..

Maybe, he understood that I had given him my consent..A more confident Armaan came towards..closer and closer..Considering the traditional girl I am I moved back..He dint stop and within seconds he had me pinned to the wall..

He placed his hand upon my bare stomach..pressing it he kissed my lips with a passion I could easily relate..

I returned it back to the him..ruffling his hair with one hand and the other rubbing his back..

Minutes later, he carried me to the bed..

He blew the candles off..and came the opposite end..

He kissed his way up to my face..

He kissed my payal..

Like a creeper he climber upwards and stopped at my stomach..

He kissed my navel..

The heck of me blew up..

I just couldn't take it..

By this time, he had reached my cle*v*ge and giving them a chance to experience his lips...

He reached me and pulled a blanket over us..


Edited by arluver4life - 14 years ago
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PART 2 : Initial Chaos

"DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII, its getting late..what are you doing inside for sooo long..i am running late..plsss come out..its already 8 30.."

I screamed my lungs out begging my elder sister Anjali to come out of the washroom..She's been inside for terribly longer than usual..I couldn't blame her much though, because today was indeed very special to both of us..But then if she would take so much time, she should have entered before I came and woke her up after my daily jog..I continued my constant banging on the door..UGH..How I hated my sister when she woke up late and then shot off to the washroom when she sees me picking up my towel and clothes.. And now all I could was scream, scream and scream..

Finally, after what seemed ages, she got out of the washroom..

And here stood before me, my sister..Umm, you cannot exactly say she is my elder sister..she is more like a dictator to me..Now don't get ideas..Its just that she has an extra energy to take matters in hand..She loved me a lot and protected me like I was still a little kid..I remember the time when she used to try to find a good boyfriend and when someone would look at me, she would be off to poke their eyes..She loved me and cared for me more than her life..and probably that's why she falls among my top favourite people..

"Ridz, you can go in now..I am done"

Her voice brought me back from my sissy wonderland..I revived myself that now was not the time to think of how much I love her rather it was a time to take revenge for her daily deed..

"DI..Dekh lo..kal se I am getting the washroom first" and proclaiming that I entered the washroom and banging it in the hurry..

"And you have been telling that ever since you learnt to talk", she yelled from outside the washroom laughing..I made a face although deep down I knew what she said was nothing but the truth..

"Ridzie..How long will you take to dress up..you know it is 8:45 now..Do you realize we need to report by 9:15???", scolded my sister..She sounded as if she had woken up before the sun rose and was dressed up well before I had even woken up..

"DII..If you please remember..YOU were the one who came out late of the washroom..NOT me.." I answered back..I knew she would give me an answer for that too and I wasn't to be proved wrong..

"Well then, tomorrow onwards train for running faster than me..It will help you for sure..", she chuckled leaving an angry me..I couldn't fathom why this was happening even on my first day of job..

And that reminded me that I was supposed to be getting ready..I quickly put my kohl and a tint of my favourite flavored yummy lip gloss..I draped my neck with my dupatta and I was ready..I gave the mirror a smile hoping that it would calm the anxiety that was beginning to grow within me..It was such an important day..

Outside my residence: The Gupta Residence

"DII, jaldi aa jaana..", I yelled for my sister who had suddenly disappeared to nowhere..

"Ek minute Ridz..Gadi ki chaabi nahi mil rahi hai.." came her 'searching' answer..

"O god dii..Its with me right..You gave it to me before breakfast, remember????"..HMPH..couldn't she remember the incident that had happened just 5 minutes before when she asked me to keep the keys because she wanted to give herself a final touch up..

"O YAAAA..Main bhool gayi..Theek Hai..No time to talk or stop, Mamma..Hum Ja Rahe Hai..Its already 9..", Anjie Dii came out of the front door..Followed by my ever loving mother, Padma, who was apparently walking to us with a box of sweets..MMMmmmmmm

"Ek minute bache.. yeh meetha kha lo.. aaj ek acha din hain na isliye meina banaya..aur yeh lo..vaha sabko de dena"..saying so she popped in a laddoo in both our mouths..She was just the best mom you can ever get..

"Oh Mamma..You are sooo sweet..Thanks a lot..Muah..", I hugged her and kissed her on her cheeks..She smiled as dii joined our little hug..

We had a moment of mother-daughters interaction with mamma telling us the dos and donts..the manners and the dedication to work..She was always concerned with our attitude and behavior more than our success levels..And since we were not coming back until the next weekend since our internship laid that we stay at the Sanjeevani Hostel and work, we gave her a list of what we wanted on our day of return and she promised to get them ready by then..She was sensible enough not to cry unlike the mothers who made a huge fuss when their daughters left home for whatever reason

After that we waved a goodbye as we set off to our second home, Sanjeevani

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PART 3: Life turning points

I got out of the car..And by the time I had properly positioned my dupatta, Anjie dii was walking to the Main Entrance without a glance back to me..I let out a huge sigh..Sometimes Diii could be a bit rude..But I always ignored it considering that I knew she loved me wholeheartedly..I have been having this sort of experience right from my childhoond..I was used to it and her little actions like these no longer held much of an effect on me..Though I really wished she expressed her care at least once in a while..

I tried to get my head off my diis thoughts once again just like today morning..I stared at the huge building that stood majestically before me..I was filled with overwhelming feelings at the thought that this is going to be stepping stone of the rest of my life..where everything I had wished was beginning to come true..where I was going to place formyself a position..

I shut my eyes and murmered to myself a short prayer before I entered a whole new phase of my life..

"Bhagwaan Ji..Today as you know, is extremely precious to me..Please help me pass it with the right mind and stay with me to make it the best start ever..Please..O NOOOOO"

Amidst my prayers I felt my dupatta blowing off due to sudden wind..I panicked..I hadnt finished my prayer and already things were happening..If it was my sister in this position, she would have cared less but I just couldn't take a second without covering myself properly..I tried a lot..Especially because my churidars and suits always bore deep necklines..

I saw a nurse coming and begged her to get my dupatta..I just couldn't go out in the open without my dupatta..not even to search it..

"Sure, beta..wait here..I will get it for you in a minute", she replied in her gentle motherly voice when I put forth my plight..She put her hand on my shoulder and consoling me she trotted off to the direction my dupatta had taken..

Two minutes had gone by when she returned with my dupatta in hand..My sigh of relief was so loud that she started chuckling..I smiled at her..

"Thank You Aunty very much..You saved me from a huge embarrassment..Where was it?"..I thanked her for her generous mind to help me..Thank You dint even come close to the gratitude I felt to her..

"Its ok beta..Actually it fell on top of a man's face", she told me not realising that I had turned red..MY dupatta on A MANs face..Could things get any worse..I dint know why I was getting so hyper about this but I was..

"O No..Did he tell anything rude.." was all I could manage..I prayed silently that he dint..I couldn't take it if she would have to hear rude stuff because of me..

"Rude? No no no way..He looked like a real sweet boy", and another sigh let off me..I was finally relaxed..But I couldn't stay like this forever..I was getting late..

"Thank God..Some people make a fuss out of small things..Ok aunty..I got to go now..I need to report in 2 minutes..See you later"..I thanked her once more and ran off to the building..

I reached the Nurse Station wondering if I was late..A nurse who introduced herself as Sister Lovely informed that Dr.Kirti, my new senior doctor under whom I shall be working for the next two years, had a emergency and was in the OT..She told me that I could go to the locker room and place my belongings there before we get ready for the first meeting..I thanked her for the information and asked her if she could tell the directions to the locker room..She promptly told me so and i thanked her once again for her time..

I saw the vastness of the huge hospital as I searched for the cues to the locker room..I crossed the wards, the OTs, the labs and the pharmacy..I stopped at the New Babies Ward..The crying of a dozen babies hit me and I smiled involuntarily..The sight was such a pleasant way to start a good day..I felt some of them waving to me with their kuchie kuchie hands and fingers not bigger than a dot..I had decided on choosing between a Gynecologist and Paediatrician after Internship..It still lay as a confusion in my head..

Content and filled with excitement, I turned around to the locker room..I finally saw the arrow mark..*THUG*..I could not say who it was but I knew it was a man..and I was lying on the floor with eyes shut tightly..I have no clue why I shut it and my guess is that I probably dint want to face the embarrassment of being caught of carelessness by a man..

Whatever it was I know he was on me for about 10 seconds before he it probably struck that people were watching..I think he saw my eyes shut because he called on me "Excuse Me"..Maybe I hit my head badly but I liked his voice..Sounded like music to my ears..With the coolness of a modern guy and the gentleness of a warm heart..I slowly opened my eyes and I saw his face..

My mouths were shut now..I hadn't ever seen a more gorgeous face as this..His eyes big and grey shone with some kind of emotion that I could not catch hold of..Whether it was because of his eagerness to blame me for the fall or at the messy condition of mine, I dint know the exact reason but he was staring at me with a black face but with a pair emotion filled eyes..Another 30 seconds might have gone before he stood up and gave me a helping hand..I was a bit hesitant because never before had I touched a man..I studied in a Girls School and never had much problems because I rarely saw a boy..But something about his eyes that watched me at every angle it took, stayed as a mystery to me and I couldn't stop myself from taking his hand..The instant I did so I felt creeps..Not the scary type but the type you cannot relate to..Once again I was clueless of my actions and whirl of thoughts in my head..

"Dr.Armaan..Dr.Ridhima..aap log theek toh hai na?"..came Sister Lovely's voice breaking my line of thought and maybe his too because for a moment I thought he wanted to strangle the poor woman..I kicked the thought out of the window because I was quite certain that I was dreaming..

Armaan talked first.."Jii..We are fine..Is Dr.Kirti ready for us?"..I wondered if he really wanted to tell that.."Oh ya..Main bhool gayi..Actually Dr.Shashank wants to meet all of the new interns first in about 2 minutes in the lobby.."..she informed us as our faces turned completely gloom..We were getting late..We thanked her and ran just to make it in time as our Dean came from the opposite side..And that's when I first saw my soon to-be - gang..Dr.Shashank talked with Dr.Kirti and I used to chance to calm my panting and to look around at 6 faces, filled with anxiety including my sister and Armaan..

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