SaJan FF~~Madly In Love With You~~ (dis-continued) - Page 17

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Posted: 14 years ago
Res! Will just read and comment!
**Edited**
Hii... IM SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SORRY Ria!!!
Main sach main bohot late hoon !!
Reallyy... Par what an update yaar! really loved it!!
Kaha se shuru karoo.. I cud imagine all the mean luks gunjan was giving samrat!!
Gosh! bechara samrat! nd uss sheena ka murder karne ka mann kar raha hainn..
how dare she?!! Mere bechare sajan ke saath aisa kaise kar sakti hai!
Ria woh bhi tumhare hote hue sheena ne aisa kiya! Yeh expected nahi tha yaar! Par bechara sam! usse daat sunni padi!
Par mujhe precap samajh nahi aaya?!?? Samrat takes a decision which is nt beneficial 4 college?!?!?! matlab?
Nd aaj toh tere update aur mjht ne mera din bana diya!! Thank youu soooooooo much 4 updatingg!!
Gosh! Continue soooooooooooon Ria!
Nd Love you loadzz jaaaaaaan!
ManjarišŸ˜‰
Edited by SajanRox11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update Ria..Please make SaJan friends again..Can't see them like this..Precap looks interesting....Continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Edited my comment on pg 22!
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyyy im so sorry 4 late commnt
awesome wonderful update.....
gunjan was very rude 2 samrat bechare ne kuch nahin kiya,,,,n hate sheena....aur gunjan ne toh dia ke bhi baat nahin sunne...šŸ˜•,,,
sanu scene was nyc...nupz is a very gud sis...
n d precap is intrsting....lovely update...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaar......i hate u........why do u just keep us crack our brains..............ab jaldi update kar or else v'll crack u completely.................
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Posted: 14 years ago
i hate u........y do u make us crack r brains so much.................awesome update man.................
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Posted: 14 years ago
tht was soooooooooooooooo niceeeeeeeee plzzzzz jaldi say dia kuch kara kisi thara sajan ko such pata chala our sheenaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ka band baja doo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow ria awsome part
really superb i loved it
but sajan so sad
i hope everything clears out soon
luv tanzeel
Edited by hiiiiiiiiiii - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

CHAPTER-6 part-A

BEING AWAY FROM EACH OTHER

Gunjan ws walking in corridor, when she saw it empty. She ws confused.

G- (slowly) aaj.....samrat practice nahi kar raha hai.........

She thinks abt. samrat when benji came to her.

B- hii gunjan!

G- oh......hii benji! Dia locker-room mein hai......

B- dia??? Maine uske baare mein to nahi puchha........

G- par tum uske baare mein hi puchhna chahte hoge na?

B- kyun, kya tum meri dost nahi ho jo tumse baat nahi kar sakta?

G- a....b......aisi baat nahi hai benji.......

B- ya phir samrat k saath saath tum mujhse bhi naraaz ho??

Gunjan looks at him.

G- s?.samrat?

B- haan.......tum to usse naraaz ho na?

Gunjan ws a bit angry on samrat.

G- oh......to usne ye baat sabko bata dia?? Koi bhi baat apne tak nahi rakh sakta hai na wo?

B- gunjan tum use galat samjh rahi ho........

G- main use ab sahi samjh rahi hun benji....khud galti karta hai....aur jab maine usse baat karna band kar dia, to tumhe mere paas bhej dia taaki tum uski tarafdaari karo?

B- gunjan plz....aisa kuchh nahi hai........samrat ne ye baat kisi ko nahi bataya hai ki tum usse naraaz ho.

Gunjan again looks at him.

G- kya?

B- haan gunjan! Infact main to yahan isliye aaya tha kyunki mujhe laga ki samrat bb court mein hoga........bt wo yahan hai hi nahi.......aur usne mujhse tumhare baare mein koi baat nahi ki hai.......

Gunjan felt a bit guilty, bt she didn't show her feelings 2benji.

B- tum jaanti ho gunjan ki kal class k baad samrat kahan tha??? Main batata hun.....wo locker-room mein........RO RAHA THA.........

Gunjan felt even more guilty.

B- u kno, main samrat ko bachpan se jaanta hun........lekin maine bachpan se use kabhi kisi bhi baat par rote nahi dekha.......lekin pehli baar maine uske aankhon mein aansu dekhe.......pehli baar use rote hue dekha........wo samrat jo sabko khush rakhna jaanta hai, kal wahi samrat ro raha tha??

G-..........

B- aur rahi baat kuchh batane ki, to sach to ye hai ki samrat ne kisi se bhi nahi kaha ki tum usse naraaz ho??wo kabhi bhi apna dukh kisi se share nahi karta hai.......

G-...........

B- tum samrat ko galat samjh rahi ho gunjan........samrat ki koi galti hai hi nahi......usne to file bb court mein apne bag mein rakha tha.......lekin wo fir she........

Dia quickly came there n interrupted in between.

D- benji tum yahan ho?..main tumhe hi dhoond rahi thi......

She gestures him nt 2speak d truth. He ws confused, bt agrees.

D- tum logon ne samrat ko kahin dekha hai kya??

B- main bhi kabse use dhoond raha hun......

Bell rings.

G- a.......main class k liye jaati hun..

B- chalo, hum bhi saath chalte hain..........

They walked 2wards d class.........gunjan ws busy thinking abt.samrat while walking.

G- (thinks) samrat kahin dikh nahi raha hai....hai kahan wo?

D- tum kya soch rahi ho gunjan??

G- a......kuchh nahi.....class aa gaya.......

They go in.

After classes, gunjan ws in library, completing her project. Bt she cudnt pay full attention 2wards d project, as she thought abt.samrat.

G- aaj samrat college kyun nahi aaya??? Kya wajah ho sakti hai??

She peeped out through d door, bt found no1. she got up n looked 2wards d bb court 2find him, bt in vain. She came back n sat in library.

G- agar wo college nahi aaya, to mujhe kyun itna farak pad raha hai??? Mujhe apna project poora karna hai?.bas.

She continued wid her project work.

In canteen, benia were sitting wid uday.

B- dia tumne mujhe gunjan ko sach batane se roka kyun??? Aakhir use bhi pata chale ki sheena ka asli chehre kaisa hai??aur wo samrat ko galat samjh rahi hai?

D- uffff?..benji, tumhe kya lagta hai, ki tum jaake bologe ki gunjan! Tumhara project sheena ne churaya hai?..aur wo maan legi????? Wo ye baat kabhi nahi maanegi.

U- haan?.wo to sheena ko apni bahut achhi dost maanti hai??aur wo ye baat achhe se jaanti hai ki sam ko projects mein koi interest nahi hai?

B- to kya hum chupchaap aise baithe rahein??

U- nahi??.burger khao!!

B- dude it's a serious matter?.khane k baare mein sochna band kar?.btw samrat kahan hai??

D- mujhe nahi pata?..main use subah se dhoond rahi hun?..par nahi mila?

B- is sheena ka?

Sheena comes there. Uday looks at her.

U- tum????

Benji n dia turn back n look at sheena.

SH- kya hua?? Tum teeno yahan baithkar planning kar rahe ho?..ki samrat aur gunjan ko wapas kaise milaayein???

Dia feels like 2slap her.

B- sheena hume tumse koi baat nahi karni hai?..

SH- mujhe bhi tum logon se baat karne mein koi interest nahi hai??main to bas ye yaad dilaane aayi thi ki main samrat aur gunjan ko kabhi ek nahi hone dungi?..

D- gr8??to meri bhi ek baat kaan kholke sunlo?agar samrat aur gunjan firse dost nahi bane to mera naam bhi dia nahi!!

SH- lets wait n watch!

D- we will!

Sheena gives them an attitude look n goes away.

Aftr abt.half n hour samrat came 2college n d first thing he did ws 2find gunjan. He evn looked 4her in library, bt she ws nt there.

S- library mein bhi nahi hai?? Aakhir gayi kahan??

He walks 4ward 2search 4 her, bt he met sheena in way.

SH- hey hiiii samrat?.kahan the tum? I missed u so much!

She hugged him, bt samrat pushed her away slowly.

SH- kya baat hai samrat??

S- tumne gunjan ko kahin dekha hai kya?

Sheena ws jealous.

SH- gunjan??? I don't know, par wo sab chhodo, ye batao ki tum subah?.

S- sheena main tumse baad mein baat karunga?

SH- stop it samrat!! Jab dekho gunjan gunjan gunjan!!! Gunjan k alawa tumhe kuchh aur sujhta hai bhi ya nahi???

Samrat looked at her in confusion.

S- tumhara matlab kya hai sheena??

SH- yahan main tumhe hug kar rahi thi, aur tum ho ki gunjan ko dhoondne mein busy ho?

S- mujhe usse zaruri baat karna hai.

SH- (grins) samrat, jo ladki tumse gussa hai, tum uske liye apna time-waste kar rahe ho??? Itni chhoti si baat k liye naraaz ho gayi wo?? I tell u, ye sab uske nakhre hain?.wo sirf ye chahti hai ki tum uske aage-peechhe ghumo?..

S- STOP IT SHEENA!!!!!

Sheena ws a bit astonished, coz 4 d first time samrat screamed on her.

S- mujhe is baare mein tumse baat hi nahi karna hai..

Saying this, he goes. Sheena ws angry?..bt on herself.

SH- (thinks) oh god! Ye maine kya kia?? Main to samrat ko support karna chahti thi?..lekin ulta maine gunjan k baare mein itna sab kaha?? Ab to wo mujhse shayad baat bhi na kare??mujhe samrat ko apne paas hi rakhna hoga??itna achha mauka tha use emotional support dene ka??..aur maine wo bhi gava dia?..bt koi baat nahi?..next time main kisi bhi mauke ko haath se jaane nahi dungi??(evil smile)😈

Samrat found gunjan on stairs in a corner. Gunjan also saw him staring at her, so she decided 2go 4m there. She picked up her books n stood up, walked 2leave bt samrat held her hand softly. She ws startled.

G- sa?.samrat mera haath chhodo..

S- (leaving her hand) sorry?

She walks forward.

S- gunjan!....

She stops, bt doest turn 2him. He comes in front of her.

S- bahut ho gaya ye hide n seek?band karo ye game.

Gunjan looked at him.

G- tum kehna kya chahte ho samrat?? Main koi game nahi khel rahi hun??.

S- tum savere se mujhe dhoond rahi ho??main tumhe pichhle aadhe ghante se dhoond raha hun??ye game nahi to aur kya hai gunjan?

G- mujhe jaane do samrat?..

S- (cutting in between) pehle meri baat suno!

G- mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni hai?..mera raasta chhodo?.aur main tumhe nahi dhoond rahi thi?.

S- mujhse jhoot mat bolo?.mujhe pata hai ki tum mujhe hi dhoond rahi thi?

G- mujhe tumhare college aane ya na aane se koi farak nahi padta hai?.

S- jhoot..

G- sach.

S- jhoot?

G- sach..

S- jhoot?

G- samrat plz mera time waste mat karo?

She goes 4m there. Samrat ws hurt.

S- jis ladki se main itna pyaar karta hun??aaj wohi mujhse naraaz hai?? Kaise??kaise sahunga main uski ye naraazgi??..is naraazgi ki wajah bhi to main hi hun?lekin main usse baat kiye bina nahi reh sakta hun??.kal se usne mujhse baat nahi ki hai?.kya sach mein use mere college aane ya na aane se koi farak nahi padta hai??

In late afternoon, benji n uday were practicing bb alongwith samrat. Bt they found tht samrat had nt made any basket till yet. They were tensed.

B- dude r u allrite??

S-??.(dribbles d ball)

U- sam....kuchh to bol?..

S-??

B- hum tujhse baat kar rahe hain dude!!

S-???(still dribbling d ball)

Benji n uday look at each other??.then benji irritatedly goes n snatches d ball 4m samrat.

B- DUDE??

S- KYA HAI BENJI??????

Benji ws paused 4a moment. He saw samrat screaming 4 d first time.

B- tu??..

S- main kya bolun??? No?..im not allrite??nt at all fi9???aur fi9 rahun bhi kaise?? Gunjan mujhse naraaz hai?..to tum ye kaise expect kar sakte ho ki main theek rahunga??? Bolo??

B- dude, hum samjhte hain?..

S- nahi benji??..tum nahi samjhoge??.roothna-manaana to bahut common baat hai?..lekin gunjan mere liye bahut special hai??.wo meri sabse achhi dost hai?.my special frnd?..aur aaj wo mujhse naraaz hai?.to main kaise khush rahun?? Use naraaz karne wala bhi to main hi hun na?

Samrat again had tears in his eyes. He ws silent 4 a moment??..he walks 4ward.

U- sam?.kahan jaa rahe ho?

S- guys mujhe thodi der akela chhod do?

B- aur practice?

S- abse main koi practice nahi karunga?

U & B- kyyaaa??

S-??

B- tu hosh mein to hai???

U- dude what do u mean by practice nahi karega?? Do din baad match hai?

S- I don't care?.IS SAAL KE BASKETBALL MATCH MEIN MAIN NAHI KHELUNGA!!!!

B par dude??.

S- THTS MY FINAL DECISION!!!

Saying this, he goes. Benji n uday were really very tensed at d decision of samrat.

PRECAP- kya samrat ka kiya hua faisla, gunjan ko use maaf karne par majboor karega?? Kya dia, benji aur uday apni koshish mein kamyaab ho paayenge?.ya phir sheena chalegi koi nayi chaal??

In saare sawaalon k jawaab jaanne ke liye?..padhte rahiye-

"~~~~MADLY IN LOVE WITH YOU~~~~"

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Edited by ria_lovesajan - 14 years ago
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Res!
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hii ria... šŸ¤—
Yay!! 🄳 Im Firstt!!!!! Hurrayyy!!
Nd fab update Ria!! Loved it!! <3 <3 <3
What to sayy??? Loved benji in this update! n arghh!! why din he just tell gunji abt sheeena!!!
nd OMG OMG !! Sammy not playing BB because of gunji! uff!! yeh toh phir wohi mjht waali baat ho gayi! uff!! why does sammy always have to pay!! gunjan usse kabhi nahi samajh paatii!!!
Samrat kabhi usse gussa nahi hota! nd she.. arghh..
But anyway.. I guess It will be funn now!
nd yaaar! ab jaldi sajan ko milwa de na!
Cant see samrat like this yaaar....😭😭😭
But really I lovveddd your update!
pata nahi yeh ek week tere updates ke bina kaise rahooongii!!
hayyyeeee!!
Will miss Youu Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo mcuhh!!
😭😭 šŸ¤—
Love Youuu Loadz...
Manjari
Edited by SajanRox11 - 14 years ago

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