MayUr FF:THE PURSUIT Restrting filler upd p12

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Hi all

For those who don't know me here, i am harsha... i hav read a lot of FFs here and they all are awesome!! 👏There are a lot of extremely talented people over here like sookie, sridevi, divya chechi(myownarea), opti,kuku,catwoman,bheegi,spln...ahhh the list goes on and on.... i salute u ppl...⭐️ u ppl are my inspiration to write one on my own...😳

Well about my ff, i am doing a Maan-Geet version in the Geet Forum, so i thought y not do a Mayur version too... after all mayur were the reason i joined IF😃

So here it is... i hav 3 parts right now with me... they r a bit short... and i may not be a regular updater cos i live in a hostel and with my college and studies, this is all i can manage...hope u guys understand...

And about pms,<font color="#ff0000"> i am not creating a separate pm list</font>, cos it wud be difficult 4 me to pm everyone always, but still i will try... <font color="#ff0000">Anyone who wants pms, kindly add me to ur buddy list.</font>

I will upload the first 3 parts shortly...

And ya pls pls do comment, cos i will get motivation to do the next part only if i get comments...😉


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yupie....1st to comment.......................pls update the concept and cs soon...........btw am a great mayur fan...........................................................
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INDEX

Prologue: The Punishment - page 1

Chapter 1: Hopes and Hopelessnesses- page 1

Chapter 2: Frustrations and Disappointments- page 1

Note: page 2

Chapter 3 : Silent Prayers-page 3

Chapter 4: Of Guilt and New Acquaintances-page 7

Chapter 5: The 'Tough' Boss - page 9

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THE PURSUIT

{...The story of a quest for Love, Dreams and Relationships...}



Prologue


The Punishment


He closed his eyes, feeling his vision starting to blur, till now he had been straining to keep them open, and seeing the little success he was having, decided to give up the attempt. He had no idea how long it had been since he was hit by the car, and how long he had lied there on the road trying to maintain consiousness. His limbs felt rather very stiff, in fact, he was not even sure he had any limbs anymore. He could feel that he was moving, how, he was not sure. He guessed it must be a car, if it was the same one that hit him, he knew not. The unbearable pain he had felt before was slowly receding, eventhough he could feel the warmth of his own blood which was oozing out from various parts of his body. If this was death, it was not so bad, atleast he didn't feel any pain anymore. But he wished he could get a last glimpse of his family atleast, but knew he wouldn't, as he himself had made sure that he was well away from them. And the thought brought back the pain in his heart, which he had been holding back till now, owing to the physical pain he was feeling. Maybe, this was what you got for leaving the one family that raised you, that made you the person you are. Maybe this was what you got for leaving the man who made it his foremost priority to give you everything you wanted, for breaking the trust of the brother who loved you more than himself. If this was God's way of punishing him, then yes, he deserved it, he thought, that being the last thought before he lost himself into oblivion.


So, how is it folks???😳

Do comment please... and hit the like button😉





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Chapter-1

Hopes and Hopelessnesses

"Damn! What a tiring day", Nupur cursed out aloud, as she rubbed the back of her neck with her left hand, and slumped down on the couch in her living room, while munching on the piece of burger she held in her right hand. Her neck pained like hell, owing to the twelve hours she spent in front of the computer, and made up programs for a 'god knows which' company. At least, its a Friday, that means, no work tomorrow, she thought, relieved. The weekend is just half an hour away, she thought happily, glancing at the clock which was on the wall directly in front of her. She could finally have a lazy day at home tomorrow, away from the computers and the programs, read, sleep, and watch TV, and not to forget, scan the 'opportunities' column for a job in a construction firm.

Nupur had always wanted to work in the construction industry, being a civil engineering graduate with a distinction to her credit, but hadn't had any luck so far. All the god-damned companies needed persons with experience, and no one would hire freshers. How the hell are we supposed to gain experience then, if they won't hire us, she thought, frustrated. She absolutely disliked what she did now; software was so not her field. Its not like she was bad at it, in fact she was quite good at it, thanks to the excellent coaching she had received when she joined in as a trainee two years ago. Now, at 23, she was a team leader and that she thought, was quite an achievement. But she didn't enjoy doing it, and this was not what she had planned to do in her life. She ultimately, someday wanted to move to New Delhi, where she knew her parents used to own a small construction firm. She had lost her parents in a car crash in this very city, now popularly known as the IT Hub of India, ten years ago. From then, she had been brought up in an orphanage here, with dreams of some day finding out what happened of her parents small firm, and, if possible, owning it one day, if it still existed. Before that, she needed to learn the ways of the industry, and the best way to do that was to take up a job as maybe, a junior engineer. Hopefully, tomorrow she would find a company which is willing to explore fresh talent, she thought with a sigh, as she finished what was left of the burger.

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Chapter-3

Frustrations and Disappointments


Swearing under his breath, Mayank dropped his phone angrily on the bed-side table, before slumping down straight on to the bed. I can't believe I hired these good for nothing bunch of fools, he thought. Two whole years, he had been wasting money over money on those fools, still they had not made even a tiny bit of progress in finding the girl, nor had they collected any detail about her parents, except for their first names- Ravi and Vinitha. It seemed like the Bhushans somehow evaporated from the face of earth without leaving any trace of information about their existence. He was seriously getting tired of this quest, which was absolutely producing no results. And Mayank Sharma hated efforts without results.


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Shilpa Sharma let out a sad sigh, at the sight of her tired son, now finally asleep after a lot of twisting and turning on the bed. She, as usual had been quietly observing him for the past few hours, and found out that it had been the same as yesterday, and the day before, and the day before that. He had shouted at atleast half a dozen people over the phone, sworn under his breath, dropped the phone, and slumped straight on to the bed, clearly looking tired and frustrated. In fact, this had been the same ever since she had started her now favourite pastime of observing him every night, and perhaps, even before that. It might all have started two years ago, from the day his father had breathed his last, she guessed. Ever since that fateful day, Mayank had been putting a lot of his time and energy in pursuit of the Bhushans, to fulfill the promise he had made to his father. What relation Naveen Sharma had with them, she knew not, as she was still in dark of what had transpired between the father and the son, behind the closed doors of the hospital room, just a few minutes before Naveen had breathed his last. Mayank had never spoken to anyone, not even his Maa, about the last conversation he had with his father, in spite of her trying many times to dig it out of him. And then, two months ago, Sam had left without a word to anyone, adding one more name to the list of people Mayank had to search for. Sam's disappearance had shattered Mayank beyond limits, she very well knew, even though he pretended otherwise. Mayank never discussed the results of his efforts , or rather the lack of them, with her or anyone to that matter, and she had never really enquired much, afraid to make unnecessary additions to the bank of frustrations, and disappointments,he had for a life.

Edited by phoenixgirl - 14 years ago
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Ok everyone, thats all for now,... i dont hav any idea wen the next update will come. If i am lucky i might be able to do a part by tomorrow but am not sure.... pls do read and comment...
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Originally posted by: achoose

yupie....1st to comment.......................pls update the concept and cs soon...........btw am a great mayur fan...........................................................

hi achoose...🤗

thanx 4 being the first to comment!! now do read the parts soon and tell me how it is....

ya i am a mayur fan too...😊

and ya, i am nt providing any description on the concept or the characters, i wud prefer it to unveil as the story goes forward...that wud keep up a small air of suspense i guess...😉

do read quickly and comment😳

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k...coming to the parts.....

1st part.............
what happnd to mayank????/ that was a terrifying part where he wants to see his family.....
the way u described his wounds..his feelings were mindblowing.........i could really imagine that scene in front of me....
2nd part...
the introduction of my sweety nupur.....she is one among us...who is aiming for a higher job...waiting for the weekened to come ...i could really connect with her....but it was sad that she lost her parents...poor soul........
3rd part
this part was full of mystery...loved the way shilpa aunty was watching his son and thinking about her son's behaviou after the death of her husband.......y mayank want to find bushan's???? what was the last convo he had with is dad??? where has sam disappeared????? the mistery continue...waiting 4 the mystery to unffold.....
in short the updatse were mindblowing....u r really a good writer..keep up ur good work and pls continue soon...i think this is the longest comment i have ever given to a fan fiction......
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Wow ur story seems intresting...can't wait to find out what the promise was and the convo between father-son...
It'sa really nice start... short parts though... Do continiue soon.. Waiting for next part... 😃
And yes do send me a PM when u update...
Laiba... 😳
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