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Posted: 14 years ago
u r really doing excellnt job dear i hav read all the parts and its the first FF that im reading its really great & interesting HATS OFF TO U 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jannat4ever

Diyas are god's way of telling us that there will always be light to drive away darkness............may d light of diyas spread joy to ur life.....

**HAPPY DIWALI**
TO ALL D WONDERFUL READERS OF
"RHYTHM OF LOVE IN TRUE SOULMATES"
...........I WISH DIS DIWALI BRING GOOD LUCK ND HAPPINESS FOR U ND UR FAMILY..........




lots of luv
JANNAT
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happy diwali to u and all the readers........😊🤗😊🤗😊🤗
may this diwali lighten ur life🥳🥳
have a safe and prosperous😊😛😉


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Posted: 14 years ago
hey................loved dis one too. grt work(i)
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Posted: 14 years ago
oMg thats amazing I love this FF I fell in love with it 😆

You are amazing!! Please continue fast and please PM me.. I am already your buddy I think.. I sent you a buddy request//
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey dear
great part
liked it
plz continue soon
waiting 4 the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: azy123

plz plz plz add me to ur pm list



hey dear u r already in my buddy list.........
so i'll pm u whenever i'll update any of my ff............

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Posted: 14 years ago

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oMg thats amazing I love this FF I fell in love with it 😆


You are amazing!! Please continue fast and please PM me.. I am already your buddy I think.. I sent you a buddy request





thnx dear....nd i accepted ur buddy request....surely pm u

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Posted: 14 years ago


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RECAPE -

AR – I think we should talk to prince…afterall agar hume 4 crore dene hai ….toh college ko bhi toh 1 crore penalty deni h (BCOZ GUYZ THEY WILL PROMOTE COLLEGE ALSO ….DATS Y COLLEGE HV A BIG ROLE IN DIS CONCERT)

SI (loudly) – KYAAAAAAAA

AR – ABBE KYA AB PURI DELHI KO BTAYGA?????JAB MAINE TUM BEVKUFO AUR HMARE EXTRA INTELLIGENT PRINCI KO KAHA THA CONTRCT PADHLO TAD TOH SUNA NHI AUR SUPER EXCITED HOKAR SIGNATURE KAR DIYE………..AUR JALD BAZI MEIN USS GREAT NAINA KO MERA PARTNER BNA DIA………..WAOOOOOOOO….AB THODI TENTION UNHE BHI LENE DE







BOTH WENT TO PRINCI OFFICE……….ARMAAN ND SID SITTING IN PRINCI OFFICE

THEY EXPLAINED WHOLE MAZRA (MATTER) TO PRINCI ABT WAT HAD HAPPENED TODAY….ND D PROBLM….

" BUT AMMI AB WATT WILL WE DO???? i m just not able to think …..tum sabka carrier nd such huge penalty amount…..think something…….."prince almost begged armaan for thinking any brilliant plan

On the other hand armaan mouth was wide open bcoz of the shock……..

"agar main soch leta toh apke tiny-miny brain ko taklif dene ka gunah kabhi na karta"armaan thought

SI (boldly) – I think hume sponsers se baat karni chahiye…..aur unhe sach bta dena chahiye

AR (unbelievely) – OH RAJA HARISHCHANDRA BREAK MAAR……kuch acha nhi soch sakta toh mat soch par hume footpath pe lani ki planning bhi mat kar…"

Sid opened his mouth to say something but closed as armaan glared at him

"jaan se maar duga ek aur word socha toh "armaan whispered in his ear

PRINCI LOOKED AT DEM WITH HELL CONFUSED FACE……….armaan thought for some mins. Nd then

AR (calmly) - I think pehle hum ek new partner final karma chahiye taki hum unhe dikha sake dat new girl is better den naina dats y we choosed her…..so firstly we need a girl as my partner

PR (excited) – ok toh kaha hai???

AR (confused) – KON???

PR (confused) – UR NEW PARTNER

AR (irritated) – SIR????I THOUGHT WE HAVE TO FIND HER ….REMEMBER????

PR (sadly) – ok………apne college mein search karte hai….

AR – YA…DAT WILL BE FINE…..SABKI POFILE'S CHECK KARTE H………

AFTER DISCUSSING LITTLE MORE ARMAAN SID CHECKED SOME PROFILES ND WENT TO MEET D GANG IN CANTEEN

"YAAR TUM DONO TAMATAR KI TARAH LAAL KYU HO RAHE HO????"ATUL ASKED WITH INNOCENT LOOK

AR (irritated) – not now CHAMP……

MU (annoyed) – OYE AMMI KYA HUA ???? tu ye 50's ke hero's ke jaise expressions kyu de raha hai???

SI (unconsciously ) – KUCH NAHI NAINA INJURED HO GAI H…USSI KE BAARE MEI SOCH RAHE H….

ARMAAN GLARED AT SID…..ND THOUGHT

"ACHA KHASA DIMAG WALA INSAN THA YE…….HMARE SATH REH REH KAR BICHARA PURA PAGAL HOGYA H…..KITNA BURA ASAR PADA H ISS PAR….PEHLE I mean 1st standard tak SAB KUCH BOLNE SE PEHLE HAZAR BAAR SOCHTA THA………..AUR AB……AUR AB APNI BINA SOCHE BOLNE KI ADAT SE HAR ROJ MUJHE HEART ATTACK DETA REHTA H…………"

" KYA???SID TUM NAINA KE BAARE MEI SOCH RAHE HO????" shilpa said with a any moment I m gonna start crying look nd



Announced "I m going chiku mera wait kar raha hoga…."

"SEE AGAIN D DAMAGE HE HAD DONE……MINDLESS CREATURE" armaan mumbled angrily

ALL TOGETHER (confused) – CHIKU???YE KON HAI??

SH (shyly ) – my new pet……..my sweetheart….wo sirf mujhe yaad karta hai….(glared at sid) aur sirf mere bare mein sochta h………bye

Shilpa turned to leave but sid held her wrist……armaan whisled loudly

Nd shouted "LOVE IS IN THE AIR"

SHILPA BLUSHED

NOW SID THROW A SHUT UP LOOK AT ARMAAN….WHICH HE GRABBED CAREFULLY ND SID TURNED TO SHILPA

SI ( smilling ) – MAIN TOH MAZAK KAR RAHA THA….TUMNE BTAYA NHI TUMNE NEW PET LIA ….????KYA LIA?????


SH (excitedly ) - wo my new pet is sweet,cute,beautifull……………..pause………crow…..



On the other hand RIDDHIMA IN PRINCI OFFICE TO SUBMIT HER DOCUMENTS…….

RI (calmly) – HELLO SIR…these are my documents

Gave a file to prince

After watching d documents carefully princi. Jumped in air nd shouted on top of his voice

"YES YES MUJHE PTA THA MAIN SOLUTION DHUND HI LUNGA"

POOR SCARED RIDDHIMA CLUCHED HER PURSE IN HER HAND ND THOUGHT "KISI PAGAL KO PRINCI BNAYA H???YA FIR PRINCI PAGAL HO GYA HAI????? YE MUJH PAR ATTACK TOH NHI KAR DEGE NA ???? RIDDHIMA BE READY"

SHE SCANNED WHOLE ROOM FOR GOOD WEAPONS TO ATTACK BACK OR WE CAN SAY TO PROTECT HERSELF FROM HER PRINCI….

RI (scaredly) – cool down sir…do u need water?????

PR (excited) – NO NO…..JUST FORGET EVERYTHING….I M VERY HAPPY

RI – HA WO TOH MUJHE DIKHAI DE RAHA HAI

PR – NOW U WILL ALSO BE VERY HAPPY ………….TUMHE CONCERT MEIN PERFORM KARNA HAI…..U R GOING TO BE NEW PARTNER OF HIM FOR CONCERT

" WATTT " riddhima shouted

now riddhima jumped from her seet but she didn't jump bcoz of joy….she jumped bcoz of dis sudden shock



BACK TO GANG

SH (excitedly ) - wo my new pet is sweet,cute,beautifull……………..pause………crow…..

ALL SHOUTED LOUDER - WHATTTTT???

RA (shocked) – TUMNE CROW KHARIDA?????

SHILPA NODDED EXCITEDLY

" PAR SHILPU CROW KON PALTA HAI BABY????" said anjali where as armaan was still in shock



SH (smilled ) – BUT I LOVE HIM……BAHUT SWEET HAI WO

MUSKAN LAUGHED IN HER USUAL STYLE

SI (confused) – PAR SHILPA CROW ????? KYU???? I MEAN WHY ?????

SH – SID MAINE APNI BALCONY MEI EK CROW DEKHA…..BAHUT HANDSOME THA

"HANDSOME ???? DAT TOO A CROW???? U R SAYING DAT U FIND A CROW HANDSOME ?? " ARMAAN ASKED IN DAZE OF SHOCK

SH – HA AMMI ………. HANDSOME BUT WO MERE AANE SE PEHLE HI UDH GYA….TOH MAINE EK SHOP SE CROW KHARIDA…..TAKI MEI CROW KO APNE PASS RAKH SAKU…

"SHOP WALE KE PASS CROW THA????" rahul asked in confusion

SHILPA SHOOK HER HEAD IN NO

MU – TOH TUNE KAHA SE LIA???

SH – USSI SHOP SE USNE SPECIALLY MERE LIYE CROW BOOK KIA…SHAYAD MAIN CROW KO HURT NA KAR DU ISS WAJAH SE USNE PEHLE SAB DETAILS LI MUJHSE MERI……..

AT – JAISE ????

SH – JAISE PUCHA MUJHSE MADAM AAP PAGAL HO????APKE SATH KOI FAMILY MEMBER AYA HAI????toh maine unhe btaya I m a big girl nd I wnt a crow…

SI (still shocked) - KITNE KA AYA CROW SHILPA???

SH – 10,000 only

MU (angry) – WATT???? OYE TU PAGAL HAI???

"OFCOUSE..U WASTED SO MUCH MONEY"said rahul nd felt proud on muskan dat she agree wid him dat she also felt wired abt shilpa's crow love….but next moment all his proud was in air…..totally dispeared

MU – AUR NI TOH KYA………MUJHE BTA DETI MAIN GALLI MEI SE PAKAD KE TUJHE DE DETI….ITNE CROW HOTE HAI APNE COLLEGE KE GATE PE BULIDING PE

RAHUL LOOKED AT MUSKAN FACE WITH WIDE OPED MOUTH

ND HIT HIS HAED WITH HIS PALM

" OH GOD….NOW THEY R PROVING THEMSELVES MENTAL IN PUBLIC…I SHOULD DIE BEFORE PUBLIC KILL ME " armaan mumbled

" WATTT " riddhima shouted

now riddhima jumped from her seat but she didn't jump bcoz of joy….....she jumped bcoz of dis sudden shock


PR (annoyed) - ARAM SE ABHI MERE KAAN THEEK H…

RI (protested) – BUT SIR????

PR (excited) – NO IF NO BUT SIRF NACH………..

RI – KYA???

"TUMHE HMARE COLLEGE KO BACHANA H……TUM APNE COLLEGE KI HELP NHI KAROGI KYA ???" said princi nd looked at riddhima with hopefull eyes

RI (helplessly) – PAR KASIE???

PR (happily)- SIMPLE SINGING ND DANCING

RI (annoyed) - PAR SIR MUJHE APKI SIMPLE SINGING ND DANCING NAHI ATI

PR (in relaxed tone) – OH USKI TENTION TUM MAT LO…KYUKI JISKI TUM PATNER HO….PERFECTION USKI SPECIALLITY HAI

RI (suspiciously) – kiski?????

Silence

Silence

Silence

PR (mischiefly ) – WO TUMHE KAL MORNING MEIN 10 BJE PTA CHAL JAYGA

RI (cofused) – KASIE????

PR (happily ) - ANNOUNCEMENT …..AFTERALL IT'S A BIG NEWS….FOR OUR COLLEGE…..

RI (tried to speak) – PAR SIR

PR (smilling) - kaha na par war kuch nhi ab tum jao nd take rest tomorrow is a big day for u also ……

RIDDHIMA NODDED HER HEAD HELPLESSLY…….

ND IN HEART SAID – "issse kehte hai balli ka bakra banna riddhima……….kaha fass gai tu……pta nhi kis gadhe ka partner bnaya hai mujhe…..hope so yeh gadha uss donkey….kya naam tha uska ammi rite……donkey ammi se better ho….plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz god ……for ur own sake"

After giving to god lots of does nd don't list of her partner she went from their….


BACK TO GANG

" SHILPU u did a great job I m proud on u"atul said like a prime minister



Armaan who wants to kick on atul's butt Said with a grin " REALLY????LETS GO HOME BAHUT HO GYA CROW CONFRENCE "

Bcoz he knew hmari yeh useless interrogation kitni usefull hai

All nodded nd left for their homes

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In corridor two person bumped in to each other

" WHAT D HELL " ARMAAN TRUNED ND SHOUTED

" YOU " RIDDHIMA LOOKED AT HIM WITH WIDE EYES

While whole gang looked at two true BOXERS who deeply hate each other or pretending to hate

" I SO HATE YOU….TUMHE CHALNA NHI ATA YA DEKH KAR CHALNA NHI ATA????" SAID ARMAAN WITH ANNOYED FACE

"OH GO TO HELL…..I M NOT INTERESTED IN TALKING TO U SO GET LOST…..BEFORE I KILL U" RIDDHIMA BLASTED BACK

Armaan went near riddhima nd bend over her nd bending close to her face

"IN UR DREAMS BABY " armaan whispered in her ear

SHE COULD FEEL HIS BREATH ON HER NECK WHICH WAS MAKING HER WEAK…….SHE ALMOST STOPPED BREATHING FOR A SECOND

ARMAAN WAS FEELING TO STAY LIKE DIS FOREVR SO CLOSE TO HER…..

"SHE SMELL SO GUD…..NOOOOOOOOOOO "armaan thought

RIDDHIMA CLOSED HER EYES………BUT SOON BOTH COMPOSED THEMSELFS

armaan pulled himself back

" Really ???" riddhima said in a sugar coated voice

" Koi shak??? Said armaan with a grin

NOW OTHER'S JAWS WERE HANGING TILL THEIR KNEES……BCOZ BOTH WERE FLIRTING WITH EACH OTHER LIKE LAILA MAJNU

"No baby " saying dis she kicked on his feet nd went away from their

OHHHHHHHH AHHHHHHHH " ARMAAN SHOUTED ND TURNED TO LOOK AT RIDDHIMA….WHO WAS GOING AWAY

RIDDHIMA TURNED BACK

ND SAID LOUDER " SERVES U RITE…….POOR BABY "nd laughed evily went away………..

" I'll kill YOU……promise BABY " ARMAAN MUMBLED ND CURSED HER UNDER BREATHE



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PRECAPE : - OHHHH ITS SURPRISE.......😉

AR BREATH TAKING MEETING.......

FACE TO FACE .....WITH EACH OTHER AS PARTNERS





TO KNOW STAY TUNED.............

"RHYTHM OF LOVE IN TRUE SOULMATES"

Hiiiiiii FRNDS


thnx to all of u who pressed d like tab nd for ur wonderful comments........thnx a lot 😛

plz read it and tell me if u like it or even not like it.........open to any kind of criticism .....All criticism, suggestion and questions are most welcome.


plz leave your precious LONG comments, they mean a lot to me..........

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Edited by jannat4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
heyy
cont soon
i jus luv their fights

luv harneet

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